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(THANKU SHRUTHE DIDI FOR A LOVELY BEAUTIFUL BANNER)








- 94

Shopping Mall

All gasped seeing MSK cuming to mall with a small baby in his arms..tis is a rare scene to see like tis..As soon Maan step inside carrying Ayesha in his arms,all try to surround him..Ayesha got scared and hide in his neck..Maan hugged her , tis is why, he always avoid his family bringing in public..BGs surrounds then forming a circle..Maan signal to clear te crowd ..at once te news spread like afire tat Msk have enter te mall..Te owner came down to reiceve him.



owner : hello sir nice to meet u sir...sir wat u want to purchase u just say sir i will delivery

Maan : its ok, i want to select, can we move to kids ,

owner : yes sir

Maan : haan i want privacy no one should disturb us

owner : ok sir, he lead him to kids zone..



Ayesha was so happy and excited to cum out with her paa for first time..wen they enter to kids selection, her happiness grew more seeing so many toys , she was running here and there dragging Maan..Maan was first time feeling her happiness..now he know where he lags..he decide wat ever, he will give his time for his family, for her happiness he can do anything..



Ayesha saw a big teddy and open her mouth like O, she went and sat on it , hugging it and smile at Maan..Maan smile at her , he suddenly thought to capture her antics..he took hsi mobile and click te pic..he ask to pack te teddy..

Maan got her wat ever she sees, he almost buy te whole shop..he even brought a white Barbie dress for her..with matching shoes and accessories ..he brought everything as he came out with his baby for first time..he was happy seeing his baby ki excitement

Suddenly Ayesha drag him to gifts selection, Maan thought she need some toys, but wen she went to card selection, he got confuse seeing her searching some thing and twisting her lips when she didt get wat she need, he thought dido like Geet..but snap his thought

Maan bend to her : wat u want baby

Ayesha :paa I want card

Maan : card for wat



Ayesha : for maa, then he realize she want to gift Geet, he saw her pouting her lips, he thought dido like Geet..he took a get well soon card and gave to Ayesha , she smile and kiss his cheeks..but Maan was confuse thinking how she know abt greeting cards

Maan : how u know abt cards

Ayesha tap her forehead : uff paa, u r buddhu

Maan thought only she is left, she too started to taunt him

Ayesha : in drasti serial, My Gurmeet give drasti card I saw

Maan eyes pop out , cursing geet for making his baby crazy for her stupid hero..if gurmeet was in front of him, he will strangle his neck for making his family to go behind him..hmm from 4 years baby too 60 years old lady, all are crazy for him..

Then he selected some more gifts , she drag him to gents selection..Maan rasied his eyebrows , Ayesha showed him a tie,

Maan : baby u want to buy tie

Ayesha node

Maan : for whom

Ayesha pointing her finger to him : for u appa

Maan felt overwhelmed seeing her love, he kissed her nose and got a tie, he showed which colour to buy, Ayesha bite her lower lips , seeing te colour and then took red colour

Ayesha : appa gifts for Anni aunty, dadi and Geet maa , Maan sighed took her to girls selection..ayesha was confused wat to get,,she saw a long skirt, she tag Maan and showed him

Maan : u want tis, but tis big, ok i will get u for ur size, he ask te salegirl to show small size

Ayesha : appa for maa, i want tis

Maan eyes widen thinking tis dress for Geet, tat dress really look very beautiful, it will look adorable on Geet, it match her skin colour..but she wont wear like tis dress

Ayesha pout her lips

Maan : but ur maa wont wear like tis dress

Ayesha : i will ask her, i want tis

Maan kissed her nose : no:1 ziddi, and ask te salegirls to pack tis,

SG :sir mam ki size

Maan thought : hmm small size

Ayesha want to buy white colour dress for all , matching her white barbie dress..Maan brought, she even ask him to buy white colour dress..Maan was wondering wat is in white colour, without knowing his devil have been selecting white colour dresses for all, according to her maa ki instruction..



