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Manisha Bhardwaj

@Rockingbhardwaj

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

hey ds is somthing really different...
loved it..
first love of srp n last sight love of ss..
emotional..
thanks 4 d pm

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JensenVruShan

@JensenVruShan

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

A different and interesting concept.

Well written 👍🏼

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Nishi

@.nerfherder

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

wow sakshi..quite a different concept and REALLY well written..
i hate these killer dads like hell -_-
love at first sight for sharon..nice..
and the way you ended this OS sakshi..awesome!
thanks for the PM

keep writing.. :)

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prateek

@prateek.007

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Gazab..Seriously it was different and little bit filmy background like dad with guns n all..But amazing writing,It was different experience as a reader to read such unique plot..Well done dear..Keep it up

Thanx for PM

Prateek

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Okay this OS was magical, different, unique, well conceptualized and well written.
And above all it was about swaron.
Loved it. The way the storu wad written. And I truly enjoyed it as a reader.
Thanks for the PM.
Do write more.

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anandita

@blooming_angel

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

can i say i love too miss sexy..!!🤗
ohh man sakshi..it was outstanding..!!
standing ovation to my sweetheart..!!
i miss u and ur OS see..mera padhne ka man hua..and i read it..!!
u made my day..oops no my night..!!
its was beautiful behna..superb..!! commendable..standing ovation..!!
no word can describe it..!!
every word of it had the essence of love and beauty..!!
a work beyond appreciation..!!
pure and simple just the way our swaron is..!!😳❤️
sacchi mein toh dil de dawa tere naal..!!
sakshi my sweet naughty sister all i wanna say is seriously u made me cry..!!
made me feel so good..!!
keep writing..!!
love you for this..!!
time mila toh zaroor padungi..!! ek ek pm hai mere paas..:P

Edited by Princess_anny - 11 years ago