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aashritha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

hey this is awesome...please start

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swiss_leo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Nice start... contd soon plzzz 😊

Edited by swiss_leo - 11 years ago

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vivkriti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

This will be awesome. Please continue soon

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Lasya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

@ all

Thank you so much for your love and support...

I would be updating my first chapter by this weekend...

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andreea1991me

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Very good concept. It looks very interisting. I can't wait to read the first chapter! Please update soon 😊

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Kruths97

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Can't wait for more 😊 loved it!

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Lasya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

TEASER

Kya?Magar aisa kyun kiya aap logon ne mere saath??Mere jazbaatho ko mazzak samajh rakha hai??

(What?But why did you people do this to me??Why have you played with my emotions?Is that all a joke?)

Aur aap?Jiske liye main ye sab kar rahi thi, woh sab bekaar nikla??Aakhir kyun kiya aapne aisa?Kahan thi aap itne din??

(And you?For whom all I have been doing this,is in vain?Why did you do this?Where were you until now !!??)

Bas !! Jab tune mujhe, Beeji aur apni behen ko chhod kar yun kisiki parwaah kiye bina chali gayi thi, tab kaha gaye yeh jazbaat??Takleef to tune hume dii hai !!! Maa hoon teri !!

(Enough!! Where were your emotions, when you had left all of us?You didn't even bother about me, I was afterall your mother!!! )

Edited by lasyap3 - 11 years ago

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Lasya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

NOTE

Kindly please like the above teaser or my first chapter, those who wish to receive my pm's...

Happy reading😊

Edited by lasyap3 - 11 years ago

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JazzyM

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

1st time writer...welcome to the club. Your 1st part was good, especially your phrases related to Pragya's decision making. Your teaser...is really a teaser...brings out all our curiousity...so, Pragya has made it big and good but in which field and how???😉

If it's not Pragya? Who? Bulbul, that would be a show stopper...Bulbul would be a good match to Alliya and Tannu.

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smala

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Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Loved it so much. 👍🏼
Interesting, can't wait to read what is going to happen next.
Thank you for the pm. 👏
Thank you for the hindi translation, it really helped me a lot to understand your story.
Really appreciate your efforts. 🤗
Please do update soon.