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Posted: 10 years ago

Part - 33

Geet joins the wedding party...

Maan takes her to Annie's room...

Annie is getting ready...

Annie is surprised to see Geet...

Annie: tum aagayi?

Annie removes the pallu and looks at Geet...

Geet looks like so stunning...even Annie couldn't take her eyes off Geet...

Toh ab patha chala ki bhai kaise fida ho gaye?
Annie is so proud of her bhai's choice...MSK haina, he will never settle for anything less than the best...
Annie keeps admiring Geet...but MSK is worried...kahin nazar lag gayi toh?
Maan warns her...

Maan: Annie

Annie: bhai, mein bas pallu teek kar rahi thi

Annie replaces it ...Maan warns both of them to be careful and he leaves to welcome the guest...

He doesn't want Geet to be seen anywhere near Maan for that will invite unwanted attentions...
Maan: Annie, jaldhi neeche aao, mein chaltha hoon

Annie: Geet, tum toh aaj bahut sundar lagthi ho

Geet keeps quiet...

Annie: hare, tum kuch bolthi kyun nahi?

Geet: sshhh, officer MSK ka order hai

Geet signals as if to zip her mouth...

Annie couldn't control laughing...

Annie: toh tummare liye bhi officer ho gaye hai?

Geet: haan, CCO

Annie: what? Aaise kaunsa post hai?

Geet: chief commanding officer, jab dekho order karthe rehthe hai, ye mat karo, woh mat karo, aaj hi nahi jab se jaanthi hoon tab se yahi hotha

Geet remembers her encounters with Maan, at the gym practice, at the college, at the apartments...

Annie: meinne suna bhai Sam ke bodyguard the, par lagtha hai tera hi bodyguard hai

So he was protecting her then too...Geet hi samaj nahi payi?

Dadi comes...

Dadi: Annie bete, ab tak tayaar nahi hue aap? Jaldhi kijiye, sab intrezaar kar rahe hai, Dulhe raja toh bechain ho rahe hai aapke darshan ke liye

Annie: what? ye Arjun ko kya ho gaya?
Geet: sshhh Annie, aaj shadhi haina?
Annie: toh kya? mujhe kuch nahi hua?
Dadi: kyunke aap MSK ke bahen hai, tum donno toh bahut alag ho
Geet: haan, ye toh aap ne sahi kaha Dadima
Geet then realizes that she shouldn't have called her Dadi...
Geet looks at Dadi's reactions...dadi is happy to hear that...so she has also accepted Geet...
kyun nahi? jab se Geet aayi hai ye bhai aur bahen toh dadi ko hi bhool gaye haina? donno toh Geet ke seva mein busy rehthe haina?
aur Dadi ko bhi Geet pe taras aagayi...bechari toh apne Annie ke tarah hi hai, aur usske family ne bhi ussko chod diya...
dadi smiles and Geet is relieved...
dadi: ab tum donno batein karke dher mat karo, jaldhi aao
Annie: ji Dadi, bas ho gaya, chalein

Dadi: haan, chaliye

Dadi takes Annie down...Geet follows...

Arjun is waiting for Annie...

Annie: Arjun

Annie calls him...actually shouts...

Geet: Annie, thoda toh sharam karo, aaj tum dulhan ho

Annie: ek minute, mein abhi aathi hoon

Geet: Annie rukho

Annie goes to meet Arjun...

Arjun is embarrassed...

Annie: Arjun, mein kaise lagthi hoon?

Arjun: Anvesha, tum yaahn kya kar rahi ho? jao, sab humme hi dekh rahe hai

Annei: ye toh Dulhan ki tarah sharmatha hai

Geet: Annie, chalo, panditji bhula rahe hai

Annie holds Arjun's hand and asks him to come along...

