~TANDEM OF STORIES ~ COMPLETED! - Page 25

Originally posted by: sushie166

OMG...this was so awesome!!

The way they were fighting, god they are so adamant ,

no one wants to accept defeat..😆

So nicely written, I loved it

M so impressed with your vocabulary

The extended part was so cute...

his niece learnt speaking "I love you"...aww 😳

Great work both of you..

Keep writing!

Love

-Sushmita 😳

Originally posted by: Reminiscence

Randhir and his obvious ways. :')

And how justly you have penned it down!

LOL I can imagine Sanyukta's condition when the emu started beeping when Randhir came closer to her. So embarrassing xD

This was SO sweeet! :***

I loved this.

I really did! Ofcourse, I don't have to mention it with time and again that you two are two brilliant individuals on this forum and see what you have done together!

Wow.

<3

Originally posted by: ilovepyaar

I read them all and I loved it! Both of you ROCK! This was awesome. The passion, the desire, everything was really nicely penned! Can't wait to read more from both of you! <3

Originally posted by: Doppel-jayxx

Just read everything in one go
And You guys are so good!
I love, LOVE the ending so much :')
*can't stop smiling* XD

And I'm glad that this is the first thing I read today
Starting the day with a beautiful story x)

Originally posted by: .Mansi.

sorry for the late response..was not active on forums since many days..

COMING TO THE LAST TWO PARTS :)

Two beautiful stories <3

Beautiful from the core <3

Loved this whole work so much :)

Hats off to Soanli di and Preetika di..:)

Love both of you..:) <3

Originally posted by: -Ms.Rocker-

Res.

I hate you.

I am not first. x( (how is that my fault) 😆

Unress. Sorry for being late! :( its okey xD

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This was beautiful Preeti! :D I loved it. thank u ! xD

AM I DEAD' She wondered and tried to move her left hand...

What imagination this girl's got? Dead? 🤣 Haha. Sanyu bhi na! xP (ikr...shes maad) :P

'WHAT COULD RANDHIR BE DOING RIGHT NOW' the first thing which crossed her mind...

'COULD HE STILL BE WITH HIS GIRLFRIEND ??' she pondered...

Now also she is thinking about him but she won't admit it! Ye ladki bhi na, actually both of them! Impossible they are!

How couldn't Randhir be with her? He would even if would cost him his life. That is my Randhir. :D He would never leave Sanyukta alone! :D

Bichaara, what not must he have gone through seeing her condition!

he was broken yaar!! </3

he was going to leave her😭

Even in the hospital bed she is angry about who is calling Randhir! God, this girl! xP

insecurities :P

Lastly, there debate which finally led to I LOVE YOU was soo awesomee!

I so loved it. thank u man! <3

You are a fab writer Preeti. It was beautiful and amazing. :) I loved every bit of it! :D

yu are fab tooo my love!!! <3

It would have been a longer comment but blame the electricity department for it! x( Dirty asses! :/ its totallly okey, you commented...means a lowt <3 :D

Keep writing and do PM me :) sure dear!

Love, lots of love,

Vanii ^_^ sonali and preeti<3 xD