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Posted: 10 years ago
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congratz 4 new thread :-) :-) lovly update .. Awesome pic.. Continue soon waitng...
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Fab update,cont soon.
Congrats on new thread.
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awesome update
geet k shat dadi ne bhi nautanki start kar di...
poor maan day dream kar raha hai
ufff phir bhi accept nahi karna chahta
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wahhh ye sab geet n dadi ka plan tha 😆😆😆
chalooo maan haar gaya finalllyyy 😆😆😆
how can we forget this is geet 😉😉
ye thori normal larki jaise hay 😆😆😆

geet dancing maan 😳😳😳
lolzz sapna thaa 😆
maan is a saint bhuhaaa 🤣🤣
geet tum kya janoo maan ko kya kya huya hay 😉😉😉

becharii geet par gaye bimar 😕😕
papa n beti shopping
msk n shopping wahhh 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice part
loved it
maan has good control over his feelings...
geet and her antics...
now why she screamed suddenly...is she wants to eat ice cream or what..?
eagerly waiting for the next part
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THANKU FRIENDS FOR UR LOVELY COMMENTS AND LIKES..LOVE U ALL
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(THANKU SHRUTHE DIDI FOR A LOVELY BEAUTIFUL BANNER)








- 93





Geet: Maan u didt get hurt naa

Maan : hmm,but thinking why she stop te car, he got angry..why te hell u shout

Geet : i want tea



Maan eyes wide in shock: wat..here he worried for her but she is asking tea..r u mad

Geet: wat can i do im hungry..i didt have my dinner too , lifting his shirt

Maan felt something : wat u doing, holding her hand

Geet pouted: seeing ur stomach u had nice dinner leaving me..



Maan pulled his shirt snapping her hand

Geet: atleast i can have tea..till we reach home it will hold my hungry stomach

Maan felt bad for left her but seeing her nautankus he sighed: wait i will stop in some restaurant

Geet: no,she screamed..Maan raised his eyebrows

Geet : how will i go in tis dress..see how wet im,with baby face

Maan smirk: so soon u realize it haan..u didt think wen u were playing in te rain..Geet pouted her lips..he sighed now how will u get down

Geet smile,she slide te window glass and called: chotu chotu

A 15 year boy working in te stall seeing Geet, came to they car: hai Geetu dii how r u

Geet : im fine chotu..how r u

Chotu: one week u didt cum here u forgot me

Geet smiles : how could i forget my chotu..i had work chotu

Chotu: its ok dii..dii u came tis late and who is tis uncle..



Geet chuckled wen tat chotu address Maan as uncle..Maan wonder from were tis girl get friends..within few months she made whole delhi under her friend list..more over tat boy is calling him uncle how dare he..he was glaring at them

Geet blushed : he is he is

chotu got it: oh jiju..hello jiju

Maan in a trance node: hmm then realize wat he said..he straighten himself

Geet : chotu i want tea..im feeling cold as i drench in rain

Chotu: oh Geetu dii how many times i have said not to play in rain u will catch cold but u wont listen ..

Geet showed her baby face

Chotu: ok ok for jiju

Geet: he wont have u get two cup of tea

Chotu: ok with elachi and he rush to get te tea

Maan gasped hearing they convo..chotu came with tea and three bsicuits.

Geet : omg thanku Chotu im damn hungry, here no care for me, taunting Maan, but u brought biscuits too , love u chotu

Maan cleared his throat..she ignored him and she started to have it..

Geet : how is ur studies going

Chotu : fine diu..but dii my princi wants to meet u

Geet: hmm ok i will cum tis saturday

Chotu : ok dii

Geet took her purse and search for change but she had only 500 rs note..



Geet: Maan do u have money i dont have change

Maan hand went to his pocket ,then he realized in his hurry he missed his wallet in home.

Geet: leave he wont be having cash,chotu i will give u later say to u r dad

Chotu : its ok dii..bye

Geet: bye

He left..Maan was staring at her who was sipping her tea and enjoying like its te world's best tea..but wonder why his princi wants to meet Geet..but he snap thinking to ask later



Geet who was dipping te biscuit in her tea and releshing it, licking her lips , making him hard to control..he was just watching her ..Geet saw him watching her and offered him teas, but he node no and turned his face..Geet shrugger her shoulder and drinking her tea



Maan : did u finish

Geet drank tea: hmm wiping her lips with towel..took her water bottle and drank water..Maan gave a wired look

Geet smiled: wat naa Maan after tea or coffee we have to drink water..as to avoid strain..we cant gargelle every now and then naa is its better to drink water..Maan was not interested in her ram katha , he sighed and start his car..

