Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS #2 OS 7 Link to #3 in Pg 1

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incarnadine

@incarnadine

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Posted: 10 years ago

#151

This is such a fabulous story Smitaaa!!

So far, I can say it's my most fave from all the trysts!

I was smiling all the while I was reading the chapters! I was at first scared seeing the title, thinking that Arnav was going to be rough and rude with Khushi, but he is actually such a sweetheart here, although he doesn't express anything; which is the major cause of misunderstandings.

And I also feared that Khushi would go to Lucknow without informing anyone. Luckily that's not the case. I hope she gets to talk to Arnav.

On another note, can I just do something to Di, Mami and Nani for the blackmail? Even though Arnav is a good husband now, they shouldn't have pushed him into marrying when they knew of his infamous rage.

I really loved the way you've penned out Arnav & Khushi's relationship here. Their silent conversations, only Khushi understanding what her husband means to say..

Loved it so much! Can't wait to read more!! 😃

Thanks for the emails Rashmi! :) x

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Sara queen

@crazyqueen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#152

its superb.

its just...just...

you know i can't put what i feel in words.

plzzz update soon.

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chaitali

@chaitali12

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Posted: 10 years ago

#153

lovely story ..I was so confused by the name. .

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lujainshaikh

@lujainshaikh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#154

Both of them thinking poles apart...Khushi is thinking right in her own way 😔 But what about Arnav female colleague 😳...Now that Arnav is habitual to her habits he is worried for her health n concerned...Hope its not incomplete end please...It should be ...Waiting to read what happens next 😊 Update soon 😛