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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ArshiR


ehehe! I finally wrote it! This is the first time that so much of dialogues have been in use. šŸ˜†
Anyway, share your views! :D

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: samanta175

dats seems interesting...!!!!šŸ‘plz continue...btw..did u kill dhruv..????omg...dhruv dead..??????anyway...cnt wait 2 read it..plz continue soon..nd dnt forget 2 pm me..😊


Oh Yes! Updating in noo time! :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Like The Prologue for PMs and Leave your reviews, be it negative or positive.

|CHAPTER ONE|


"So tell us how difficult has the journey been for you, especially after the dark past. How long did it take you to catch up with the pace of the scientific world. We all know you never attended a regular school and were just enrolled for the sake of boards, where you scored a perfect ninety eight percent. Whom would you acknowledge for your success?"

"It's been five years now that I have recovered from my illness. When doctors in Mangalore had given up hopes, my sister brought me to Mumbai and since then she has been my ultimate support, my father, my mother, my friend, she has been the biggest reason that today I am sitting here, like any normal twenty year old boy. My father as she always has talked about in her interviews, is our greatest inspiration and we have inherited our intelligence and interest in the subject from him. Other than my family, Friction has been with me, always. Be it one at night or four in the morning, they have always been there for me and my sister. They taught us to dream.We never felt the void of not having our family with us. They helped us find Mangalore in Mumbai.I only have one unfulfilled desire which is to get our mother here so that she can stay with us , but she prefers to stay in our ancestral house, teaching dance young girls. Finally if I am to name that one person who helped me catch up with the world's fast pace, it would be Dhruv. He had been suffering from the same disease as I was , although we were affected in different manners. It wasn't a disease though, but I don't know any other word for it. I was mute for nine long years till my sister made enough money to initiate my treatment and later Friction helped her tremendously. Its only after the treatment that I could be comfortable with Dhruv as he and me have a common past, which wasn't known to us previously. I think Harshad has helped me too, he has been a caring brother. Manik has been one boy whom I have seen transform over the years to an impeccable human being. He inspires me the most and inspires me much. He has proved the quote, 'Where there is a will there is a way'. So I think that is what makes me the person I am."

"Do you think your sister deserves more that was she has achieved?"

"Let me be honest enough. I am extremely proud of my sister. I mean I have seen her grow, seen her struggle, seen her live, seen her give up and the very next moment seen her encourage herself to anticipate for a better tomorrow. From college for studying to hospital for my life, she has done everything herself. Fab 5 back then, was the reason for half of her problems, but she still fought them all and now we see the results, don't we? "

"We absolutely do. In fact the way Nandini has excelled in the fields of both Science-Technology and Music is commendable. We all see how well she is managing to get both the bands, NH3 and Friction into the limelight. Although Friction has achieved much more fame, NH3 cant be overlooked too. When she is interviewed, she tends to speak more about you and her two bands but not herself. We would like to know more about her from you.How good was she in music in her early childhood?"

"Well I heard my father say that she had a sweet voice and why she should learn Carnatica music but my mother wanted her to concentrate on Bharatnatyam. She would avoid both and instead visit library to search for books and say she would make father proud one day. She and music were miles apart. She called her a girl of technology not tune."

"Would you share something more about her?"

"What exactly would you want to know?"

"Well the reaction of Manik after yesterday's question has flared up rapidly. So we want to know what exactly make Fab 5 change its name to Friction and how Nandini was involved in the scenario which made Dhruv mum Manik in the National Television."

"This might be associated with my sister, but I have given her enough space and never asked her anything of this sort. I don't think this is anyway related to me or my discovery, is it?"

Picking up the remote from the table, he clicked the red button, shutting the television and switching the main power off, while Nandini rested on the couch, cuddling the pillow and facing towards the LCD screen. Dhruv went to sit near her, dropping the remote on the couch and looked at her, his intense eyes adorning her serene face, and her loosely tied hair. In his husky voice he asked, "So?"

"So?"

"How many times does Rishab's sister plan to rewind and play her brother's interview?"

"Why do you pause at the most crucial moment every time. It has created so much trouble to us Friction and you seem so calm. How can you not think of yourself? It would be you who will be involved in a controversy soon and so will be us. It will mean our downfall. Why don't you think of the consequences and plan to joke around? Why are you this way?"

"I am what I am because one day a girl told me to always be optimistic and think of pleasant things as thinking of the reality would break us, shatter us, remember?"

"You remember everything about me don't you?"

"Why shouldn't I? It has merely been seven years"

"You are impossible Dhruv. Just impossible to believe. Sometimes I am scared to sleep, thinking this to be a dream, you and me to be part of this beautiful dream which break if I closed my eyes."

He stared at her, as she looked down, "You need to stop staring at that way. I forget to breathe for a moment at that intensity."

"Ah! That was a joke, wasn't it?" saying so he stared at her, more intensely, making her heart flutter.

As the two shared their Their Time', Mukti Cabir and Manik stood at the terrace, they weren't merely standing though."

"How could you this? I don't believe that you could do it Manik. Have you ever heard of the word 'self control'?" Mukti spat out of disgust.

"Self control? How could he resist? She had troubled Nandini a lot, did you forget? His adrenaline rush didn't let him keep silent. Or should I say his love feelings for Nandini didn't let him keep mum at that very moment.", Cabir had to comment.

