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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: taarey17

Amazing update
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Interesting

Thanks for liking it. Will update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago

10 a.m...

Hospital...

Aahil parked his car and got out. He locked his car and headed towards the hospital building. He fixed his tie as he walked up the steps. He was wearing a gray perfect fitted suit. With quick strides, he was heading towards the elevator. His mind was occupied with thoughts of a girl but this time it was not Seher. Something really weird happened with him today. He met this really, really strange girl. And it was not like she was Seher that she stuck in his mind. No, she was not all like her. In fact, she was totally opposite.

The elevator came and he got in. She is really very young, probably late teen. But definitely younger than Seher. She wore specs and no make-up.Very unlike of Seher. Seher is naturally pretty but she likes to put some make-up on and enhance it on special occasions. This girl who is in fact also really pretty but she clearly never put on no make-up! She wore a duppata around her head that Seher would never do! Not that he minds. But just saying. Anyways, but the most important thing. She was really brave to follow him just to make him say sorry. Well, pretty much. But when she actually had the time, she didn't say anything. Like he said, weird girl. Just then there was a ding and the elevator door open.

He got out and took a right. But all this is not important, what really struck to him was her innocent and honest eyes. Her honey-brown eyes. The way they looked at him when she quietly told him that "Maafi maagna sa koi chota nahi hojata". She was right! He had to admit but he doesn't apologize to anybody other than Seher. He just doesn't. Then, how she was able to make him laugh. W*F? He doesn't laugh! Forget laugh, he barely smile. And this girl made him laugh, out loud! He caught himself short otherwise he was about to have a fun time with her. He was about to almost flirt or a tease her a little. ME?! God!

Aahil got to the end of the hallway and took a left. See! She is weird! Normally girl doesn't have that effect on me. But then they never the courage to say anything to him! Anyhow. He took care of it and she hurriedly left. Poor her though, she got hurt on her knee. He remembers how she turns in hurry and didn't realize there was a table behind her. He saw this coming and with quick three steps was there to catch her. He have to admit it was a little filmy and this had never happened to him before. But really nothing filmy happened! She opened her eyes and got even a bigger shock finding herself in my arms. She literally pushed me and stepped back, hitting the table once again and stumbling ONCE AGAIN but refused my outstretch arms for help. She balanced by herself. Then she mumbled a bye and left like a wind.

Aahil stands three door from her's. He takes a deep breath to calm himself and his thoughts. Whatever happened this morning, it is done and over. Right now, the focus is Seher! He left his breath go and walked towards her door. He was about to knock but found the door already half ajar. Then he heard two laugh: a male and female. Not being to help himself, he step inside without knocking. What he saw set his inside onto fire. Rohail and Seher was dying because they were laughing so hard. Rohail was probably messing with her because she was hitting him turning red... in shyness or embarrassment? He doesn't know and he wasn't sure if he wants to find out.

Ok. So he know that they are married. He accepts it. But she doesn't remember him, does she? No, right. So.. He knocks not being able to take this scene any longer. They both turned both turn towards him. He saw the scorn that came across Rohail's face as he noticed him. The look for pure displeasure. "Well join the club, buddy. The feeling is purely mutual," Aahil thought bitterly as walked inside the room. "Hi, Seher," he gives her a smile and then turn his gaze at Rohail," Rohail," he says with a nod. "That's the best he is going to get from me," Aahil thought in his mind.

"Hi," Seher greeted him with a big smile. "Kaha chala gaye tha tum? Jab mein subah uthi to tum yaha pay tha hi nahi," she complains. "Im sorry. Woh... kuch kaam agaya tha to jana para," he makes an excuse not being able to tell the real reason. "Ohk... Its ok. I understand," she smiles at him understandingly. "Thank you, how are you feeling now?" he ask with a smile himself. He just couldn't help smiling when he is with her. And then it happened, he remembered Miss Qureshi's face. Why is he remembering her? God! Taking a deep breath internally, he focus on Seher. "Mein theek ho. Tum kaisa ho?" Seher said. "That's nice. Im good too."

