OS: The Confession - Page 5

Originally posted by: ..juhi..

So adorable...

Originally posted by: cosmosandme

lyrical ! 😳 beautiful confession.

Originally posted by: Rutuja...

Awesome fantastic OS...

Originally posted by: parmarA

@Komal beautiful confession os.Just loved the way Jodha daringly confessed her love.And Jallu somewhere hesitate too.

Beautiful os .

Originally posted by: lashy

Special Mention: This One Shot is dedicated to my dearest Anukka (Prejudiced)😳 And I hope she and all of you peeps will have a good time reading it.

What about lashykka 😭... anukka, you are sooo lucky...

A w w w w w w w w w w 🤗

A smile skipped from the corner of his mouth when he noticed a small mole on her left collar bone. He immediately turned his face on the other side and let out a broad smile on his thought as how he never noticed it before, 'maybe because of all the jewelries she carries'.
I LOVED this one line so much, you have NOOO idea.. its so passionate and yet so subtle!☺️

I know...I love this part so much and for the exact reasons.

He ran his finger through his hair; passed a glance at her, while doing so he realized how genuinely she wanted to know the answer, so he said 'You were the actual reason.'

He noticed the changed expression of her face, her tranquil gaze; her eyes softened and her whole face lightened as if she made some discovery, She lowered her eyes and moved alittle closer to him and asked gently 'Was it worth taking this much risk?'

'It was worth it,' he replied not wasting a single moment.

She raised her eyes slowly to meet his, he took her left hand in his right, smiled seeing how her delicate hand fits beautifully in his and said,

I think I fell for you immediately on that day. I'm not sure but I think I did because... '

He stopped and raised his gaze from their intertwined hands to her face

All these descriptions were so Awww

Thank you😳

I love this place because it...it was this place only where I saw the glimpse of my future, it was in the water of this river only where I saw the reflection of the man who I was to love one day and that day has arrived. I have started loving that man...'

My my... aisaa din kab aayega...😭

The way cvs are handling their love story...kabhi nahi.

she had to hate him, hate him for the sake of his name, Jalaluddin Muhammad

Wow!👏

Thank you again.😛

That love helps a person to grow; to make self discoveries was the epiphany she made.

Ahaaa... you loved the word Epiphany so much don't you!😉

You caught me😛😆

I feel bad when you don't talk to me, when you don't look at me, when you don't reply to my taunts with a taunt, I feel bad...I feel bad and I want to start over, Can we?' her eyes glittering with tears.

Awww chooo cute.. I felt like pulling her cheeks here... 😳

After a moment, he took her hand and put it on his chest and said 'Did you feel it? That's my heart which is beating. The first time when I realized of its being alive was when I made the realization of being in love with you and you know the strange thing... it didn't stop beating even after the night when I lost all the hopes on us, it didn't.

I loveddd this bit...I was ☺️

Me too☺️

With such confidence she spoke that it made Jalal sure that this is for eternity. He moved forward closing the distance between him and Jodha, cupped her face softly and wiped the tears off her cheeks. He rested his temple against hers, a tear or two made their way to his cheeks as he closed his eyes tightly and slowly rubbed his nose against hers.

Have you read the last couple of chapters of NJAPA.. I mean right from chapter 27-28.. when you do, you'll know why I highlighted this bit... 😆

I am yet to read from 27-28 but i did read the last two chapters and I loved it.

After a moment he gently planted a kiss on her forehead and wrapped his arms around her, to embrace her in a hug, his one hand touched the bare skin of her back, other was wrapped around her waist and her head rested on his chest. She wrapped her arms around him so tightly as if he was her only treasure.

Awww😳

She felt even more cosseted when he tightened his hold around her

I LOVED this line again.. she loved being treasured, cradled and protected in his arms.

Beautiful piece of writing as usual Komaliya my Womaniya keep it up kutty akka..

Thank you again, Akka. I'm very glad that you liked it.😳 Btw what does kutty akka means?😛

Originally posted by: sun29

thank you so much for the message🤗 or else i would have missed reading such a beautiful OS

i just imagine the whole scenario onscreen and felt so happy to see something so beautiful and meaningful finally happening...

if only the makes believed in the power of communication ...jodha clearing about the dhakka was so needed for them to move forward without hesitation

and then the whole journey ...sighh

waiting for more