Sandhir OS: Destiny

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Vanii

@-Ms.Rocker-

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Hey Besharam sis.. 🤣
How I missed reading your works mann! Finally you are here.. :**

This was awesome! :)
You are the best 'angst' writer I have ever come across Pari, believe me! My eyes only want to water out after reading your works. Somewhere, deep down they touch me and when they do I cannot just erase it. I keep thinking about what you write for sometime after reading it. You are that good. :*
I so envy you.

This was beautiful. It was sad but made perfect sense.
Your works never fail to remind me that life is not rainbows and colors always. x(
Your works depict angst perfectly. :) I love them.

This was one wonderful OS again. I loved it. :*

I love you.. :*
Oh yes, I miss you too! :'(

- Vanii ^_^

Edited by -Ms.Rocker- - 11 years ago

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DreamAchiever9

@DreamAchiever9

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

" Sometimes you have to wonder why destiny
even allowed some people to meet in the
first place, when they had no hope in
heaven or Earth to be together in the first
place ".. loved these lines...
I always adore ur writtings... lovely OS... Fab writting..

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Priya sharma

@priya1101

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Hey Rasmalai.🤗
Loved the drabble duhling,it's beautiful.😳
I must say,your works are like magnet and we readers get attracted to your lovely writings.We always look forward to read more and more works from you.It's always a treat to read them.😃
Everything is written beautifully,Sanyu's feelings,she smelling the mehandi for the nth time,but it never gave her that happiness and we say na "sukoon",which she feels whenever she smells her grease filled hands.Randhir entering through the window and she unable to meet his eyes,which hold all emotions together.Then that tool kit gifting part and Sanyu's note,her dream of him,"kissing her and bidding her goodbye...was emotional."
Last mein joh lines,likha hain,they added perfection to a rather Perfect drabble.
All in all,it's Perfect.You really create magic with words.

Infinite Love.
Priya.

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SanDhiraddict

@SanDhiraddict

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Why Pari Why? Why did you do this to me? I hate tears re...and you made me sad and left with pain in my heart. (No don't rush I don't need medical attention right now specially from a would be doctor who writes angst to avoid biochemistry. BTW did I tell you I teach biochemistry to some future biochemistry haters?)

Angst is not my genre because it is too close to life and through reading I try to escape to Utopia...but somehow I feel attached to angst. I relate with those stories as I am pathetic at enjoying life as it comes. So I was about to ignore (as suggested by you in the PM) it the moment I saw you are back to angst. Then again basic human nature hit me. Run to the things we hate, fear, loath, disgust (too strong words? IDK); to peep through the window which screens something we avoid opening door to. So I finally read it...and I am glad I read.

It is beautifully written. So loved it. Destiny...is the word decides for us most of the time when we particularly against it. (Well when it decides for us we seldom give credit 😛 ). Whatever we do we probably actually cannot avoid our destiny. If we think we changed it ...the change was actually written in our destiny. I really wished not to like a sad ending but your wonderful writing forced me to like it. Loved it.