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Part - 41

Geet gathers her strength and opens the door...she is ready for the game...

The room is decorated for her SR...

Ab Geet ko sab kuch samaj mein aagaya...ye Annie aaise kyun hasrahi thi...

Toh aaise baat hai...par ye kaise ho saktha?

Maan has not yet spoken about their wedding...or about his feelings for her...

What's he thinking about this accidental marriage?

Maybe he married her just to make her strong and belive in herself...to make her realize that she needs to fight...and he is with her in this fight...

Maybe that was an emotional outburst...kahin Maan ne jasbathon mein aake Geet ke saath shadhi toh nahi karkiya hai?

Maybe he felt sorry for her plight and somehow felt that he is also responsible for her condition and so he did that out of his guilt to save her...

Or he pitied her misfortunes and wanted to help her as she needed his help desperately...

Geet keeps thinking about Maan and his acts keep confusing her...

He is so loving and caring at times but angry and rude at other times...

What would poor Geet conclude from his strange attitude towards her...

One thing is sure, he has been so kind and concerned after that incident, maybe that changed his mind and made him go soft wth her for she was trapped in that case without her knowledge...

What about the past? Did he like her?

He always kept away from her and avoided her mostly...

Whenever they met he was so rude and kept finding faults with her...

He also got angry with her and engaged in a war of words...

Geet too hated him that time and did the same with him...

She now realized that how stupid she was...Maan always wanted to protect them from that devil but Geet misunderstood him then...she always suspected him and his love for Sam...

Did he really love Sam? No, that's sure...Geet knows that then too he never had any such feelings for sam as everyone including Sam believed...Geet only had the doubt that he had feelings for Geet just like Geet had for him...she remembers their meetings at that rainy night, or at the picnic spot or for that matter that passionate dance at sam's party...or the dance at the restaurant that evening...

All this make her believe that Maan married her as he loves Geet...

She feels blessed and is very happy...but then he has never showed his love for her...

And he had never spoken anything about their personnel relationship yet...

Geet begins to worry again...babaji, ye kaise musibat hai?

Ab mein kay karoon? Mein andar jaathi toh Maan mujhe yahan dekhke naraaz hojaathe toh?

Aur apne bade bade aankhen dikahkke poochthe ki mein unka kamre mein kya kar rahi hoon toh?

Aur ye sare arrangements ko dekhe kya sochenge?

Ye sab meinne karwayi? Nahi babaji, mein andar nahi jaaosakthi...haina?

Par mein neeche bhi nahi jaa sakthi...dadi toh abhi tak Maan ka intrezaar kar rahe hai...

Geet darwaze ke bahar kadhe kadhe sochthi hai ki andar jaathi ya nahi...

Inky pinky ponky try karthi...aur apne sare tricks try karthi...koi faida nahi...

Maan comes and looks at Geet waiting outside his room with so much tension...

Maan admires her self talks and her talk with babaji...

Maan is happy to see Geet here...that's good...ab Maan ka ek problem solved...

Warna Geet ko kaise samjaye ki ab toh Geet Maan ki zindagi ki ek atoot hissa ho gayi hai...

Ab toh ye dhooriyan Maan ko bhi pareshaan karthe hai...

Then Maan is puzzled why is she still reluctant to get into her room...

What's so scary? Maan bhi abhi abhi aaya hai...

Geet ko aur kya pareshaani ho sakhti hai?

Maan: Geet

Geet steps back and turns in a hurry...she is shocked hearing Maan's voice so near...

She almost falls over him and he holds her from falling...

She is so nervous and she tries to move away imediately , Maan tightens his hold and doesn't let her move...she is startled...she looks into his eyes...they are not emitting fire...luckily he is not angry or upset...Geet sighs...she is a little relieved...but what would he do when he sees the SR arrangements...geet blinks and Maan releases her...

Maan: Geet, tum yahan kya kar rahi ho?

Geet: dekha babaji, meinne sahi sochao

Maan: tum ne kab sahi socha Geet, ab toh tumme sochne ki kya zaroorat padhi?

Geet gets angry...

Geet: aap hamesha mere barein mein galat hi sochthe ho

Maan: kya? tum hi toh hamesha galat sochthi

Maan stares...Geet tries to run away...

Maan catches hold of her hand and stops her...

Maan: kya hua? Ab kyun bhaagthi ho? tum toh sabko darathe rehthi ho, ab kudh dar gayi?

