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Natasha08

@Natasha08

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#661

awesome update

loved the names khushi come up with every time...

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Arshi67

@Arshi67

Sparkler

+ 13

Posted: 11 years ago

#662

Our Sanka devi is a perfect fit for the mad house that is RM!

Her sanak will not cause anyone to bat an eyelid there.

Arnav's bedroom voice

As a premier member of the AAA, he could be reading the proverbial telephone directory for all I'd care!

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segad

@segad

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#663

Section 26 was the best in this set of updates. correctly identified the traits of the shantivan pariwar. the only thing missing was an announcement of a puja to thank Devi Maiya for her blessings in turning Arnav bitwa naarmal

Uparse buaji ka tadka. feels bad for the boy who proposed rather than ask who it is😆

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canapoem

@canapoem

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#664

Originally posted by: Jyo.Arshi.IPK

SMITA IS A GENIUS !! 👏

She is. 👏

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Natasha

@drunkiiebabe

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#665

Awesome updates
Loved it
Arnav had a lot of name changes

Loved Khushi

Thanks for the pm

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Hetal

@Divyahet

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#666

Thahaake lagaanewaali linaaa from these beautiful updates...😆
# Ek Ladka bach gaya nand kisor...😆
# With me he is a pussycat!!!😆
# That is our Arnav Bitwaa's speciality. !!!😆
# Saasumaa laagat he humaar Arnav Bitwa ijj improving...
# Laptop ko chhod kar ladki chhed raha he hamare Arnav Bitwa..🤣
# No hello to you saale saheb..😆😆

Mazedaar names for ASR..😆
Diabetic Singh Raizada,
Ullu Singh Raizada,
Arrogant Singh Raizada.,
Generous Singh Raizad..,
Gadha Singh Raizada...,
Goonda Singh Raizada...,
Baawla Singh Raizada...,😆
Lovelorn Singh Raizada...,
waise ab Bandriya urf Baawri Kumari Gupta ke kya actions honge ????
Humka bahut moza aaya NK..😆

waiting for more updates...
kya iss kalyug me doorbhaash yantra pe bhi khoon ho sakta he !!! I think yeh ghatna ghatne ko he.😆

Shukriya Darlings..
love, hugs n kisses.😛

Edited by Divyahet - 11 years ago

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Hetal

@Divyahet

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#667

Originally posted by: shona_arhilover
OMG!!! That was so funny!!🤣

You are Khushi Kumari Gupta of IF, Smita ji 😆

"Laptop ko chodkar ladki ched raha he hamre Arnav bitwaa," Mami informed her cheerfully.

This line and I fell off my chair laughing 🤣

Smitaji KKG ki Naniji he..😆
Hum aapse ek baat kehna toh bhool hi gaye..jab hum updatewa read kar rahe the tab hamaar ghar ke HP jaadu lagaaing and me laughing..kuchh der ke liye woh humko ghooring ..kya yeh poori tarah se pagalkhaane ke laayak ho gayi ??? Bachke rehna padega ..😆

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stg1

@stg1

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#668

awesome awesome updates, i have a massive grin on my face imagining all of it ⭐️ i love all the creative names kkg has for her ullu singh raizada and yay, he and his voice finally made a re-appearance by the end 😳 but i cant believe where u left off the tale - 'nahhhiiinnn!!!!' *70's bw film wala echoes* first time i am following one of ur stories in real time and i cant take the suspense - bhat happens next?????