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Part - 30

That evening...

Geet sits in her room and is hearing the loud music palying at KM...

Shadhi ka ghar haina?

Lagtha hai ki sare guests aagaye...

Geet is puzzled at the happenings...

What is she doing here?

This is Maan's house, and it's his little sister's wedding...

She is troubling him too much...

But she is also left with no other option but to obey Maan...

She had messed up with her life and maybe Maan's too so much that it's very hard for her to make any further decisions...

She thinks about her family...

Whom she believed would be her biggest support at this point...

How she went to hoshiarpur with so much hope?

She thought that her family will save her from this, and they will understand her...

Who will know her better than her family?

They have seen her and raised her from childhood, but still they didn't trust her?

Kyun babaji? aakhir mere galthi bhi kya hai?

Galthi toh har koi se hotha hai, aur jab chote bache galthi karthe toh badein unko maaf karthe hai aur badhon ko hi unko sahi rastha dikhana haina?

Geet decides that there is no point thinking about them now...

She has to be strong and she has to handle it all alone? Is it so Geet?

Now also you are worng, you have someone so near and dear and still you won't accept the fact that he is here for you and you only...

Here comes our MSK...the saviour...

Maan brings her food...

Geet: aapko ye sab karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai

Maan: kya?

Geet: woh, aap kyun mere madat karna chahathe ho?

Maan: mein bas apna kaam kar raha hoon

Geet: khana lana bhi aapka kaam hai kya?

Maan stares...

Geet: mera matlab, aapka kaam toh suspect ko arrest karna haina?

Maan: haan

Geet: toh apne mujhe arrest kyun nahi kiya?

Maan: hamesha mujhe hi sawaal karthe rehthi ho, zara apne aapse bhi sawaal karke dekho ki tum mere saath kyun aaye ho?

Geet: mein aap ke liye bhoj bangayi hoona? Toh mein chalthi hoon

As always Geet tries to leave and she trips and falls on Maan...

Maan holds her and maneet eyelock...

Geet tries to get away...but Maan tightens his hold...

Geet keeps pushing him and Maan stares ...he is angry...

Ye apne aap ko kya samajthi? Ab ye Mumbai mein akele kahan jayegi? Woh bhi itne raat ko?

Itna sab kuch hone ke badh bhi issko akhal hi nahi aayi...

Maan: tum ab mere custody mein ho, mujse bachke kahin nahi jaa sakthi, samji tum?

Geet: kya? custody?

Maan: haan, tun house areest mein ho

Geet is scared...kya ye sach bol raha hai?

Geet: toh mein kaidhi hoon?

Hare babaji? Ye kadhki toh har baat ko sach manthi...koi itna bhi innocent kaise ho saktha?

Issiliye toh ye aaj iss halat mein hai?

Maan knows that it's no use arguing with her for she would never understand him...

Maan: haan, ab sawaal karna band karo aur jaldhi khalo

Maan leaves...but stops by the window...

He just waits for a while and makes sure she eats her food...

Geet has become mechanical and she just obeys Maan's orders...she begins to eat...

She thinks that only then Maan would leave her alone...though she is desperate to have him by her side, she is still confused about what rights she has to expect anything from Maan...

But the fact is that he is always there for her whenever she needs him, and this has been the case even before she came to Mumbai, when they were at Delhi still fighting with each other and when she had no faith in him...

That seems like a dream now, she is puzzled how Maan had been saving her from the beginning...

Maan keeps staring her...

Annie comes...

Annie: bhai, kya dekh rahe ho?

Annie peeps in...Geet is having her dinner...

Annie: toh bhai mahi mahi?

Maan: what?

Annie: aap nahi samjoge

Maan: mein chaltha hoon

Maan is embarrassed...he escapes...

Annie: Geeet

Geet is happy to see Annie...

Geet smiles ...

Annie: kya kha rahi ho?

Geet: Rasmalai

Annie: kya? Rasmalai tayaar ho agyi?> ye toh kal lunch ki menu mein hi hai, kaisa hai?

Geet: bahut achcha

Annie: lagtha hai ki ye tummare favourite hai?

Geet: tumme kaise patha?

Annie: oh oh Geet, issiliye toh bhai ne apne khaas mehmaan ke liye specialy laya haina?