Ayesha was roaming here and there, holding him , Suddenly he stop seeing a white suit , his hand trace te suit, his thought went to Geet, imaging te night she was playing in te rain, and how he was abt lose himself...and his thought went to te party night, the first dance..flashes of tat night came in front of him..how he hold her, they hug, the close dance..he lost in his thought until Ayesha poke his shoulder..he came out of his trance and smile at her.

Ayesha saw ice creams parlour: paa I want ice cream, he smiles and took her..

Ayesha eyes was twinkling in joy seeing all te favours, she was touching all te favours..Maan too ordering all te favours where ever Ayesha finger touches..they both sat and they table was filled with all te favours..She started to taste everything..Maan was just lost in his angel.

Ayesha raised her spoon to Maan , Maan node no and she poutes..Maan notice her every gesture indicating Geet..Maan smile and took te spoon and releish te ice cream which was fed by his baby..his eyes were clouded with tears seeing his angel grown up and feding him..he just kissed her cheeks..

Ayesha look at him and smile..she took te ice cream in her finger and rubbed it on his nose and giving a mischeivous smile, Maan saw her, who was giggling

Maan : naughty baby and kissed , wiping his nose with his hanky

she almost finish a huge bowl of ice cream and , Maan wipe her mouth and took her out..after they had light dinner, he decide to go to km, as Ayesha became tired.. he was just go. Ayesha tap his shoulder

Maan : wat baby

Ayesha showed her finger to a cake shop gesturing him to take there..Maan wonder now only she had her dinner again Cake, being with Geet she too eating too much..

Ayesha : paa cake for maa dadi Anni aunty, counting her fingers



Then Maan realize she want to buy for others..he felt proud seeing his daughter who too think abt others.. he is seeing his Anju dii who always buy all their favs wen ever she goes for shopping..he kissed her forehead and took her to cake shop..they brought for everyone..Then they left to km after along day..

Km

Dadi and Anni sitting on te couch and watching tv, laughing for some show..Geet was lying on another couch and drown in her ffs..Maan and Ayesha enter,

Anni : Geet yar give some rest to ur eyes, u r not feeling well and reading u ffs, wat is there in tat ff, I think soon u r going wear spects

Dadi : Anni don't say anything abt our ffs

Anni open her mouth to ground : dadi u too read ff




Dadi pout : am I looking tat old, I love gurmeet so obvious I too read ff based on my gurti

Geet giggled : Anni once u started to read naa , u will forget everything and will live in our gurti world, magical world, in dramatic way..

Maan sighed seeing they gurti madness, dadi saw them

Dadi : u both came, seeing driver bringing bags , Geet open her mouth to ground, I think u brought te whole shop

Seeing them Geet sat on te couch, Ayesha giggles and indicate Maan, saying he brought tis..Maan smile at her mischievous smile..Ayesha took a card and give Geet

Geet took Ayesha in her lap :wat is tis, opening te card she felt ..overwhelmed seeing get well soon card..she kissed all over her face in happiness, her eyes welled up

Geet : thanku kutty and I love u kutty, hugging her more,Ayesha showed her other cheeks, Geet kissed it



Geet : u selected it

Ayesha : appa

Geet whispered in her ear : for him later seeing te bags, omg u brought so many things

Anni : bhai is always like tat only, but realize wat she blabbered , biting her tongue..

Maan stiffen

Anni : im sory

Geet : ok show me wat all u brought

Ayesha showed wat all she brought for them, Geet saw long dress


( THANKU SUMI DEAR FOR TIS PIC..SHE WAS CRAZY FOR AYESHA..LOVE U DEAR...NOW I POSTED FOR DRESS..LATER GEET WILL WEAR ALONG WITH ANNI AND AYESHA, GIRLS PARTY)

Geet : Anni see tis dress wow very beautiful, it will suit u

Anni took te dress and her mouth fell down: wow bhai its very beautiful..

