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Part - 43

Next day...

Geet narrates the whole story to Annie...

Annie: kya? ye plan bhi flop?

Geet: haan, Maan kehthe hai ki kuch aur koshish karo

Annie: isska kya matlab ho saktha?

Geet: tummara bhai hai, tumme hi patha hoga ki isska matlab kya hai

Annie: mujhe bhi kuch samaj mein nahi aatha

Geet: ab samajgayi na? tere bhai ko samajna kitna mushkil hai

Dadi just enters...

Dadi: aaisa kya mushkil kaam hai? zara humme bhi bathayiye

Annie tells dadi about their plans...

Dadi laughs...

Annie: kya Dadi? Aap bhi hasthe ho?

Dadi: aur kya karein? Tum log toh kissi bache se kam nahi hai

Dadi can't control her laughter...

Annie: toh aap hi bathao, Maan bhai ko patane ke liye Geet ko kya karna chahiye?

Dadi: Maan toh already deewane ho gaye hai

Annie: you mean bhai loves Geet

Dadi: 100%

Annie: how could you be so sure?

Dadi: warna Geet se shadhi kyun karthe?

Annie: par Geet kehthi hai ki unke beech aaisa kuch nahi hai

Dadi is also shocked to hear that...

Dadi thought that they loved each other from the beginning...

Dadi: what? ye kaise ho saktha?

Geet: aaisa hi hai

Dadi pareshaan ho jaathe...

Dadi: ye Maan ka koi barosa nahi, shayad Geet teek kehthe hai

Annie: haan dadi, mujhe bhi shak hai

Geet is also very scared...

Dadi: Maan toh kabhi nahi sudhrenge, lagtha hai ki humme hi kuch karna padega

Annie: haan Dadi, ye kaam toh sirf aap kar sakthe

Dadi begins to think...

Dadi comes out with a plan...

Dadi: humme patha hai ki ab Geet ko kya karna hoga

Annie and Geet get excited...

Geet: Dadi, boliye, jaldhi

Annie: ek minute Dadi

Dadi: what?

Annie thoda pareshaan dikhthi hai...

Geet: Annie, kya hua?

Aanie: Dadi, ye plan toh kaam karega haina?

Dadi: koi shak? Ye toh 200% successful hoga, hum bhi Savithri Devi hai, MSK ke dadi

Geet: achcha? Ab kaunsa naya kichdi pakana hoga? Babaji, aap toh mere saath haina?

Geet is not interested...

Annie: Geet, bhai itne bhi tough nahi hai jitne woh samajthe

Geet: tummare bhai toh Robot ki tarah expressionless hai, ab kaise patha chalega ki unke mann mein kya hai?

Dadi: Geet bte, Maan upar se kitne sakht dikhthe hai andar utna hi naram hai, aap bas mere baat ko dhyaan se suniye

Geet: ji Dadi

Dadi: Maan bahut din se apne room ko remodel karna chahathe hai, lekhin unke paas waqt kahan hai? toh ye kaam Geet karenge toh Maan bahut kush ho jayenge aur mahi mahi shuru ho jayega

Annie: Dadima, aap bhi?

Dadi: inkke mahi mahi ko kaun nahi jaantha?

Annie: toh Geet, jaldhi chalo, humme aaj hi sab kuch badalna hoga, Maan bhai ke kamra toh stone age ka lagtha hai

Dadi: Annie bte, ab toh woh Geet ka kamra bangaya hai

Geet: nahi nahi, DD sunthe toh mujhe ghar se bahar nikhaldenge

Annie: ohhhfoo Geet, ab toh tum bhi ek khurana ban gayi ho, ab tumme iss ghar se koi nahi nikhaal saktha, haina Dadi?

Dadi: haan bte, we are the Khuranas, come on, Khuarana's ka kamaal dikhathe hai

Geet: babaji, mein kahan pasgayi hoon?

Annie calls Arjun...Arjun is an Interior designer...

Geet chooses the color and theme according to her wish...

She is still scared if Maan would like this idea at all...

Annie lifts her confidence saying that Maan would love that...

Annie urges Arjun to complete the job before Maan returns...

Maan always comes home late, so there is no problem at all...

Arjun uses his influence and gets the work done quickly...The room is done by mid-night...

Everyone is happy now...

This should definitely do the trick...

Geet is also very happy...she is looking forward to Maan's arrival...

He will be here anytime...

Geet rushes to take a quick shower...

Annie and dadi leave her alone...

Geet comes out of her shower and starts looking for her dress...

She is confused as what to wear tonight...

Suddenly she hears footsteps...Maan is here...

Geet looks at herself...she is still in the towel...

She rushes to lock the door...

Maan just arrives and tries to step in...as he enters...

Geet closes the door on his face...almost hitting him...

