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Posted: 11 years ago
Deepu, dear, how do you do it, you break my heart everytime your write about Arnav and Khushi's pain, my soul cries for them each time, though I know its a story and you have assured of a happy ending, I tend to forget that and tend to cry out sometimes, thinking of what they are undergoing.

With this video, you did it again. I had a tough time to watch Arnav in pain. I had forgotten about this episode from IPKND and I was thinking where in the hell did you get this video, it felt the music and video were made for each other. With the context of story, knowing the intensity of Arnav and Khushi's relationship, was not able to see dear Arnav in pain. In this video, I was able to see only the Arnav you created, Khushi's Arnav.

It seems she got stuck somewhere, maybe got locked in the hotel, please don't let it be the freezer room, darling, please don't torture our dear Khushi more. I think, maybe Arnav not seeing light from her room, got worried and started looking for her, the nightmare of their life still not healed in their minds, I can realise the torture he will be undergoing.

Deepu, thanks for the torture you had planned in your evil mind for us, atleast for me, since I won't be able to forget Arnav's face I saw in this video, knowing the nightmare he is living through.
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Posted: 11 years ago
omg that was so painful. im already having tears in my eyes, dunno how wat will be my state after the maha update but nevertheless the song choice was just perfect, the lyrics seems to say wat arnav was feeling, the depth of his pain and agony...
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Posted: 11 years ago
HOLLYGAWD!!
awesome teaser, brilliant VM
I cant wait for maha update!!!! eeeks!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: diyadivya

Hei Deeps


Dats an amazing teaser... this is my take on ur teaser... i think Arnav has lashed out on khushi for everything he had been through without thinking and when khushi went missing he had realized what he has done and there is quite a chance while looking out for her he must have come across her dairy(not 100% sure cuz if he reads it how wud the story move forward and even itz khushi who has to voice it out ) and finally he finds her at "DELEKTABLE MORSEL"

i know i know this sounds crazy😆




You know Divya, I had another crazy idea, may be Hicks was pissed off with Khushi so he kidnapped her and threatened Arnav. 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: jeetega

Deepu, dear, how do you do it, you break my heart everytime your write about Arnav and Khushi's pain, my soul cries for them each time, though I know its a story and you have assured of a happy ending, I tend to forget that and tend to cry out sometimes, thinking of what they are undergoing.

With this video, you did it again. I had a tough time to watch Arnav in pain. I had forgotten about this episode from IPKND and I was thinking where in the hell did you get this video, it felt the music and video were made for each other. With the context of story, knowing the intensity of Arnav and Khushi's relationship, was not able to see dear Arnav in pain. In this video, I was able to see only the Arnav you created, Khushi's Arnav.

It seems she got stuck somewhere, maybe got locked in the hotel, please don't let it be the freezer room, darling, please don't torture our dear Khushi more. I think, maybe Arnav not seeing light from her room, got worried and started looking for her, the nightmare of their life still not healed in their minds, I can realise the torture he will be undergoing.

Deepu, thanks for the torture you had planned in your evil mind for us, atleast for me, since I won't be able to forget Arnav's face I saw in this video, knowing the nightmare he is living through.



Deeps, your fans are even thanking you for the torture. 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update
arnav still worried for her
khushi donot want ti show arnav her weak side
waiting for maha update
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: canapoem



You know Divya, I had another crazy idea, may be Hicks was pissed off with Khushi so he kidnapped her and threatened Arnav. 😆

🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣... seriously kavi Hicks!!!!!! he had worked under Arnav and any1 in a right state of mind would never in their wildest dreams imagine doing that forget implementing it...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Brilliant
So emotional 😭
Where is khushi ?
Arnav is searching For her
Arnav is ready to share her pain
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Posted: 10 years ago

Comment for chap 14

Finally today I got to read chapter 14... Really I missed it like hell... but now my soul is relaxed that m done with reading this update...

Really dii...wat have you done to us... its more than a spell... that we cant resist ourselves to be away from FF...