Geet: aaisa kuch nahi hai

Geet blushes...

Annie: hmmm, ab mein samajigayi

Annie winks...she knows her bhai better than our Geet...

Maan has brought a girl home...that's unusual...

And also taking care of her just like he takes care of Annie...

But Geet is the only other girl to have this special love and care of MSK other than Annie...warna Maan toh hamesha ladhkiyon se dhoor hi rehtha haina?

Nowadays Arjun is there to take care of Annie and Maan is free of that responsibility...

Still being the Big Bro of such a cute sister Maan knows a little about girls, but this girl is different...she keeps disturbing him a lot...

Maan doesn't hesitate to do anything when it comes to Geet, here he is serving this damshell in despair...Maan is not the senti types, getting too much involved in the cases he handles, but this time it's been different, he has taken this case too personnel...else why would he bring Geet home while there are a lot of other options...

Annie smiles at Geet...she can see what's wrong with her brother...

Geet: kya?

Annie: kuch nahi, tum bathao, tum bhai ko kaise jaantrhi ho? meinne bas sameera ke barein mein suna tha, tum bhi usske saath hi rehthi hogi? Bhai bhi wahi the, haina?

Geet: haan

Annie: tumme koi problem nahi hai toh kya mein tummare barein mein aur kuch jaan sakthi?

Geet: par meri story toh har din naya twist lekhe har ek channel pe telecast ho rahi haina?

Hare buddu, Annie toh romantic story ki intrezaar kar rahi hai, par ye toh kuch aur hi sochthi rehthi...

Issko kab apne pyaar ka ehsaas hoga?

Geet bahut udhaas ho jaathi...but she is happy that Annie is so concerned about her...

Annie: Geet, mein janthi hoon ki woh sab joot hai, tum bathana nahi chahathi toh koi problem nahi, mujhe laga tum apne sachi story ko kissi se batna chahogi, aur Maan bhai se toh koi baat nahi kar saktha, haina?

Annie wants Geet to open up...vent her feelings and let go of her burdens...

And also she may get to know more about Maneet love story which is what she is interested...whatever it may be, she has decided that Geet is her babhi...

If nothing happened earlier then she will make it happen now for she has seen the love of her brother for Geet in his not so expressive eyes...

Maan couldn't hide his love for Geet just like he always does...

Annie wants to know about Geet's feelings...she is the one more confused and hesitant...poor girl, she can't think about love in such a situation...haina?

Geet: haan, bahut akdu hai

Annie: kya? mere bhai akdu hai?

Geet: nahi nahi, woh thoda akdu hai aur bahut achche bhi hai

Ye toh Geet ko abhi abhi patha chala?

Annie: achcha? bhai itna achche hai?

Geet tries to change the topic...

Geet: tum bhi bahut achchi ho, tumse milke bahut achcha laga

Annie: mein ya mere bhai?

Geet: chodo unke baat

Annie: aaise kaise? Pehle bathao, tum bhai ko kab kahan aur kaise milli thi? Mujhe aapki love story ke barein mein bathao

Geet: what?

Ye ladhki toh pyaar ke sabt hi nahi sunna chahathi hai...

Annie had to try something else...she has to make Geet realize her love...that's what Annie is here for...

Annie: achcha, teek hai, tum bas ye bathao ki Delhi mein kya kya hua? Tum kya kar rahi thi? Kaunse college mein padthi ho?

Annie changes the question...

Geet tells about her friends and her college...their masti...

Annie: aur bhai kahan hai?

Geet: tum mere kahaanni sunna chahthe ho ya apne bhai ki?

Annie: donno hi ek hi haina? Mera matlab hai tum donno ek hi jagah pe rehthe toh aksar mulaqaat hothi rehthi, haina?

Geet is remaineded of their first meeting...nahi first accident...takraar...

Geet: pehle bar hi mujhe patha chal gaya ki tummare bhai bahut bade Dhust Danav hai

Annie: kya?

Geet: woh...

Annie: no worries, bhai toh aaise hi hai

Geet: tum bhi maanthi haina?

Annie: what to do? That's the truth

Geet: haan, ye thoda achche tareekhe se baat karthe toh mein Dev ke peeche kyun jaathi?

Annie: point Geet, tum bhai ke peeche hi jaathi, haina?

