MG FF Scalded in Love thread 2 very important note page 41 27\4\2015 - Page 15

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Posted: 10 years ago
WELCOME BACK DEAR
AND CONGRATES U GOING ENGAGED


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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update dear...and ya ..congrats dear for engagement ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Really nice update, congrats for your engagement and sorry to hear about your father..may god help him to recover soon...take care dear n happy that you gave an update after all these trouble. God bless! Its really a nice story
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome... Superb ...
Thanks for pm ...
Thanks for update...
Continue soon...
Hope your father is doing well...
Congrats for your engagement...
Its time to enjoy n cherish for life...
So have fun... N take your time
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Posted: 10 years ago
i don't understand why women stay quiet when their husband are doing wrong! if maan is wrong in cheating geet, she is too responsible for staying quiet from so long knowing he is having extra marital affair.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Okay I m back in form. I Clearly know now what I want in the story.😊

Hope this part will make a special place in your heart.😃

I have put all my feelings and emotions into it to make it more real and touching.😳

😉😉😉Be ready to cry.😆😆😆


Part 18

When geet came home she was relaxed a bit after a busy day.

After changing she made herself a cup of coffee and gave Maan one too.

She starting cooking and puts everything on stove.

She came n sat at her living room where Maan was busy in his laptop and coffee.

Maan had always loved her coffee.

But today Maan gave her a smile in return of coffee which he never gave before.

Geet just ignored.

Did he really smile or it was my imagination? Is he really changing?

Geet said to herself.

Shut the hell up geet!

Geet scolded herself.

You are just repeating what you have been doing in these years of marriage nothing is changed it's just your wifely duties.

That's what woman do wifely duties and man failed to give their lawful and faithful wives their rights.

The fresh tears came out of her eyes.

Which she wiped before letting anyone notice it,

She saw Jeh coming with his math book.

She smiled her son always stuck in math which means hours of explaining the same thing again and again but she loves it.

That's all I have got my kids.

She admitted to herself smiling.

Jeh directly went to Maan and sit behind him.

Dad I need helppp...

Jeh announced happily.

The smiled vanished from her face.

And

She saw Jeh n Maan busy in their little play cum study.

These days Jeh was more attach to Maan than her.

She smiled painfully.

There was a time when Jeh use to come to her for every little task let it be his homework or his silliest question.

And what about Kajal?

She hates her father.

But!

Kajal is a baby she will forget and accept Maan one day.

And she?

May be ridhima is right I should be happy in what I have.

Geet said to herself in the painful voice.

But her inner voice defends

Why geet?

That's means you will be quiet again?

That's mean you will go through all that nightmares all over again?

That's means you will be doing all wifely duties and he will be enjoying with his girlfriend again?

You will give birth to his kids and the happiness will go to someone else?

What you are?

Geet Maan Singh Khurana!

The great Maan Singh Khurana's namesake wife and mother of his kids, what are you geet?

A doll? A doll that is kept for producing kids? Opps lawful kids?

Her inner voice asked the most difficult question for which she doesn't had any answers.

Geet was lost in her thoughts when Kajal said.

Mom your cooker actually gave last warning!

Geet was so lost she didn't answer.

Mom?

Kajal shake her mother a little and said mom your cooker is giving whistles to u...

Huh!

Geet came out of her thoughts but the words were not cleared.

And an exploding voice attracted the attention of four people and some neighbors too.

And the next moment the kitchen was filled with food all over.

The impact of sound was too high for little hearts of kids that they both clenched their parent.

Maan took his both kids in his embraced and geet stood there absorbing what just happened.

After few seconds of soothing the kids Maan left both and put his hand on Geet's shoulder.

Geet?

Maan called her.

Geet just jumped and starting moving backwards.

She was scared now.

She knew what was coming?

She knew what now she has to deal with.

Maan looked at her in confusion.

I i.i.ii.ii... so...sorr...sorryyy...

Geet said when she didn't had place to move backwards.

Fear was written all over her face.

Little beats of sweat covered her face.

Maan was shocked.

Sorry? For what?

I m sorry I will never repeat that again... Please don't hit me.

Geet said while slowing sitting on the floor crying.

Maan's eyes got wider and he realized.

'''''''

Past-

It was only a week since geet had arrived London from India after her marriage.

Quite excited and quite scared.

After all it was her first journey cam honeymoon.

The jolly geet in her exclaimed!

Honeymoon!!!!

Okay it's not a typical honey moon we will live there.

But a new place and an international journey and alone with my husband

It's a honey moon.

She said to herself dreamingly.

The second day of their arrival the partners of Maan through a welcome party plus a party for his wedding

She was all very excited and was all blushing of the thought of getting introduced as his wife.

She was all in love with her hubby Khurana.

The Hitler!

It was barely a week after her wedding.

And her hubby Khurana didn't even glanced at her now

Hitler!

Geet giggled.

Shut up geet don't call your hubby Hitler. He is your god after all...

Sorry sorry babaji!

Next time this will not happen again.

Geet started her Indian express to her babaji.

She wanted to look best so that her hubby Khurana will be proud and at least give her a kiss...

She dreamed.

She got dressed in her best outfit and got ready put her best jewelry on and put some makeup...

She looked in the mirror and felt that something is missing.

God I m so stupid

Geet took the sacred red powder and was about to put that on.

She saw Maan behind her.

In her excitement she forgot everything.

And turned

And there was red powder all over Maan and his designer suit and shoes his face n her face.

Maan turned red in anger and thud.

Here came a tight slap right on her cheek.

She looked shockingly at him with her innocent eyes.

What the fu... hell?

You dumb head stupid good for nothing woman.

I was getting late for the party and you spoiled it all.

I hate you so much.

I don't know what dadi looks in you that she married me to you.

He said you' like she is filth.

His words were hurting her more than his slap did.

He was so in hatred that he once again raised his hand to hit

To which geet moved backwards and fell down on the floor saying.

So..ryy.

Sorryyy..

sorry

I m sorry I will never repeat that again... Please don't hit me.

Precap- more of past and a son will help his father.

Give your comments and likes.

I can understand the fewer amounts of likes are because of my disappearance.

But dears I want encouragement so that I can continue.

I want likes and comments.

Tell me what you feel about this ff.

Love

Hira.❤️

Edited by sweetgirls1 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Maan is such a heartless person in past lovely update
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Posted: 10 years ago
wht have u done maan...shame on u...

nice update...

thank u very much fr d update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 10 years ago
in past he was hitler
but now he is changing
so chance tu banta hai
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Posted: 10 years ago
Poor geet has gone through bitter past...

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