Maan gets angry...he knocks...

Geet doesn't reply...she keeps silent...

She is afraid that Maan would scold her...

But she can't let him in now...she has to change immediately...

Maan: Geet, open the door, ye kaisa game hai?

Geet: ek minute, aap abhi andar nahi aa sakthe

Maan: what?

Geet: aap thoda wait karo

Maan is frustrated...

Maan: kya? Geet, ye mera kamra hai aur mujhe kissi ki permission ki zaroorat nahi hai, darwaza kholo abhi

Geet quickly changes her dress and opens the door...

Geet ko dekhthe hi Maan ka gussa gayab ho jaatha...

Maan looks at her wet avatar and imagines how lucky he would have been had he entered in time...

Maan curses his fate...MSK, tumne kitne achche mokke ko gawadhi?

Ek minute pehle kyun nahi aaya?

Ab Maan ko patha chal gaya ki shadhi ke badh log time pe kyun ghar jaathe?

Ab Maan bhi waqt pe ghar lautega...kal se, haina?

Maan keeps looking at Geet...

Geet just keeps looking around...she keeps admiring her work...

Ye kitna achcha sajaya meinne?

She gets ready to hear Maan praising her...

But Maan is totally lost in her beauty...
Geet tries to get his attention on the new screens...

She gets closer and tries to adjust them...

Maan is only interested in her moves...he blindly follows her...

Geet just turns back to see Maan's reaction...

Water drops from her wet hair fall on Maan's face...

Maan is mersmerised...he stands frozen still gazing Geet...

As Maan reaches her hair Geet moves towards the new dressing table...

Poor girl, she didn't know what Maan wanted...

She thinks that she would impress him by showing off her new talents...

Geet looks into the mirror and tries to adjust her hair...

But Maan is just behind her already doing that...

Maan keeps staring at her image in the mirror...

Geet too looks thru the mirror and their eyes meet...maneet eyelock...mahiii...

Geet is annoyed by Maan's silence...

But for Maan words seemed to be unnecessary at this point...

Geet is expecting something else while Maan's expectations are different...

Geet gets angry...babaji, ye andhe ho gaye hai kya?

Meinne subhe se kitne mehnat karke ye sab kiya hai aur ye toh kuch bolthe hi nahi...

Inko dekho, hamesha ki tarah bas apne badhe badhe aankhon se gurke rehthe...dumb Khurana, haina?

Ab mein kya karoon? Kaise inko samjaoon ki ye sab meinne hi kiya hai, sirf unke liye...

Inko kab samaj mein aayega ki mein kya chahthi?

Ek pathni apne pathi se kya chahegi? Unka pyaar, haina?

Iss dufar ko toh ye bhi patha nahi hai? haina babaji?

Geet then moves to the bed...

Ab inse koi umeed nahi hai...chado, mein toh sothi hoon...

Geet goes and sits on the bed...

Maan is right after her...he just follows her everywhere...

Maan comes and sits beside her...

He couldn't control himself now...

Bas, ab bahut ho gaya...ab Maan aur intrezaar nahi kar saktha...

Chahe Geet kuch bhi soche, Maan toh apne pyaar ko pakhe hi rahega...

Edited by ghsp2fan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
very very nice
geet is not understanding that man is interested in her not decore of room

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Posted: 10 years ago
dadi ne plan bataya maan ko patane ka😆😆aur idhar geet poori tayyari karke maan ki comments keliye wait karrahi hai. par maan tho decor ke bajaye geet ko hi nighaar raha hai😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice part...maan ko to ab geet ki siwa kuch dikhta hi nahi hai...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Part - 44

Maan gets closer and closer...

Geet is still waiting for his remarks...

She is in no mood to see the love in his eyes...

Geet burst out...she couldn't tolerate his silence anymore...

She needs to hear him...hear what's in his mind...

Geet: aapko kya ho gaya? Aapki tabyat toh teek haina?

Maan sighs...ye ladhki mujhe pagal kardegi...

Maan: Geet, tummari problem kya hai?

Geet: aap

Maan: kya?

Geet: haan, aap hi mere problem ho

Maan: Geeet

Geet: dekha, kaise chilathe ho

Maan tries to calm down...he doesn't want to miss this moment...

Maan turns her face towards him...looks into her worried eyes...

Maan: bathao Geet, kya baat hai?

Geet: aap kuch bhi dekh nahi sakthe ho kya?

Maan: sab kuch dekh ke hi mera ye haal ho gaya

Geet: phir, aapne kuch nahi kaha

Maan: ab mein kya kahoon? Tum mujhe bolne ka moka dogi toh mein kuch bol saktha, haina?

Geet: achcha, ab bathayiye, aapko ye sab kaise laga?

Maan takes a look around the room and smiles...

