ARSHI FF: My First Love ...~THREAD 2~Link of thread 3 on pg 146

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teja21

@teja21

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Posted: 11 years ago

#611

superb update dear

thanx fr d pm

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BarunFan1212

@BarunFan1212

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Posted: 11 years ago

#612

Hi,

Read the story in one go. Couldn't click like on all the chapters because most of the chapters kept me wanting to read the next. A very good story. Well written with lots of sense of humor.

Mostly I loved their School days and the happy and sad days of their 9th and 10th standard.

The beginning days at AR was good then suddenly I felt the story was dragging. but again with Payash' s anniversary you brought back the entertainment.

Feel Khushi unnecessarily dragging Arnav after he declared his love so beautifully.

Though he is arrogant, ruthless and rude. He has always been good to Khushi.

She makes him angry by rejecting him. Why can't she give him a chance to change by becoming his fiance.

What's so hard to accept him when she loves him and he loves her so much.

Anyway you may have a concept in mind and will wait to see how this going to be in the future update.

Good story with nicely written chapters except one or two.

Well done and looking forward for more updates.

All the best.

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LoveUIpkknd

@LoveUIpkknd

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#613

Wonderful update anju !!

I liked the last part .. She said it out loud making Arnav shocked ..

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LoveUIpkknd

@LoveUIpkknd

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#614

Originally posted by: Payaash

It's ok anisha ..

Aww thank u pratyusha

Welcome baby 😃

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LoveUIpkknd

@LoveUIpkknd

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#615

When updating ..

100 like over

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Anjali

@Payaash

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#616

Teaser

Sorry for a teaser .. I'm not feeling well ..

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Arnav : Bhabhi . Why do you hate me so much ?

Payal : I don't hate you so much Arnav . The first time I saw you , I only knew that you were deeply in love with some girl . I really wanted you to get her . But before all that I saw my sister struggling so much for you . I saw her spending sleepless nights crying for you . I always said her that she had no future with you . But she never listened to me . She said if her love was true , she will get your love .

My eyes became moist remembering all that . And I think jiji's. Eyes are moist too .

Payal : Leave all that Arnav . You said that you love Khushi more than anything right ! Then just tell me one thing . Why did you go to other girls when you truly loved my sister ? that means her love is not enough for you to control all your desires ! You always chose them over my sister .

Arnav : It's not like that Bhabhi . I was helpless . I wanted to take all my anger out and

Payal : And you spoilt many lives .

Arnav : It was all mutual except for one . And that is Swathi .

I started to walk as fast as I could . I know what Arnav is capable of doing now . And I don't want to go to bhayya and bhabi in the same position or something more uncomfortable for is to see . But we have to . What if they are not romancing each other ?

We heard moans and groans . I stopped . I can't see anything more now . It is enough . I let Arnav open the door . But he opened it a bit too wide . Even I could see what was happening there . They were kissing and bhayya was trying to open her ahem ahem . I closed my eyes and started to go away .

Now I know what Arnav will do .

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Edited by Payaash - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

#617

FOR PMS

From mid of September or October , I will start sending PMs from this account .

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=> New pm rules are :
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I know these are sounding rude but what to do . Life is getting busier day by day . So I shall not waste time by sending PMs .
Anyways as I always say first like and then comment . If you are busy then you can comment later but do comment when you are free again .

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