SwaRon TS:Saga of Hope(Updated Part2) - Page 2

Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj

the pain you were trying to show was clearly visible...sharon took right dicision to call swayam...well done

Thank you :)And After long time she is trying to rectify her mistakes. . .lets hope they will be together :)

edited comment on pg 1. :D

Originally posted by: Nishi.Kss

Res.
-edited- :D

"SOMETIMES
THE WEATHER OUTSIDE IS THE REFLECTION OF INNER BUILDUP"

i loved this line..lovely start to your TS..
you say you are not a writer..but the 2 updates show otherwise.. :P
the emotions were penned down beautifully..sharon's guilt, her pain, swayam's pain were emoted nicely..
Dance still binds them though they are away from each other..
POVS were done neatly.👍🏼
good start Chitra.
Hope to see more works from you :D

Cheers
Nishi

Thank you so much Nishi. . .I have waited for your comment since I saw your res. . .Praises coming from aclass writer like you means a lot. . .Thank you 😊

Originally posted by: sachi123

<font size="2">I am so happy that you have started posting your stories on IF Chitra and let me tell you , You are doing an awesome job! Love you so much ! Keep Writing ! Way to go Girl! So for late comment as I was hell busy :P :(! </font>

I waited for your comment for the longest time. . .i thought you are upset with me but your comment made me so happy and I love you too Sachi 😊

Really nice ts...
It was really emotional...and heart touching...
Sharon's guilt,pain...and swayam restricted dance to himself , hurt...beatuifully describe it...
Sharon's rejection in front of whole college is the one topic which always touched to my heart honestly i m not justified with how they patch up...i was happy untill new cv's enter ..but after that most of the things weere night mare for me...i badly wanted to see proper justification of it...but alas i never get that...urghhh...sorrry ...it just that i just carried away in that scene and its after effect...
Write more...

Omg dats such an emotional update..

heyya

wow amazing yar ...

the way u have penned down the emotions lyk a perfectionist😳 ..way to go gal...i cld actly feel as if d scene tunning in my imagination...

PS : sorry for reading ur fiction late ...i was bucked up wid my examz...😳...nw i wld read ol of them😃