Someday I guess FF will really take away my fastening beats... I hardly could manage them while reading the update

dii... I always keep on saying and repeating the same that u are a superb writer along with a human being...

ur writing reflect ur personality of feelings ...the emotions... gestures... turmoils... and every small aspect that how u must be imagining each and every smallest to biggest thing with the same concern and make it as tempting as a main course scene...

Its just wonderful..

Dii, you manage every scene in a very brightest way... with all lights clearing the view and we get more and more involved with it...

It has no hidden mystery just sme emotions that are brought out on right tym in front of right person and are same tym controlled in front of the person... to not show him/herthat they are losing ... To be with them...



Dii for you:

har roz kuch naya maine dekha hain

jo dhal jay ek din mein

aate subah mein pher khilta dekha hain

aapke sangat mein sab kuch naya seekha hain

badal gaya jo sama

maine khud ko ache ke liye badalte dekha hain

jo na the waakif jis se

aapke chav mein har us ehsaas ko jeekar dekha hain


Now about the update


Show me more than what you chose to show me...Something real, Something YOU...

As always I will say ... these phrases excite us and are always a cover for the coming covered update... dii... really I like how u put sme words to describe the whole update that what it is all about... awesme

park and bark

heheheh perfect suitable for ASR... this are two things that are most attracting ... The way he park his ducati is just awesme as u have written it in the best way in the first chap of FF... and bark hahaha ..for what he is famous for... really when he is angry and bark at someone damn that expression are just awesme and dii... hw well u have written his every stretch of his nerves... just tremendous..and outstanding

Khushi... I dunno was in past that perfect ... yaa she was ... but she never gave that much concern to perfection.. but since she married Arnav and seen him how he always did his work with utter perfection... she too gt this perfection... and I salute she is no less than ASR in terms of perfection...

everything that was related to her heart...

Khushi... I really appreciate the thing in her that she never let her personal life role her profession.. and that is reason that she is been admired by the man who see her not always as his wife but a women who have stood so strongly and prove herself at every obstacle she face... she did every work now with great persistence and care...

Over the weeks she had come to know how much life he had put in this restaurant and thus at once she got terrified to fight back the stranger lest she again be the reason for another loss in his life. And so she yielded herself to apologize to the arrogant customer not to make the issue into any louder or bigger than it already was.

Khushi, I dunno if I am right but I felt, if it was her own business she could have handled it in any other way... but I guess she knew that her man has put so much in it and not to fail him... she even turnd to apologize and bown down for the matter where she was not wrong ... it was so different of her.

She sighed understanding his stubborn heart.

She has the greatest level of patience that she knew she still has a lng way to cross and m happy that she again gained a new hope and understood him ... that it would not be easy to melt the rock called ASR...

Decide wisely Khushi.

Khushi...sunkar acha laga... it was really soothing to read that Arnav call her by her name... really he how easily can make us looseour hearts to him... just coz of u dii... u are just the best.

Decide Mr. Arnav Singh Raizada, Do I need to be IN or OUT of my fantasy world?

Why is he so??? Damn man... in a second he drop her to ground and the next second he himself pick her up... He care for her and his care is always get showed evn how hard he try to cover it with a frame of Anger...

She is Mrs. Raizada .. and in these years she learnt more of him .. and she knew that he can never stop himself from caring for her... dii its really amazing how u track every emotion in right place for the characters that is the best I can say that dii... no one can beat u in writing in terms of emotions and feelings ... its terrific and I really came across many such new things that I was unaware of... all thanks to u.. dii u are incredible...

repulsive to a touch, to his touch.

These words really pricked my heart.. how the soft touches that always soothes her pain in past now turned to repeling..coz of the bitter past and I also conside that these three years away from him added more repulsion for her...to his touches... may be their togetherness can fulfill the gap and she can again feel the touches of his warmth as soft petals of roses...

Didi, Why is so much delay in adoption. Didi Kuch kariye na...I dont want the baby...Just give her away to someone, I dont care who...

