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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Humzy

Sorry sorry sorry for such a late reply

Was on holiday and then just gt got busy
Back to the update it was awsm
Loved it
Very nicely written
Continue soon


Aww its ok
Thank u so much
Will do soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: 2111_shweta



<div>No peace
You hurt my Rey, I mean Rocky😡
Aur uss stone ki aisi ki taisi😡
Yes I am an evil...koi shuk??😈
UPDATE!!!!!


Gulping HARD
OK woman
Pehle ready to ho jane do 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ..dreamygatz..

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Finally I read!!!</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Sorry for being this late!</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">In a word- Whoa! What an update!!!🥳</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">So gripping, I was hooked up throughout and as I finished reading I felt.. gosh I wanted more to read!</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Super awesome update dear!⭐️</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">I am in love with this story!❤️</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">So now coming to the update!!!!</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Ella, Ella , Ella! I so love her! Her character! So damn good! With each update am finding her to be stronger than ever! The way you mentioned about Hide and Seek and small sneak peak into her childhood! I felt really sad thinking about her and Evans!😭The emotion she is going through and their bonding brother-sister bonding! ❤️</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">I wish more such flashbacks come in with every update!!!</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Before going to Mr Unknown, I will talk about Rocky!!!</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Rocky! The way he was killing the goons of other gang, the brutal coldness in his killing!! That really made my bone chilling, no wonder later in the update even El gets scared!!!</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Complete contrast to his this coldness, the Ryan's attitude towards missing her and his remembering her as he passed by the bakery and his thought of its she who hit him .. all these made me go aweee... The way he decides to follow her...❤️I so love him!!!!</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">His sharp eyes and his presence of mind in dealing with situations is so awesome!👏The way he asks El to push him as if he is an eve teaser and walk away on him seeing the knife!!!👍🏼😎</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">And the way he killed him!!! The cold brutal Rocky in him!!! Woosh! No wonder El got scared!!! The feelings in him on seeing the fear in El! I just love him❤️</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">I can go on and on about how much I love him for being him! For being Rocky and being Ryan both at same time!!! He is simply awesome!!!!⭐️</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Now coming to the Unknown guy!!! Who is he??? My poor brain will have no rest till I find who is he! I am gonna go restless in figureing out him and his concerns for El! Is he someone related to Ev, a friend or someone? Was it Ev to whom he reports the matters around? Why is he concerned towards El, or why is the person having concern towards El to whom he is reporting? If that person is not Ev!😕</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Questions, Questions and more Questions popping up in my head! </font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">All I figured out so far is that, this unknown guy is someone who has a kind heart which he keeps masked as he steps out to face the brutal real world!!!</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Wooosh!!! I love this story so much!!! ❤️</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">update soon!!!!</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">I will stalk around your index for time being!😳</font>


Ikr finally 😆
Aww its ok its worth waiting ❤️
Thanks a lot for the lovely comment
I m glad u liked the fb scene :)
N that u love ella ;)
Lol yeah he is brutal n scared u n ella later :P
Yup he is the great goon so had to b sharp
Inne questions 😆
Baap re baap SIGH
The last part about mask thing is correct :)
Will update soon
Lol u better stalk my index more *evil smirk*
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: arsha_simran


kya update hai!! Heheheheee

Ella not in trouble and hide and seek game!!
hehheheheee
and then Ryan by god his smirk!!! ^_^
hehehheee bored of killing... Hehehehee
but the way he was fighting
and fight kartey waqt bhi Ella came in between...
heheheheee Ella and Ryan's connection!!!
its something woowww
and Ryan want Ella!!!
poor him old guy mil gaya!!!
but finally he got her!! The chasing kind game heheheee
and upar se flirting!!!
that knife guy... -.-
ahhh Ryan he is hurt,.. :'(
but now Ella wil take care of him I guess!! ^_^
finally that unknown person is back!!!
I feel he is related to Ryan and Evan!!
or it must b Evan!!!
his care and concern for Ella is a person has for a family member or either he is someone who loves Ella!!
excited to noe!!!


Thanks a lot
Lol killing smirk 😆
Yeah he got bored 😛
Yup kuch to hai darmiyaan 😉
Hmm is hurt but ella hai na
Lets see if ur guess is right or wrong 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago


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Posted: 10 years ago
Finally!!
I'm here😛
'Blood was of different shade' what does that mean?😕
Oh my😲
She turned into a doctor😲👏😆
And caught hold of the same docter😆
But it was so sweet of him😳
He actually pulled out the doctor for her😆
And then the prank😆
Poor Ta.. argh😡.. 🤢
Poor Ella
Ayeee😃
He pouted
Me imagining him pouting☺️
Well then again back to normal🤢
He know how to trick her😆
Returning favours to her Knight in shinning armor😆
That moment while running where he tightened his grip on her hands😳
It just shows that he feels something for her😉
Oh well the last cliff hanger🤢
Update soon😡
Let the goons burn off in those flames😡
Not a single scratch to Ella and especially to Ryan😡
Another emoticon filled comment comes to an end😆


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Posted: 10 years ago
gosh di this was a superb update
ella helped him
totally thrilling
n now burn d place
just want to read more
update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Tasha beautifully written! Awesome dear!😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awsm update
Loved it Very nicely written
Continue soon

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