Comment for chap 14
Finally today I got to read chapter 14... Really I missed it like hell... but now my soul is relaxed that m done with reading this update...
Really dii...wat have you done to us... its more than a spell... that we cant resist ourselves to be away from FF...
Someday I guess FF will really take away my fastening beats... I hardly could manage them while reading the update
dii... I always keep on saying and repeating the same that u are a superb writer along with a human being...
ur writing reflect ur personality of feelings ...the emotions... gestures... turmoils... and every small aspect that how u must be imagining each and every smallest to biggest thing with the same concern and make it as tempting as a main course scene...
Its just wonderful..
Dii, you manage every scene in a very brightest way... with all lights clearing the view and we get more and more involved with it...
It has no hidden mystery just sme emotions that are brought out on right tym in front of right person and are same tym controlled in front of the person... to not show him/herthat they are losing ... To be with them...
Dii for you:
har roz kuch naya maine dekha hain
jo dhal jay ek din mein
aate subah mein pher khilta dekha hain
aapke sangat mein sab kuch naya seekha hain
badal gaya jo sama
maine khud ko ache ke liye badalte dekha hain
jo na the waakif jis se
aapke chav mein har us ehsaas ko jeekar dekha hain
Now about the update
Show me more than what you chose to show me...Something real, Something YOU...
As always I will say ... these phrases excite us and are always a cover for the coming covered update... dii... really I like how u put sme words to describe the whole update that what it is all about... awesme
park and bark
heheheh perfect suitable for ASR... this are two things that are most attracting ... The way he park his ducati is just awesme as u have written it in the best way in the first chap of FF... and bark hahaha ..for what he is famous for... really when he is angry and bark at someone damn that expression are just awesme and dii... hw well u have written his every stretch of his nerves... just tremendous..and outstanding
Khushi... I dunno was in past that perfect ... yaa she was ... but she never gave that much concern to perfection.. but since she married Arnav and seen him how he always did his work with utter perfection... she too gt this perfection... and I salute she is no less than ASR in terms of perfection...
everything that was related to her heart...
Khushi... I really appreciate the thing in her that she never let her personal life role her profession.. and that is reason that she is been admired by the man who see her not always as his wife but a women who have stood so strongly and prove herself at every obstacle she face... she did every work now with great persistence and care...
Over the weeks she had come to know how much life he had put in this restaurant and thus at once she got terrified to fight back the stranger lest she again be the reason for another loss in his life. And so she yielded herself to apologize to the arrogant customer not to make the issue into any louder or bigger than it already was.
Khushi, I dunno if I am right but I felt, if it was her own business she could have handled it in any other way... but I guess she knew that her man has put so much in it and not to fail him... she even turnd to apologize and bown down for the matter where she was not wrong ... it was so different of her.
She sighed understanding his stubborn heart.
She has the greatest level of patience that she knew she still has a lng way to cross and m happy that she again gained a new hope and understood him ... that it would not be easy to melt the rock called ASR...
Decide wisely Khushi.
Khushi...sunkar acha laga... it was really soothing to read that Arnav call her by her name... really he how easily can make us looseour hearts to him... just coz of u dii... u are just the best.
Decide Mr. Arnav Singh Raizada, Do I need to be IN or OUT of my fantasy world?
Why is he so??? Damn man... in a second he drop her to ground and the next second he himself pick her up... He care for her and his care is always get showed evn how hard he try to cover it with a frame of Anger...
She is Mrs. Raizada .. and in these years she learnt more of him .. and she knew that he can never stop himself from caring for her... dii its really amazing how u track every emotion in right place for the characters that is the best I can say that dii... no one can beat u in writing in terms of emotions and feelings ... its terrific and I really came across many such new things that I was unaware of... all thanks to u.. dii u are incredible...
repulsive to a touch, to his touch.
These words really pricked my heart.. how the soft touches that always soothes her pain in past now turned to repeling..coz of the bitter past and I also conside that these three years away from him added more repulsion for her...to his touches... may be their togetherness can fulfill the gap and she can again feel the touches of his warmth as soft petals of roses...
Didi, Why is so much delay in adoption. Didi Kuch kariye na...I dont want the baby...Just give her away to someone, I dont care who...
I am just thinking ... did she gave her child to be adopted by someone .. I am not sure nor I want to think as I left it for time that the updates will answer it... but if it sothen the child must be alive then I will be really happy... I am not going for the after effects but I am just concerned for the child..
How drastic was the time when she went through all this..?? its really painful to read that how successful u become how much happiness u gain... painful past can never leave you.. it always sting in ur memories..
Smiling-Khushi ...
Grieving-Khushi...
The one who hide her real self from the man ... coz.. she dream to win his love not his sympathy that can make him turn to her in seconds..
I know She can wait for ages to win his love... but she will never turn weak and show her broken soul to him to gain him back..
She may loss herself many a tym... like how she is every night... but she never wish to show him ... until he is with her for the love they formed in past..
I really felt hard to read the section... the broken khuhsi... and the pain she went every night... Dii... how hard it must be for you to write this... really hats off that still u manage urself to give us happiness and tears all together..
Doesnt she know that her tired eyes spoke truth better than her lips.
How hard she try .. he knew her silence ... he can learn it well .. since the start..he is a philosopher when comes to khushi ... he can learn every pain .. emptiness and the fear that she is going through..
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Dii it was an excellent update.. ffrom every single thing it was tremendous.
I always adore imagining the update in my imagination.. sply the moves of Arnav .. how he enter his cabin.. how he scan the things .. how he drive away on his ducati... how he watch her silently...
I loved it man .. whn Arnav came there to take her side... how he secured her...
I really fet bad that she feel guilty... but hope she come over this guilt soon.. coz she was never wrong ... nor in past nor in present..
Arnav ignoring the coffee pinched me a bit but we know he is ASR... cant accept the things to change soon... but I like it how he noticed the heart...
I bet ... if Khushi carry on keeping coffee daily on his table... one day he will really take a sip of it...
it was a outstanding amazing fantabulous lovely .. emotional update.. love u nd bless u dii..
Let me hold the bleak thread of our lives
And fly the kite again in the sky
Let me be thy saviour for the future
Thou turn back to the living life and redeem the pledges.
Let us again rise together in the sky
To chase the dreams that are held so high
Let me take you out under the shimmery sky
Bring the smile again that once lit my life.
Let me once again be a part of you and you of me
Live the life anew that once we knew
Let us once again be together hand in hand
And start life afresh with an Angel's wand.
please bear my extremely free flying with typo mistake thoughts
Edited by arnavini - 10 years ago
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