I am just thinking ... did she gave her child to be adopted by someone .. I am not sure nor I want to think as I left it for time that the updates will answer it... but if it sothen the child must be alive then I will be really happy... I am not going for the after effects but I am just concerned for the child..

How drastic was the time when she went through all this..?? its really painful to read that how successful u become how much happiness u gain... painful past can never leave you.. it always sting in ur memories..

Smiling-Khushi ...

Grieving-Khushi...

The one who hide her real self from the man ... coz.. she dream to win his love not his sympathy that can make him turn to her in seconds..

I know She can wait for ages to win his love... but she will never turn weak and show her broken soul to him to gain him back..

She may loss herself many a tym... like how she is every night... but she never wish to show him ... until he is with her for the love they formed in past..

I really felt hard to read the section... the broken khuhsi... and the pain she went every night... Dii... how hard it must be for you to write this... really hats off that still u manage urself to give us happiness and tears all together..

Doesnt she know that her tired eyes spoke truth better than her lips.

How hard she try .. he knew her silence ... he can learn it well .. since the start..he is a philosopher when comes to khushi ... he can learn every pain .. emptiness and the fear that she is going through..

...

Dii it was an excellent update.. ffrom every single thing it was tremendous.

I always adore imagining the update in my imagination.. sply the moves of Arnav .. how he enter his cabin.. how he scan the things .. how he drive away on his ducati... how he watch her silently...

I loved it man .. whn Arnav came there to take her side... how he secured her...

I really fet bad that she feel guilty... but hope she come over this guilt soon.. coz she was never wrong ... nor in past nor in present..

Arnav ignoring the coffee pinched me a bit but we know he is ASR... cant accept the things to change soon... but I like it how he noticed the heart...

I bet ... if Khushi carry on keeping coffee daily on his table... one day he will really take a sip of it...

it was a outstanding amazing fantabulous lovely .. emotional update.. love u nd bless u dii..



Let me hold the bleak thread of our lives

And fly the kite again in the sky

Let me be thy saviour for the future

Thou turn back to the living life and redeem the pledges.

Let us again rise together in the sky

To chase the dreams that are held so high

Let me take you out under the shimmery sky

Bring the smile again that once lit my life.


Let me once again be a part of you and you of me

Live the life anew that once we knew

Let us once again be together hand in hand

And start life afresh with an Angel's wand.




please bear my extremely free flying with typo mistake thoughts
Edited by arnavini - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Wow wow wow ...



wat a fantabulous VM ... ddii its really amazaing ..

This song was so close to me as it give me a great feel of my land ... bt I never imagined that nw it can connect me to my Arshi... its an amazing VM.. now i ll always remember it as for ARSHI

Dii I really love ur VM's ...u are a great mixer. and really u work a lot on ur VM's thats the reason that they come out as outstanding videos...

I am guessing its tym for Khushi to be with Arnav... an for that may be its an intense scene wer she is missing and then he may realize that losing her once was hard but again will be his death...


some unrhymed lines my heart feel to share


Kaise ye soche aakar tere bahoon mein sukoon he milega...

Tute saare saalo ke khwab ke ashak bahane de...

Pher kuch khushiya mein dhoonduga...

Tere aagosh mein aane se mile chahe jannat pat har beeta lamha yaad karuga

Yu he nahe mein pher se jud pauga

Tut kar tujhme pher khud ko tarashuga

Bikhre tere har armaan tere har saans bhe pher se haasil karne hain

Milte he tujhse hansi honton pe aa jae ye mumkin nahe hain

Tere har beete dard ko pehle bharna hain

Jo pher tees na rahe beete din ke pher ek naya sapna sajona hain

Ojhal hota dekh tujhe khone ke darr se he pher mein ye jaan paya hoon

Pal mein nahe bhoola mein har dard tere darr se hara hoon

Pher na chut jae ye haath is pher thamuga

Jo hain ruke tere ashq yaad mein mere khud aakar aankho se mitauga...

Edited by arnavini - 10 years ago

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