//Whims// ❤️ ~SaHil~

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Hey guys!! Here's another poem on SaHil. The situation is that Ahil is desperate about Sanam. He just can't stop himself from loving her but alas! Sanam has no idea what he wants from her, has no clue about his whims. It's written from Ahil's perspective.


Enjoy :)

@Farz- :( missing you like hell! Muah, love ya :* :D
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~Whims~


Windy emotions hit her

Winds of my lust,

That blustered away her rage

As hatred bit the dust.

Her eyes saw the truth

My lashes spoke out,

Two blinks away from ardor

And half a pint from love.

Resistant, I surely knew it was

The first time I craved for her,

And head it rage over eyes

That saw everything but me.

I felt feeble, I was unguarded

Felt like I had sold all my secrets to her

As if her eyes kept them all

Like she knew me better than myself.

I hate admitting it that I love her

But alas, only her eyes speak and yell,

That we share the same intuition

But then again, not her heart.

I hate yelling it with my heart

Her deaf, deaf eyes,

Will never hear me say that

That it's me whom she defies.


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it's meh, just wanted to post something after a looong time! Comment how that was :)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sparkle sweetheart!!!!!



You're back yes yes yes YES!!!!!!!


Aww my darling...I've missed you too!!!!



Why do you always always have nice things to say to me! Sometimes I winder if I'm deserving of all this love you shower me!!!



I love you!




I love reading you!!!


And!



Talk to me!



I need to hear you!


*****


Whims!



Oh boy!!!! I love the title. So true to what he's expressing. His whims!


Hayye!



I felt feeble, I was unguarded
Felt like I had sold all my secrets to her
As if her eyes kept them all
Like she knew me better than myself.




Oh dearest Sparkle...how do you do it baby doll! Leave me awed and speechless. Such overwhelming feeling!



I, as in me, as in Farz was unguarded!


Totally unguarded!


Like YOU knew ME better than myself!




Oh Sparkle!



You glitter your way to my heart each time. Each time.



And today too.




Feel like I have sold MY secrets to you. And that YOU know me better than myself.


Love you loads!!


Hugs!!!!



Amazing as always!!



His whims. If only she hears...



Mwah!


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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG this was so beautiful yet heartfelt😳 and honest yet very hot☺️ !! This poem clearly depicts SaHil's intensity i loved it You definitely have a talent for this 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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WOW!!! Something I would love to read again and again. The sorrow, the pain...and the WHIMS.
Love is a force that has the power to not only rid you of your sanity but can also provide the most immense and profound pleasure humanly possible. Its highs of potent sensation drive you mad and leave you helpless in its clutches. And you have put that very beautifully. 👏 And, And...these last few lines...they hold the most intense meaning of all.


I hate admitting it that I love her
But alas, only her eyes speak and yell,
That we share the same intuition
But then again, not her heart.
I hate yelling it with my heart
Her deaf, deaf eyes,
Will never hear me say that
That it's me whom she defies.

Love this. :) Fantastic.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks for the pm wow superb i liked it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I felt it...I really honestly truly hear your writing.

Speechless meanings it was...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: farz_parachute

Sparkle sweetheart!!!!!



You're back yes yes yes YES!!!!!!!


Aww my darling...I've missed you too!!!!



Why do you always always have nice things to say to me! Sometimes I winder if I'm deserving of all this love you shower me!!!



I love you!




I love reading you!!!


And!



Talk to me!



I need to hear you!


*****


Whims!



Oh boy!!!! I love the title. So true to what he's expressing. His whims!


Hayye!



I felt feeble, I was unguarded
Felt like I had sold all my secrets to her
As if her eyes kept them all
Like she knew me better than myself.




Oh dearest Sparkle...how do you do it baby doll! Leave me awed and speechless. Such overwhelming feeling!



I, as in me, as in Farz was unguarded!


Totally unguarded!


Like YOU knew ME better than myself!




Oh Sparkle!



You glitter your way to my heart each time. Each time.



And today too.




Feel like I have sold MY secrets to you. And that YOU know me better than myself.


Love you loads!!


Hugs!!!!



Amazing as always!!



His whims. If only she hears...



Mwah!



Darling!!!! You're here! OMG, I miss you like anything :(

Anyways, thank you! <3

Ok, I've written another poem...and I know how you feel for our dear AsYa so hmm get ready!

No, you're amazing, not me...you're a sweetheart Farz, I simply love you :****

Muah* jaadu ki jhappi*

:D toodles!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..Sakura..

OMG this was so beautiful yet heartfelt😳 and honest yet very hot☺️ !! This poem clearly depicts SaHil's intensity i loved it You definitely have a talent for this 👏


Never expected to be hot! Dear me!

Haha, thanks for saying that! :))
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Originally posted by: TVD-IANcrazy

WOW!!! Something I would love to read again and again. The sorrow, the pain...and the WHIMS.
Love is a force that has the power to not only rid you of your sanity but can also provide the most immense and profound pleasure humanly possible. Its highs of potent sensation drive you mad and leave you helpless in its clutches. And you have put that very beautifully. 👏 And, And...these last few lines...they hold the most intense meaning of all.


I hate admitting it that I love her
But alas, only her eyes speak and yell,
That we share the same intuition
But then again, not her heart.
I hate yelling it with my heart
Her deaf, deaf eyes,
Will never hear me say that
That it's me whom she defies.

Love this. :) Fantastic.


Thank you! :D

This means a lot to me dear, thank you thank you!



And WHAT! TVD and TO returning in October?! Wow, you saved my life :D


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Perfectionist2

I felt it...I really honestly truly hear your writing.

Speechless meanings it was...


😃 Thanks !

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