ARSHI TS: Game Of Fate epilogue pg 21 27/8 - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
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W O N D E R F U L
thanks.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: Aasmaali

Superb
Loved it...
Sorry for not commenting on early updates...
Loved it...

No worries buddy!.
Thanks for commenting anyway.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
Not really, I guess.
It's just that am blank for the moment.
An epilogue would follow pretty soon..😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#94
such a fantastic two shot..
so heart touching..
while reading this TS i had tears in my eyes..
very well written..loved it..!!❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#95
Fabulous two shot.
It ws vry intrstin nd heart touchin.
Luvd it thoroughly.
Anjali ws a sucha bitch to accuse Khushi for being characterless.
If nt abt her fren she shud atleast hav thought abt her brother who loved Khushi be4 saying thse shit.
Poor Arnav. I did feel for him after Khushi ws gone.
That little soul hd been all alone.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#96
The second part ws really fantastic. The way u proceeded the story ws beautiful. So he had send a msg to Khushi that night. Well he ws rite wid his wrds. He is the only one fr Khushi. Hmm Shruti ws just a show to the world. I ws worried when i read abt her bt i knew Arnav nd Khushi wud be together at the end.
Aha! So anjili fell for a guy younger to her too nd ws guilty when she met Khushi. Well well she must be happy Khushi didn't do the same thing like she did years back.
She had been such a witch to separate them both. No matter she tried to get to her later bt she ws nobody to accuse her on he first place.
Arnav ws awestruck when he saw Khushi. I get wat exactly he ws feeling then.
Aww my poor guy ws hurt when Khushi stopped him from saying "his first love" and said "his di's friend". But Khushi ws rite on her place too.
Aah so he never got married. Bingo! That's it girl. That shws how much you love this guy.
The confession and everything ws just beautiful.
Hats off girl. That ws hell of a TS.
Enjoyed it totally.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thank you for re-opening it 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#98
awesum 1
luvd it
arnav's thinking ws rite. y shud always da boys b elder dan grls?
oh shit anjali said v. bad thngs😔
khushi went?😭 oh baby they bth r in pain
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Posted: 11 years ago
#99
wow! tat ws long bt a v. gr8 read
luvd it
so anjili is guilty for wat all she did nd said. well how's tat gonna hlp anyway?
bt they met again, sorted out the diff nd r together now 👏


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Posted: 11 years ago


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