Geet was felt bored travelling with him, she was staring at him, te way his muscles stiff wen he turn te steering and his driving style..uff..Maan know she was staring at him, but he didt turn to afce thinking he will lose..


Geet hummed a song : Un per solla aasaithaan
Ullam uruga aasaithaan

I like to say your name
like to melt my hear
t



Maan look at her and her singing : wat , Geet node no ,

Un per solla aasaithaan
Ullam uruga aasaithaan

I like to say your name
like to melt the heart

Uyiril karaiya aasaithaan
Aasaithaan unmael aasaithaan
like to melt in your life
I like you I like you..


Geet giving a dreamy look to Maan started to sing, in dramtic way.Maan know some thing she is singing abt him, but he cant understand , so he just concentrate on his driving...he want to reach km as soon as possible..already his erotic thought and more over she is teasing him with her antics, and she is singing , showing signs, like dancing, he is getting irritated, with each passing sec..but Geet was Geet she was lost in him , she just love to travel with him..she want to lean on his shoulder holding his hands..singing te lines loudly knowing he wont understand



Un thoal sera aasaithaan
Unnil vazha aasaithaan

Unnakul uthaya aasaithaan
Ulagam marakka aasaithaan
Ondrum ondrum ondraaiaaga aasaithaan

I like to reach your shoulders

like to live inside you
like to enter inside you
like to forget the world
like to become one with one and one


Suddenly Maan stop te car..Geet wonder wat happen, did he got angry on me for singing song, hmm wen he is not angry Kallulimangan

Geet : wat happen Maan

Maan : we reached

Geet : so soon, she was desire to travel with him for long time, but it end so soon, bechari for her 2 hrs is not enough for her to annoy Maan

Maan look at her

Geet : wat Maan cant u drive slowly naa, after long time im travelling with u , u ended soon, hmm

Maan : will u get down



Geet : Maan we wil do one thing we will again go for a long drive, how will it be, with a dreamy look

Maan ignored her and got down , giving te key to BGS..Geet frowned and followed him..before he enter inside , she pulled him, kissing his cheeks

Geet : I L U, and rush inside before he shout at her

At once she enter dadi was waiting for her with towel in her hand..Dadi made her to sit in te couch and started to wipe her hair

Dadi: geet wat u done..u played in te rain, in stern voice

Geet showed her baby face: dadi im feeling hungry,rubbing her tummy

Nakul came with hot hot idlies..Geet eyes wide seeing te idlies

Geet: wow give me



Dadi pulled te plate: first change ur dress u will get fever

Geet: dadi pls im hungry , see my dress also got dried..pls pls

Dadi smile and start to fed her with her hands..

Geet chewing her food : kutty

Dadi smiles : she had her dinner and sleeping with Anni

Geet : hmm both were engrossed in they chat without knowing one soul is standing like invisible to them..Maan staring at them,he too got wet ,but his dadi worried for Geet..even though he felt jealous ,but felt nice to them they closeness..he just stood there and watching them..



MORNING

All sat for BF, Geet still didt cum down

Anni : were is Geet dadi

Dadi : she came late last night, I think she is sleeping

Anni : I will see her

Dadi : hmm

Maan even though felt some thing but didt react..suddenly Anni screamed , for Dadi, dadi rush to Geet's room..Maan try to get up Ayesha tag him asking her to take her..Maan took her in arms and went to Geet room..Geet was lying lifelessly, dadi was sitting and caressing her hair, anni was rubbing her feet..



Dadi : Anni call dr, bechari how long she is like tis, I should have slept with her , last night itself she sneezed, now her body is burning

Maan just stood still without knowing wat to do.. he want to sit beside her and see but other side his mind stopping him..he was fighting within himself..

Dr checked her : don't wory maaji she is having little bit fever, becoz of rain, she will ok within two days, but she is weak..

Dadi: always will be running here and there seeing her like tis I got worried..