Geet: woh nahi hai

Annie: kya Geet? Thoda romantic batein bhi hotha hoga?

Geet: what? Mein aur Dev sirf bahut achche dhost the

Annie: hare buddu, mein bhai ki baat kar rahi thi

Geet: hum toh hamesha ladthe rehthe the

Annie: wow, how romantic? Mein aur Arjun bhi aaise hi ladthe hai, abhi bhi

Geet: par hum sirf ladthe hai, aur kuch nahi

Annie: jootie

Geet ko bhi lagtha hai ki ye joot hai...

Par Maan Geet ke barein mein kya sochtha? Ye toh abhi bhi Geet ko patha nahi haina?

Geet ab apni kahaani ko Annie ko bathathi, how Dev fooled her...

Annie feels pity for her...

Geet: teri shadhi haina? Tum apni kahaani bathao

Annie: meri toh boring love story hai, mein aur Arjun childhood friends hai, shadhi ka umar ho gayi toh hummare pariwaar wale hummare rishtey ko naya naam dena chahathe hai, kaas karke Dadi, lekhin humme koi farak nahi padtha, we are still best buddies

Geet: tum bahut lucky ho, sab ko aaisa jeevan saathi nahi miltha, kissi ajnabi pe barosa karne se toh ye bahut achcha hai

But Geet has failed to realize that she has also got someone special whom she had completely neglected due to her stupidity...

Even now she is only bothered about trusting Dev, she is only concerned about one of her mistakes, she doesn't know that not having faith in the right person is equally foolish...

Ye ladhki kab samjegi ki Maan is there for her...she is still blind to see the attention she is getting from the MSK...

Geet phir upset ho jaathi...

Annir: sorry Geet, mujhe lagtha hai ki ab tumme aaram ki zaroorat hai, gud night

Geet: gud night, hare, meinne toh tera naam bhi nahi poocha

Annie: Anvehsa Khurana, you can call me Annie, kyunki sirf Arjun mujhe Anvesha bhula saktha

Geet: gud night Annie

How much she needed a friend at this time? And Sam ki absence mein Geet ko Annie se baat karkke bahut achhca laga...jaise ki apna burden thoda kam ho gaya ho...

Edited by ghsp2fan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
very nice update
duffer geet
sweat n lovely annie

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Posted: 10 years ago
nice part
maan brings food for geet...so sweet
annie feels her bhai is in love...she hears geet side story😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Read both parts 29 and 30.. awesome updates..Can't blame Dadima if she thinks of her children's happiness...Geet is still ignorant about everything...
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely part...is geet ka kuch nahi ho sakta...budhu ki budhu hi rahegi...
maan is taking care of geet and annie is so sweet...she understood that her bhai love geet...par woh jhalli kab samghegi...
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow geet thoda thoda toh maan k asar horaha hai na...

nice update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

continue nxt prt soon plz...

eagerly waiting...
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update
maan taking care of geet!!!!!
annie trying make geet realize her feelings for maan
but is still in past!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
part 30
awesome dear...
poor Geet...
Annie is so sweet...
and Maan he has to start showing his concern and care and love...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Part - 31

After Annie leaves Geet starts to think about her interactions with Maan...

Annie's curiosity has now passed on to Geet...

Geet wants to know what she thinks about Maan, where does he stand in her life? what would she do without him? Where would she go after the case is over? What's her position then? Would she have a place in Maan's life even after that? Or is this only a temporary bonding? What about her future? She knows very well that there is no future for her without Maan, she can't imagine a life without him...though it might not be a BF GF relationship Maan has now become an integral part of her life...

Geet is now staying in his place, and her day starts with him and ends with him only...

Even now she is unable to sleep thinking about Maan...

She is now clear that only Maan can save her...she wants to prove her innocence not to her family whom she has disowned but for Sameer...she still misses her friendship and she knows very well that Sameera must also be confused and frustrated just like her...

Once when the confusion is cleared Sam would come back to her...

She is confidant that her Sam would miss her as much as she misses her...

She is then reminded that Sam loves Maan and Geet should stay away from him...

But Geet doesn't realize that it's Maan who is getting closer and closer and not Geet...

It's not that easy to avoid Maan for she too wants him to be with her all the time...

This is a strange obsession that she has acquired recently...