Geet saw one more set and a small set of tat dress: Maan why u brought two dress in same colour, or they pack it by mistake, omg they even billed it

Anni saw two dress and a small one, they know te small one for Ayesha, Anni look at Ayesha who was giggling , at once got it, it was for Geet, she chuckled

Ayesha kissed her maa, Geet raised her eyesbrows : why tis buttering

Ayesha took te dress : tis is for u

Geet eyes pop : wat, me no no

Ayesha kissed her cheeks, one by one : pls maa i lobe u naa, pls

Geet look at her face and te dress : but baby



Anni : Geet wear once naa, it will look beautiful for u more than me,

Dadi : yes Geet its so lovely, ok do one thing, u wear in front us, in km,

Geet : dadi see te rate, how can i wear in home..i will spoile it..pouting her lips

Maan was watching them, he chuckled inwardly seeing Geet ki reaction for te dress, he expect tis..but wen she said abt rate, he didt like it..he glare at her, Geet saw him and know wat he is thinking and showed her puppy face

Ayesha : maa pls

Geet kiss her cheeks : ok, how can i deny wat my kutty brought for me something for first time, but only wen we are alone ok..

Ayesha : hmm yippee, she was jumping in joy thinking her maa will wear wat she got it

Geet : ok ok,

Anni : wow Geet , we will do one thing , we three will wear in on te same day and will take a pic

Geet : hmm, but one more set is missing

Anni got confuse : one more for whom

Geet chuckled : for whom, for our lovely sexy dadi

Dadi : chup besharam

Geet : Maan why u didt get one for dadi



Maan : no problem, i will order one, then he realize wat he said in a flow, but he sighed thinking none notice..but all notice but they dont want to make him to feel awk

Geet : ok Dadi we will order

Dadi smiled : Geet naughty girl

All giggled , Maan was watching everyone, how happy they were..he was lost in them..Geet saw him and know wat he is thinking..she smile : Kallulimangan

Ayesha gave them cake box, Geet : tis is my kutty..they all had cake

All had dinner, As Geet was ill, Ayesha was snuggling to Maan, he fed her , he carried her to his room..Dadi decide to sleep with Geet..before he enters to his room, Geet pulled him and kiss on his cheeks ,

Geet : I l u

Maan glared at her, Ayesha closing her mouth giggling seeing her maa kissing her paa, Geet abt to move, but again kiss on his other cheeks

Geet : thanku Maan for ur card and rush to her room

Maan stood still thinking wat had happen just now..Ayesha kiss his nose, Maan saw her and took her to his room

Morning,

Maan decide to go to gym..he was feeling free after yesterday being with Ayesha and they shopping..he have came to know his baby ki likes... while going to gym, he saw Geet room, he want to see her once.. he know dadi wont be there, he peep inside te room and saw Geet is sleeping , he sat next to her, caressing her hair..he want to hug her, he remember she hugged him first time in office, he smile




Maan holding her hand : Geet , why tis distance between us, wat made u to fall for me..we are enjoying our friendship but tis love came and blocked everything between us, now we are living like a strangers.. why Geet, why u making everything complicate between us..we cant be friends again, I want my friend back to me who will fight with me and make me Maan just her Maan, Geet can we get our old days back..

Geet stir : Maan

Maan gasp thinking she woke up, but got relief she is sleeping and calling his name, in her sleep too she recognizing his touch..his gaze went her hand where she is holding some thing

Maan (st): pagali

Slowly he removed her hand and took te frame and shock to see , she was hugging his phote..he don't know wat to say , he saw her, he felt overwhelmed with her unconditional love for him, which he cant give her back..sighing he kept te photo frame on te table, then he notice, she have placed few more photes on te side table..some with her family ,


( THANKU GEET DEEWANI)

He got up to pull te curtains to see her room, at once te light pass thru her room..he was frozen to see, her full room was decorated with his pics, from childhood to present..he cant believe his eyes, he himself could have not have some pics, but she have his all collections..some with dadi, Ayesha , anni and her family..and most probably he hate to see tat stupid hero Gurmeet..he clenched his fist..