Dr smile : maaji I ask to bring her for check why u didt but seeing Maan standing she stopped , to Maan, Maan can u take Ayesha out I want to inject her

Maan node and went out, but his mind is roaming around Dr's words why check, wat happen to her..he was pacing , he know dadi dr aunty wont say anything..he have to find it

Inside

Dr : maaji bring Geet to clinic , I have to do a complete checkup

Dadi : I will always call her, but she will run away hearing hospital,

Dr : last time she was saying abt her sever stomach ache , now I will prescribe medicine for her fever,

Dadi node her head caressing Geet's hair

Dr : maaji wat happen to ur mission to bring MAANEET close

Dadi sighed : tis is te result

Dr : matlab

Dadi : she confess her love

Dr : he rejected and hurt her, said sadly

Dadi : hmm

Dr hold her hand : don't worry maaji everything will be ok

Dadi : I wish too

After dr left, Maan came inside , Geet was sleeping..Maan gave Ayesha to dadi..Ayesha sat beside and caressing her cheeks..

Maan : dadi im leaving to kc

Dadi glare at him: wat is tis Maan, Geet is not well

Maan : wat can I do



Dadi : don't be rude Maan , Anni went to col as she is having exam, I have to take care of Geet, if u leave who will take care of Ayesha , so better take off, after I said all tis if u want to go, leave..wat to do my fate even in tis old age I have to bear everything alone

Maan sighed took Ayesha and went down to fed her BF, Dadi nodes his head seeing his antic..she smirk thinking how she send Anni to col to make Maan to stay, after some time Maan came to Geet's room as Ayesha want to see Geet..

Dadi : Maan u sit here I will bring soup for Geet, before he say anything dadi left

Maan staring at Geet who was looking pale and weak..he cursed himself for her condition..Ayesha poke his shoulder , he look at her, she gesture him to take her near Geet..Maan placed Ayesha near Geet and he sat on te edge..Ayesha caress her hair with her small hand..

Maan was watching his baby how will she attached to Geet in short span, he was worried wat she will do after Geet left.. but he cant bind her with them...is he doing bad by pushing Geet away from his life..but how can I spoil my friend's life who gave us happiness.. I cant snatch her happiness..she and her family know only love others, he cant bind her with his haunted life..



He was staring at his two angels.. seeing her twisting her legs, he placed his hands on her legs started to press slowly..Ayesha was sad to see her maa was lying , she know some thing is not well but don't wat it is..but she cant see her maa like tis..she slowly kiss her cheeks..feeling Ayesha ki touch, Geet stir, Maan at once pulled his hand ..

Geet slowly open her eyes and saw Ayesha was sitting beside with sad face..she try to get up but her body is paining..she lyed down and hold her hand kissing it..she saw Maan and try to get up

Maan in stern tone : wat u trying do haan,

Geet and Ayesha showed they puppy face, making him to roll his eyes

Dadi came followed by nakul with te tray

Dadi sat beside : Geet u woke up, caressing her hair, how r u beta

Geet : fine dadi

Dadi :u scared me

Geet :sory dadi

Dadi :night u would have called me

Geet : I don't know dadi, wen I got fever

Dadi : its ok now have soup

Geet : yuck soup no way



Dadi : Geet take it, u should have medicine too

Geet : Dadi im fine pls, Dadi glared at her, Ayesha too glared..she turn to see Maan who was glaring at her

Geet murmur : whole khurana is glaring, Geet beta better have it, but thought to try for last time, smiling spheepisly, pls dadi I hate soup

Dadi : Geet it wont work better have it

Geet look at Maan : coz of him only I got fever



Maan : yaa I only ask u to play in rain

Geet : if u didt leave and go , I would have not got in rain, all is ur fault

Dadi : Geet now have ur soup and medicine then u will have energy to fight with him

Maan smirk, Geet pouted her lips, and drank te soup in go, making all faces like she is drinking poison

Wiping her lips : fine

Dadi : now medicines , Geet gulp her saliva and look at her, dadi smiles, I know she showed te sugar bowl

Geet eyes twinkle in joy : thanku dadi.. she put one spoon sugar inside her mouth and had her tablet , drank te water and again add one spoon sugar in her mouth: now ok

Maan was rolling his eyes seeing her nautanki for having medicines..if it was first means he could have teased her, but now everything changed between them.. a wall is created between them..ayesha was hugging her and was very sad..Geet cant see her like tis and she had some plan too..

Geet : kutty why cant u go out with ur appa,



Maan and Dadi gave her a look, Ayesha nodes no and hug Geet more

Geet kissing her cheeks : en chellam ( sweet heart ) , en thanga kutty ( my golden gudiya), go with appa and shop for me too

Ayesha look at her and then to Maan

Geet : Maan take her out, if she stay here she will be cranky and feel sad..if she go out she will feel relax

Dadi : yes Maan take her out

Maan look at both and then to Ayesha , he took her in his arms placing her in his lap, kissing her cheeks: baby we will go haan..Ayesha nodes yes..