Just then he heard Rohail say, "Oh no." He turns towards him. He was busy in his phone. Seher also turn to look at him. "Kya howa? Sab theek haina?" Seher ask concern dripping from her voice that Aahil didn't appreciate at all. "Yeah its all cool. It's just that I told you about my sister who was coming to visit you. Remember...," Seher nods and Rohail continues, "Woh nahi asakti. She got hurt and it was all basically a disaster. Yar, yeh larki. Gosh! Mujhe probably ghar bhi abhi jana ho. She got hurt on her knee. So I have to go and check," he tells her looking after putting his phone away. "Haan haan.. Theek hai. Tum jao. Aahil hai yaha pay. Aur haan call me when you get home. I hope everything is fine. Zaada chot na lagi ho," she tells him with a concern smile. He smiles and with a nod goes out. Aahil just can't let him go. Just then the nurse comes to take Seher for her bath which means Aahil had to go out.

He steps out of the room and look at both sides. No sign of Rohail. He walk down the hallway and took a left. He found him outside the elevator. He tapped his shoulder lightly. Rohail turns around to look at him. He look surprise. Before he can voice his question, the elevator arrive and the door open. Aahil motion to step in and Rohail follows. The elevator door closes behind them. "So?" Rohail ask. "I need to talk to you. Now." Aahil said straightaway. "Ok," Rohail agrees. Aahil nods and look ahead.

Hospital Cafeteria...

So now he wants to talk! What is this guy thinking? It is so hard to read this thoughts. "Arghhh," Rohail thought as they sat down on far end of the cafeteria after getting their orders. "So what do you want?" Rohail ask getting straight to the point. Aahil took a sip of black coffee without sugar and took his time. Finally he talked talking, "Bohaut pyar karta hona usse?" he asked looking him down with his intense eyes. Rohail smiles unaffected by his death look and calmly answer, "Zaahir hai. Biwi hai wo meri," he sit back and continues as he play with his wedding band in his finger, "Aaj bhi humari shaadi ki angoothi pehenti hai wo. Bhale hi uske maayne badal gye ho uske liye, Par duniya ki nazaron me woh aaj bhi Seher Rohail Ibrahim hai. Aur tum uske... ex Fiance.." he finishes with a smirk.

If looks can kill, then Rohail would have been in ashes from the looks Aahil was giving him. Aahil puts his hands on the table leaning menacingly and ask quietly, "Aur tumne lagta hai woh tumhare pas wapas agayege?" "Haan! Phela bhi to agaye thi wasahi isse bar bhi agayege," Rohail replies confidently. Aahil took a sip of his black as he arrange his thoughts. "Last time I was not there for her. I let her go but I am not about to repeat my mistake,"Aahil quietly tells him. Rohail also leans in as if about to tell a secret. He whispers, "Hate to tell you this buddy...but its too late!" he tells him triumphantly as he pat his hand on the table in sympathy. Aahil eyes got darker if that was possible and pulled his hand back. "Tum mujhe challenge kar raha ho?" he asked in dangerously low voice. "Think whatever you want to think!" Rohail said as he got up and turns to leave.

"I challenge you!" Aahil calls out behind him still sitting down. Rohail turns looking surprise. "What did you just say?" Rohail said coming back to him, not sure if he heard it right. "I challenge you!" Aahil repeats. Rohail takes a deep breath forcing himself to think rationally. This was wrong in so many levels that he was losing count. Most important of all, he cannot put his OWN wife on for a bet/challenge. Bracing himself not to do anything ridiculous, he went back to the table and sat down. "Kaisa challenge?" Rohail ask cautiously. He wasn't scared; he was vigilant. A smirk covers Aahil face seeing Rohail's expressions. "Tum to abhi sa dar gaye. Abhi to bara pyar ki baat kar raha tha," Aahil ask tauntingly.

