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SHIT! Sorrry... I saw a new page, little did I know it was Jay... šŸ˜†
Ooops! phirse.. please
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Posted: 10 years ago
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That was sheer luck. I thought I was way behind. 😃


Edited.
Sorry again for being so late.

Hmm... Arnav has always been honest about how and what he felt and who he is, whether it's with Khushi or Navin. And that's what I think affected Navin. His honesty and truthfulness a rare trait in today's world and who better than Arnav would know the value of truth.

Since I'm a Tyrion Lannister fan myself, I will quote him to describe Arnav's trait, "Never forget what you are. The rest of the world will not. Wear it like armor, and it can never be used to hurt you."

The convo between Astha and Arnav was a needed one. Finally the feeling she have toward Khushi and what she felt with Lavanya is known. The contrast of two personality no wonder other is more appealing. Astha's hurt of her son accepting the suggestion made by Navin but not by her is not unfounded to me, like Arnav said it in the art of suggesting and advising rather complaining.

What Arnav said about mistakes of past, present and future is so true. When you look at past and future you look at the broader picture where the past is a review of what happened and future is a plan, but present.

"But present", he continued, raking his fingers through his thick, slightly damp hair, "You don't really see present beyond the immediate surroundings. You just live it. One moment at a time, one choice at a time, struggling to deal with, to cope with, whatever life throws at you. In your bid to survive, it's possible that you end up making some selfish decisions...

And with this 'selfish decision' even Lavanya's decision of past is justified. At least from her POV.

The beautiful description of the virgin island was awesome so was Khushi's jealousy and at the same time the sense of ownership over Arnav. So was Arnav's realization on Khushi's being younger and inexperienced followed by the fact that he can never let her go with that beautiful yet simple confession and proposal.

"What can I ask you? You've already given me everything without asking. All I can ask is if you'll let me stay in your life so I can spend the rest of my days in trying to give all that you want, all that you deserve. So Khushi, will you let me remain in your life? For the rest of my life?"

And he chose stalkers anthem, well I wouldn't mind if the stalker is Arnav. Well he meant it, right?
Edited by rk2127 - 10 years ago
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Amazing and perfect conversation between Navin and Arnav. I like how Arnav expressed his beliefs with sincerity and honesty. Navin is reasonable and understanding father and it is no surprise as most of us expected "refrain from meeting Kushi" will be coming up.

Astha is typical mother and always wanting best for her son. But she is traditional and gives way too much importance to societal gestures and want everything to be acceptable by everyone without raising eyebrows. From their conversation Lavanya and Astha were amicable but never close. Astha finds Kushi as a daughter she always wanted to have and slowly started accepting Kushi as Arnav's future happiness.

"will you let me remain in your life? For the rest of my life?"...these lines are super cute 😊. LOL...what a song Arnav chose for his Hindi proposal šŸ˜†.

I guess in next chapter we will be witnessing the most awaited encounter between Arnav and Lavanya and glimpse of their past. I am all excited for it.

Edited by jduke - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Like Navin noted, there is air of honesty around Dr. Raizada that is refreshing to see. And true to himself, he shared exactly his thoughts and feelings about Khushi while still maintaining respect for Navin as Khushi's father. I think even Navin couldn't doubt the relationship further after this conversation, even though he placed the very difficult clause at the end. It will be interesting to see whether Khushi and Arnav will break their parents clause when Khushi had already broken her self-imposed condition not to meet Arnav until the divorce!

I love the way you write about different areas in this update, from Tampa to the Caladesi Island. There is air of romanticism around all your words, and it's honestly such a pleasure to read. I also love the small details you incorporate into every chapter, from Arnav taking off his glasses and cleaning them off while in a conversation (it seemed very natural), to him opening the drapes and then seeing what looked like an oil rig - all of it makes me feel like I'm actually watching this all play out in front of me rather than just reading it. I don't know if that makes sense, but that's truly how I felt reading the entire update.

LOLOL at the Jadoo teri nazar song Arnav picked - it is definitely the stalker anthemšŸ˜†šŸ˜† But it's true, whether she says yes or no, she is his, and that's final!!!