Dadi : wait Maan I wil get her ready

Maan : I will make ready

Geet and Dadi : wat

Geet eyes widen in shock : wat u will make her ready, do u know

Maan glared at them and left taking Ayesha to his room..both laughed

Here in Ayesha's room..

Maan was searching her dress, he took a purple colour top and green colour skirt..Ayesha gave a pout look seeing te colour..He made her wear and try to tie her pony, but she was shaking her head here and there, he cant hold it , so he just took her whole hair and put te band..he then apply powder on her face, painting her in white colour..Ayesha burred as some of powder went inside her mouth..she look like a cartoon



Maan look at her face qnd smiled sheepisly: oh god baby papa didt do well, wait i will clean u, before he hold, Ayesha run to Geet and Dadi

Dadi : wat is taking so much time for them

Geet : I think king is making his princess to look out of te world

At once they enter, Geet and dadi bursted into laugh seeing Ayesha , her dress colour , her pong is standing like a pillar, her face was covered with talc , like he emptied whole powder pack into her face

Dadi : Maan tis is te way to make her ready, Maan with stern face and Ayesha with puppy face..

Geet was giggling : dadi I said naa, king is making his princess ready



Maan : why wat is wrong in tis, she is looking like a real princess

Geet : cartoon wala princess

Ayesha glare at him and Geet..Maan turn his face

Dadi :rubbed her face with her pallu and corrected her pony..Maan was watching keaningly..: wait i will get a dress for her

Geet :pink wala

Dadi : hmm

Geet to Ayesha :wat u will buy for me kutty

Ayesha : so many gifts



Geet : for u

Ayesha : for me angel dress yeana Paa

Maan : yes baby , dadi changed her dress and they the bid and left..both smile at each other

Dadi : Geet why suddenly shopping

Geet sighed : I want to celebrate kutty ki birthday

Dadi gasped and look at her : but

Geet : hmm

Dadi : its not only her birthday , but

Geet : Anju dii ki barshi

Dadi : Maan wont allow Geet, u r taking risk

Geet : how long tis wil happen dadi, once kutty grew she will ask why like others, we are not celebrating her birthday,wat we will answer.. we are snatching her happiness

Dadi look at her,



Geet hold her hand : I said already dadi its will be beinging

Dadi, know wat Geet said is correct, already its late, now she have do some thing and smile at Geet: we will arrange

Geet : only us, I don't want to invite anyone dadi, next year we will celebrate dum tum

Dadi : hmm Geet

Geet : dadi I want to ask one thing , why u didt try to search Vicky, coz u have so much source

Dadi became sad: after he left we didt get any information abt him for one month, then we came to know he was in Mumbai in his friend's flat..I and Maan went to bring him..but before we go , he left..we got only his letter saying don't try to find him, he want to live his life..if we face him, he will leave us forever..he was still angry on us Geet..so we thought to give him some time..thinking one day he will cum after his gussa calm down

Geet : then wat happen

Dadi : then we came to know he left some where , and even his friends don't know were he went..she sighed , we can find some one who is missing, but cant find te person who is hiding from us..i know he is still in india , I have hope one day he will cum to me












PRECAP : SHOPPING..MAAN SEEING GEET KI CRAZYINESS

NEXT PART : 94, PG-16


Edited by Desigirls12 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb updte...
Geet getting on maans nerves...
Poor girl.got ill...
Maan shopping with Ayesha..waiting fr nxt part...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome part
loved it
geet has suffering from fever because she got wet in rain
geet asked maan to take her to shopping
geet told reason behind sudden shopping...she wanted to celebrate ayesha's birthday
nice precap
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Woww nowadays it's raininng for lb updates
And so was track ... so much cute and interesting track
Ohhh Geet is full of nutanki and whole world fall under her friend list
Ohh she caught fever
And maan ... kaalimulang (I know spelling is wrong but this is same crush word which u used offetenly in ff ... in tamil)

He doesn't even ask for her health once
Huh ... so dad and baby going for shopping
Vicky mystery open will be soon and one more monkey will join geet team for sure

U know I had anidea for lb
Nahi I was just thinking for this ff and this thought come to my mind
Whatif after some days Geet left to Chennai after getting hurt from maan
And than maan relized his feeling and mistake
But Geet denied his all effort
Than Maan go to her house to live and irritate her in same way the way she is doing him now...
Like forcefully take a ride with her on her beloved scooty
And many more

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