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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update!!!!!
now sam to liking maan's attention and want to spend more time with him!!!!
waiting for maan to meet dev!!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
part 23
awesome...
Sam is getting impressed...
and Geet is not liking that...
shes scared...
and Maan hes not able to control himself from noticing Geet...
interesting...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Part - 24

At the dabha...

Everyone is waiting for Dev...

Dev calls Geet...

Dev: halo, Geet

Geet: tum aagaye?

Geet is so excited and nervous...

Sab Dev ko dkehkke kaise react karenge?

Dev: nahi

Geet: jaldhi aao, sab intrezaar kar rahe hai

Dev: tum bahar aao, mujhe tumse kuch baat karna hai

Geet: kya?

Dev: haan, tum bahar mera intrezaar karo, mein aatha hoon

Geet: teek hai, jaldhi aao

Geet: guys, mein abhi aathi hoon

Sam: ohhh, Mr.Handsome aagaya?

Sam teases Geet...

Tasha: dekho kaise sharmathi?

Pinky is just interested in the menu...

Geet: haan, mein abhi ussko lekhe aathi hoon

Geet bahar jakke Dev ka intrezaar karthi...

Maan just comes...he looks for the dabha and finds Geet...

And he forgets everything and keeps staring her...

She looks like an angel in her white salwar...

She is looking anxious...and also stunning...

She looks more beautiful today...or is it b'coz of the change in Maan's angle of looking at her...

He had always tried to avoid looking at her, but now he is carried away by her beauty and can't take his eyes from her...

It starts to drizzle...

Geet starts to play in the rain...

Maan stops the car and keeps watching Geet...

Geet starts dancing in the rain...

Maan gets out and walks towards her...

All this happens like some magic...Maan has lost control of himself...

Geet stops dancing seeing him...

Geet: tum aagaye?

Geet just runs and hugs him...

This is the first time Geet feels like yes, I'm in love with this man...

Usske bahon mein aathe hi kitna sukhoon miltha? Haina?

Aur tummy mein buterflies udne lage...

Ye barish aur kubsoorat lagtha...

Ab ye zindagi bahut hi alag dikthi...rang birangi, haina?

Jab pyaar hotha kehthe hai sab kuch achcha lagne lagtha...haina babaji?

Maan is confused, but this feels like heaven for him too...but this can't be true...

They stand still completely lost in each other...it's been a while...

Maan hears someone's footsteps...

Maan: Geet

Geet is still in the trance...

Maan shakes her up...Geeet

Geet suddenly realizes that it's Maan...

She steps back...

Geet: woh...mein...

Maan: Sam kahan hai?

Geet: woh andar hai

Maan Geet ko wahi chodke andar chale jaatha...

Maan is angry with himself...what's happening MSK?

This is not good...he has to control himself...

He needs to get this stupid girl out of his mind...that seems impossible...

She is everywhere...she is becoming a huge problem...

She never leaves Sam, and Sam is also equally stupid for she believes in Geet's stories easily...

These girls seldom use their brains...they just do whatever comes to mind...

It's very tough to predict them...that too this Geet has no brain at all...

What's she doing outside the dhabha while everyone is here...

But Maan forgets Geet and joins Sam and the others in the dinner...

Geet keeps waiting for Dev...

Dev doesn't come...Geet calls Dev...

Geet: Dev, kahan ho tum?

Dev: tum kahan ho?

Geet: mein yahi hoon, tummare intrezaar kar rahi hoon

Dev: aur woh kaun tha?

Geet is shocked...

Geet: kuan?

Dev: Geet, mein wahi tha, lekhin tum toh bahut busy thi

Geet: dev?

Dev: sorry Geet, meinne tumme kamakaam disturb kardhiya , mein ghar chaltha hoon

Geet: Dev...Dev

Dev ne phone kaatdhi...

Geet: babaji, ye meinne kya kardhi?

Geet andar chalthi...

Pinky: Geet

Tasha: kahan hai, kahan hai?

Sam: Geet, tum barish mein kya kar rahi thi?

Pinky: woh nahi aaya?

Maan: kaun?

Geet stares Maan...

But Maan is only remained of the hug...

He knows that she had mistaken but still he loved it...

But that's very bad MSK...

Maan keeps admiring Geet without her knowledge...

This is turning to be very interesting...

Now what will Maan do?

He has to stop listening to his heart for he thinks with his head and not his heart...

He has to find a way to escape from this mess...

Geet is very angry with Maan...

Geet: tum...tum yahan kyun aaye ho? sab tere wajhe se hi hua hai, ab mein kya karoongi?

Maan thinks may be she is also feeling guilty...

She is also

Maan: ab meinne kya kiya?

Sam tries to console Geet...

Sam: Geet, aao. Tum bhi kuch khalo

Geet: Sam. Mujhe bhook nahi hai

Maan: toh chalo chalthe hai, tum logon ko yahan aana hi nahi chahiye, woh bhi aaise barish mein

Sam: Maaan

Maan: come on, it's getting late

Maan leaves...ordering them to follow him...

