Arhi FF : Peek-a-boo #3 [ Completed ]

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KtotheM

@KtotheM

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#771

Awesome chapter
Loved this dramatic update of this chapter
Eagerly waiting to read about the wedding rituals and all
And how u wil bring out the last secret of these three friends
Thanx for the pm

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pakpearl

@pakpearl

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#772

Shyaam is a damn filthy creature..

He has the audacity of talking to Payal in such a way...

Comparing Sumer n himself 😕

Arnav n Sumer r there to support Payal n show Shyaam his place..

Khushi n Akash r upset coz they've been kept ignorant of this Shyaam fiasco..

How did they all pacify each other was so heart warming..

Lolz..

Arnav is too much..

He won't spare a chance to romance with Khushi..😛

Waiting for the next update...

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Mints23

@mints23

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#773

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Shyamala

@shyamidutt

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#774

Awesome update, can't wait for the next chapter :)

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zafi

@zafi

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#775

Awesome update.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

I loved it.❤️

I am glad things have settled down for Sumer and Payal.👏👏

That was a lovely party Arnav threw on the beach of Goa.

I loved Arnav and Khushis' outfits.

I am looking forward to reading more.

Thanks.😃

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premdewaani

@premdewaani

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#776

Super duper nice update dear:-))

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rk2127

@rk2127

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#777

Res

Edited.

Beautiful update.

I especially loved Khushi's dress and the setting for the party. Rocking!!!

Hmmm ... So Arnav's uncomfortableness regarding Akash's nd his one sided love for Khushi has been easing away for last two months but at the same time a brotherly restlessness is taking it's place with the growing comfort between Anjali and Akash. What will he do when he will know Khushi's thought of being happy for the same reason.

I'm glad that Akash is finally leaving Khushi and his unrequited chapter behind by being comfortable in Arnav and Khushi's company. His feelings may not be at par with Anjali but I too believe in Payal's assurance that he won't break Anjali's heart. My question is Arnav's restlessness is because of there growing comfort and closeness or because it's Akash of all people?

Well Arnav's eagerness and his countdown is understandable. Pic must say Khushi is not behind here. The ambience, the time of the wedding and it's feeling of soon to be with each other and to top it with there hormones all time high. Yeah 8 more days to go 😉.

Edited by rk2127 - 11 years ago

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Hetal

@Divyahet

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#778

Hettadi Ki Mitthadi 😳😆

Loved the update...
it started with one of my all time favorite song dear😳 and that's why you deserve a kissi😆 (it's not that I want a reason to kiss you.)😆

So Arnav noticed his sister's love for Akash but loved the way Payal stood for him, her best friend..

Oh Sumer ...you dramebaz item ...and Payal too wow what a lovely couple ..
Payal shared everything related to her and Sumer's relationship 👏

Arnav and his ways to kiss his lady love and of course the bold way to told her how she affects him ...very naughty Arnav..ab isski jaan loge kya ? 😳😆

Go Goa !!!! for party and he sang a song..then flew away with his lovely titaliya..and uff I couldn't write anything on this part...😉😳😆...

Mitthadi yeh Arnav ko kya kar diya tumne ?😆

ek song meri aur se bhi..

Bhool gayaa sab kuchh..
yaad nahi ab kuchh...
bas ek baat na bhooli...😳😆

Payaliya tumne jo kiya haina uska badala bhi lenge woh dono haa nahi toh.

thanks for the pm,
take care my mitthadi,
lots of love n hugs.😛

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pinkly

@pinkly

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#779

I love Kishore Kumar. He is my favorite singer. You have chosen two most beautiful songs in this chapter. Very nice.

I am glad Payal has told her parents about Sumer. They are made for each other. I am also happy that Akash is moving ahead in life. I hope he and Anjie are also happy

OMG... it was so romantic. Everything was so perfect. The dress Khushi wore was so beautiful. I am eagerly waiting to see Khushi's dresses Arnav has chosen for different rituals. I can imagine Arnav in that tux... very handsome and sexy :-). The party location picture was also very nice. And the song Arnav sang for Khushi was just perfect for Khushi. Oho... Payal interrupted the moment :-). It was an awesome chapter.

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PSharada

@PSharada

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 11 years ago

#780

Oye First of all coming to your note. Haila you are winding up this story in five chapters. Nothing doing. Arey five chapters main you will just get them married. I wanted at least 2-3 chapters on their post wedding life and they becoming parents and playing Peek-a-Boo with their kid. Nothing doing. Isse pehle story wind down kiya na toh mujhse bura koyi nahi hoga. Cut short the wedding rituals for all I care, You need to give at least 2-3 chapters on the life of Arnav - Khushi after marriage. Kuch rootna, Kuch manana, kuch fights, kuch passion - this is so needed dammit.

Coming to the update, so finally the marriage is in 10 days and things are moving on forward. And Akash has started to move on in his life. Really liking this fact though I am not sure if I am okay with Akash moving on with Anjali. That would be weird. And Arnav has stood with Sumer and made Payal's parents accept Sumer. Finally Payal can lay all her ghosts down and move on in life with Sumer and looking forward to Sumer - Payal's marriage. And the youngsters went for a party in Goa. Cool.

You know you and I have some strange telepathic connection. When I was reading the update, I was feeling that Chehara Hain Ya Chaand Khila hain song would do apt for this update and when I read this update and the song, I was laughing out so loud. This song is so so apt for the situation that Arnav - Khushi were in and love Kishore Kumar's voice in this song. And Arnav simply is unable to control himself around Khushi. He just wants to devour her - wonder what all will he do on their wedding night. But really happy that Arnav controlled himself and didn't take things forward.

Waiting for the marriage rituals to start and the married life of Arnav - Khushi to start. Remember my dhamki samjhi.

Edited by psarada - 11 years ago