New Maaneet SS Kashmakash part1-11 & EPILOGUE @ PG84 updated - Page 21

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Posted: 10 years ago
part 3
nice...
poor Geet...
her pain no one understood...
damn that Pammi...
and Maan too...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Feeling sorry fr geet...poor girl suffered so much n maan needs a doc . rsure...so insensitive behavior...
Waiting fr nxt part...
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update
how insensitive maan
i m angry on him a lot
waiting
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Posted: 10 years ago
Just got this story from MG Writers Group !
I hv to say, Its Superb 👏
Em glad You showed those all scenes that Muskan skipped ! Loved it ... Continue Soon !!
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Posted: 10 years ago
It is an take on Kashmakash...
u have pennned d emotions...those sadness...those betrayals...pains..longing...faults so beautifully...
dil choo jaata hai...
Maan is wrong...nd dat diary has made his eyes open to know how he wronged all in his marital life...
how much pain he gave geet ...how he longed for one talk one smile ...care from him...

his suffering and pain and longing is nothin compared to what she went thru...he deserves it...
loved dat he got to know how she felt wen he slapped her...nd whn he made her abort...

lovly Amu...cont soon...waitin for next part..wannna c how geet wanna react and how ...he gonna redee,m,,,,,



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Posted: 10 years ago

A Big thanku to all my readers who commented n liked the previous updates,thanx alott all ur comments matters a lott for me i really felt soo gud reading all ur prespectives...thanx once again


Part-4

Maan led down on his bed thinking about his life n his relation,she still remembered each n every word of geet's dairy that he read that day,it was all so fresh in his memory like as if it was just yesterday he read it,he remembered how broken he was after reading it,the words the feelings the pain that she wrote in that dairy has broken him completely making him realise that what a big failure he was in his life, that his wife thought that dairy t be her soulace to share her feelings n pain when he was there with her living in that same room n mansion,he remembered the way geet started getting scared while sharing her thoughts with him,how hesitant she was whenever she wanted to ask him something or say sumthing,n it was all coz of his slap,he even took away her source of happiness her baby,n that to not once but twice,leaving her all broken n shattered,he remembered those lines that she wrote in that dairy expressing her pain about loosing her baby,how painful those words were,but still he was not there to console her,every time he took some decision she accepted it without any protest coz she feared loosing him,she feared getting misunderstood,she feared his anger,his denial n most of all his anger..when it should have been him to whom she should have came n shared her pain,felt protected around him but that never happened coz he never gave her that feeling,he couldn't even give her that sense of protection around him,he failed to gain her trust in him n there realtion coz of his rude words n his anger n see whom she choosed to share her pain was a non living thing her dairy who could not console her,but atleast it was there for her whenever she wanted to share sumthing,she din't have to fear before sharing her pain with that dairy.he remembered all those words all those small dreams of geet where she could get his love his care,feel his love,all she needed in there relation was love,care n companionship n all she got from there relation was pain,longing n lonliness..he the biggest business man of INDIA failed failed to provide his own wife with a lil love,care n happiness

He remember how broken geet's words seemed when she shared about the annie's sangeet ceremony how she was expecting a lil support from him but once again he failed,in respecting his mother's frnds he forget that his wife was the one who was getting insulted n that to without any fault,he once again broke her trust,her hope making her hopeless in there realtion,he rembered that time he knew geet must have felt bad but seeing her not reacting to that incident left him a lil confused that why she didn't reacted but now he has the answer to it coz she was soo immune to this pain in last five years that she no more felt it n even when she felt it she choosed to hide her pain n cry in silence coz she always knew that no one will come to console her,she knew she was alone n no one bothers for her pain...it wasn't like he didn't cared but just he didn't knew how to express what he felt,he didn't knew what to say but sadly he even never tried to initiate n that started building that wall in there relation,she was always there for him in all situations in all circumstances but he,he was never there when she needed him,she was all alone managing everything on her own,trying to adjust like it pleased him n all he did was only to boss around her making her feel like an irresponsible person while in reality he was the one who was irresponsible...thinking about these past moments maan drifted to sleep.

While here sumwhere faraway in banglore a girl sat lost in her one bedroom apartment,she sat on her small bed cum couch holding a file looking at nothing in particular thinking about her life,

She was alone here far away from her home her family, n sadly now she ll have to live her rest of the life alone thanx to the decision that she took few months back,she never wanted all this to happen,she never wanted to divorce him,never wanted this lonliness ,she never wanted to b away from her husband n her home but god has planned sumthing else for her.all she got from her life was this lonliness,longing n pain n now it has became her destiny n part of her life n she no more wanted to run away from this truth she has accepted it all the day she left delhi.