Geet: ye koi dar nahi hai

Maan: phir andar kyun nahi aathi?

Geet: woh...mein kuch nahi jaanthi

Geet looks inside...Maan too looks there and he now understands why all the fuss...

Maan is also shocked...he too didn't expect this...

Maan: Geet

Geet: mein chalthi hoon

Maan: kahan?

Geet: apne kamre mein

Maan : yahan tak aagayi toh andar aao

Geet: woh...

Maan: andar aao, darne ki koi zaroorat nahi, mein tumme kuch nahi karoonga

Geet: kya?

Maan smiles...Geet is still worried...ye kaise baat hai?

Maan: mera matlab hai ki ye shayad Dadi ka kaam hoga

Maan tires to remove the flowers...

Geet: nahi, rehne dijiye

Maan is surprised...he looks into her eyes ...

Geet nazren churathi...

Geet: mera matlab hai ki mujhe koi problem nahi hai

Maan: kya?

Geet: woh...kuch nai, aap chaho toh issko nikhal sakthe

Geet hurriedly tries to remove them...

Maan stops her...Geet is electrified by his touch...she turns and looks into his eyes...Maneet eyelock...mahiii...

Maan lifts her and takes her inside the flowers...

He puts her on the bed...Geet keeps staring at him...

Maan: leit jao Geet

Geet obeys him immediately...her heart beats ever so fast that she feels like she will faint...

Maan takes the duet and covers her...

Geet closes her eyes for she can't look into Maan's eyes...she is so embarrassed...

Is she doing the right thing?

Maan: gud night Geet, tum bahut tak gayi ho

Geet is really tired...she needs rest badly...and she is at peace after so many days...

Without any fear of the trials and all the mental agony related to it...

She slowly opens her eyes and looks at him with gratitude...

Maan: so jao, mujhe bhi bahut needh aathi hai

Geet quickly covers her face and pretends to sleep...

Maan smiles and goes and lies on the other side ...

After a long time they sleep tight...

Next morning Geet wakes up and finds Maan missing...he had left early...

His job is so demanding...

Chalo ab koi problem nahi hai...

Geet finds her things there...

Geet: Dadi toh bahut smart hai

She goes to take bath...

She gets ready and comes down...

Dadi is waiting for her at the breakfast table...

Dadi: Gud morning Geet, lagtha hai kal raat aap teek se nahi so paye

Dadi smiles...

Geet: kyun Dadi? Mein bahut late ho gayi hoon kya?

Geet tension hojaathi...

Annie winks looking at Geet...

Geet is confused...

Geet thinks... ye Annie ko kya ho gaya?

Dadi: hummara matlab, nayi jagah hai, naye log hai, haina?

Toh Dadi Maan ke baat kar rahe hai...Geet aaisa sochthi...

Geet: aaisa kuch nahi hai

Annie: Dadi, lagtha hai Geet abhi bhi neendh se nahi uthri

Geet: nahi nahi, kitne din ke badh aaisa neendh aaya tha

She is so refreshed...

Dadi: chaliye ab nastha kariye

Annie quickly finishes her breakfast...

Geet is just enjoying her food after a long time...

Annie: jaldhi karo Geet

Dadi: Annie bte. Aaisa bhi kya jaldhi hai, let her finish her breakfast

Annie: Dadi, mujhe Geet se kuch zaroori baat karni hai

Dadi: chalo humme bhi jaanna hai ki kya baat hai?

Annie: nahi Dadi, ye thoda personnel hai, so pls, excuse us, chalo Geet

Annie takes Geet to her room...

Geet: kya baat hai Annie?

Annie: toh Geet, kal Maan bhai ka wicket gaya haina?

Geet: kya? tum kya bol rahi ho?

Annie: hare, kal raat ki match mein kya hua?

Geet: kaisa match?

Annie: hare buddu, humne kitne mehnat karke maidan tayaar kiya tha, aur tum poochthi ho ki kaisa match?

Geet: toh ye aapka kaam hai

Geet just then understands...

Annie: toh kaisa raha mera surprise?

Geet: koi faida nahi, tummare bhai pe koi asar nahi padi

Annie: kya?

Geet: haan, tummare sare mehnat mitti mein miladhi tummare bhai ne

Annie: achcha? Par meinne toh kuch aur hi socha tha

Geet: tummare sochne se kya faida?

Geet is also disappointed...

Annie: point Geet, toh chalo agla mission shuru karthe hai

Geet: kya?