He went near, a pic where he is smiling..a small smile crept on his lips..He thought wen he smiled like tis..he stood still , wondering from where she got all tis pics, which even he dose't have...he know she loves him crazily but tis much, he didt imagine..he is blessed to have his angel but he cant give her anything other than his bitter past..no he cant spoil her life..she have to cum out of her illusion which wont cum true ...hge felt suffcation being there, .sighing, giving a glance to Geet and went to his gym..

KC

Maan left to office as he have some imp video conference...Geet took two days leave as she is not well..he sat on his chair , thinking he will be in peace without Geet and her nautankis..he can now work without any disturbance..he open his lappy and got shock to see Geet's pics as his screen saver..he closed his eyes thinking who did it , he gritted his teeth : Geet..



He was working in his cabin, he turn to take te file and his gaze went to next cabin and it was empty.. he was staring at Geet's cabin.. his heart miss Geet , he felt some thing empty today..suddenly he saw Geet is sitting and winking at him..he got shock and again look at her but she was not there..he chilled himself thinking he is day dreaming..

Maan : concentrate Maan, he heard knock on his door, straighten himself , cum in

Tasha came to get sign : gm sir I need sign in tis file



Maan saw Geet was standing behind tasha and winking at him, he got angry

Maan : why u came to office, u wont listen to anyone and will fall any problem



Tasha look here and there thinking whom he is talking and again called him : sir wat happen

Maan trance broke hearing Tasha voice and look at her and composed himself

Tasha : sir wat happen

Maan : nothing why u standing on my head

Tasha : sir sign

Maan : leave it here I will sign later

Tasha : ok sir and she left

Maan loosened his tie and lean on his chair : wat happen Maan, u have to be happy thinking Geet is not here to disturb u, but u losing ur focus, he want to avoid her and now wen she is not there he felt he missed some thing without knowing he got addicted to her nautankis..

Peon came and give him coffee, he took it and sipped ,at once he puked glaring at Peon

Maan :wat is tis

Peon : coffee sir

Maan :u cant make a coffee , then why u working here, take tis and bring a nice coffee

Peon took and went out murmuring : he was drinking tis coffee for these many years, now suddenly wat happen to him



Maan want to concentrate on his work, but to his bad luck two meetings postponed , making him to stay in kc..he was thinking abt Geet, how is she, he took te phone to call her, but kept it thinking wat he will talk with her and Geet will make it a big issue,,damn it why its so complicated..everything was smooth between them, they shared each and everything between them, but suddenly tis love between them and spoiled they friendship, I cant even ask how is she..wat to do

Shasha knock and enter : hello mk

Maan : hmm

Shasha : Mk I want to talk abt Rathod project

Maan : hmm say

Shasha : why cant Geet do te presentation

Maan was shock : Geet

Shasha : yes Mk, Geet..she too will gain knowledge till how long she will be trainee

Maan : hmm but



Shasha : yes mk we will give a chance, then she will get resposnibilti, but swallow her words wen Maan glared at her, I mean she will learn things so

Maan : hmm ok inform her abt te presentation,

Shasha : sure

Maan : I don't want any mistake..i want u to recheck before te meeting

Shasha : yes MK, and left with a smirk

Maan wat ever he try , Geet presence came in front of him, so he decide to go home for lunch..yes im going for lunch, why I should I fear to go to my own home..but his inner heart want to see his Geet (buddhu singh khurana)

Km

Geet felt bored as Anni went to col and Dadi had some work in her trust,she left with Ayesha as Geet is not well..she cant look after her..so now Geet is all alone in whole mansion..she was roaming te mansion, she saw Prithiv standing there

Geet : bhai u didt go with Dadi

Prithiv : Raghav is there with her

Geet : then for Maan

Prithiv : don't worry baby he have others,and waise he don't need anyone, he himself is enough, one man army