She keeps thinking why the suddens change? May be it's b'coz of her fear that she can't escape this case without Maan's help...

May be she is scared to face the case alone, she wants Maan to handle it for her...

Maan has already taak the responsibility and he will rest only when he frees Geet from all the trouble...

Geet wonders why is Maan taking her case so seriously...maybe it's hurting his pride...he doesn't like losing...that's why he is worried...

This girl always thinks differently...she never sees the reality...

Geet tries to find answers for her questions while Maan is busy findng a solution for her problems...

The only problem for Geet is MSK...she is not worried about her case for she knows that Maan is there to take care of that...but what about MSK...he is still a mystery for her...

Geet goes to sleep thinking about Maan...

Next morning...

Annie comes with the breakfast...

Geet is a little disappointed...

She was expecting Maan...she is so used to his pampering in these few days...haina babaji?

Maan had some important work...

Annie: gud morning Geet

Geet: mor Annie

Annie: mujhe patha hai kit um kisska intrezaar kar rahi thi

Geet: tera hi, aur kisska, aaj teri sangeet haina? Mein bahut kush hoon

Annie: pehle bathao mein kaise kagthi hoon?

Geet: bahut sundar

Annie: lekhin Arjun toh ye traditional attire mein mujhe dekhkke hastha hai

Geet: very bad, woh mazak kar rahe honge, sach mein tum bahut sundar lagthi ho, perfect Indian Dulahn

Annie: thanks, mein chahathi thi kit um bhi mere sangeet attend karo, lakhin ye Maan bhai manthe hi nahi, tum teek kehthi ho, Maan bhai na, bikul Dhust danav hi hai

Annie ke muh se ye sabt sunke Geet zor zor se hasthi...

Annie is happy to see her smile...

Annie ka kaam ho gaya,,,,she wanted to bring a smile on her face...

She was deliberately addressing Maan like Geet...Dhust danav...

Geet: haina tummare bhai DD?

Annie: haan baba, par meinne shadhi attend karne ki permission le liya hai, mein bhi MSK ki behen hoon

Geet: tummare shadhi attend karne ke liye unki permission ki kya zaroorat?

Geet is comfused...

Annie: hare, permission mere liye nahi

Geet: ohh...tummare bhai ki attendance ko confirm kar rahi thi?

Annie: nahi Geet, teri attendance ki permit mil gayi

Geet: par Annie?

Annie: kasie bhi kal mere shadhi mein tumme shamil hona hi padega

Geet: mein kaise?

Geet hesitates though she wants to be there with Annie...

She has become so attached to Annie within a day...how strange?

Annie: mein kuch nahi jaanthi, tumme aana hi hoga, tum logon ke barein mein sochke gabrathi haina? Usske liye bhi mere paas ek idea hai

Geet: kya?

Annie: tum bas tayaar raho, mein badh mein aakke apna plan bathathi hoon, bye Geet

Geet: bye Annie

Maan wapas aagaya...though he is not with Geet he is always thinking about her only...

He is occupied in the wedding arrangements but still he finds time to visit Geet evry now and then...

He wants to keep an eye on Geet...he is afraid that she will do something stupid again that will catch the attention of the guests which will land her into more trouble...

But Geet knows that it's Annie's wedding and she has to make sure that everything goes well for Annie...she is not worried about herself, she is only concerned about Annie's wedding now...

Annie has become so close to Geet that Geet has forgot her worries and has got involved in Annie's wedding...Annie comes to her often for suggestions...she wants to get Geet involved somehow...

Geet is looking a little OK now...but she hates to be jailed inside the OH...

She is not comfortable hiding like this, she wants to go out and tell the truth...to everyone...to Sam...to the others...to her family...

Jaise Geet samajthi waise sachayi ko log itne asaani se nahi manthe jitne asaani se joot ko manthe hai, saboot mangthe hai...aur soo soo sawaal karthe hai...Geet is not ready to face all that, Maan knows it very well, that's why he is shielding her from the cruel world outside...

Though Annie is very busy attending the guests and all, she makes a point to visit Geet whenever possible...

Bechara Arjun ke liye hi waqt nahi mila Annie se batein karne ki...

Koi baat nahi, itne din jo kartha tha aur aage bhi karthe rahega...