Annie: Arjun chalo, panditji bhula rahe hai

Arjun: Anvesha, chodo mujhe, tum pehle jao

Annie: hare, tummare bina mein kaise shadhi kar sakthi? Tum aao mere saath

Geet: Annie, woh badh mein aayenge, tum chalo

Annie: this is crazy, sab mujhe aaise kyun dekh rahe hai? pehle kabhi dekha nahi hai kya?

Geet: annie, thode dher chup nahi reh sakthi?

Maan thinks...ye tum keh rahi ho?

Geet drags her to the mandap...

Dadi is restless...ye donno wahan kya kar rahe hai?

Dadi: Annie bete, beitiye

Panditji calls Arjun...

And he starts the rituals...

Maan too comes to the stage...

Geet ke peeche hi kada hai...

He can't leave her alone...

Shadhi ho jaathi...Geet is relieved...

She was praying to babaji ki aaj koi gadbad nahi ...

Guests start to come on stage and wish the couple...

Geet goes and sits in a corner...

Adi calls...

Maan: Adi, mein thoda busy hoon, badh mein call akro

Adi: lekhin sir, ye bahut urgent hai, Geet kahan hai?

Maan: kyun? Kya hua?

Adi: Rahul sir Mumbai mein hi hai

Maan: what? Meinne ussko shadhi mein bhi invite nahi kiya hai, yahan kaise?

Adi: sir, he is on duty

Maan: I know, so he has come for Geet

Adi: haan sir

Maan: teek hai Adi, keep an eye on him

Adi: sir, woh KM hi aarahe hai

Maan: what? Are you sure?

Adi: yes sir

Maan: teek hai, I'll take care

Maan looks for Geet...

He can't find her in the crowd...

Maan starts searching her...

And he finds her sitting alone ...

Maan: Geet, tumme yaad haina ki meinne kya kaha?

Geet adjusts her pallu...

Maan: thoda problem ho gaya, tum kahin mat jao, yahi raho sab ke beech, kuch bhi ho tum yahan se hilna bhi nahi, samji tum? Aur ek sabt bhi nahi, kuch bhi ho tum bas dekhthi raho aur pretend to be some guest, mein sab sambaloonga, tum bas chup chap kade raho, zyada hoshiar banne ki koshish mat karna

Geet: kya hua?

Maan: chup...bilkul chup...tumne suna nahi keinne kya kaha? Ab chup chap yahi beito, mein abhi aatha hoon

Maan hurries to the entrance...

Rahul just enters with his colleagues...

Maan: welcome, Rahul

Rahul: hum yahan shadhi attend karne nahi aaye hai

Maan: I know

Rahul: where's that girl?

Maan: kaun?

Rahul: don't act too smart, I know, she is here

Maan: ye shadhi ka ghar hai, you can come later

Rahul: Maan, you know the job better, come on, search the floor

Maan: Rahul, stop this, right now

Rahul: I have my orders, you don't stand in my way

Maan: you can't do this

Rahul: excuse me ladies and gentlemen, sorry for the inconvenience, but we have information that a culprit is hiding here, so please co-operate, come on, start searching, no one moves, that's an order

Dadi: Maan bete, ye sab kya hai?

Rahul: sorry Dadima, aapke pothe ne ek criminal ko yahan chupake raka hai

Dadi: Maan bete, humne pehle hi kaha tha, ab dekho, kya ho raha hai?

Maan: Dadi, kuch nahi hoga, aap fikar mat kijiye

Maan tries to call his superior...

Geet ab aur chup nahi reh sakthi...she doesn't want to spoil the function...

This is Annie's shadhi...

She can't let them destroy it...

She comes forward...

Geet: mein yahan hoon, aap log rukh jao, mei hoon Geeet, Geeet Handa

Maan: Geet, ye tum kya kar rahi ho?

Ye ladhki bhi na? kabhi bhi mere baaat ko nahi sunthi...aaj kaise sunegi?

Geet: haan, mein hi Geet hoon

Rahul: arrest her

They rush towards her...

Geet didn't expect this...

