ARSHI FF: My First Love ...~THREAD 2~Link of thread 3 on pg 146 - Page 62

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teja21 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb update dear
thanx fr d pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi,
Read the story in one go. Couldn't click like on all the chapters because most of the chapters kept me wanting to read the next. A very good story. Well written with lots of sense of humor.
Mostly I loved their School days and the happy and sad days of their 9th and 10th standard.
The beginning days at AR was good then suddenly I felt the story was dragging. but again with Payash' s anniversary you brought back the entertainment.
Feel Khushi unnecessarily dragging Arnav after he declared his love so beautifully.
Though he is arrogant, ruthless and rude. He has always been good to Khushi.
She makes him angry by rejecting him. Why can't she give him a chance to change by becoming his fiance.
What's so hard to accept him when she loves him and he loves her so much.
Anyway you may have a concept in mind and will wait to see how this going to be in the future update.
Good story with nicely written chapters except one or two.
Well done and looking forward for more updates.
All the best.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderful update anju !!
I liked the last part .. She said it out loud making Arnav shocked ..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Payaash


It's ok anisha ..

Aww thank u pratyusha


Welcome baby 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
When updating ..
100 like over
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Posted: 11 years ago
Teaser


Sorry for a teaser .. I'm not feeling well ..

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Arnav : Bhabhi . Why do you hate me so much ?
Payal : I don't hate you so much Arnav . The first time I saw you , I only knew that you were deeply in love with some girl . I really wanted you to get her . But before all that I saw my sister struggling so much for you . I saw her spending sleepless nights crying for you . I always said her that she had no future with you . But she never listened to me . She said if her love was true , she will get your love .

My eyes became moist remembering all that . And I think jiji's. Eyes are moist too .

Payal : Leave all that Arnav . You said that you love Khushi more than anything right ! Then just tell me one thing . Why did you go to other girls when you truly loved my sister ? that means her love is not enough for you to control all your desires ! You always chose them over my sister .

Arnav : It's not like that Bhabhi . I was helpless . I wanted to take all my anger out and

Payal : And you spoilt many lives .

Arnav : It was all mutual except for one . And that is Swathi .

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I started to walk as fast as I could . I know what Arnav is capable of doing now . And I don't want to go to bhayya and bhabi in the same position or something more uncomfortable for is to see . But we have to . What if they are not romancing each other ?

We heard moans and groans . I stopped . I can't see anything more now . It is enough . I let Arnav open the door . But he opened it a bit too wide . Even I could see what was happening there . They were kissing and bhayya was trying to open her ahem ahem . I closed my eyes and started to go away .

Now I know what Arnav will do .
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Edited by Payaash - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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=> New pm rules are :

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I know these are sounding rude but what to do . Life is getting busier day by day . So I shall not waste time by sending PMs .

Anyways as I always say first like and then comment . If you are busy then you can comment later but do comment when you are free again .


If you want to make our work easier then send buddy request directly .
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome teaser
get well soon dear :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh dear, get well soon! Hugs!
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice teaser dear
dont worry...take care of urself...
thanx fr d pm

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