Par Geet aaise nahi hai...bahut akheli hai...naye jagah mein hai...

Aur ye Maan bhai toh sirf apne kaam ke barein mein sochthe hai...

That's why Annie keeps chatting with her often...

Maan shadhi ke kaam mein busy hai...

Adi bhi case ke barein mein update karthe rehtha...

Maan keeps a check on Geet inbetween...

Geet feels very bad...ye kya ho gaya?

Aaise kitne din logon ke nazar se chup chupke reh sakthi?

Aaise nahi chalega...

Meinne koi galthi nahi ki, toh phir mujhe kyun darna hai?

Pehle sam se baat karna padega...woh mujhe samjegi, haina?

Maan comes...

Maan: tum teek ho?

Geet: haan

Maan: tumme kuch chahiye?

Geet: haan, mujeh Sam se baat karna hai, aap ke paas mobile hai?

Maan: nahi, tum ab kissi se bhi baat nahi kar sakthi

Geet: kyun?

Maan: phir se sawaal?

Geet: meinne koi galthi nahi kiya haina? Toh mujhe aap bahar kyun nahi jaane dethe?

Maan: tum samajthi nahi ki tumne kya kiya hai?

Geet: aap kamakaam mujhe kyun darathe ho? mujhe yahan nahi rehna, mujhe Sam se milna hai, woh meri best friend hai, woh meri madat karegi, mujhe jaane do

Geet tries to leave...

Maan catches hold fo her and drags her in and pushes her on the bed...

Maan: tum kahin nahi jaa sakrhi

Maan gets angry...

Geet: aap mujhe kyun rokhthe ho? mujhe jaana hai, chodo mujhe

Maan Dhust danav banjaatha...

Geet also gets angry...he can't dictate me like this...

Maan: tumne suna nahi meinne kya kaha?

Geet: aap samajthe kya apne aapko? Mein koi criminal nahi hoon, mujhe Sam se baat karne se koi nahi rokh saktha, aap bhi

Geet snatches the mobile from Maan...

Maan: toh tum aaise nahi manoge?

Maan gets wild...

He grabs her hand and gets his mobile back...

Maan: Sameera tumse baat nahi karna chahathi, samji tum, woh abhi bhi bahut naraaz hai, tujhe kya lagtha? Ussko sach patha nahi hai? usske papa ne hi mujhe iss kaam diya haina? Ussko bhi ab sare sachchayi patha hai, tummare Uncleji se mere baat bhi hui hai, lekhin Sam tumse abhi bhi bahut naraaz hai, patha nahi kyun? She is still mad at you, maybe she believes that you helped Dev

Geet: what? Ye sab aapke wajhe se hi hua hai

Maan doesn't know that Sam liked him nor does he know that Sam thinks that Geet cheated her

Maan: Geeet

Geet: kyun chilathe ho? chilane se sach ko chupa nahi sakhte

Maan: kaisa sach? Tum mere barein mein kya jaanthi ho?

Maan gets closer...

Geet: woh...kuch nahi

Maan: abhi abhi tum koi sach bathane wali thi?

Maan looks into her eyes...

Geet can't face him...she bends down...

Maan ko lagtha hai ki ye aaise chup nahi rehne wali, sach ko bathane ke chakker mein aur complications bana degi iss pagal ladhki...

Maan: tum jaanthi haina ki ab tum ek accused ho, nere permission ke bina tum iss kamre ke bahar katam nahi rakh sakthi, samji tum?

He locks her up in the room and leaves...

Geet is completely dejected...ab kya hoga?

She suddenly feels that she has lost everything...

Kal parivaar ne Geet ko chod diya...

Aaj friends ne bhi chod diya...she thinks that Maan too will leave her one day...

From all her bitter experiences she has stopped trusting people and she doesn't have any faith in relationships either...every one has betrayed her one way or the other...

Aur case katam hone ke badh Maan bhi Geet ko chod dega, phir woh kya karegi? Kahan jayegi?

That very thought terrifies her...

Babaji kal tak mein kitni kush thi?

Aaj mein akheli ho gayi hoon, koi nahi hai mere saath, koi nahi...

She falls on her knees and breaks down...

She keeps crying till Maan comes back...

Edited by ghsp2fan - 10 years ago
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very nice
jhalli geet
not trying to see what maan is doing for her

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