ss:milenge milenge...(collab)* surprise 2 (03/03) - Page 7

Amazing read both the parts very well written priya n sakeenah 👏

Continue soon plzz can't wait to read more

Superb update waiting for d next part

awesome update !!!👏
amazingly written..👍🏼
loved it ❤️
ty so much for d pm..

Originally posted by: Barbievishi20

Amazing update 😃
awww both have feelings for eachother 😳❤️
❤️ed it..
Continue soon 😊

Glad u lyked it...

Originally posted by: jazly_zayafan

sooo... Lovely update
beautifully penned!!
Pls cont ASAP
thnx 4 d pm:)

U r wlcum

Originally posted by: Ashis

Amazing read both the parts very well written priya n sakeenah 👏

Actually last time u didn't send the link ..so hadn't read it though Isearchedthe thread a lot bt couldn't find it

Anyways continue soon its interesting👍🏼

Thanks and sorry for the unconvince caused to you...

Originally posted by: RUHANIKAA

awesome update !!!👏
amazingly written..👍🏼
loved it ❤️
ty so much for d pm..

u r wlcum

Hey peeps!
I am back with my another chapter ..
I hope u all lyk it and I also want to say thank you to all the lykers who lyked our work...
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CHAPTER 2B
Time started passing like it got wings...
Valentine day...
Zain has broken his piggy bank for purchasing gifts for aliya.. lyk teddy bear on teddy day,chocolates on chocolates day,rose on rose day and many more...
Yesterday on kiss day he intentionally kissed aliya and said by mistake he did it ..aliya agreed but from bottom of her heart she knew he did it intentionally...
Present day...
It was a holiday as it was Sunday ...
Zain decided to take aliya somewhere...
He went to aliya's house in his brand new cycle and started whistling as it was their secret code...
Aliya came down wearing a pink top and white shirts...zain was mesmerised...
Aliya:khahan challenge?
Zain: tum apni cycle le kar aayo phir chalte hain...
Aliya:thik hai...
They both went to the nearby park...
Zain: sitting down on his knees...
Will you be my best friend...
Aliya:thinking...
Okay Aur vada karo ki tum yeh friendship nahi to doge...
Za in:pakka promise and slightly penned aliya cheeks...
Aliya blushed at his sudden action...
Time passed by and now they were in 12th ..both doing commerce...
Being a depsite they used to participate in every game that school held...
Yesterday was valentine day and aaliya remembered what zain did...
# flashback #
Zain blind folded aaliya and took her to the park where they for the first time celebrated Valentine's day...
Aaliya:zain tum mujhe khahan le kar jaa rahe ho?(holding zain tightly)
Zain:tum ruko toh bas aaa hi gaya..
When they reached park it was decorated with rred roses and baloons and there was also a table lying covered with red cloth...
Aliya was totally surprised...
Aaliya: zain yeh Saab?
Za in:haan aaliya yeh sirf tumhare liye...
And he took out one red rose and sat down on his knees...
Zain: aaliya from past 4 years I wanted to tell something...from the day I met you I fell in love with you but never realised ...I thought it happens to everybody as I was a kid but as time passed by it turned into strong attraction and now it turned into love...I wanted to tell you about this before but never got time to tell you as you were always busy in your books but today its the right time and I could not hold my feelings regarding you ..
So hereby in presence of Allah I say that I love you aliya ghulam haider...
(And gives her rose )
Aliya who was standing shocked at sudden confession of zain could not hold it anymore and quickly took the rose
Aliya:(tightly hugged him) I too love you and for the first time she kissed him...
Zain was feeling happy...he took out a ring which he brought for her...
Zain:(holding her) aliya yeh ring itni mehngi toh nahi hai par I wish u lyk it...
Aliya:stupid...I am not lyl that chipkali
Zain made her wear the ring and said on every birth I would lyk u to be my love and kissed her on her lips...
This kiss turned into passionate one and both fighting for dominance...they broke apart for 10 seconds only that too for breathe ...their kiss went for 1 hour...their lips were red and swollen...
They both looked at each other and they were blushing...
Zain brought the table and removed the cloth ...their was a beautiful cake written on it happg valentine my dear love aliya...
Aliya blushed seeing the cake and both fed each other..
When they reached home they secretly went to their room so their condition will not be seen by anybody...
# flashback ends #
Aliya was touching her lips when zain came and smirked seeing aaliya touching her lips...
Zain: hmmm(cleared his throat)
Aliya came back to the present and blushed...
Aaliya:acha hai tum aagaye... chalo studies karte hai...ek mahina reh gaya hai boards ko..
Zain: han sirf ek mahina phir ham a lag...
Actually aaliya father was getting transferred to USA which will result in breaking every contact between them..
Aliya face suddenly turned dull and zain too became sad...
Zain holded aliya wrist and said don't worry we r those who can never get separated ..
And by these both started studying holding each other hand...
Outside it was raining as it was also showing its sadness over the separation of the purest couple on the earth which was soon going to happen


Precap:exams going on and zaya cannot meet each other
So khatam hua mera torture...
Do comment and like...
Will be waiting...
Next part will be updated by sakeenah...

it was amazing
bt feeling bad 4 both coz dey r gng to seprated!!
Bt dat kisss...aww
loved dis ss
pls cont ASAP