She runs towards Maan...

She goes and hugs him...

Geet: mujhe bachao, mujhe bahut dar lagtha hai, meinne kuch nahi kiya, mein inkke saath nahi jaoongi, mujeh bachao

Maan: Geet, gabrao mat, tumme kuch nahi hoga, mein hoona

Geet: please, mujhe bachao, mera koi nahi hai, mujhe bahut dar lagtha hai

Maan: Geet, daro mat, ye log tumme kuch nahi kar sakthe

Rahul: toh, Ms.Geet handa, chalein?

Rahul shows the hand cuff...

He grabs her hand and tries to take her with him...

Geet: nahi...Maaan

Edited by ghsp2fan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
hey dear


awesome update !!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏


annie and geet convo is cute 😛


haww that ba****d rahul came 😡


wonder what will happen


love


uma...🤗
Edited by umamaaneet - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update.. wht will happen next.. how will maan save geet?
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Posted: 10 years ago
very nice update
pagal geet never listen maan n landed in danger
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice part. ...annie and arjun marrige done...rahul came and arrest geet...
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Posted: 10 years ago
oh no abb kya hoga...

scary update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Part - 34

Maan: Rahul, stop this, she'll come, don't force her

Maan: you keep away from this, now this is my case

Maan: what?

Rahul: tumne suna nahi? You are out of this case, and also under suspension, toh behther yahi hoga ki tum humme apna kaam karne do

Geet: Maan, ab kya hoga? Kaun mujhe bachayega?

Rahul: koi nahi bacha saktha, ye tummara Maan Singh Khurana bhi kuch nahi kar saktha

Geet: Maaan

Maan: Rahul, rukh jao

Maan stops him...

Rahul: tum mera time kyun waste kar rahe ho? you know very well that there is no escape for this girl

Maan: don't you dare touch her, take off your hands, she will come with you, she is not running away

Maan stares...Rahul lets off her hand...

Maan: just give me 5 mins

Rahul: don't try to fool me

Maan: no no, you can take her, but just give me 5 mins

Rahul: Ok, yaad rakho ki this place is sealed

Maan: I know, Geet aao mere saath

Maan Geet ke haath pakadke shadhi ki mandap lekhe jaatha...

Geet silently follows him...

Maan: panditji, shuru kijiye

Panditji : lekhin shadhi toh ho gayi hai

Maan: ye hummara shadhi hai, mein Geet ko shadhi karna chahtha hoon, abhi, jaldhi kijiye, hummare paas sirf 5 min hai

Panditji is confused...Maan stares...

Panditji takes his place immediately...he starts the rituals...

Annie is very happy...dadi is speechless...

Annie runs to tie the knot...she ties Geet's pallu with Maan's shawl...

Geet is confused but she is helpless...she never dreamt of a wedding like this...

But she has got her prince charming, then why wait?

Maan holds Geet's hands and starts walking around the agni...

Saath pheron ke saath Maan also vows to prove Geet's innocence and get her out of trouble...

Maan Geet ke maang bartha...shadhi ho jaathi...

Everyone is stunned including Geet and Dadi...

Only Annie was expecting this sooner or later...she is so happy for Geet...

She thinks Geet needed this recognition, at this desperate hour she was all alone, on her own, not knowing what to do, with her family disowning her, she needed a family, a backup so that she can confidently face the trials...and no one knows that better than Maan...

Annie is very proud of her bhai...

Geet keeps looking at Maan and Rahul...

She is still a little afraid...she is hiding behind Maan and trying to be normal...

Rahul: Maan, 5 mins up

Maan: you can take her now...Geet is shocked...

Geet keeps staring Maan...

Maan: Geet, jao, tum ab Geet nahi, Geet Maan Singh Khurana ho, ab dekhtha hoon ki tumme kaun kya kar saktha?

Maan stares Rahul...rahul is also shocked...and is a little nervous...

