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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: RUHANIKAA

It was Superb !!!👏

Amazingly Written..

Loved It❤️

Ty So Much For d Pm..

Eagerly Waiting For Next Part


Thank you ...!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Barbievishi20

Amazing update..
finally they meet..
professional relation only hmmm time will tell
waiting for next part..
continue soon 😊


Thank you dear..!!!

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -TheInstigator-

Res *un-res* Amazing stry renu! intresting concept.. zain is here with his nerd , as her Big Boss ! Hmm ! A slap on his face, zain ne zaroor kuch kiya .. Mujhe batado kya kiya..?I promise mein kisi ko nhi bolongi *wink* :P I think zain donno about junu ,jab pat chalega tab kya hoga *dreaming* Plz cont soon , m egarly waiting for the nxt part :) Add me in ur PM list :)


Thank you ..!!!
tuje wo sab jannekeliye wait karini hogi ...kyunki i'm not gonna reveal it so easily ..!!!
next part will be up today ..!!
And yeshhh..you are in my PM list ..!!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
Helloww..shellow people mei aagayi update ke sath ..aaj sunday hai and as promise ...exact time per aagayi mei ..well ye update utana acha nahi aaya jitha mei chahaithi thi ..per i felt it to be okay-okay type ki ..whatever it is i hope you like it ..my pc is on leave so there was neither proof reading nor typo correcting ..so please ignore all sorts of Typos..and ya.. i have notice ki many people ko flashback aur present mein confusion ho rahi hai ..so to avoid that i have used different font colour ..

Red for past
Blue for present

hope you guys will have a great time reading my update...Happi reading..!!!
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CH4:Kabhi Jo Baadal Barse



Aaliya's POV:


"Hum jo chalane lage, chalane lage hain yeh raaste
aa ha ha ha manjil se behtar lagane lage hai yeh raaste"

The FM player of the car turned on due to the sudden jerk that came our way ..making a prefect BG for our situation .. the rain started pouring down out side the window .. i lowered my window glass to feel the rain ..i slowly keep my hand outside the window feeling the rain drop kiss my hand..did i mention that i love rains alot ..how i wished that the car would stop and i could go and enjoy the rain outside..after such a boring party something was definitely need to make my mood up ..so rain was that thing which would make it ... few rain drop feel on my face..a small smile creep up my face..All this while i could feel two chocolate brown orbs staring at me... i turned around to meet those grazes ..but sadly those brown orbs turned away and were glued to the road when i turned to meet em..the whole car journey was in a total silent mode..finally we reached our mansion ..every one was out of town on the marriage shopping business..so it was zain and me all alone to night ...the entrance gate pulled wide open for us to enter in ..he stop the car near the entrance door.. both of us got down and moved in..none of us spoke all this while .. the rain still pouring ..so i running into the backyard where i could enjoy the rain fully

Author's POV:

*Piyano music*

Aaliya ran into the rain..allow the rain to drench her in its wetness..she was soaked complete in the rain's moistness

Kabhi jo baadal barse
Main dekhoon tujhe aankhein bharke
Tu lage mujhe pahli baarish ki duaa

zain was staring at her ..leaning on to the door frame of the backyard ..and aaliya unaware of this was enjoying the rain to the fullest ..her saree sticked to her body showing away her prefect curves..making her look as the hottest as ever.. zain's feet made their way toward her with our seeking his permission ..!!

*Music *
Aaliya turned around to face zain ..both of them share a eyelock
"Zai.. "
Before she could complete her sentence zain placed his finger on her lips..sending shivers down her spine ..he slowly cupped her face

Tere pahloo mein reh loon
Main khudko paagal keh loon
Tu gham de ya khushiyaan
Seh loon saathiya

he rubbed his finger on her lips ..sweeping off the water drop present over there..both were lost in each other orbs ..their lips were seal but their eyes spoke volumes..he leaned in to kiss her..finally he locked her lip with his.

Koi nahi.. tere siva mera yahaan
Manzilein.. hain meri to sab yahaan
Mita de sabhi aaja faasle
Main chahoon mujhe mujhse baant le
Zara sa mujhme tu jhaank le
Main hoon kya?

aaliya was shocked at first but eventually gave in..making the kiss a passionate one..with in no time the passion in the kiss went to peaks...the kiss continued till both of them were breathless.

