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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter 33:

The whole setting and ambiance of the engagement party is perfect - especially how you described it and the way you gave us matching visuals. It was truly all very beautiful and perfect for our favorite couple😃

Loved that Arnav and Khushi were able to steal a little private moment to themselves before all the guests poured in. In an event of such magnitude, I think Khushi handled herself very well. Times have really changed for Khushi and I think knowing and feeling Arnav's love has helped her - in the beginning, I think she would not have been able to handle so much publicity and so many "high-society" people around her, but she handled herself so well at this point!

What the😡 What nerve of Shyam to first talk to Khushi and Arnav like that and then approaching Payal. Ugh, he's so awful. Hope he is dealt with swiftly in the next update!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter 34:

That was definitely a dramatic chapter, but you did full justice to how Shyam was dealt with.

Loved that first Payal dealt with Shyam so greatly - sometimes it's hard to stand up to someone who victimized her in the past, but it looks like Payal has finally come to terms with all that Shyam did and was ready to deal with him. I was so proud of her. And so glad that Sumer, his parents, Shyam's parents and Arnav all came around at the right time - so glad that they all took care of Shyam and caused him so much harm, both professionally and personally!!!!

I can understand why Khushi and AR were hurt about being left out of all this, but I'm glad they support Payal as true friends should...it shows what a great friendship they all share. Though I do wonder how Khushi will take it when she finds out about Akash's feelings towards her and Payal/Akash/Arnav hiding it from her.

So glad the dramatics are over with, and as Arnav mentioned, there's only time for love and romance left!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter 35:

Arnav and his shaatir dimaag already finding the undercurrents between Akash and Anjali suspicious!! Wonder what he will do when he realizes how much his sister really cares for the other man!

And what a great idea by hiim to host this party in Goa for all their friends. Again, i loved the setting and ambiance you created - it was truly a very magical party. Before all the traditional ceremonies are set to start, it seemed like this was a good way for everyone to just have fun and relax.

Two months after their engagement, it shows how much their relationship has progressed. And of course, the passion that lies between Arnav and Khushi is so explosive and has only gotten more so as their wedding is approaching.

Only 8 days to the wedding!!!! Can't wait for it all to go down😃

Now, on to the next thread!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful wedding!!!... Lovely couples... Just love the friendship and care that they have for each other...great writing!!

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