Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS OS 5 Link to #2 in Pg 1(21/8)

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Aparamegha

@Aparamegha

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#721

simply fantastic..read all the chap in one go

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#722

That was beautiful.. Arnav is so making up to her and making her realize she is very very important to him..😳

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Arshix144

@Arshix144

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#723

Whew that was a magical portion S, the dhak dhak and acidity wala portion! I can almost feel my own dhak dhaks too! Arnav and Khushi's interaction was simply brilliant. Anrav is slowly trying to make amends and make Khushi realise that he has strong feelings for her. The "Your Arnavji" portion packed a punch and my heart almost jumped right out of my chest with Khushi.

It was a beautifully vivid section with me imagining every single scene ofcourse the amazingly relevant pictures helped a great deal too!

Cannot wait for more!

Thanks for the super awesome and super regular updates S! <3

And thank you for the notification and posting these updates for us, R! <3

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barsana

@barsana

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#724

wow!!!...😃..can't wait for the heer-ranjha act...

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pia surve

@piaviviandsena

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#725

vry nice! i hope everything will gt fine btween arshi!

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amaypranay

@amaypranay

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#726

Wow! Tooo good! Just fabulous...

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Jyothi

@Jyo.Arshi.IPK

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#727

now this is one OS in recent times thats making my heart thump loud in the intensity of the emotions !! its like I can feel it happen ... simply love it Smita !! 👏 Rash thanx for the alerts !! muah