Woo.. aeee.. aeee.. aaa.. sathiyaa..
Ae ae... aa...

he left her lips..but still he was on with his kissing marathon..he started place series of kiss down her neckline

Pahle kabhi, na tune mujhe gham diya
Phir mujhe, kyun tanha kar diya
Guzaare thhe jo lamhe pyaar ke
Hamesha tujhe apna maan ke
To phir tune badli kyun adaa
Yeh kyun kiya?
Wo o wo o.. Wo o wo o..

he lift her up in his arms..and moved towards his room ..he placed her over his bed and had a eye full look at her..make her turn red ..he got on to her making sure that he doesn't put his weight on her..as if seek her permission to continue forward..she nodded indicating a 'Yes" that when he started placing a series of kiss on her face sweeping all the droplets present on her forehead .. eyes..nose..cheeks...chin and lastly her lips..pulling her into a long passionate kiss..!!

Kabhi jo badal barse
Main dekhun tujhe aankhein bharke
Tu lage mujhe pehli barish ki duaa

They successfully undressed each other...he started making love to her ..making her moan his name ..and make her nail's marks on his back ..!!

Tere pahloo mein rah loon
Main khudko pagal kah loon
Tu gham de ya khushiyaan, sathiya.

There lie the love birds in other arms sleeping peacefully ..they bodies sticked together..their finger intertwined..their leg over lapped..prefectly definating the ture meaning of
"Do jism ek jaan"

Aaliya's POV:

After Remembering that beautiful night i spent with him .. i felt some thing moist moved down my cheek .. and no doubt it was my tears making their way thought my eyes down my cheek .."Why Zain why did you do this to me ?"
i whispered into darkness again for some1000th time in these four years ...but never got any answer for it .. i slided down beside junu who was fast asleep ..cuddle her ..i creased her hair then kissed her forehead..and cried to my sleep.


Zain's POV:

"you know what buddy ? I meet her.. i finally meet her after ages ..she was the same..as beautiful as smart and as sweet as before.. she didn't change even a bit ..even that arrogance and that angry of her's is same as before. i can't tell you how happy i'm ..!!!"
i excited explained how i was feeling on meeting aaliya to my one year old son..who instead responded with a giggle of his ..as if he understood my happiness..he was the only person with whom i could share everything..my happiness..my sadness ..my sorrow..my success..everything ..yes he is my son ..aahil was mine .. i know you all might shocked by this fact but yes i have a son..it happened on a drunken night when i mistook sanam to be aaliya and made out with her ..at least that's what sanam told me as i was too drunk to remember anything and then got her pregnant ..but she wanted to become a model thus firstly she didn't wanted to keep the baby but on my request she kept it after delivery give him to me and then she left to fulfill her dreams.. i still regret for what ever happened that night but i love aahil from bottom of my heart .. i feel he is the best thing happened to me..!!!

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PRECAP:

"She is mine ..isn't she?"


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Thoo..kaisa laga???shock laga ki nahi?? i told you aaplog jithana iss story ke barremin predict karoge mei iss utana hi unpredictable bana dungi ..ye sirf trailer tha picture abhi baki hai ..there are lot more twist to come on your way..so watch out ..okay now as you guys know my rule..comments do ..updates lo...so do like and comment .. .it only takes a few seconds to like and a couple of minutes to comment...criticism and suggestions are most welcomed..!!

[Pic & gif Credit to it's owner..!!}
Love'
Renu ..❤️❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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i have included all the name who had comment and liked last update.. if you wanna join in like this post ..if you wish to remove your name comment ..!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update.ZaYa part was really romantic.so next morning Zain ditch Aliya but why?he have a son too now hope it not create problem for ZaYa again.this story is really getting interesting.update soon and thanks for pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ahh , renu ki bacchi !!
kitna bada update tha 😡 (I was expecting a long update -_- )
Anyways, it was so romantic 😳
Zain ,do do bacchon ka hansome baap :P
Haila!Ahil, zain nd sanam ka baby?
I hope she will not come back nd shoe her vampish-giri or else m gonna kill you, Sacch mein!
Past mein ki hua tha?? Ab bata bhi doo!!!
Plz cont soon!
nd thanks fir the update :)
Edited by -TheInstigator- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome
especially rain sequence
fabulously written
shock laga 10,000 volts ka shock laga
zain n sanam urghhh 😡
but precap damn good
thanks for link
superb update
I will not predict future story
will wait for ur next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Yeh toh sachme electrocute hi kar diya 😆
kab? 😲 kaise 😲
actually don't answer that 😉
Aliya would feel betrayed na, after leaning about Aahil?!
And Zain shocked after learning about Junu 😆
And the baby making process was so sweet and ☺️
Update soon BBM
Waiting.
Avi ke liye mat rukho 😆
😛
buh-bye 😊
Edited by arshipotterfan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
hot nd romantic...precap is interesting...waiting for d next part...cont ASAP

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