"Get to the point! What is the challenge?" Rohail said not wanting to lose himself in this game of taunts. "Fine. I want to challenge you. A 30 day challenge. The person, who is able to get her in 30 days, can have her and the other one backs off." Aahil explains the challenge. "Woh koi cheez nahi hai jo usse koi pa la!" Rohail barks. "Mujhe ye pata hai Rohail warna mein abhi tak usse apna paiso sa khareed chuka hota. Lekin mein yaha tumse civilize conversation kar raha ho," Aahil says quietly with a fake smile. Rohail doesn't reply. He contemplates about this challenge. He just didn't like the idea of his Seher being treated like a thing... but what other option does he have? A. Let him have her. Absolute no! B. Tell her the truth. How will she react plus she is still healing so... Nope! C. Let him play along as being her fiance. Hell no!

In conclusion, there is was only one way out. Rohail look up at him. Aahil was drinking his coffee calmly. "Done. Let's do this." Rohail says firmly. Aahil looks up at him and smile. Looks like he knew all along that Rohail would play along, eventually. "Ok then. 30 days," Aahil says smiling. Something very rare for him, Rohail thought, as he has barely seen this guy smile. "30 days it is!" Rohail said with a humorless smile.

Next Day...

Hospital..
In the Afternoon...

A excited but a little nervous Mahreen knocked on Seher's door the next afternoon. As promised she was here to see her bhabhi. Rohail was already here. She had college so she is coming straightaway from there. She is very much on edge. It's almost like deja vu of meeting her for the first time. A soft "come in" came from the other side. She opened the door with a big smile. "Hiii..eh" Mahreen long Hi cut up short when she noticed that Seher wasn't alone. Not that Mahreen expected her to be as she thought her bhai will be here but not him! She was with that hot and se*y dude from yesterday. "Oh no!" Mahreen thought in her mind.

"Hi. You must be Mahreen, right?" Seher asked excitedly. Mahreen nods, too surprise to speak. She had a big urge to look down and see how she looked in her simple emerald green and black anarkali suit. "Gosh! Mahreen chill! It's fine," she tried to calm her jumping nerves. Rohail who was standing by leaning on the window walked over to Mahreen with a smile. Seher was sitting on her bed leaning on the headboard. That se*y and dangerous stranger was standing by the bed by Seher. He didn't smile; his look was more pensive. Mahreen couldn't help but notice how good-looking he looks in his black-suit: white shirt and black pants with black jacket and tie. "Focus Mahreen!!" Mahreen told her mind as she moved her gaze to look at Seher. She was smiling at her. "That dude probably recognize me," Mahreen thought grimly looking at Seher, "Oh well!"

"Hi, I'm Seher. Have heard a lot about you from Rohail since yesterday," she says with a beautiful smile. She look absolutely gorgeous in her simple violet color shalwar kameez. She continues, "Nice to meet you.. And yeah, this is my fiance, Aahil Malik," Seher happily introduce herself and her fiance!! My breath hitched. "Fiance?" Mahreen voiced my surprised not believing. Rohail and Aahil both look at her alarmed. Mahreen sharply turns and look at bhai. Her eyes questioning him. He moved close to me and opened his mouth but then Seher interrupted. So Mahreen turns towards her, "Haan. Mera fiance," she tells with a smile. Completely clueless to the whole mess. Mahreen didn't know if she wanted to cry out of sadness that he is taken by her SISTER-IN-LAW or that her brother's wife think that she was engaged to SOMEBODY ELSE!

Rohail comes and puts a hand behind Mahreen. She jumped coming out of her reverie. Rohail looks at her questioningly. She shakes her head in nothing. He nods and smile. "Meina tumhe kaha tha. Seher ki mangi ho chuki hai, Aahil ka saath," Mahreen couldn't help notice how Rohail said the last few words with gritted teeth and a fake smile. Mahreen look up at Seher and Aahil. Aahil?! Hmm, nice name. Aahil... what is the last name, yeah, Malik. Aahil Malik. He was looking at her Mahreen now with questioning eyes. Still stuck on just his name not really understanding what is happening around her; Mahreen looked at him. Understanding his unspoken question, she answered, "I'm Rohail's cousin sister," she said with a smile. He nods. "Okay!? So, that's all I'm going to get." Mahreen thought grimacing.