Geet is now Maan's wife...yes, she is the wife of the MSK, the most honest and efficient officer in the department...even Rahul had to give her respect and should be very carefull that he doesn't make amy mistake...for he knows Maan very well...he will finish Rahul if he comes about to know about any wrong doing...now Geet is not the only one scared ...she has got company...but Rahul had to pretend that this won't change anything...

Maan: Geet, tumme gabrane ki koi zaroorat nahi, mein tere saath hoon, Maan Singh Khurana tere saath hai...

Maan deliberately raises his voice, still staring Rahul...as if to warn him...and Maan has already send the signals...Rahul is not that dumb...

Rahul comes...and stops at a distance...he takes out the hand cuffs...hands it over to the sub-ordinate...that poor guy looks at Maan and after Maan nods his head he goes ahead...

Rahul: tum kuch bhi karo, Geet bach nahi sakthi

Geet's face trun pale again...this Rahul is always like this...

Maan: Geet, daro mat, ab jao, mein badh mein aake tumme miltha hoon

Maan looks at the sub-ordinate and he salutes him...

Rahul is very angry...he stares him...but that guy is not afraid of Rahul...he knows Maan very well...

Sub: Maan sir, aap ko chintha karne ki koi zaroorat nahi, hum sab hai aapke saath, aur m'am aap sab ko nahi jaanthe, ab toh samjo ki bagwan hi aapke saath hai

Geet is a little confident now...she walks with that guy...

Rahul follows them at a distance...

Maan is a little relieved now...

Maan goes and speaks with his superiors...he tries to get bail for Geet...

But it's already 5 pm and Geet had to stay behind the bars that night...

Maan goes to see her...he feels guilty to face her...

She would be waiting for him to come and take her home...

But Maan couldn't even get her bail...he is angry with himself...

Geet ko lagtha hai ki Maan ussko lene aaya hai...

She is very happy to see Maan...

Geet: Maan, aap aagaye, jaldhi mujhe yahan se lekhe jao, mujhe bahut dar lagtha hai, mujhe yahan nahi rehna, aur dekho yahan ka machar kitne mote hai

Maan ko patha nahi issko kya jawaab de...

She doesn't know the seriousness yet...she is still a child...

Does she even know that she is married to him and she is his wife...

Maan's eyes are wet but he holds back his tears, Geet will get even more scared...

Maan: sorry Geet

Geet is surprised...ye sorry kisske liye hai?

Geet se shadhi karne ke liye ya ussko jail bhejne ke liye...

Par iss mein Maan ki koi galthi nahi, galthi toh Geet ka hi hai...

Aur Geet iss shadhi ko koi galthi nahi manthi...woh bhi babut kush hi hai...

Geet looks at him puzzled...kahin Maan iss shadhi ko ek galthi toh nahi samjtha?

Geet: Maaan

Maan: aaj bail nahi mila

Geet starts crying...

Maan: Geet, ro mat

Geet wouldn't listen to him...

Geet: aap bahut bhure ho, mujhe yahan akhele chodkke aap chain se nahi so sakthe, samje aap?

Maan is happy to get the gallies...

Maan smiles and tries to cheer her up...

Maan: toh tum abhi bhi mujhe sunathe rehthi ho?

Geet: aapko mazak soojtha? Aapko kya? mein hi pasgayi, iss char deewar ke andar, iss mote mote macharon ke saath, kal mujhe malaria ho jaatha toh?

Maan ko ab hasna hai ya rona?

Geet chahe kitne bhi koshish karein usska dar toh badthe hi jaatha hai...she can't hide her fear for her eyes tell the truth...so she is just trying to look away...

Maan: Geet, yahan deho

Geet looks into his eyes...Maan ka jaan hi nikhal jaatha Geet ko aaise haal mein dekh ke...

He moves forward and holds her hands...

Maan: nahi Geet, aaise nahi darthe

Geet is still shivering...

