OS: Non Jodi : 'Falling into your Gravity' - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
#51
di.. i am telling truth the moment i read actor n lawyer.. i thought its non jodi. so take liberty.. for actor our pyare jijaaji and in lawyer place aap.. dil khush ho guya mera di.. lovely OS. do premiyo k na milney se sansasr adhura rehta hai.. hugs..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
nice os (Y)
abhimanyu n avantika <3
luv u :-)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
Aye Haye Khushi...

Kya one shot likha hai yaar.. padhke dil garde garden ho gaya...!!

Abhimanyu and Avantika...dono hi naam mujhe bade pasand aaye... And dono ke characters bhi...!!!

Kya pagal hai yaar dono... sahi kaha hai kisi ne... Raam milaye jodi.😆 Ye dono sach me iske classic example hai. Pehle nahi dekhti..fir dekhti hai. Fir uchalti hai par nahi ghurti hai... Par arey... wo to ghur hi sakta hai.. jiske kadmon me sara jahan hai uspe kaisi pabandi... 😛 SO wo to ghurega..

And Sir.. Aur number exchange... bike ride... sab kuch kitna lovey dovey tha... kitne din ho gaye the aisa ek light hearted fic ya OS nahi padha tha... Aur wo bhi maine isay exams ke pehle padha tha. Padhke mind fresh ho gaya...!!! 😳

Ab samjhi kahe sharma rahi thi tu... Par mai to has rahi thi. Kyunki mai yahan tujhe aur jijaji ko imagine kar rahi thi. Ya tu chahe to Bhaiya aur Bhabhi bhi bula sakti hun. *No flirting* I know. Mai vada nibhaungi.😆 Dekh mai kitni achhi bachhi hun.

Kya roti hai Avantika yaar... u sure kahin badh nahi aayi? India ki topography to change nahi hui na...???😲 Zara ek nazar dauda lena. Wo kya hai na, ab Avantika teri upaj hai to ye zimmedari bhi teri hai...!!!

Areyyy wah... Abhi ne propose bhi kar diya... aur ye Avantika fir bhi roti hai???😆

Ye lo... yahan pura ka pura ABhi maujud hai aur iss pagal ladki ko jacket chahiye .😆 Arey raat wala formula apply kar Avantika... Abhi ko apna comforter, blanket, jacket sab bana le. 😛

Mast story thi Khushi. keep writing such one shots.

Lots of Love
Deba😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
Its too beautiful di! i imagined murat in this story!
I really loved it,do continue with ur ff's!!
sorry for being late

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