Just then Seher coughs a little and Aahil was all over her. Getting her water and napkin. Say soothing words and what not! Mahreen turns to Rohail. His face was covered with a dark shadow. "Why was he not doing anything?" Mahreen thought frowning. Remembering something, she leans in on Rohail and whisper, "Is this the other half of the story from last night?" He nods as he controls his fury seeing Aahil taking care of his wife. Mahreen looks down to see him holding his hand tightly in a fist that his knuckles turn white. Mahreen couldn't help feel bad for her brother. She loves him a lot and cannot, absolutely cannot see her brother sad. "Heck No!" she thought firmly in her mind.

Rohail dressed in a simple olive green collar tee-shirt and denims. Looking very handsome but very dangerous at this moment because of his anger. Mahreen gently put her hand around his closed fist. He flinched as he eye-contact broke from which he was probably silently killing Aahil mercilessly. Mahreen cringed at the image that suddenly form in her mind of Rohail beating Aahil. Shaking her head, she look at Aahil. He was looking at her questioningly.

"Don't worry. I'm here. I will take care of everything. Bhabhi sirf apki hai," Mahreen whisper with a small smile. Rohail couldn't smile back at her innocence. She had no idea how murky this situation has already gotten. "So fear not when Mahreen is here!" she whispers with a wink as she walk over to Seher. "Sometimes that is the only fear that Mahreen is still here," Rohail replies grimly getting a glare from Mahreen in response.

"Hi Bha.. Bhaji.. Baji. Baji. Sorry, my urdu stinks," Mahreen covers up her bhabhi with bhaji as she goes and sit beside her. "It's ok. I understand. Mine is not to well either," she says with a smile obviously clueless to her mistake. Although Aahil was definitely glaring at me, like she did a big sin. Mahreen looks at him and shrug as if "Whatever!" "See you can do. You can show that he doesn't matter to you at all," Mahreen mentally patted her back. "Sooo ready to go home?" Mahreen ask Seher excitedly getting her head back together. "Definitely!" Seher responded with same amount of enthusiasm.

Just then the nurse came with the discharge papers and other formalities. While Rohail did all this work, Mahreen and Seher chit chatted. While Aahil got busy on his phone. "Acha... I just remembered. Seher bha... bhaji... baj. God this just got a lot of more harder," Mahreen said out groaning as kept calling her bhabhi. "Old habits die hard," Aahil said quietly behind Mahreen. She sharply turns around to look at him. And that was it! Back to square one!

"Why does he have to be soo God damn good-looking? It would make it so much more easier to hate him or dislike as a matter of fact. I can't hate him. Ever! He looks so good in the black suit. And the way he smiles at bhabhi. God I want him to smile at me like that. God, either am pathetic or hopeless. Im jealous! From bhabhi! No!!! Im suppose to be mad at him for stealing my sister-in-law rather than being jealous of that same sister-in-law." Mahreen wince inwardly. Just then he look up from his I-phone screen. "OMO!(korean of OMG) How can I ever be mad at him if he looks at me with those intense eyes??? Though not with love as they normally are for bhabhi but still! Mahreen! Think of something! Say something! You are staring at him!" Mahreen forced her mind to focus and think of a excuse. His eyes squinted at her in suspicion when she doesn't say anything and continues to give him blank look.

"Oh no! He sooo cannot know what I'm thinking!" Mahreen thought in panic. Because she was not able to find her voice, she just squinted her eyes at him. He looks confuse. "Good! Even I'm confuse as to why I'm doing this!" Mahreen thought with a groan and before she can say anything or do anything, Rohail came towards them. "Ok. All done. Let's go." Aahil's attention immediately turns towards him and Mahreen breath a air of relief. "Acha, Mahreen tumne inhe bataya apni party ka bara mein," Rohail asked. Mahreen looks up with a confused expression trying hard to make her blob of goo brain to work. It was a very difficult job! "Huh.. haan. Haan. Meri party. Nahi, nahi bataya," Mahreen quickly replies with a shake of her head as she remembers.

