ZaYa OS: A tear from your eye

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oriyu

@oriyu24

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Posted: 11 years ago

#121

U literally made me cry...
I really loved it...
I wanted aliya and zain to live happy ever after but that gauhar...
U r amazing...
Thanks for the pm...

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RUHANIKAA

@RUHANIKAA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#122

it was very emotional😭
beautifully written...👏
thanks for d pm
plzz Keep writing

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VolimTeManik

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Posted: 11 years ago

#123

Thank you all for your likes and comments.

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Edited by ZaYa_Stories - 11 years ago

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VolimTeManik

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Posted: 11 years ago

#124

Surprise Update

Zain : I love you Aliya...I love you...
He couldnt stop his tears. Gauhar is standing near the door and seeing him cry...
Gauhar : (Monologue)When Zain? When?? When did you loose your heart? You are not such a person I know. When did you change? You love a girl?? Impossible... No no Zain is doing for formality...He loves me...He cant love a girl who he hated before...(He wiped her tears) No...no...(She smiles) I will make you love me Zain.

Zain placed his head on her chest and held her hand...He is weeping...He feels weak...
Zain : Come back Aliya...Aliya...(Crying again)
Zain got up...He wiped his tears...
Zain : Stop everything now Aliya...Get up...I need to talk with you...Fight with you...Need to share my feelings...Aliya get up...Soon...Aliya...
He knelt down again...near the bed. He again falls on her and cries...Holding her hand...

Zain felt some pressure in his hand...He was shocked and he got up amazed...
Zain : Rizwaan...Rizwaan...He got out of the room searching Rizwaan...When he saw Gauhar out he yelled at her...
Gauhar is shocked and she followed Zain...
Zain : Where is he?Rizwaan : Who? Doctor?Zain : Yes...Rizwan : Just now he left...Should I call him back? What happened to you? What happened Zain?Zain : Is he going to the hospital?Rizwan : Maybe...But why Zain? Tell me something...
Zain ran up the stairs...He came down with Aliya in his hands.He made her sit in the front seat and he climbed the driver seat.Rizwan came running and tried to stop him but in no use.
Place : In hospital
Zain : Doctor, Is she ok?Doctor : Nurse Stop him outside the theater.
Nurse : Sir...Sir...Kindly stay here...Sir You are not allowed inside the theater...Sir...Zain : I am at least allowed inside the Preparation Room right?Nurse : Wait here sir. I'll ask the doctor.
Few minutes later.
Nurse : Yes sir you are allowed but you have to wear aprons.Zain : Yes, I will...
Zan wears the Aprons
Nurse: Yes sir right here.
She guides him into the preparation room. Right outside the operation theater.
He can view his wife...his life closed in a white sheet...
Few hours later.
Doctor came out the operation theater.
Doctor : Congratulations Mr. Zain Abdulla She is alright. Well this is a miracle...This is super natural...I can tell this much You are really Lucky.Zain : Can I meet her?Doctor : Not now but after we shift her from here. Even You can take her home today itself.Zain : Thank you so much Doctor.
She is discharged and Zain is taking her home.
Inside the Car.

They both were silent. No one uttered a word...Finally Aliya broke the silence
Aliya : I am sorry.Zain stopped the car suddenly...
Aliya looked at him he was fuming with anger. She looked around it was Barkat Villa...
She tried to get down when Zain stopped her from opening. She havent seen him like this before...He got down and went near her side...
He opened the door and he took her in her arms.
Aliya : What are you doing Zain/ Leave me down...Zain kept walking towards the door.He reached their room ignoring Gauhar as he had already sent a text to Rizwaan about what happened.He locked the room from inside after dropping her in the bed.
Aliya : Zain...Zain : Shut up...Aliya is scared right now...She couldnt face him...She still thinks she is wong impure and thats why he is angry on her.
Zain : Are you mad? Are you out of your mind?Aliya : Zain...Zain : Just keep quite ( Pointing his finger towards her)Aliya : (Crying) I already told you I am sorry...I know you wont forgive me...Zain : Thats it??Aliya : No...(Weeping and wiping her tears) See I dont even know what happened with me...When I heard it I was shattered Zain. I know you wont accept me anymore..Zain I am not pure anymore...I will go somewhere else...and Zain : Aliya...(Shouts)Aliya : Sorr...Zain : I said shut...
Gauhar came running when she heared his voice..She stopped near the door and smiled and she went near the window..
Aliya is just looking into his eyes. He was sitting befor her facing her...his face right 3-4 inches away from her with his finger toward her face...
Gauhar was so happy seeing this...She joined her hands and is smiling wide...
Zain and Aliya stayed the same for some moment...Suddenly he crushed his lips with her...Aliya was taken aback...He used her move and knelt down in the bed...
Gauhar is shocked.She felt a hand on her shoulder...She turned...Rizwan : Are you going to watch them making love or going to have dinner downstairs?Gauhar still dont get out of this shock...He followed Rizwan down...
No sooner they reached down Rizwaan saw Aayat in the drawing room...He yelled Rizwaan : Aaayaat...Hi...(hugging her)Gauhar saw it and cried out loudGauhar : No...
Aayat and Rizwaan broke the hug...seeing her crying.Aayat : Now what?Rizwaan : I have arranged a candle light dinner.(Winks)Aayat : Then...What about Appi?Rizwaan : (Bent down near her and whispered in her ears) Making love...Aayat : Shhh...(Blushing)Rizwan : Can we ? (Pointing towards the table) Aayat : Sure...(Holding hands with him)

Place : ZaYa room
Aliya dint know how to respond...He suddenly placed his hands on her hips. She opened her mouth. (Should we teach Zain what to do now?) He entered her mouth and he made her respond to his kiss...Aliya tried to tell something...But it was too late...They broke the kiss...She saw Zain and her jaw dropped...She saw his blazer and T-shirt down...Aliya : Allah tauba...(Opened her mouth wide)Zain : Oh..Please...Not this time...He again kissed her. He made her also go in her knees...(Well he was not interested in bending down while kissing) ...He creased her back...(Apparently he was searching the Zip)Aliya tried to get back...He gave a hard grip...Zain : Ready to get Dirty...I mean impure?(Winks)Aliya : Zain...In no time all the barriers flew here and there around the room...

The End.

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Edited by ZaYa_Stories - 11 years ago

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VolimTeManik

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Posted: 11 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: anaghazaya
A very nice surprise!!

Thank you so much.

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oriyu

@oriyu24

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Posted: 11 years ago

#126

Really loved the surprise ..
Huggues to you...
Thanks for the pm..

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Fero

@Euphoria_V

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Posted: 11 years ago

#127

awwwesome
really amazing surprise
superb
l loved it
happy happy happy happy happy happy
thanks yaar
really u r soo cute
love u friend
thanks for pm
fabulous ,marvelous
keep writing more
don't forget to pm me your future work
finally happy ending
u gave nice surprise to me
btw i am firdose
ur name dear?