Annie: hare, aao mere saath

Annie takes her to the next battle ground...kitchen...

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Edited by ghsp2fan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely part...geet is still confused about maan behavior as it is love or compromise ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
buddhu maan n buddhu geet...kuch nehi ho sakta hai dono ka...

nice update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

continue nxt prt soon plz...

eagerly waiting...
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Posted: 10 years ago
part 41
awesome dear...
lovely...
nice one...
Maan has made it easy for Geet...
Annie is too much...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Part - 42

Geet: Annie, tujhe bhook lagthi hai kya?

Annie: haan

Geet: chalo, mein tummare liye kuch banakke dethi hoon, Gol Gappe? Vada pav? Tum kya kaoge?

Annie: haan haan, banao Geet, kyunki hum ghar ke bahar ek chaat stall kholne wale haina?

Geet: achcha?

Annie: Maan bhai toh bahut kush ho jayenge, haina?

Geet: kya? Maan ko bhi chaat pasand hai?

Annie: Geet, tum toh mujhe confuse kar rahi ho, tum bhai ko kitne din se jaanthi ho?

Geet: hogi kuch 9, 10 mahine

Annie: wow, aur tum bhai ke barein mein toh kuch bhi nahi jaanthi

Geet: mujhe kaise patha hoga?

Annie: very good, so we have to start from scratch

Geet: tum seedhe seedhe bataho ki ab hum kya karein?

Annie: hum nahi tum

Geet: teek hai, ab mein kya karoon?

Annie: chalo, bhai se hi poochthe

Annie takes out her mobile...

Geet: nahi nahi, uss DD ko disturb mat karo

Annie: kya? ye DD kya hotha hai? Dil ki Dhadkan, ohhh...so sweet, bhai tummare dil ke dhadkan ban gaye hai?

Geet: aaisa kuch nahi hai, isska matlab hai, Dhust Danav

Annie: kya? tum bhai ko dhust bhulathe ho?

Geet: mujhe toh pehle aaisa hi lagtha tha

Annie: aur ab

Annie waits for Geet's reply eagerly...

Geet: abhi bhi kuch nahi badla, woh abhi bhi DD hi hai, dekho kaise mujhe tadpathe hai

Annie: you are right Geet, bhai bahut hi bhure hai, itni pyaari si biwi ko akhele chodke kaam pe gaye

Geet: kaam bhi toh zaroori haina?

Annie: Geeet?

Geet: chado, unko chodo, tumme kya pasand hai?

Annie: hare, aaise kaise chodthe? Chalo, shuru karo

Geet: par mujhe kya patha ki tummare akdu bhai ko kya pasand hai? mein koi risk nahi le sakthi, pehle hi unko samajna bahut mushkil hai

Annie: Geet, mein hoona tere saath, sab kuch teek ho jayega, pehle kuch meeta try karo

Geet: kya? Maan meetha bhi kathe hai? mujhe laga unko apni black coffee se alava kuch pasand nahi aayega, woh aur unke kadhvi coffee, kitni achchi Jodi haina?

Geet starts her bak bak...

Annie: sach mein Geet, Maan bhai itne din tujhe kaise sambalthe the? OMG, you are so crazy

Geet: tu toh apne bhai ko hi support karogi, haina babaji?

Annie takes a carrot and stuffs it in Geet's mouth...

Annie: chup Geet, thode dher chup nahi reh sakthi? Nakul

Nakul: ji m'am, aapko kuch chahiye?

Annie: Geet, Maan bhai ko chaocolate mousse bahut pasand hai, Nakul Geet m'am ko recipe bathao aur unki madat karo

Geet: woh Annie

Annie: Geet, ab koi sawaal nahi, shuru karo

Geet makes chocolate mousse for Maan...

Dinner time...

Geet waits in the kitchen...she feels shy...

She pretends to get the dishes ready...

Dadi: Geet bte, aap bhi aayiye, Nakul haina?

Geet comes and finds the chair near Maan free...

She avoids that and goes near Annie...

Annie: Geet, tum bhai ke saath beitjao

Dadi: haan Geet

Geet looks at Maan...Maan doesn't even look up...

Geet: babaji, aap toh dekh sakthe haina? Yahan koi andhe ho gaye hai

Geet pulls the chair in anger...

Maan smiles and continues with his eating...

Geet too starts eating her roti...

She doesn't care about Maan at all...

Annie is annoyed...