How much Maan wanted to hug her and console her, but this iron rods...

Maan reaches out to her face and cups her face...

Maan: Geet, darne ki koi zaroorat nahi, sirf aaj raat ki baat hai, mein kal subhe aake tumme lekhe jaatha hoon

Geet: Maan, mujhe chod ke mat jao

Maan: Geet, mein yahan nahi rukh saktha, pehle hi ye case bahut complicated hai, phir tummare liye aur mushkil ho jayega

Geet: Maan, mujhe bahut dar lagtha hai, kya mujhe zindagi bar yahi rehna hoga?

Maan: nahi Geet, jab tak ye Maan hai, tum ek din aur bhi andar nahi rahogi, samji tum

Geet: phir aap mujhe yahan se lekhe kyun nahi jaa sakthe?

Maan: Geet, samajne ki koshsish karo, dekho Geet, mujhe dekho

Maan lifts her chin...Maan looks into her eyes...Maneet eyelock...mahiii...

Geet gets back her confidence, Maan's eyes are fully loaded and Geet is just recharged...

Maan: tumme mujhoe barosa haina?

Geet: kudh se bhi zyada

Maan: toh suno, ye mera wada hai, tumme agle 12 gante ke andar bahar lekhe aaoonga, ye MSK ka wada hai

Geet: teek hai, lekhin aap bhool nahi jaooge na?

Maan stares...

Geet: nahi, aap apne kaam mein busy hokke mujhe bhool jaathe toh

Maan: budhu, yahi mera kaam hai

Geet: toh teek hai

Maan calls her closer...

Geet comes near and Maan kisses her forehead...

Geet is thrilled...she will sleep tight tonight...this is just her sleeping dose...haina?

Geet blushes...Maan has seen her cheeks turning red...now he is also happy...

She believes him so much...he has to make sure Geet gets bail somehow...

Maan is even more determined to get her out the next day...and he will do it for his Geet...

Maan calls the lady-guard...she is also a young girl...just joined duty...

Maan: Geet, ye tunnare paas hi honge, dekho, ye bhi tummare jaise hi hai

Geet looks at her...she is also an officer...Geet couldn't believe...

Maan: kya dekhthi ho? isske paas black belt hai

Geet: ye toh Darji ke paas bhi hai

Maan: Geet, karate ke black belt

Geet then thinks that she should also have took those lessons seriously...

Kya karein? Maan samne hotha toh koi bhi kaam teek se nahi hotha, haina?

Issiliye kehthe hai ladhkiyon ko bhi martial arts seekhna hai...

Geet: lekhin ye toh bahar hai

That girl smiles...

Maan: ye aaise hi hai, lekhin bahut darfok hai , zara isska dhyaan rakhna

Girl: yes sir

She salutes Maan...Geet is proud of her hubby...and she is a little brave now...

Kyun nahi? ab toh ye Geet Handa nahi, Geet Maan Singh khurana haina?

Geet self talk...:ab mujhe kyu darni hai? mein bhi ek badi officer ki biwi hoon, haina babaji?

Maan looks at her talking with her babaji and smiles...so she is back to herself now...Maan is relieved...

Maan: Geet, mujhpe barosa nahi hai kya? babaji se madat maang rahi ho?

Geet smiles and Maan could sleep peacefully tonight , he has also got his sleeping dose, haina babaji?

Part35

Edited by ghsp2fan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
me crazy



i thought i unresed it sorry dear!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😭


coming to update it was awesome 👏



soo cute and lovely maaneet convo 😛



now that rahul got mast jawab from MSK 😡 😆



no one dare to mess with his geet 😎



waiting for next !!!!!!!!!!!!


love


uma...



Edited by umamaaneet - 10 years ago
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33&34 updates...nice ones
Rahul came to arrest geet
Maan married geet
Ab woh GMSK bangayi...maan couldn't bail as it was evening

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just loved the update as usual!! good job!!👏

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