RiMa TS: Love Has Its Own Ways.. (complete)

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Azra Zaidi

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Posted: 11 years ago

res 😃

I am first

This was awesome !!! Loved it !!

When she was struggling with the lock i thought she is small then you said her age , i thought why was she struggling with the lock and then i guess she was clumsy when she fall near the parlor. then at the time of accident she wasn't angry on rk again i got confused when she said i should have sensed it !!

Then when she said to her self abt that she is disabled , i thought about all the disabilities but i dint think she i blind !!!!! And i liked khushi so much she was such a darling and i am glad at then end both of them got together !!

Loved it Suru 😳

And ur sis also both of u did it very nicely ⭐️⭐️

ya and thanx for pm ... i thought to scold you again if u dint send me pm but u sended me 😆

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Ni33

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Posted: 11 years ago

Wow. Suru.👏👏👏

Now I can't possible give a comedial comment on this one.😆

This was so cute, emotional and heartbreaking at some points.

I thought that she had some disability, because she couldn't lock her door. But the accident and Madhu reluctance for crossing the road, I was thinking her eyes. But there wasn't anything that directly indicating on that. So way the go to keep the mystery up until almost the very end.👏

Now I am happy you gave the story a happy ending. Madhu her eyesight back and declaration of love to RK.

Sorry for the late unres. Won't happen again.😉

And the reason I resed was so I would get among the first, then I totally forgot to read your TS.😆 Sorry again. Won't happen again.😉😆

Thanks for the PM.😛

Edited by Ni33 - 11 years ago

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jalebi

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Posted: 11 years ago

Aww... such a beautiful story suru!!!👏👏

i loved it!!😛😛 nicely written!!👏👏

at first when madhu was struggling with the lock i thought she's some problem in her hand or she has only one hand may be lost the other in accident but never thought she's visually challenged!!! 😲😲

even at Rk madhu's 1st meet, the car scene u showed it as accident & i was wondering y madhu is blaming herself when rk is at faault?😕😕 then i brushed the thought by saying ah.. she is feared of crossing road like me lol!! i wont cross the road without getting curses & scoldings from the riders lol!😆😆 so there is no wrg in madhu apologizing!!😳😳

then when she reminded herself that she is disable & not to grow feelings for him i conformed that she has only one hand! oh great after seeing her disability also rk is ready to marry her... then came the actual shock... she's visually challenged!!! all the while when madhu was saying i could sense but not see... i should have sensed it that she's visually challenged!😆😆

kushi... aww... she is such a sweetheart! there is nothing wrg in madhu calling her mama! yes, like a mother she brought all the happiness in madhu's life!😳😳

RK.. he is such a gem! after knowing her disability also he truly loved her & waited for her!😳😳

overall its a great piece of writing baby!!⭐️⭐️

do write more of such lovely stories!!😃😃

thanks for the pm but i resed before getting pm!!😆😆

Edited by madhurish - 11 years ago