Is Lavanya the shadow? I have a feeling that she will be making an appearance into both Arnav and Khushi's lives very soon, and I can definitely feel the foreshadowing based on Khushi's dream. Although I'm worried about the implications that can result from Lavanya entering the picture soon, I'm hoping that we will get more of a glimpse into her past, and then eventually get to see her move forward, without Arnav in her life, as harsh as that may sound to her.

Overall, I really enjoyed reading this last chapter Jenny😃
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Jenny, I love the way Arnav is 'true to himself' in his conversation with Navin. But, more than that I love the way he accepts how much Khushi's views hold importance for him. And that genuine and not begrudging acceptance is what is so endearing. It shows how much she means to him. And how can I not understand Navin wanting them to stay away from each other until the divorce is finalised. Much as I don't want that to happen. He's her father. How can he bear to see fingers pointed at Khushi.

I like the way you've shown Astha accepting Khushi but not their relationship. She's being very fair. Looking at it as a mother and a caring human being. It was very painful reading Arnav say, "and who leaves it ..." Indeed, hindsight is a wonderful thing.

Arnav in aviators and a white shirt . Of course, he was being ogled by all the females there!

I am totally in mushland at the way he asks her to let him remain in her life for the rest of his life. Such a beautiful setting to say it in. Can it even get more moving? But you made that happen as well, with the song and him saying you are mine! Will keep me going once Lavanya gets going ...


Edited by Arshi67 - 10 years ago
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As always a fantastic chapter Jenny, by all accounts.


What I loved the most in the chapter was seeing Arnav in his myriad hues... The respectful, yet confident Arnav. Arnav the smart negotiator. The tender & grateful Arnav. The flirty & mischievous Arnav. The sad & melancholic Arnav & last but not the least, the loving & romantic Arnav.


Let me start off with the respectful & confident Arnav, who knows how to negotiate like a pro. I am really surprised & even shocked when people just want to have their cake & eat it too all the time these days. Society be damned, morals be damned, feelings of other people be damned. It is always about me, my & mine these days... To think, of compromise as a weakness of someone is a huge folly IMHO.


This egotistical society that we live in, only revolves around the word "Me", sees only my wants, my needs, my happiness & damnation be to everybody else's feelings & thoughts, needs & wants, literally scares me. It is beyond pathetic to see these kinds of thinking. No wonder the world has become so selfish, where everybody is out for themselves only. Where is the caring?? Where is the giving?? Where is the compromise that we are all taught to do in order to live happily together in this world?? We have five fingers on each hand & each is different & compliments the other. Together they pack a punch but individually they have their unique characteristics but not much strength. So we need them all...


Likewise, if we all stand up individually & not carry others with us in our endeavors, we will soon fall flat on our faces when there will be no one to support us when the time comes. We, as humans, are a dependent race. Let alone humans, even nations have to compromise on their demands in the name of world peace & stability. No one, just about no one can lead a happy & fulfilling life on their own without the help or care of their families & friends. So when they demand something of you, in lieu of something they are willing to give you, then a sensible person gives in gracefully, without holding grudges. And it takes a smart man to negotiate properly. In this case, for Arnav, the non-negotiable factor was Khushi, once he had secured that promise, he found no problems in compromising on a smaller issue of not seeing Khushi till his divorce comes through.


I am so, so, so glad that you touched upon this aspect of human interaction in the conversation between Arnav & Navin. Navin was perfectly in his rights to demand a moratorium on Arnav & Khushi seeing each other. And Arnav like a wise & sensible person gave in gracefully. One has to be able to compromise in life, & those who don't or can't are in for a lot of trouble I must say. And Khushi too, knew her dad was right, it was actually what she had thought of doing herself when she had left Srinagar, but her plans were waylaid by Arnav's grief & that is ok. Tough times, call for tough measures. You have to be flexible & adjust to each situation wisely. But now that Arnav is in a much better shape than he was previously, he can be fine without meeting Khushi all the time.