Sam: Geet, koi baat nahi, phir kabhi milthe hai

Geet: sorry guys

Pinky: koi problem nahi, khana bahut achcha tha

Tasha: lassi ko bhool gayi?

Pinky: haan, woh bhi

Tasha: kam se kam glass ko wapas rakhkke aao

Sam: toh chalo guys

Next day...

Geet calls Dev...Dev doesn't answer the call...

Geet keeps calling...

After a couple of days...Dev answers the call...

Geet: Dev

Dev: ab kyun call karkke mujhe pareshann karthi ho?

Geet: Dev, pehle mere baat ko suno

Dev: itne din toh wahi kar raha tha

Geet: Dev. Tumme galatfami hui hai

Dev: par ab nahi, ab mein sab kuch samaj gaya

Geet: Dev, pls mere baat ko suno

Dev: sun toh raha hoon, aur kya kar saktah? Tumse pyaar jo kartha hoona?

Geet: Dev, mujhe laga woh tum tha

Dev: what?

Geet: haan, mujhe laga tum hi wahan mera intrezaar kar rahe ho, mein bas tummareb barein mein soch arhi thi, aur patha nahi woh kahan se aaya?

Dev: kya?

Geet: haan Dev, believe me

Dev: Geet, tum kya bol rahi ho? mujhe kuch samaj mein nahi aatha...

Geet explains him how she mistook Maan for Dev and she hates Maan...

Dev forgives her and he believes her...

Geet is happy that Dev is so understanding and knows her better...

She tells him about Sam's B'day plans...

She also tells him that Sam is very anxious to meet him...

She wants to meet Mr.Handsome...

She tells Dev about Mr.Handsomes story and how Sam, Tasha and Pinky keep teasing her...

They want to find out who this Mr.Handsome is...

Geet also tells him about Sam's wish to meet him on her b'day...

Dev too is eager to meet Sam...

Geet always talks about Sam and her friendship...

So Dev agrees to go to the party with Geet...

Geet asks him to come to the venue and they can surprise Sam...

Everything is planned and Geet is so excited...

Precap...

All her plans go in vain for MSK has some other plans for her...haina?

Kuban hua and it's consequences...

Edited by ghsp2fan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice part
Maaneet hug😉
Aage kya hoga...
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Posted: 10 years ago
very nice update
maan decides to follow his head than heart
geet clear misunderstanding of dev
what next
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice part...so that party dance is on the way...
continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update dear!!!!!!!!!!! 👏


truly enjoyed reading it!!!!!!!!!!!! 😛


maaneet hug part was superb!!!!!!!!!!😛


dev ka to band bajgayi 😆...par mujhe sam ki bhi band bajani hai...😡 😆 i dont want kabab me haddi b/w maaneet 😆



waiting for next!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



love


uma...🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago

Part - 25

And at Sam's B'day party...

Geet wanted to disclose who Mr.Handsome is...

She had called Dev and he too came to the party...

But in the end Maan took Geet with him and Dev was left behind...

Geet was tensed thst she had come with Maan leaving Dev behind...

As she was thinking about how to get Dev in and introduce to Sam, Maan pulled her and took her to dance with him...

Sam was shocked to see them dancing together...

With Kurbn Hua in the Back ground Maneet entered a new world of passionate dancing...

Though Geet initially resisted she is caught in a trance and she forgets herself and also Dev...

She danced to the tunes of MSK and she even forgot that Sam and her friends are watching them...

Maan got carried away by Geet's mersmerising beautiful looks and he lost himself in that passion...

They had a common feeling and their chemistry ignite their passions and that's when they realized that they had no control over their feelings for each other and it's getting more difficult to check their emotions...

Everyone thought that he is Mr.Handsome...even Tasha and Pinky were surprised...

Why not? After seeing that passionate dance indonno ko bhi shak hua ki kahin yahi pyaar toh nahi?

Sam also believes that Maan is Mr.Handsome and Geet had cheated her...

Sam had already revealed her love for Maan to Geet and Geet too was happy for her...

Sam thinks that Geet had lied to her about Mr.Handsome just to conceal her love for Maan as Sam too loved MSK...

Sam thought that Geet should have openly discussed with Sam about her feelings for Maan and shouldn't have cheated her like this behind her back...

Sam would have happily acceted their love as she valued Geet's friendship more than her love for Maan...she didn't expect this from her Best friend Geet...

When Sam started having feelings for Maan and she was attracted to him she first disclosed her feelings only to Geet and not even Maan...

She had such faith in Geet and she wanted to know about Geet's thought on that before she could confess her love to Maan...

She even told Geet that she was going to tell Maan about her love on her B'day... but Geet had spoiled everything and this is the worst gift that she could ever give Sam...

Why Geet why?

Why did you want to hurt me on this special day?

What about our friendship?

Even if you love Maan so much you shouldn't have insulted our friendship like this...

Sam is broken, she has not only lost her love but also a true friend...