Geet: isska kya matlab hai? aapko pasand aaya haina?

Geet looks at his face...

Maan: haan, not bad

Geet: not bad? Kal good toh aaj not bad, Geet, kitna bada improvement hai? ek sabt se aaj do sabt ho gaya, wah wah, aaise hi chalega toh agle saal tak tumme aaisa hi intrezaar karna hoga, haina bababji?

Geet bahut tension hojaathi...

Maan enjoys her nakras and keeps smiling...

Maan: relax Geet, itna pareshaan hone ki kya baat hai?

Geet: chado, aap kabhi mere pareshaani ko samaj nahi paooge

Maan: tumme ye sab karne ki kya zaroorat thi?

Geet: kya? kal kehthe the ki kuch aur try karo, aur ab, kyun karthi ho ye sab?

Maan: pehle mujhe bathao Geet ki tum kya chahthi ho?

Geet: woh...mein...

Maan keeps looking into her eyes...he has already read her mind...

Geet looks into his eyes...Maan ko toh pehle hi patha hai...mein hi buddu hoon...

Maan: toh Geet, tum mere Dil mein jagah banana chahathe ho, haina?

Geet nods her head...

Maan: sorry Geet

Maan stops and looks at her with a sad face...

Geet bahut hi pareshaan hothi...

She keeps looking at him...ye kaisa naya musibat hai?

Maan: ab toh mere Dil kali nahi hai, pehle hi kissi ne mere Dil ko puri tarah se kabsa karliya hai

Geet: kya? aapke zindagi mein pehle hi koi ladhki hai?

Maan: haan'

Geet: aapne mujhe bathaya bhi nahi?

Maan: tumme kyun bathana hai Geet?

Geet: mujhe nahi bathaooge?

Maan: nahi?

Geet bahut udaas hojaathi...

Geet starts thinking...

Maan: kya soch rahi ho?

Geet: kuch nahi

She is lying...her eyes say it all...she is thinking about that girl...

Maan: mujhe oatha hai Geet ki tum kya soch rahi ho?

Geet: kya?

Maan: yahi haina ki MSK ko pyaar kaise ho saktha?

Geet blinks...

Maan: haan, mujhe bhi pyaar ho gaya hai, I'm in love, mein bahut din se ek ladkhi se pyaar kar raha hoon

Geet thinks that she has realized her love very late, Maan is in love for a long time, Geet tu toh bahut unlucky hai...

Maan: chahe meinne jitna bhi koshish ki par mein uss ke pyaar se bach nahi saktha, MSK usske samne har gaya hai Geet

Geet: aaise kaun hogi?

Maan: aur mein abhi bhi ussi se pyaar kartha hoon

Geet kamoosh ho jaathi...she is shocked...

Maan can't see her like that...

Maan: Geet

Geet gets eager to know more about that girl...

Maan: mein toh tumme aur kuch batha nahi saktha, par chaho toh tum hi patha karlo ki woh ladhki kaun hai

Maan has given her all the hints and this dumbo is still not getting the point...

Maan: Geet, jaldhi patha lagao, mein abhi aatha hoon

Geet: mujhe kaise patha hoga ki aapke woh kaun hai?

Maan: tum bhi usse bahut achche se jaanthi ho

Geet: mein?

Maan: haan tum

Maan thought Geet found out that it's Geet...

Man eagerly gets closer...

Geet: mein kissi ko nahi jaanthi

Maan ko bahut gussa aatha...

Maan: tum na? kabhi bhi nahi sudaregi Geet

Geet: ye mera dialogue hai

Maan stares her and leaves...

Maan goes to take a shower...

Geet starts to think...babaji ab mein kya karoon? kisse poochoon...haan...Annie, Annie se poochthi hoon, ussko zaroor patha hoga

Maan comes out and finds Geet talking on the phone with someone...

Geet: Annie, tumne pehle kyun nahi bathaya?

Annie: ohh God Geet, ab kya ho gaya?

Geet: woh...Maaan haina

Annie: bhai ko kya hua?

Geet: woh kissi aur se pyaar karthe hai

Annie: what?

Geet: haan, meinne abhi abhi suna

Annie: Maan bhai aur pyaar, noways Geet, tumme koi galatfami hui hai

Geet: toh tumme bhi kuch patha nahi hai

Maan comes and grabs the phone from Geet...

Maan: halo, who's this?

Itne raat ko Geet kisse baat kar rahi hai?

Annie: bhai, aap?

Maan: ab samaj mein aaya, ye sab tera kaam hai, hum apna case kudh solve karenge, tummari madat ki koi zaroorat nahi, samji tum

Maan disconnects the call...

Geet gets a little scared...what will he do with her now...

Maan: ye tum kya kar rahi thi?

