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alina.b

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Semanti Chakraborty

@DharmaPriyaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

AWESOME 👏 you caught the devotion inside Draupadi perfectly can you please continue this with some devotional flashbacks of Krishna spending times with 6 of them 😊 I really wish someone to write something devotional in this forum 😳

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megha sharma

@MS-meghasharma

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Posted: 11 years ago

superbly written

arjun and draupadi's pain and shock have been really written well and the description of dwarka submerges was good too.

krishna is indeed always there with everyone

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alina.b

@alina.b

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Posted: 11 years ago

@Urmila

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! Hmm I haven't thought about writing something like that but it is a good idea! I will think about it! Currently I am thinking of writing a story from Bhanumati's POV

@MeghaSharma
Thank you! I tried my best to put the emotions in!

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alina.b

@alina.b

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Posted: 11 years ago

I have also written a poem about Krishna! Please do read it and give feedback!

Poem: Who is he?

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Arijit

@Arijit007

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Posted: 11 years ago

yes, kanha is everywhere, usw bas pukaarne ki der hain.

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alina.b

@alina.b

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Posted: 11 years ago

@Arijiit - Yes! I agree! Thanks for commenting! It motivates me!

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alina.b

@alina.b

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: hpatgiri
Very beautiful & touching.

Aww thank you! It means a lot to me!

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Yagya

@Yagyaseni

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Posted: 11 years ago

Such a beautiful OS!!! Very poignant!! My eyes welled up with tears and my heart is wrenching!!! You caught arya arjun's and yagyaseni's emotions too perfectly!!! And my bhratha krishna is sarvyapi bus pukaro aur upastit hojayenge hriday main!!

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alina.b

@alina.b

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Yagyaseni
Such a beautiful OS!!! Very poignant!! My eyes welled up with tears and my heart is wrenching!!! You caught arya arjun's and yagyaseni's emotions too perfectly!!! And my bhratha krishna is sarvyapi bus pukaro aur upastit hojayenge hriday main!!

Thank you very much! I really tried my best! I've written something after a really long time, almost a year actually!

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