ZaYa FF: Our Destiny (Unfinished abruptly) - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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sounds very interesting
plzz continue soon..😊
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Chapter 1



Place: Zain room
Zain is packing his bag...He gets a call.

Phone conversation:
Zain : Hello...
The person on the phone : Sir, taxi has been waiting for you for an hour...Are you OK sir? Should we come over there?
Zain : No, I am on my way. I will reach there in time.
The person : Thank you Sir...We just confirmed.

Zain takes his bag and walks outside the house...He gets in the car.


Place : A small school in Pune.

A woman : Mam, I think the officials are visiting today.
Aliya working with a file, spinning her pen...
Aliya : Umm...I need the members of inspection list on my table by an hour.
The woman : Yes, Maam...


Zain in car travelling to Pune.
Zain gets a call again.
Zain : Hello Mr. Khan...I was about to call you...
Mr. Khan : Well...Zain I called you up to inform you about the meeting.
Zain : Yes, Mr. Khan...
Mr. Khan : When you enter Pune...Come to the hotel we booked. We will have our lunch and then we may move on to the meeting.
Zain : Well Mr; Knan...
Mr .Khan : Zain no more argument just come there. We will talk about the rest there. By the way when will you reach Pune?
Zain : I have no idea...may be in an hour or two...
Mr. Khan : Good...See you soon...


Place : Pune

Aliya : We cant leave this place Jasmine...
Jasmine : I know mam, but the offer is nice.
Aliya : What if they fail to do what they say?
Jasmine : Yes, mam I can understand you...But Mr. Farheen is selling this place to another man who is ready to sponsor food for our use.
Aliya : Cant they find any other place? Its the life of many children...Many depend upon this hotel...Only this hotel provides us food without demanding much money from us.
Jasmine : Maam, Mr. Farheen also accepted to do the same.
Aliya : Assurance???
Jasmine couldnt utter a word.


Zain reached the hotel.
Zain shaking hands with Mr. Khan.
Mr. Khan : Welcome to Pune Mr; Abdullah...
Zain : Thank you. Nice meeting you.
Mr. Khan : Nice to meet you Mr. Abdullah...Have a seat.
Both sat down and ordered something for lunch.


Aliya : Jasmine...Jasmine...
Jasmine : Maam...
Aliya : Have they reached?
Jasmine : Not yet maam.
Aliya : If they are not prompt in attending the meeting then how will they fulfill their promise.? Ok then I am leaving...I have some other work...Handle the meeting.
Jasmine : But maam, me...???
Aliya : Yes you...
Jasmine : But maam...I cant...
Aliya : Ok then ask the other man...What is his name?...
Jasmine : The man who Mr. Farheen is selling...?
Aliya : ...Leave it whoever...take him to the land...And Pray that he shouldnt like it.
Jasmine : (With a smile) Yes maam...
While Aliya turned again to see Jasmine smile her bag got stuck in her name plate...And she turned again and it fell down...
Aliya : Uff...I broke it...
Jasmine : No problem maam I will fix it.
Aliya : Ok...Bye...Handle it.


In the hotel room..
Zain : Arent we getting late?
Mr. Khan : A bit...but we'll reach soon.
Zain : Ok but I think we should make a move.
Mr. Khan : Ok then...
Both getting ready to leave.

Precap :
Jasmine : Mr. Farheen arrived.
Staff 1 : What? But without Madam ...how are we gonna handle both?
Jasmine : Lets see...





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Edited by ZaYa_Stories - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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^^ Chapter one updated
.Buddy this account for PMs.
Edited by ZaYa_Stories - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Me 1st😃

Is Mr .Asad Ahmed Khan😆 Mr. khan in yr story ?😆

So now Zain wont knw its Aliya's place

I wanna see thm soon meeting each other
Edited by Niya_789 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
Interesting chapter
Both Zaya in Pune...???
Waiting for d next chapter continue ASAP
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Posted: 11 years ago
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zaya in Pune
wow interesting
continue asap
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Interesting...
Continue soon...
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
Awesome start 😳
both Zain and Aaliya are in Pune
waiting for the next part
thanks for the PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
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really intresting part 👍🏼 pls cont soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb start..!!!👏

Ty So Much For d Pm..

Eagerly Waiting For Next Part..

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