This is a double shocker for Sam...

She is not even bothered about Maan, she had only known him for a few days...

But Geet, her friendship, that's what hurts her more, losing a friend like Geet...

Sam can't forgive Geet for this...never...

This is the big confusion that broke her friendship with Sam...

Ab aage...

Coming to the present...Maneet at the hotel...

Maan followed Geet and has found her finally...

But she is not alone but with unexpected company Dev...

Maan shoots Dev and now it's Geet turn...

Maan turns towards Geet and he strips off her saree within seconds...

Everything happened so fast that Geet hardly realized what's happening...

She knew about Maan's feeling for her, but she didn't expect him to follow her like this...

And Dev is also dead...

Geet is horrified, ab kya hoga?

Babaji, ye mein kya dekh rahi hoon, mera madat karo...

Geet closes her eyes and prays...

As Maan throws her Saree outside the window and pushes her on the bed Geet is terrified and almost faints...

But something brings back her concscience...

Suddenly Geet realizes that it's something more serious than what she thought...

Yes. It's something bigger...she somehow pushes Maan off and tries to jump off the window and end her life rather than becoming a prey for this beast...

But Maan pulls her back and Geet is too weak for his strong hold...

She loses her balance and Maan pulls her into his embrace...

Geet turns and looks outside the window to see if there is anyone for help...

But to her surprise she sees something terrific then...

Geet had never imagined that she would see something like this ever...

Geet hears a loud noise outside the window...

She could see fumes coming thru the window...

It's a bomb blast...

Geet is terrified and she starts shivering...

Maan could feel her fragile body trembling in his arms...

Maan tightens his hugs and he turns her face towards him to block the sight...

Maan : gabrao mat Geet, tumme kuch nahi hoga, sab teek hai

luckily it's only the backyard and there is no one out there...

Maan has already secured the hotel except fot this room...

Geet almost faints on Maan's shoulders...

Maan hugs her tight and tries to comfort her...

He tries to keep her calm...she is so scared...

She stares at the window and feerzes in fear...

Maan brings her face towards his and wipes off her tears...

Maan: geeet

Geet isn't responding at all...she is still in a shock...

Tears keep rolling down her cheeks...

Maan is worried and he lifts her chin and cuos her face in his palms...

Maan: Geet, mujhe dekho

Geet looks into his eyes...

Maan: tumme kuch nahi hoga, tum akhele nahi ho Geet, mein hoon tummare saath

Geet keeps staring him...

Maan takes her to the bed and makes her sit...

Maan covers her with the quilt...

Maan: Geeet

Geet is still speechless...

Maan: Geet, tummara dress kahan hai?

Maan searches her bag and gets her dress...

He holds her shoulders and shakes her up...

Maan: Geet, yahan dekho, geeet

He then forcefully pulls her from tthere and takes her to the washroom...he gives her the dress and pushes her inside the washroom...

Maan: Geet, jaldhi change karo, hummare paas zyada waqt nahi hai

Adi comes searching Geet...he knocks the door...

Geet is still standing there staring Maan...

Maan: Geet, jao

Maan pushes her in and closes the door...

Geet change karkke aathi...

She searches Maan...he is not there...

Geet is disappointed not finding Maan there...how could he leave her?

She looks around in despair...Maan...Maan...kahan chale gaye Maan?

Now she feels the pain and realizes the situation...

Suddenly she feels that she is all alone...so scared...without anyone...

Maan has gone...she misses him for the first time...

She needs Maan, she wants her Maan...

Where is he?

She didn't even notice Adi...

She had only been looking for Maan all the time...

Adi: Geeet

Geet is shocked to see Adi there...

Why is everyone after her?

How do they know about the danger?

How did they find her?

She is so confused...

Adi is waiting for her...

Adi feels sad seeing Geet in such a condition...

Adi: Geet, chalo

Geet: Adi?

Adi: haan, mein hi hoon, tumme gabrane ki koi zaroorat nahi, sab teek ho jayega

Geet: woh...woh...Maan, kahan hai?

Adi: Geet, woh chale gaye, unko koi aur kaam hai

Geet looks confused...

Geet: par, tum yahan aur aapko kaise patha ki mein yahan hoon?

Adi: pehle humme yahan se jaana hoga, mein badh mein tumme sab kuch samjaatha hoon

Geet: ye kaise hua?

Adi: Geet yahi tummara samaan haina? Ek bar check karlo, tummare koi bhi cheez yahan hona nahi chahiye

Geet is in no mood to check, but Adi insists her to check...

Geet takes a look around...Dev is still lying there...

Precap...

Maan calls Adi...

Maan: halo Adi

Adi: yes sir

Geet is surprised...

Part26

Edited by ghsp2fan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
maan ne dev ko shoot kar diya...magar woh kaise bachega...ho kya raha hai...

awesome update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 10 years ago
wonderful part...akhir yeh ho kaya raha hai???kahin dev kisi galat logon ke sath to nahi tha???aur maan kis mission par hai???continue soon...

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