She tries to signal but Geet doesn't notice her...

Maan: Annie, what's wrong?

Annie: kuch nahi bhai, Geet, just pass the pasta

Geet tries to take the pasta bowl...Maan too reaches it...

Both try to pull it...

Geet: mein karthi hoon

Maan leaves it...

Geet pulled so hard that it spill over her dress...

Maan: tumse koi bhi kaam teek se nahi hotha

Dadi: koi baat nahi bete, aap wash karkke aayiye

Geet goes to wash...

Maan is about to finish his dinner...

And where's the dessert? And there is no sign of Geet...

Annie: Geeet

Maan: Annie, she will come

Annie: bhai, ek minute

Maan: Annie, Geet ke saath rehkke tum bhi usski tarah ho gayi ho

Maan has finished and he gets up...

Annie: rukh jao bhai, aapne dessert nahi kaya? Nakul

Maan: I'm full

Maan leaves...

Geet comes with the dessert...

Annie: bhai, bhai

Geet: ye lo Annie

Annie: you are too late Geet

Geet: kya?

Annie: bhai toh chale gaye

Geet: toh kya hua? Chalo hum khathe hai, haina Dadi

Annie ko patha nahi chala ki ab kya karein iss ladhki ko? She is so innocent...

Dadi smiles: haan Geet bte, humme dijiye

Annie: dadi, aap sweet nahi ka sakthe

Dadi: hare, Geet me itne pyaar se banaya hai

Annie: kiss ke liye banaya tha woh toh chale gaye

Dadi: wah Geet, ye toh bahut hi meetha hai

Geet: aapko pasand hai?

Dadi: haan, humme bahut pasand hai

Geet: Annie, tum bhi try karo

Annie: Geeet, tum bi na?

Geet tastes it...: ye lo Annie, ye toh bahut ahchca hai

Annie: Geeet

Annie shouts...

Geet toh dar hi gayi...

Geet: Annie, kya hua?

Annie: Geet, utto abhi

Geet: Annie?

Annie: pehle isse lekhe jao, jaldhi, warna humara plan ka kya hoga?

Geet takes it to the room...

She opens the door and hurries in...she almost hits Maan...

Maan holds her...

Maan looks at the mousse...

Maan: ye kya hai?

Geet: ye...aap ke liye hai

Maan: mere liya?

Geet: aapko pasand haina?

Maan smiles and takes it from her hand...

Geet nearly faints by the touch...

Maan tastes the mousse...

Geet keeps looking at him and eagerly awaits his comments...

Maan relishes it slowly as he keeps staring Geet...

Maan finishes and gives the bowl back...

Geet is little disappointed...Maan doesn't say a word...

Geet asks herself...

Geet: baabji, kya ye itni bhuri thi?

Maan: Geet

Geet looks at him...

Maan: tumne kuch kaha?

Geet: woh...ye kaisa tha?

Maan: good

Geet: bas itna hi? Good!

Maan: toh kya mein lecture dedhoon?

Geet: nahi, woh...meinne socha

Maan: toh tum sochthi bhi ho?

Maan smiles...

Geet: chado, aapse baat karke koi faida nahi, mein chalthi hoon

Geet tries to leave...

Maan catches hold of her hand and stops her...

Geet turns and looks into his eyes...Maneet eyelock...mahiii...

Maan: toh tum MSK ki Dil ka rastha dhoondh rahi ho? haina?

Geet: kya?

Maan: I mean, khane ke alava bhi kitna kuch hai...socho Geet

Maan gives a dirty look...

Geet starts thinking...aur kya ho skatha? Kal Annie se hi poochthi hoon...

Part43

Edited by ghsp2fan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sweet update😉
Ye geet bhi...kab sudregi
Maan ko hi kuch karna padega😎
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Posted: 10 years ago
kuch nehi ho sakta hai geet ki...buddhu k buddhu hi rahegi...

awesome update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 10 years ago
So cute. Geet is indeed very innocent. Does she not realize how much maan loves her. Mousse wow. Maan why can he not praise her more.
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update
poor annie try to put some brain in geet but geet is geet
maan like the sweat made by geet

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Posted: 10 years ago
part 42
awesome dear...
hahaha that was too good...
Annie is trying to prepare Geet...
but Geet is too too naive...
Maan has to do something...
Geet didnt even go behind him for the dessert but Annie forced her...
hahaha...
Maan is so naughty but Geet didnt understand a word of it...
cont soon dear...

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