Geet blushed : bhai

Prithiv smiles : how r u

Geet : fine bhai, she thought, bhai I need help, pls

Prithiv : pls don't say pls, u just order me

Geet : no no its not order , it's a request

Prithiv : hmm say baby

Geet : wait bhai I will cum , she rush to her room and came with a phote,and give to prithiv

Prithiv got confused to see a dog pics : baby



Geet : his name is dextar, I want u to find him bhai, Prithiv saw her, I know u are army officer and bg of Msk, but im asking u to find a dog naa, sory but I don't know how to search dextar

Prithiv : no baby , its not like tat, I will find him

Geet : how long u wil take, atleast 20 days

Prithiv smiles and node no, Geet face fell low

Prithiv smiles : only 3 days u will get every details abt him

Geet was happy to hear tis : omg thanku bhai thanku so much, she went inside and came out and give him dairy milk chocolate..prithiv raised his eye brows



Geet : if I was happy naa I will give dairy milk who made me happy ( nalini's style of givimg chocolate) , and after u bring dextar naa I will give u big wala treat, not like ur kadoos boss but upto my level

Prithiv smiles : no need for all tis baby, its my duty

Geet : for ur sister also u will say abt duty

Prithiv look at her and both smiled..











PRECAP : MAANEET LUNCH

NEXT PART: 95, PG- 25












Edited by Desigirls12 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#92
awesome part...maan had fun with ayesha in mall and ayesha bought dresses for everyone...maan missing geet in office and imagining her...geet alone in home and maan coming for lunch hayyeee it will be gonna be so much fun...geet told prithvi to found about dexter and gave him chocolate too well this our geet oops not our but maan's geet...precap is lovely
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome part maan missing geet and with aysha he was happy to do the shopping
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Awesome update. Maan going shopping with Ayesha was great.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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maan feeling geet love but his past stopping him
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nice part ayesha purchasd lots of gifts 4 her maa daadi nd annie😃
ayesha said dat her gurmeet gave card 2 drashti in serial nd maan startd 2 curse geet🤣
daadi is also smitten by gurti fever😆😆
maan is missng geet badly at office👍🏼
nw geet hv startd mission findng dexter 👏
waitng 4 d nxt part 4 maaneet's lunch dat too alone😉
Edited by christipie - 10 years ago
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wonderful part...Ayesha bought lots of gifts for everyone .maan still wish their old days should be back...now when geet was not in kc he missed her a lot...
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#98
Wow wow wow. This is simply superb.
I really loved the ayesha and maan part.the girl is really cute.
maan was missing geet in the office.
and this sasha 😡 what is she upto?
geet asked prithvi to search dextar. Loved their sister brother bond.
I just hope maan realises geet's love atleast now.
Last but not the least. thank you for giving such fast and superb parts.thank you and keep rocking.
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msk for shopping that is a wonder
that too with ayeasha
ayesha is so happy to come out with her papa for first time
she is enjoying her time with maan
n maan too taking pics of ayesha
he can see the change in her n what he missed all these days
giving time to her
he bought everything that ayesha loved
from toys to dresses
there too he can see geets antics in ayesha
n ayesha buying gifts for all
specially card n when ayesha said budhu..lolz i m laughing
only she was left to call him so
n she too called him budhu n explaining him how gc gv card to dd
lolz..maan is j..geet has made his daughter to dadi crazy on them
ayesha buying all white dresses as instructed by geet..
all surprised to see maan back with so much shopping bags..
ye geet bhi na..again ilu to maan n kissing him
maan checking geet n thinking how love came between their friendship
he found her crazy love
his pics all around her
even in off he couldnt sit peacefully without thinking geet
he dreams her everywhre
tasha got taunts unwantedly :P
n sasha what is she planning now..
geet is sick how will she do presentation
maan want 2 know about geets health
now going home..
wow..lunch with geet..
geet asking bg to find maans lost dog dexture..lolz..
nice part
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Posted: 10 years ago
fabulous update dear
I think from last 4-5 parts i am smiling non- stop reading this
not able to control lovely
thanks for making me forget my pain

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