After all, there is an ominous shadow, in the form of Lavanya, looming in the background. And now that she is heading back to Cleveland & will be meeting Arnav, it is by all means a wise decision to take... But that brings to mind a question, I wonder how she will find out about Khushi?? I hope Arnav does not make the mistake of telling her about Khushi... That would be a disastrous move by all accounts.


Now to the sad & melancholic Arnav... All these days I have vehemently defended Astha for her reservations about Arnav & Khushi... But in this update, I for the first time in this story found her to be regressive in nature... I am not sure what she is hoping for?? She seems to contradict her own self. On the one hand she sees in Khushi, a daughter she never had, as opposed to the superficial relationship she shared with Lavanya, yet, she won't accept that La is history?? While she claims she has seen the positive changes that Khushi has been able to bring about in Arnav, but she still won't accept their relationship?? Does she seriously not know what pain her son has endured all these past months?? Or she chooses to ignore his pain & sorrow & focus only on his refusal to reconcile with Lavanya?? Does she seriously not understand her son?? That he was not happy with La long before Khushi appeared on the scene, so now that he has decided to move on & luckily has found a partner that he is supremely happy with, what is her problem?? She certainly isn't earning any brownie points from Arnav by being this regressive for sure. I can see Arnav being a lot more closer to his FIL-to-be in the future than his own mother, if Astha keeps on harping like a broken record.


I loved the reply Arnav gave her, that hindsight is always 20/20. We can all look back upon things objectively when we have the privilege of knowing what the outcome has been. Similarly, we hope for the best in the future & our vision is colored by those rosy glasses. But as he said, the present has no such luxury. When it is a matter of survival, one takes whatever measures from resources that are available at that moment & hope that you're making the right decision. No one knows how things are going to play out in the future, but one does have the right to make informed guesses & hope for the best.


The flirty & mischievous Arnav... Arnav is a killer stud no doubt... My heart went pit-a-pat reading this... And I LOL when I read that Khushi was taking pride in her ownership of that sexy stud... That was so cute.



Aware that several feminine eyes on the boat were similiarly entranced by his magnificence, Khushi's hear couldn't help but feel a thrill of ownership.


He was dressed in dark jeans, aviators and a white, collared, button up shirt with it's sleeves rolled up to the elbows. And as if that was not enough, a salty breeze blew against him, gently ruffling his hair and plastering his shirt against his stone hard abs.


Loved the texting. His question about her period was out of this world. Even I would have liked to see Khushi's reaction at that question... It must have been priceless as he said šŸ˜‰


The tender & loving side of Arnav came out beautifully when he recalls how he has never thanked Khushi for her huge compromise & being there for him when he needed her most... An angel he calls her & an angel she is. Loved how both of them made light of the situation but their tears manage to convey what their words didn't...


And the second time was when he realizes the reason behind Khushi's "mood swing" as he put it... Glad he wasted no time at getting to the bottom of the issue... And when he realizes her hurt, he was quick to melt her into a puddle with his adorable proposal. That was one of the best proposals I have heard till date. Jenny, you did great, take a bow.


His cheeky proposal via that stalker's anthem said a lot. To him, Khushi is already his. Her answer really doesn't matter anymore... Just like their first kiss, "Are words even necessary?" It is now purely academic. The marriage rites that he is willing to undergo, albeit quite reluctantly, is yet another compromise on his part for his lady love, and is a mere formality as far as he is concerned... He is already committed to his Khushi for life.


I won't touch upon that dream since I already spoke about it when you posted it previously as a teaser...


After a wonderfully romantic chapter like that, I am tightening my belt for the rough stormy seas ahead. See you on the other side of that storm Jenny, hopefully soon. 😊

Edited by pixiegirl - 10 years ago
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Ruchi, I don't believe this, you made it... šŸ˜†

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Originally posted by: pixiegirl


Ruchi, I don't believe this, you made it... šŸ˜†

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I had bharosa in you, and in your dedicationšŸ‘

Good way to keep the European brigade strong - now please take some rest!!!!

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