Geet thoughts went to the day when she for the last time saw maan at court,she still remembered the pain,the hurt in maan's eyes that day which compelled her to take this decision to leave behind everything n move to sumwhere faraway where no one knows her.she never wanted to b the reason of maan's pain his hurt but sadly she became the reason for his pain,she rembered his face from there court meet,how lost,hurt n sad he looked n that was sumthing that compelled her to take this decision,she knew that she could never move on in her life,she knew that no matter how her marriage life was but she would never b able to forget maan nor will she ever b able to give his place to someone else in her life so what was the point of this divorce,no matter if she is divorced or not it would change nothing in her life than y to b a reason for his pain n that's when she decided to leave delhi coz she didn't wanted to hurt maan anymore with this divorce thing. She knew she can't go back to her parents coz they have disowned her so she with no destination to go came here to banglore in the search of a new life.

This lonliness was nothing new for her,it was a part of her life before also n now also it was with her but what hurts her the most was the fact that her own parents never tried to understand her plight,nor they ever tried to ask her what truth was,they all believed what her mil said n blamed her for there broken realation,she thought about maan n realised how can she blame him for not understanding her when her own parents denied to understand her...may be she is destined to be alone n now she is living naaah trying to live this lonely life...

The next day maan got up n called his p.a to know about the status of his appointment with mr.shergil who was the owner of shergil enterprises where geet came 4months back,after getting about his appointment info maan quickly got ready n left to meet Mr.shergil as he was his only hope now to reach geet

Good morning mr.shergil

Hello mr.khurana

So what brings u here sir,coz as far as i know u have an construction company while we r no where realted to ur business

Its not business mr. Shergil,but sumthing personal

Mr.shergil raised his eyebrow wondering what maan was talking about what do u mean mr.khurana??

Mr.shergil ill straight away come to the main point sir i want information about ur client geet who came to ur company 4months back

Sorry,but why do u want to know about our client?

Its personal as i said before

Well mr.khurana then m sorry to disappoint u but we can't disclose u reagarding any info about our clients its against rules

Pls mr.shergil its really important

Than u ll have to tell me the reason whay u wanna know about my cliet??

Maan seeing no option left decided to tell him about the reason coz he didn't wanted to loose his only hope to reach geet

Coz she is my wife mr.shergil that's y i wanna know about her

What??? Asked mr. Shergill shocked m sory to say mr.khurana but if geet is ur wife than why r u asking about her wherbouts from me?? Don't u know where ur wife is

How i wish i had known mr.shergil but sdly no i don't know her wherebouts n m searching for her from last 6 months n u r my only hope to find her pls tell me her info

But if she doesn't wanna meet u that who m i to tell her info to u

Pls mr.shergill don't break my last hope geet is really angry with me,i could never be a gud husband to her,but now when i have realised my faults my mistake i wanna get her back so pls help me

Mr.shergil was a nice man nand a mature man he looked towards maan n seeing a broken,n shattered husband searching for his wife made him tell him all info about geet

Hmmm i don't know what went wrong between u two but i really hope u find ur wife soon mr khurana.saying this maan asked his p.a to come to his cabin with all info about geet n her company where she worked

Mr.shergill helped maan n told him that geet worked n an event management company in banglore.maan was soo thankful to him he thanked mr.shergil n decided to go banglore the next day to get back his wife n correct all his past deeds,he didn't knew how geet will react seeing him,will she ever forgive him or not,will she ever agree to comeback with him but one thing he knew for sure was that no matter what he ll get his wife,his geet back


that's is for now

i hope all of u will like it will b waiting for ur comments n likes
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice ud
geet saw pain in maan eyes
so she left that matter
hope soon they solve MU which
create by maan not voicing his feelings blindly trusting his mom not giving importance to his wife
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Posted: 10 years ago
nyc part
everything was described in very good way

i dont mean to offend u bt just telling my point of view

i feel maan too bechara types...he not at all feels like maan...the main essence of maan is his attitude i think which we all love

m nt saying that maan should not feel guilty but i feel atleast he should nt show his condition to outside world...like he was begging to mr.shergill n told him everything about his personal life to him

i mean one way he was not even able to share 1% of his life with geet...n here he is sharing his personal details with an outsider

its just my POV...feel free to ignore if u dont like it


i hv 1 request too
can u plz add 1 dialogue in the story plz...maybe sometime in past 6 months...meera was the only one knowing everything about their relation so i think she only has right to comment on his personal life

"Marriage is not only about sharing bed, its about sharing ur lives"


i hope m nt too much bothering u🤔
N I HOPE IT DOESNT COME ACROSS AS SOMETHING RUDE TO YOU...THESE R JUST MY FRIENDLY SUGGESTIONS😊

Edited by rashi_jain - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update. Geet decided to leave as she couldn't hurt Maan. Maan finally found some info on Geet. waiting for their meet now.
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice part
der se iski aakh khuli
now he thinks of geets pain

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