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Purplevalley

@Ocean.eyes

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#741

finally got some time to comment

wonderful update yaaar

emotions and the way you express them...its ur usp!
Tooo tooo gooodd

loved the way you showed kriya's emotions the way she expressed to family members and then rey...it was so sweet to read that part

good to see their relationship is going on a new level in terms of trust comfort and understanding :)

gosh smita you are improving with your writing skills

i loved the usage of words in this update

thanx for the pm :)

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fannism

@fannism

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#742

Awww...thts sOoo cute and lOvely...!!!
lOved the update like hell...!!!
When the parts end...i was like..." i wana read mOre of this..."
Plzxzz update sOon...!!!
Will be waiting
lOve sarU

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zona_malik

@zona_malik

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#743

Awesome Awesomee Super Awesomeee

Ahmazing as always

so love to read dis work na didaaa

dis has some special factor of trust & building relationship

& u describe it beautifully

excited to read more of it

n yes Last benchers & KR,SS n taani wala next time update karna

its been so longgg

loving dis work lots :*

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Anjori

@anjoriii

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#744

awesome update :)
thanks for the Pm and please update soon dii :P :D

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smileysmi

@smileysmi

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#745

Originally posted by: Meghna_kriyansh
nxt update kab milega

Will try to update it as fast as possible now.
Can't say which story I will update next, it depends on my mood :D.
But will try to give regular updates now on..

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Rajeshwari_KR

@Rajeshwari_KR

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#746

I just came across this one...thank you so much for the pm...else I would have missed an amazing work...

Read all the updates at go and at the end I was like...god next update kab ayega...

Loved it...from theri character sketch to their family and friends bonding...amazing!

Love the way Rey Kriya understand each other...their fights and flirting is the best!

Love the gang...so understanding when needed and then the usual friends nautanki and teasing...

I love the way KR relation is growing...slowly yet steadily...

Kriyam and Reyam bond is amazing...their understanding abt each other and theri families superb!

I love the maturity levels of each one...definitely this would be one of my favs...loving it

update soon

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smileysmi

@smileysmi

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#747

Originally posted by: Rajeshwari_KR
I just came across this one...thank you so much for the pm...else I would have missed an amazing work...
Read all the updates at go and at the end I was like...god next update kab ayega...
Loved it...from theri character sketch to their family and friends bonding...amazing!
Love the way Rey Kriya understand each other...their fights and flirting is the best!
Love the gang...so understanding when needed and then the usual friends nautanki and teasing...
I love the way KR relation is growing...slowly yet steadily...
Kriyam and Reyam bond is amazing...their understanding abt each other and theri families superb!
I love the maturity levels of each one...definitely this would be one of my favs...loving it
update soon

Hey..smita here..
Thank you so much for such an encouraging review.
Glad to know you like my story.
Thanks.

About the update, after " kyun? Hogaya na?" Update.
I have got personal request for that update so.

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smileysmi

@smileysmi

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#748

Part 18:

Rey and kriya were descending to join others in the living room, swayam saw them both had content smile on their faces.

Swayam(still looking at rey and kriya) : payal mom aapko nahi lagta you are wasting two years on them? They don't need any time to understand each other by seeing their growing comfort level.

Payal just smiles at this looking happily at rey and kriya together.

Evening went with full swing..rey introduced his friends properly to kriya once again and all his friends too adjusted with kriya very soon as she is a bubbly girl.

Vicky : so kriya your friends will join you in 10days till then what's the plan?

Kriya : kuch kaas nahi.. kuch payal mom's ke wishes poore karne hai (giving a naughty look to payal)

Everyone looks at payal. Even she was clueless about what wishes kriya is talking about..

Kriya : kyun mom bhool gayi? Aap hi tho bolthe the, ek baar mere yahan aao kriya I will arrange all pending parties at home and will perform poojas like others..you always wanted me to arrange kitty parties like your friends do.

Payal's expression changes in a second..she becomes so excited all of sudden.

Payal : you remember all of that?

Kriya : yes.. and I do remember your all evil plans behind arranging parties mom..

Payal laughs at this..she immediately comes and sits beside kriya..

Payal : tum sach mein karogi?

Kriya : next 10days your name mom. Aapki har kwaish poori karungi..(in a dramatic way)

Payal : mhuuaaa love you kriya..( hitting rey) dekho, sikho kuch..yeh hoti hai betiyaa..

Rey : whatever..and you(looking at kriya), padai karne aaye ho yah faltu ke ye sab karne? Koi party warty nahi hogi ghar pe. You don't know these ladies kriya. They just want to show off what all their sons and daughters can do for them. That's it. They just show off and taunt others..

Kriya : haan tho.. aap kya chahte ho main bhi aap ki tarah mom ko let down feel karaun unn logo ke samne?

Rey : main let down feel karwata hoon mom ko unke saamne? Main?

Kriya : haan aap..

Payal : kriya rehne do beta

Kriya : aap chup raho mom. Aap kuch nahi kehte issi lie rey aise hai..

Rey : what do you mean by aise hai?

Kriya : huh rey.. forget it.. parties hongi aur grandly hongi..aur issi ghar mein honge.. (with dominating tone)

All were looking at rey. They wanted to see his response to kriya's demand. If there was anyone else in kriya's place, they knew how would be rey's outburst. But it is kriya today. So they were all eager for rey's reaction.

Rey was silent for few moments then says in a defeated tone "I don't like noise in my house"..

All hide their smiles looking at rey..

Kriya : kyun pub mein jaate ho tho shor nahi hoti? (Again in a strong tone)

Rey : pub is pub. Not my home. You can also arrange parties outside. Not at home.

