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Posted: 10 years ago
#71
Hello hie bye bye.. i was really bored between the four hospital wall ..staring at the ceiling all the time so wrote up some crap for you people..most of the typo's are fixed by my PC..even then if you find any ..don't forget to Ignore em..hope you guys will have a great time reading my update..Happi reading.. !!

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Ch2: Big Boss


[Pic Credit :To It's Owner.. i own nothing ...!!]

"Aah"
he wrenched in pain
"Dard ho rahi hai?"
she ask blowing on his wrist from which the blood was oozing out
"Haan"
"Kya zaroorat thi tuje beech mein tang aadaneki ?? me deal kar rahi thi right?"
Her tone sounded a mixture of angry yet concern
"Aur kya kartha..wo Aakram kahika kaise tumhara maazak uda raha tha...wo tumari mazak udaye aur mei chup rahu?? never..!!"
his words showed the true definition of possessiveness.
"Udayega tho udane do ..tume kya farak padtha hai?? tum bhi tho wahi karte ho.!!"
she said cleaning his wound with cotton and putting on the band aid
"mere aalava koi bhi tumari maza nahi uda sath.. !!"
possessiveness was in the air
"kyun copyright hai tumhara muje tang karneka..??"
she said in annoyed tone
"Haan..copy right hai mere tum per..!!!"
he said holding her wrist tightly
*Beep Beep*
His phone rang ..thats when the horrible reality hit him.
"Hello ..ya ..fine i will be there ..cia"
he hanged the call
~~****~~
" So,Mr.Abdullah .. i hope we are going to have great time making this project work..!!"
Mr.sheik said extending his hand for a handshake
"Yup surly we will.. right Rehan?"
Zain said giving in his hand for a hand shake and Rehan nodded in yes
"okay i think we should leave now..!!"
rehan said
"Fine then cu guys later ..!!'
the two bid adieu to Mr.sheik and left the conference hall ..As they left aaliya entered in from the other door
"I'm extermly sorry sir..actually wo junu ki school ki aaj first day thi. so i was "
her voice was cut off by his
"hey chillax aalo ..the deal is finalized and you don't need to worry alright ..?? i totally understand..!!"
he assured her
"Thanks for understanding sir"
she said giving him a smile.
"sir??sir mei kab se sir bangayi tumara liye?? sir nahi Ayan bolo..PA kya bangayi isska matalab ye nahi ki tu aapni bestie ko parai karde..!!!"
he faked angry
"Acha baba fine i'm sorry ..aagey aise nahi bolungi..!!"
she said making acute puppy face
"Acha fine i need to rush. but mene tuje uss company ki sare detail mail kardiya ek baar check kar okay ?"
"okay fine..!"
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Aaliya's POV
Oh gawd i should had check out the details ayaan had mail so stupid of me that with out check anything i'm here at khan industries to talk to em about the project issue i don't know who is who here and on which project we are going to discuss... i don't even have the slightest idea of what's gonna come up next .. i have been waiting for him since long ..and finally he give me permission to get in but before i could go into Mr.Khan's cabin.. i heard some one calling me
"Ms.Haider..Big boss wants see you ..!!"
Big boss? now who the hell is this big boss?? why does he wanna see me ..did i do anything wrong ??
"Me?"
i said nervously
"Yup..he is on the last floor waiting for you..!"
"Okay "
with that i moved toward the elevator ..got into it and pressed the top floor button ..just in few sec the elevator hit the last floor and i inched toward the door letting in toward that "BIG BOSS" 's cabin ..
"Excuse me sir"
i said knocking the door
" ya ..come in "
some know voice greeted me..which is pretty familiar to me ..it sounds like him ..no it can't be him ..no no .. with that scary feel i entered the cabin only to be faced his back ..he was standing there facing the wall ..
"hmm, may i know why did you called me here, sir?"
i finely mange to spit it out
" well nerdy .. i will explain ..but first take your seat "
he turned around and faced me..wait he looks like somebody i know ...oh no ..he is ..he is
no ...no ...no...this isn't happening .. this can't be him ..no this is just some wildest nightmare of mine..this can't be him ..it just not him..no..no... i was trying my hard to convince my self to believe that this is just some random hallucination i have ..(ya i have been having them a lot lately ) .. i almost dug my nails in to my palm to make sure that i wasn't hallucinating ..Damn this isn't my imagination! He is standing in front of me..he was actually there..that it his one glimpse made all those dried wound to freshen once.. the word he utter that horrible morning start ringing in my ears..with even the fainted flashback of that fateful morning ...!!!

