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sonal

@srain10

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Posted: 10 years ago

#791

Hopefully Arnav will not act as a will talk to khushi wisely...

Waiting for next part..

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-Zesty-

@-Zesty-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#792

Hmm... was the ice bucket challenge to write an aghast story or make shyam a good guy and Anjali a shakki wife?😆

I simply loved an unwanted wife ... simply beautiful piece .,,, and now loving this new one ...

Waiting to see what Arnav will do ...

Had always liked Anjali, but here cant help but dislike her ... if you are suspicious of your husband thats understandable ... but saying that the girl would have charmed her shyam ji is so wrong ... what is her shyam ji? 5?

Don't like this kind of women, both Anjali type and the one Anjali thought Khushi is ... but the men are equally to be blamed ... they always get away in this blaming game 😆

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yoga123

@yoga123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#793

Awesome story...arnav is under the assumption that khushi is the other woman but he is attracted to her...what is going to happen next?...did he kidnap her or what?...can't wait for the next update...thanks for the PM

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rulama

@rulama

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Posted: 10 years ago

#794

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rulama

@rulama

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Posted: 10 years ago

#795

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Shalma/Suman

@arhi_crazy

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#796

read the update in blog but commenting here.

arnav took khushi to a dilapidated guest house and started his interrogation. But khushi is khushi, when ever had she understood the complexity of life.
her answers were innocent and hilariousjust like her and sent ASR into loop.
*laughs*
*sigh* arnav crude manner of asking khushi to sleep wid him is downright demeaning and also amusing since he got sidetracted frm his di's married life bacchao mission. Hehehe...
wonder what have khushi has to say now. Will she become fiery or will again answer in her own innocent way??? We can't predict abt her reaction afterall she is our sankadevi, isn't she??? :))
waitn 4 more.

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Param

@pup03

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Posted: 10 years ago

#797

what arnav kidnapped khushi??? interesting story.. 😊

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Hetal

@Divyahet

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#798

The updates were wonderful, hilarious but how can he think so low of her..she is all innocent. I hope he won't harm her physically...Di ka laadala kahi ka ...ja pehle apni pujaran Di ko bol jaake...I want her to slap him as hard as she can n then ignore him just he dose not exist at all.

Thanks in advance Reshu for the mail.

Smitaji maa kasam aaj mera khoon is boiling...iss updates ne mere BP ko high kar diya he...jaldi hi dusara dose deke usko neeche laana padega.

Take care sweethearts.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#799

Ohh... how I wanted to slap Arnav for jumping the gun on someone without any proof ... want to just slap him for his last question ...

So Khushi is as innocent as she always was in your stories 😆 her innocent retort was such a good read... I love this character ... everyone can drool over ASR but I love Khushi❤️

Seeing her innocence , I am sure she is going to cry buckets .. but at the same time will put ASR to his right place, in her own innocent way