Kriya glares at him..

Rey : what?. I tell ...mom ..also same thing. That's why she arranges her all pooja ..and.. parties ..outside..

Kriya was furious at his statements. He was still unable to understand what her mom wanted.

Kriya (looking at rey) : mom tell me what all you want to arrange at home. The parties, get togethers and poojas.. on those days we will tell your son to be there at office till we finish off with everything at home. Then he can come home.

Rey : what?

All burst out laughing.. they couldn't control their laugh seeing rey's condition.

Rey : shut up guys..

Kriya gives a look to the gang, they immediately stopped laughing and sat seriously..

Kriya : listen rey mom has list of wishes against her friends. Which obviously you are unaware of. Or may be you don't like them so don't want to fulfil them but I am going to fulfil them.

Rey felt hurt..

Rey: her most of the friends know only show off of their status or their children's success.. and taunt each other.

Kriya : and you are giving enough reasons for them to taunt mom.

Rey : I want mom to stay away from such people..

Kriya : and why so?

Rey : because I don't like them. They are fake.

Kriya : I hope except this group (looking at rey's gang), mom also doesn't like many of your friends. She might have told you also to stay away from them. Have you ever listened to her?

It was a big slap for rey. Yes he does have many friends who are spoiled brats of rich fathers. But he wants to be in touch with everyone. He never listened to payal whenever she told him to avoid such friends circle.

Kriya understood rey's expression. He was guilty. Making rey guilty infront of everyone was the last thing she wants for rey.. she felt bad..

Kriya :so (diverting everybody's attention).. mom morning muje sab list chahie.. fir hum discuss karenge..

Payal smiles noding and then says "par usse pehle muje shopping karni hai.. I want you to select some sarees for me like you select for smriti every now and then"

Actually payal always adored kriya-smriti bonding. She always wished to have a daughter like kriya who takes care of her mother's all smallest of smallest wishes in her own way..she always wished to have kriya with her and introduce kriya to her friends. Proudly. She so loved kriya since kriya was baby.

Kriya : sure mom tomorrow will go for shopping. Even I want to buy Mumbai style dresses. (Then starts muttering to herself) I hope Mumbai girls dressing style and Bangalore girls dressing styles mein kuch jada difference na ho. Nahi tho fir se muje har chees change karni padegi.

Swayam : oye drama queen. Bas kar. Kuch jada difference nahi hai as long as you wear decent dresses.

Kriya : Swayam tum chup raho. You know issi ka darr tha muje hitler kahi ke.. ab tum har chees mein tokho ge.(mimicking Swayam style) Kriya decent dress. Decent remember.. hadd hai yaar abhi nahi try karungi new styles tho kya shadi ke baad karungi. Waise bhi who knows kaisa husband milega muje. Koi sadu akadu mila tho (then she felt rey's eyes on her and realised what she was saying)

She turns to rey slowly and smiles hesitantly and says " I waz not talking about you. You are gem of a person. I know you won't restrict me for anything"

Rey hits his forehead with his hand.. all hides their smile. Once again kriya realised she said all that to rey infront of everone.

Swayam shakes his head and to make kriya and rey come out of that embarrassing situation, he changes the topic.

Swayam : whatever it is, don't forget what you have promised to me.

Kriya : what?

Swayam opens his wallet and gives her a credit card. Then kriya realizes what Swayam was talking about.

Kriya : seriously Swayam iski koi jarurat nahi hai. I mean how can I accept this.? It's your hard earned money.

Swayam : shutup kriya. Since 2yrs you have been rejecting to accept this. Yes these are my hard earned money but for whom I am earning for? Don't have parents or siblings to fulfil their needs and wishes. All I have is nanu, his needs are very less we all know that. Then comes payal mom and smriti mom, they always ask me to save, save and save whenever I gift them something. For whom I need to save? You are the only one, on whom I have all the rights as a brother as a friend and to some extent as a father as well..

Kriya chukles at his last sentence..she was really overwhelmed to hear such an emotional words from Swayam.

Kriya : but still Swayam...

Swayam : but wut kuch nahi. You are taking it that's it.

Kriya was still hesitant : par Swayam (she looks at rey for permission, he nods slightly giving her his approval )

Kriya looking at Swayam : okay I will take it..

Swayam hits her head : "I will take it" ki bacchi, mere card lene ke liye you need rey's permission? Itni jaldi party badal di?

Rey laughs at this..kriya was blushing.. she hugs Swayam to hide her face and mumbles "sorry.. I didn't mean it"

Swayam too hugs her fondly. Caressing her head he says " I am so happy for you. Ask Sharon she will tell you why (kriya whispers she told me already)(it was about swaron always wanted rey and kriya to bound as couple, they always felt rey and kriya can make a good couple)(Swayam says) she did? No wonder. Girls.."

Rey felt uncomfortable seeing kriya and Swayam hugging. Swayam observes this.

Swayam : kriya chodo. Someone is jealous.

Kriya leaves swayam and immediately looks at rey because she understood who it can be.

(Pics credit goes to D3 forum gallery and the people uploaded them)

Swayam in a teasing tone : wah.. kya understanding hai..
Kriya immediately try to shut Swayam's mouth with her hand saying " no..no swayu".. Swayam moving back : payal mom I don't understand why are you giving them 2yrs of time..

Kriya jumps on Swayam and shuts his mouth with her hands but still he continues what he wanted to say but kriya was closing his mouth tightly so no one understood what he was saying..

Everyone adored the bonding Swayam and kriya shares.. except one person. Our hero reyansh. He still didn't like kriya being that close to someone infront of him..

Done ..hope you guys like it..