"I Feel Like dirt ..."

"I hate you Aaliya Ghulam Haider.."

"Get out ..!!"

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I know i l know ye bohat hi boring aur utter crap wali update thi..kya karu yaar medicines ji is not letting me think more to make this more interestingly ...but pakka next update will be awesome..okay now as you guys know my rule..comments do ..updates lo...so do like and comment .. .it only takes a few seconds to like and a couple of minutes to comment...criticism and suggestions are most welcomed..!!
Love'
Renu ..❤️❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
#72
PM LIST:
Well i almost pm some 60+ people and hardly get 10-15 comments so i have deiced that i would not disturb those people who are not interested in my story thus i gonna make up a pm list ..so if you wanna get updates from me do like this post ..and your name will be added to the list ..!!!
Edited by ...Renu... - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#73
Res
. <_< can u c that?
No na?
Yeah. That was ur update.
Short.
Very short.
How do expect me to write a comment when the update was short?
Big boss??! 😆
I duno why, I found it funny.
And how did he know where Aliya was?
Don't say big boss ko sab pata hai.-.-
Chalo update this fast fast.
P.s- what happened to u? Why r u in the hospital?
P.p.s- I thought you were going to update YESTERDAY eve.
P.p.p.s- that duck's cute :P
Edited by arshipotterfan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#74
Woah! Its awesome.
Aawww! Aaliya ka mazak uda rhe toh, Zain ne- awww! 😳😳
I can't stop Awwing! Really...!!😆😆

Continue soon please!
Waiting for the next part.
Thanks a lot for the pm.

-Tanya.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#75
Hey Hey HEY I did nt understood the chap...😕
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Posted: 10 years ago
#76
OMG...😲😲
that was brilliant Renu👏👏
read both the parts in 1 go...😃
possessive Zain Abdullah
Zaya Together
"I HATE YOU AALIYA GHULAM HAIDER"??😲😲
yeh kya??😲😕
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77
So many p.s's I forgot to actually comment on ur work 😛
The scenes which I found cute-
"Haan ,copy rights hai mera tum pe" 😆
"MERi aaliya ko mere alava koi..
And this Ayan.
Pls make zain jealous. Pleaseplease.
Have I said to update fast?
Ok, and update lamba.
With yoyo'
P.s- Take care 😛
P.p.s- I cnt like that pm post,on9 through cell.
So pm me :)
-Sanika
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Posted: 10 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: Little_Johnny

Hey Hey HEY I did nt understood the chap...😕

i'm really extremely sorry .. that i couldn't give you a clear picture..and i'm really sad that as a writer i failed at it ..can you tel exactly what did you didn't understand .. i will try to elaborate it to you ..!!

Edited by ...Renu... - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: ...Renu...

i'm really extremely sorry .. that i couldn't give you a clear picture..and i'm really sad that as a writer i failed at it ..can you tel exactly what did you didn't understand .. i will try to elaborate it to you ..!!

momma! problem is wid formatting..
may be u shld use color codes..
different color for past and present
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Posted: 10 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: vinu127

momma! problem is wid formatting..

may be u shld use color codes..
different color for past and present

ohhhoo.. okay thanks for the suggestion bacha..will apply it from next chap..!!!

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