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basket_101

@basket_101

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#831

Reserved :)

Just like with your other update, I've read this already.

But can't comment as of now

Should be up after midnight or by tomorrow :P

- Unres

Yea I know, super late 😆

Just caught up in some things. Realizing I need to get some applications done before classes start again :P

Anyyywaay, won't waste time with la side comments... So here's my comment pour part numero neuf (:

It was him being silly this time. Saying that to her, knowing it would only end up hurting him even more

Despite everything, there is no way he would be content hurting her

Ego is one of those things which can completely ruin a relationship. Sadly, it's the hardest thing to let go of. But I like the flaws that you've shown in their characters. It would be very easy to say that he felt terrible and apologized and all that, but I really admired how true you stayed to his character!

I enjoyed the kiss too, but that's a given by now 😆

Also really liked the guilt which settled in him after realizing what he put Vidushi through. It really wasn't fair, and I don't like that he did that. But at least he knows what he did was wrong. Idk if you will include it or not, but it would be nice to see a Randhir-Vidushi scene again where he sincerely apologizes and gets rid of this guilt. :P

That flashback 😲

Okay. Randhir agreed and said he would take care of her.

That is trust. I honestly feel Sanyukta is more at fault here.

He has trust in her, but since she has lied to him before, he can't trust her blindly.

Honestly, I don't blame him.

Especially after the DNA test...

Speaking of which, I don't understand how the hell the test was negative.

I am a logical person, and if that were to happen to me (obviously in a parallel universe where I'm a guy 😆), then I wouldn't believe Sanyu either.

The last bits... No comment.

It was beautifully written.

Although I hated how Sanyukta felt obligated to marry Parth, but I see her point.

I wish I could put into words my feelings when I read the part, but words betray me.

I know usually I have long comments on every bit, but I'm just spellbound right now.

You have no idea how well you've written this part! Not implying that your other parts suck though 😆

But this was exceptional!

I'm really enjoying the FF so far and am just waiting for the next update :3

Love youu! Muaah :*

🤗

Edited by basket_101 - 10 years ago

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@--Kkkhushiii--

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#832

Oh god this was just way too amazing of a chapter

Totally loved it & it was so emotional...but I'm happy that

finally they both vent their anger & frustration out on each other

which I think was really necessary cuz without venting their frustration

on each other, they will never be able to leave their past behind & move on

Loved the way u wrote & explained both their emotions

They both are right in their own way & vice versa

I really feel sorry for both of them & at the same time hate both of them

for ruining their own relationship with their own hands!!!

Something which could hve turned out to be a beautiful love story, turned

out to be such a disaster only cuz of their ego & insecurities

I hve seariously fallen in love with this story cuz it's so damn realistic

Plz update whenever u get tym :)

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Kaay

@-.serendipity.-

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#833

Just read through all nine chapters in one go and I must say that you are doing a phenomenal job. I love the way the you portray Randhir & Sanuykta's emotions. Keep up the brilliant work.

-- Kiret (:

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Karishma Sewani

@AnIndianWriter

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#834

hey girl, it was really awesome! Finally they confessed! But why has sanyu promised parth that she will be marrying him? This is strange! Parth knew that randhir and sanyukta loved each other, no matter what, they why this promise? Though sandhir were separate and they had given themselves to someone else, but then too? I just wish that parth takes his promise back, and let sanyukta go. I hope this will happen, sooner or later! Thanks a lot for pm'ing and updating! Now i can't wait to see what happens next after this confession! You really are weaving this story so well, i have no words! This is the first ff ever in my list of favourites on the IF! Whenever i log in to IF, I first always desire to read this ff! So it has touched me that deep in my heart, you can already see how deep this story affects me, mentally! Thanks again, for bringing this story into existence! You are a wonderful writer! Continue soon, keep writing, always! Love you lots! <3

P.S. - I know i am very late, but i hope you forgive me! Sorry! *puppy face*

Edited by karishmagsewani - 10 years ago

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Geeta singh

@sweetdesire

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#835

Hey Saify

Love the update

Love their confrontation

finally they confessed that they still love each other

but I am not liking any connection between Randhir and that Vidushi😡

very well written chapter

can't wait to read more

so do continue soon

Thanks for the PM
Take care

Geet

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peacenfun

@peacenfun

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#836

lovely update

v.emotional, real n amazing piece of writing

updt wen u can

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SanDhiraddict

@SanDhiraddict

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#837

Saffi...this is the best chapter so far. (I wrote the same for last chapter too but I don't know why it was not posted here. May be I had network issue then. But I am glad it was not posted as I had to scribe that now as IT is the best.)

The emotional ups and downs through the chapter is well narrated. It lurched and wrenched me. Loved this chapter so much.

I know it is not a fairytell romance but with true characters having flaws, guilt, ego, pain, love, misunderstanding, happiness...and that is why this one became close to my heart.

Update when you have time but sooner the better as always.

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Mansi Vatwani

@MansiVatwani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#838

Ufff...what should I say about u?U r 1 of the flawless writers that I have came across! I love every bit of ur writing and I will love on forever...Plzzz continue,will be waiting!
Love,
~Mansi~

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aarti002

@aarti002

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#839

Sorry 4 commentng so late..yrr I just luv da way u write, it becomes so easy to visualize the scenes in real ..update asap plzzz

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Pihu1596

@Pihu1596

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Posted: 10 years ago

#840

Hey Saffi,
I m in love with this fic.
I m in love with this fic.
I m in love with this fic.
I m in love with this fic.
I cn actually write this things a thousand times n still it won't convey how much I love it : *
I read all d chapters in 1 go today.
I just read d prologue long b4 n couldn't read d updates bcoz of my stupid internals :(
N my cell broke to top it off which took me ages to read updates.
BT 1st thing I did today was check all d updates n I was really happy to see 9 chps :)
Saffi,u seriously r a brilliant writer ...
I HV no words to say how much I admire ur works.
Though IK I don't comment frequently BT I HV always been a big fan of ur works.
I just love d way how u portray d pain,d suffering, d separation ,d bottled up torment in d broken souls of Sandhir so well!!!!!!!
Hats off :)
Totally love you n adore u : *
N 1 more thing I love abt ur fics is dat u actually show reality n not d fairytale romance.
Life is never a fairytale BT a dream which smtimes turn out to b nightmares n smtimes most beautiful n u pen down these emotions sooo well.
I m totally awestruck.
Keep writing n keep rocking!!!!
Love you loads

-Pihu :)

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