pyaar kiya nahi jata ,ho jata h (short labbbbbb esstory)updtd prt 2(a)

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My pst teri mri prem kahani h mushkil hs been clsd so m converting dt pictorial stry into a small story of kamarya(aryan nd kmla



Characters r same

Kmla jadhav: bechari abla naari

Aryan verma: charming bussiness tycoon

Vitthal jadhav: heartlss alcoholic husband of kmla jadhav



part:1...page 1
part: 2(a)...page 5



Part: 1


Kmla was seated on d floor cutting vegetabls 2 prepare lunch hr husbnd vitthal hd been drinking for 1 hour at their home

Vitthal(intoxicated): kmla go nd bring me a pauwa 😈

Kmla(shocked): wat r u saying vitthal...hw cn i go to a wine shp .u r already drunk go nd hv a bath u hvnt tkn a bth since 4 days

Vitthal: chup kar(shut up)!! M a lion nd lion dsnt lke hvng a bath he smirked nd said ..y cnt u go to wine shp haan dnt u hv legs

Kmla: i wont go to wine shp vitthal 😕

Vitthal angrily threw dwn d empty bottle of pauwa stood up frm d chair nd slapped her on d cheek vry hard

Vitthal: u stupid lady hw dare u argue wid me..do as i said othrwise i wll kill u 😡

Kmla was walking on d road going to desi wine shp tears were flwng dwn her face 😭 she was cursing d dy she gt married to vitthal .she wiped her tears awy wen she reachd wine shp

She was feeling vry awkward 😕 she was the only lady der..A group of 3 goons saw her.kmla was standing at the counter dey wnt nd stood beside her


Goon1(looked at hr frm head 2 toe): kya cheez cut piece

Goon2(husky voice): wat a beaaauuuty

Goon3(smiled mischievously): come baby have a drink wid us

Kmla's heart had startd beating fast one of d goon tried to touch her she mvd back anothr goon came nd touchd hr shoulder she pushhd him nd ran..goons also ran bhnind her.while running she dashed a man(aryan)..wen she was abt to fall aryan caught her by her waist...thn kamarya's eyelock nt intense one but their frst eyelock

Goons: hnd ovr the beauty to us nd leave

Aryan: wat if i say no...he moved kmla behind him

One goon cme frward nd tried to punch aryan bt aryan caught his hnd nd twisted it the goon yelled in pain..he punchd anthr goon hrd blood oozed out frm his nose...all goons ran away

Aryan turnd his head twrds kmla who was shivering in fear

Aryan: dnt wrry they hv gone u r safe

Kmla(stammered a little): thaa...n..thankuu haaa

Aryan: come i shall drp u home

Kmla: no iii. Her eys fll on his right hnd, she screamd ...devaaa... blood

Aryan: oh small wound..it wll heal within fw dys

But kmla tore a piece from her saree nd tied it around his hnd to stp the bleeding while aryan was staring at d face of beauty in frnt of him .
Kmla: ab mai chlti h haan..thnkuuu again haan for helping me

Aryan kept looking at her unti she vanished away from his eyes




PS: hey frnds as suggested by my frnd swetha i hv decided to cnvrt dis os of mine into mutual os of us😉 those who wnt to add twrds the story r welcome..i shall index evry prt wid d name of writr mntnd



Disclaimer: this story is a work of fiction i hv chosen characters frm ema story is mine which has nthing to do with d serial

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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG Rishu amazing, lets make it FF, like we did for Raghav confused marital status 😆

full on mawali language use kiya tune jakaas
pauwa 😆
kamla kisi angle se bueaty, shayad goon ki nazar tedi hai 😆
kya cheez cut piece, kya baat hai rishu,fullon marks 😆

full on jakaas post hai beedu 😉

chal kamarya ka isstory banate hai 😆
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Originally posted by: WhiteQueen

🤣

OMG Rishu amazing, lets make it FF, like we did for Raghav confused marital status 😆

full on mawali language use kiya tune jakaas
pauwa 😆
kamla kisi angle se bueaty, shayad goon ki nazar tedi hai 😆
kya cheez cut piece, kya baat hai rishu,fullon marks 😆

full on jakaas post hai beedu 😉

chal kamarya ka isstory banate hai 😆


thankuuu haan...acha laga mere ko ye jankar ki tere ko pasand ai ye esstory...hehe yaar thodi der wait kr lete h abhi koi is story ko bh report kr dega aur ye bh close kr dege 😆😆
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Lovely story Rishu. Please continue.

I love the goons more than the characters 🤣🤣 They are so brave to flirt with Kamla 🤣


Hand over the beauty to me 😆😆😆
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Originally posted by: ban18


thankuuu haan...acha laga mere ko ye jankar ki tere ko pasand ai ye esstory...hehe yaar thodi der wait kr lete h abhi koi is story ko bh report kr dega aur ye bh close kr dege 😆😆


🤣 🤣 🤣


Only the goons who saved Kamla might find fault as their secret is revealed 🤣
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Originally posted by: ban18


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<div>thankuuu haan...acha laga mere ko ye jankar ki tere ko pasand ai ye esstory...hehe yaar thodi der wait kr lete h abhi koi is story ko bh report kr dega aur ye bh close kr dege😆😆



Fikar not baby, we can have fun with characters, morphing is not allowed bas. don't worry any character can fall in love with any character. like Anything can happen in EMA

chota sa disclaimar daal neeche, sirf charaters udhar liya hai per isstory humari nahi, kisiko dukh karne hume koi irada nahi hai bolke 😉

uske baad full maza lenge jaan 😃
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Only the goons who saved Kamla might find fault as their secret is revealed 🤣

hehe suhana fns mght fnd fault aftr all kmla is their fav. star's onscreen mother naa😃
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Originally posted by: WhiteQueen



Fikar not baby, we can have fun with characters, morphing is not allowed bas. don't worry any character can fall in love with any character. like Anything can happen in EMA

chota sa disclaimar daal neeche, sirf charaters udhar liya hai per isstory humari nahi, kisiko dukh karne hume koi irada nahi hai bolke 😉

uske baad full maza lenge jaan 😃

yeah disclaimer is a good idea 😃
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Originally posted by: erikalui

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Lovely story Rishu. Please continue.

I love the goons more than the characters 🤣🤣 They are so brave to flirt with Kamla 🤣


Hand over the beauty to me 😆😆😆

yes 3 powerful goons..kmla ko ched diya jinhone 😆
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