Geet: kyun? Annie se bhi baat nahi kar sakthi? Babaji, isse behther mein jail hi chali jaathi

Maan closes her mouth with his hand...

Maan: chup...bilkul chup...

Maan looks into her innocent eyes...

Maan: Geeet

Geet: hmmm

Maan: tumme patha nahi ki woh ladhki kaun hai?

Geet: hmmm hmmm

Maan: joot

Geet: woh...kaun hai?

Maan: woh ladhki tum ho Geet, ye baat ko tumme bathane ke liye mein kab se tadap raha tha, meinne bhi kitne koshish ki, tumse dhoor rehne ki, par tum bar bar mere paas aakhe kadhe hojathi ho, aur ab ye dhooriyan kam hothe hi jaathe hai, phir mein samaj gaya ki tumse dhoor rehna mere liye mushkil hi nahi, balkhi namunkeen hai, ab hummare beech ke ye nasdhikiyan mujhe bechain kar rahe hai, tum paas ho toh kuch kuch hone lagtha hai Geet

Maan looks into her eyes for her approval...

Geet nazren churathi...

Maan: mujhse nazar kyun churathi ho Geet? ab toh tum meri ho gayi ho, Maan ki Geet, tum sirf meri ho Geet

Maan looks at her lips...he inches forward...

Geet's heart beat rises...she could feel the warmth of his breath...

Saanz mein saanz milli toh mujhe saans aayi...

Mujhe saanz aayi...mujhe saanz aayi...

Maan kisses her...Maneet liplock...

Geet is over the moon...she melts in his arms...

Maneet passionate hug...

Geet feels shy...Maan is aroused seeing her turning red...blushing and panting heavily...

Just then Maan's phone rings...

Maan thought it's Geet's mobile...

Geet uses this opportunity to escape...

She steps back...

Maan: ye bar bar tum kya baat karthi rehthi ho? kabhi toh tummare bak bak ki chuti de do

Geet looks at the mobile kept on the table...

Maan: ab kya soch rahi ho? usse band karo, abhi

Geet : woh...aapka mobile baj raha hai

Maan is embarassed...he picks up his mobile...

It's Adi...should be something important...else Adi won't call at this time...

Maan: aaadi, ye Adi bhi na, hamesha galat waqt pe disturb kartha hai, excuse me

Maan attends the call and moves out to the balcony...

Geet giggles...Maan catches Geet's hand with the other hand...

Geet turns back and blushes...she pleads him to leave...

But Maan is no mood to let her go...

Maan: tumme toh mein wapas aakhe dekhtha hoon, tayaar rehna

Geet: kya?

Maan smiles and leaves...

Adi: sir?

Maan: tumme nahi Adi, yahan

Geet is nervous...she doesn't know what to do...

She calls Annie again...

Annie: Geet, bathao jaldhi, kya hua?

Geet: woh, Annie, mein kaise bathaoon?

Annie: Geet, pehle mere baat suno

Geet is lost in her thoughts...she thinks about the kiss and giggles...

Annie: Geet, tujhe kya ho gaya? Tum teek toh haina? Geeet

Geet hosh mein aathi...

Geet; haan Annie, bolo

Annie: Geet, TV on karo, aur channel XXX dekho

Geet searches the remote and switches on the TV...

Geet: babaji, mein nahi

Geet closes her eyes...

Maan enters and finds her with the mobile...

Maan: phir se phone? Babaji, ab isska kuch karna padega, warna puri raat baat karthe rahegi

Maan switches his mobile off and then snatches Geet's mobile...

Maan: gud night Annie...he swithches it off...

Geet is still closing her eyes...

Maan takes the remote and switches the TV off...

Geet: hare, ye kya karthe ho? mein dekh rahi hoona

Maan: aankhen band karke?

Geet: mein sun rahi thi

Maan: tumme kya jaanna hai? mujhse poocho Geet

Geet: kya?

Maan: woh toh recorded hai, mein tumme live action dikhatha hoon

Geet: aap?

Geet looks at him ...

Maan: haaan

Maan is removing his shirt...

Geet closes her eyes again...

Maan: Geet, aaise picture bar bar dekhne ko nahi ilega, aakhen kholo

Geet opens her eyes slowly...

Maan pushes her on the bed and jumps into action...mahiii...

Edited by ghsp2fan - 10 years ago
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awesome update dear, maan become naughty,
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update. Very funny that Geet still didn't get it that Maan loves her so much. Finally Maan tells her that he loves her.
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lovely part ...naughty maan and buddhu geet use to ishason ki bat samagh hi nahi atti...live telicast...
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superb update
dambo geet not geting any hint maan giving her
naughty maan

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nice update
finally indono ki confession hogayi hai. dekho maan kitna naughty hogaya hai. poor geet ko ek pal keliye darahi diya ki uske zindagi koi aur hai

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