Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS #3 OS 7 (7~31) Link to #4 Pg 1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#671

Aaj Update milega kya?? :'(

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smitar

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Posted: 10 years ago

#672

Originally posted by: shona_arhilover
Aaj Update milega kya?? :'(

Koshish karti hoon..ha..ha..😆

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Shalma/Suman

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Posted: 10 years ago

#673

Awesome update Smita di.
I was grinning all the time.
Khushi has sweared off her jalebis & the credit goes to Aashiq singh raizada.
OMG! The mami-khushi convo and thali falling by nani rather than anjali was hilarious.
I was laughing throughout the update.
Lovelorn singh raizada wid his bedroom eyes & husky voice surely increased our heartbeats alongwid dat of khushi.
Can't wait 4 nxt update.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#674

Originally posted by: smitar

Koshish karti hoon..ha..ha..😆

Nothing is helping today ... :'( .. hope your update helps a little ... this is second time :'( ... and what makes it more worse is people asking me am I really crying over a show ... :( :( :( :( Idiots!!

Edited by shona_arhilover - 10 years ago

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Pastellitesoulx

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Posted: 10 years ago

#675

Waiting for next updates.
Really want to know what will happen?
Your updates brought huge grin on my face
thank you so much for it.

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Megha. â¤

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Posted: 10 years ago

#676

SmitaJi, You're absolutely amazingg !! :*
Your ideas always brings out ur best ..
& This fic is the result of that !! <3
My absolute favourite of recent times !! ^_^

Arnav misunderstanding khushi 'cuz of his Goddamned sister ..
His Jiju's & Khushi's dignity at stake ..
Arnav's realisation ..
His repentence ..
Khushi's ignorance & feastiness ..
Her cold behaviour towards him ..

Ah! Kya story hai ByGodd !! :D
& I friggin loveee it DAMMIT !!! <3

Loving ths +ve Shyam ..
& His clear guidance to arnav towards the correct path ..
That means a lot !! :')

Ihope khushi forgive arnav Jaldi ..
My patiencewa has gone Skeleton in dying to see thm togethr frm agewa ..
Haha! :D :P

Waitingg to reaaad moreee ..