"Acha sorry batana bhul gaye. Kal shaam ko humara ghar pay party hai Seher ka ghar, safe and sound ana ki khushi mein," Mahreen announced as she stands up to look at them all like a hostess of the party. She turns towards Aahil and says in the same tone, "Aap bhi invited hai." "Party! That sounds fun. Chalo chalo. Let's go," Seher says getting up from the bed all excited. Mahreen helps her. "Ok then. I will see you all tomorrow the," Aahil says with a smile as he look at Seher but he gives a side dark look to Mahreen. She gulp not sure what she did now.

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PRECAP

Day One...

Mahreen's Pary...

O Khuda...

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Edited by CrazyRedMary - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome updat
30 days challenge on winning or losing on his own wife
Wow different
]wat will happen if seher come to know about d bet.

I liked ahil nd rohail cafeteria convo.
Nd specially rohail trust nd confidence on his wife nd she will b his.

About mehrain she is an interesting character. The way she talk to herself. The way shs adore aahil nd then scold herself is really cute.
Loved d way she said bhabhi is just for bhai.
She will b the cupid for rohail nd seher nd in d process may her love story wid aahil will also start

Lots of twist nd turns are awaiting jn dis roller coaster ride
Update soon
Edited by dasv - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
thanks dear awesome update
30 days bet
That to on his wife 😲
I must say what a confidence on his love
& only true love can give u that confidence👏
their cafe convo was interesting
mehreen seems to be interesting character
lets see what happens next
kaafi saare twist hai
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

omg this story

is mindblowing yaar

i m in love with it

n cs lovely

pls pls update soon n pm me

take care!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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interesting story...
m all in...sorry can't leave a long comment
as i already told u m busy today
keep pming me and i will leave back my response
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awsumm Partner! Apni Blockbuster Engine ki speed se aage jaa rhi hai..😉😉 Lol! Aahil Miyan.. Zara apne zehen ko shaant kijiye! Itna sochna sehat ke liye nuksaandeh ho sakta hai..😆😆 Apni Mehreen hai hi aisi..😉 I lyk the way he is thinking about her! And BTW aapko itni jalan kyun ho rhi hai?? Dont forget Seher hai toh sirf Apne Rohail ki.. But Kya Kare? Aadat Se Majboor!! 😆 I soo loved the Rohail-Aahil Convo!! Kitna Tashan..👍🏼 Spcly Ro.. Itna bada challenge toh koi tabhi accept kar sakta hai when u trust ur love and Rohail trusts his love Seher! ❤️❤️ They really have an eternal love! ❤️ And Loved Rohail's confidence! Bang On Dude!! I love the part where he was playing with his wedding band while talking to Aahil! Shows his confidence..❤️❤️ The Challenge is On!! I loved Mehreen.. ❤️❤️ Her mind talks were..🤣🤣 Hormones pe kabu rakhein Mohtarma! 😆 Agree he is hot for you but still! So Seher is discharged! Party..Yay! Excited! 😃 Thanxx fr pm..Continue Soonz!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update dear
loved it
Aahil comparing mahreen n seher
30 day chalenge.. interesting.. true love will win!
mahreen.. bechari..bhabhi ko baji kehna pad raha he n she's hell confused!
aahil.. mahreen ke dimag me sawar ho gaya..hehe..
party!!
interesting!
do continu soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
will read and comment soon... for this
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome prologue , M giving my chapter wise reaction . Thanks for letting me know about this FF , m loving it

Chaptr 1 - Rohail and his bad luck 🤣 but of all those thing 1 thing happen good He met seher. how did aahil come to know about hospital 🤔

Chapter 2- Seher is so cute and uske sawaal bechara Rohail 😆 . I can imagine Fawad reaction in this situation he would be looking so cute 😳

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