"Nandini is just my friend do you understand that Cabir? And Mukti, this not any attention seeking act, I am not you, you see" Manik finally spoke after listening to thirty minutes long lecture from his Friction co-members and friends, Cabir and Mukti.All for one and one for all hadn't changed with the change of band name after all.

"What did you just say? I try to seek attention when I..."

"If you can think that what I did was simply to come under the spotlight then why cant I blame you for something which you are not or don't do? And Cabir, I am not you, get that in your head right away. I don't cry for a girl and stalk her night, day not letting her live. So all that you said for the past couple of minutes aren't valid at all."

"Oh well! Every one knows she loves me and denies the truth, so I don't think I am being too clingy. She just doesn't admit her love for me, that too because of Harshad. You don't do it because you know Nandini loves Dhruv too much to even think about you, unlike Navya whose love for me can be seen in her eyes."

"In her eyes. Why not. Who told you I love Nandini by the way? Have you forgotten about the word FRIEND? I think you have. Me Nandu and Buddy couldn't be better friends. I don't have to love her as she already has Dhruv but I am there for her, always."

"Really now?"

"Even if ,my heart yields feelings for her, I don't spill it out in front of everyone."

"Well you cant spill, its your buddy after all. I can do whatever I want to, to keep Harshad away from Navya but you are one helpless man. You can simply do nothing but let her go to him and spend all your life together."

"Would you both stop talking about the ugliness of love right away. I thought love was beautiful, but look at you both, spoiling the whole essence of such a heartfelt emotion. Has that mere interview and comment of Manik brought us to say all this? Was our friendship not supposed to last forever? I cant even say that I pity you." Came Mukti's retort.

"I don't know about pitying, but I know about one thing, I just know that Navya is mine. If I have to kill Harshad to get her, I can even do that."

"Have you lost it already? How can you even say that?" Manik asked horrified.

As they continued with their everlasting bickering, they heard the sound of anklet and mumed at once. They saw Nandini come running towards the three and Dhruv follow her. As Nandini came closer to Manik, he could see tears rolling down her cheeks.

She shouted his name at the top of her voice and continued, "How could you even do this Manik? Do you realize how the publishing of that letter can affect me, my family, my career and Friction's future? You did what you had to do yesterday and now..." she spoke as she cried and Dhruv interrogated him, pulling Nandini behind her as Manik tried to keep his hand across her shoulder, "Don't try Manik. We all have always kept everything transparent. If you wanted me and Nandini to not hook up and asked me for her I would have simply let her go. Even you know this don't you? Then why did you get the letter published?"

"Letter what letter?What am I being blamed for? Now what did you do Nandini? Are you trying to brain wash buddy against me? Why are you all doing this to me? Nandini why do you have to ruin everything? Its you because of whom we all are suffering. "

As he said so, Dhruv unable to resist placed a slap across his cheeks, making Manik lose his temper in no time. He held Dhruv tight by his shoulder,as Dhruv threw the newspaper towards him.

After twenty minutes of examination and justification the five decided to meet the next day at their adda, the Golf View Flat, which belonged to Manik some years back, but since the formation of Friction, it was their home, where they shared moments of laughter and tears together .

As Cabir and Mukti left, Manik planned to sort things out"Buddy, I need to talk to you. Enough of misunderstandings and quarrels. You will meet me at seven tonight and Nandini, join us at ten. We will this topic a perfect end, so that no one ever talks about it again."

Saying so he left, picking his guitar up, the star swaying as he walked down, leaving Dhruv and Nandini behind. As Nandini was about to leave, Dhruv held her hand loosely, "Nandini, just one minute". The husk in his voice so passionate, "Can we both walk to your house today? I don't know why but I don't want you to go today."

"Who said I am going right now? I don't know why, I don't feel like leaving you alone. I don't know maybe the recent situations have traumatized my heart that I want to be safe with you." Saying so she pulled Dhruv, and he picked up the cap which was lying on the floor and followed her without complaining.


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Edited by BeyondWords - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
I shapath to unres... sometime next weekšŸ˜›
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
res😊
unres
d update was amazinggšŸ‘
lovedd d convo between manik,cabir and mukti😳
wat did manik publishšŸ˜•šŸ˜•
and wat happ to dhruvšŸ˜•šŸ˜•
so much mysteryšŸ˜†
and m loving ttšŸ˜†
continue soonishā­ļø
Edited by aishu3003 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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simply awesome...bt I still couldn't understand what Manik's statement was which made thm all so furious...nd Cabir killing harshad 4 Navya...dat was so strange of him..yet he's always lyk dat..out of his mindšŸ˜†..bt I loved it...plz continue soon..nd pm me whenever u update da nxt chappy😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
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OMG!! did Manik kill Dhruv šŸ˜† i knw that ain't possible yeah but seriously i had that thut comin up.
It's just really amazing 😭 do not delay ur updates plz,...
plz make Dhruni possible here, i jst got that strng feeling 😃 i will cry if they wont happen
because reading Dhruni is incredible šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘
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Posted: 10 years ago
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woww so much mysteries... loved it... can't wait for the mysteries to uncover
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow! Mysterious and interesting first update. I enhoyed reading this chapter a lot. It's a very different kind of story and I think I'm really going to enjoy it! The first update was mysterious in itself and now I am quite eager to read more!

Do continue soon!

-- Kiret x
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
Wow

This is awesome

I really feeling scar after the last past of the update

Why dhruve speak like this...is the person who was about to die in prologue is dhruve no no this can't be happen

Update soon and add me in ur pm list...

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