'Only If She Knew''VAURYA OS-FIRST OS IN THE FORUM

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Yo people...!!!
ALL GOOD PEOPLE ??


so I'm here with a VAURYA OS
so i guess its FIRST OS IN THE FORUM ??

ANYWAYS ENJOY! πŸ˜‰
HAPPY READING ...πŸ˜ƒ

ONLY IF SHE KNEW... 🀒

A STORY TO TELL PEOPLE NOT TO BE AFRAID TO EXPRESS THEIR FEELINGS...

She had a boy-friend . She grew up with him.
To her he was the only one for her, most important and precious...but to him she was just another girl.
Girl : Hey! wanna go for a movie?
Guy : i can't
Girl : why ? do you need to study or something ?
Guy : Er...no
Girl : then ? what are you doing ?
Guy : i'm meeting up with...a friend...

It was always like that with him, he met girls in front of her, like it was nothing. To him, she just another one of his girlfriend...
The word "LOVE" never came out of his mouth, only hers. Ever since she's known him.. she has never heard the word "I LOVE YOU" from him.
There weren't any anniversaries at all...he didn't say anything from first day and it continued till 100 days...200 days...
Everyday, before they say good-bye, he just used to hand her a doll...everyday without any fail. she didn't know why?
THEN ONE DAY...
Girl : Errm...Shaurya...?
Guy : what ? don't drag...just say..
Girl : I LOVE YOU.
Guy : Erm...you what ? eermm...just take this doll and go back home.
That was how he ignored her "THREE WORDS" and handed her the doll...
Then he disappeared, as if he was running. The dolls she received from him everyday, filled her room. one by one. there were many now...

Then one day came, her 15th b'day ...she pictured a party with him.
she stranded herself in her room. waiting for his call .
BUT...Lunch passed, dinner passed and soon sky turned dark ...he still didn't call
It was already tiring to look at the phone anymore...Then suddenly at 2am. he suddenly called her and woke her from her sleep.
he told her to go outside her house...she was very excited...
Girl : Shaurya ...
Guy : here, take this.
And again, he handed her a little doll .
Girl : what's this ?
Guy : i didn't give it to you yesterday. so i'm giving it to you now. okay i'm going home now. k bye.
Girl : shaurya stop! do u know what today is ?
Guy : today ? what about it ?
Her heart sank . she thought that he would remember her b'day ...he just turned around and walked away like nothing has happened...
Before he went too far she shouted from behind : STOP!
Guy : you have something to say ?
Girl : tell me...tell me that u love me ?
Guy : what did you say ?
Girl : tell me please ? it's just three words...
Guy : i don't want to say that i love someone so easily...if u'r so desperate to hear it...go and find someone else.

That was what he said. Then he ran off. She felt her legs numb. She collapsed on the ground...he didn't want to say it so easily..?
How could he ? She thought. Maybe he's not the right guy for her.
After that she stranded herself in her home. Crying and crying. He didn't call her, although she was waiting. He just continued handing her a cute doll every morning outside her house.
After a month she collected herself and went to school. But what made the pain re-surface was that she saw him on the street ...with another girl.
He had a smile on his face, the one he never showed her when he handed her the dolls.
She ran straight back home and looked at the dolls in her room tears fell...why did he gave these to me ? She thought.

These dolls are probably picked out by some other girls. Anger piled up, she threw the dolls around. Then the phone rang. It was him
he told her to come out to the bus stop near her house. She calmed herself and went to the bus stop. She kept reminding herself that she's going to forget him. It's going to end.
Then he came in her sight. He was holding a big doll.
Guy: you came? i thought you were upset.
She couldn't help hating him. acting as if nothing has happened and joking around. Soon he held out the doll as usual.
Girl : i don't need it
Guy : what ? why ?
She grabbed the doll from his hands and threw it on the road.
Girl : i don't need this doll. i don't need it anymore. i don't want to a person like u ever.
she spat out the words.
But unlike any other day his eyes were shaking.
"I'm sorry" he said in a low shaking voice.
He then walked over the road to pick up the doll.
Girl : you stupid ? just leave the doll throw it away !!
But he ignored her and then
~HONK~ ~HONK~
With the loud honks the big truck was heading towards him.
Girl : Shaurya ! move ! move away.....she shouted as loud as she could.
He stood up and looked at her with sad eyes.
AND BOOM...
the sound was terrifying..!
she screamed and she cried .!
But nothing could bring him back. No matter how much she wished she could take back the words that she has said to him...she couldn't.
and that was how he went away from her.

After that day she had to go through everyday with guiltiness and sadness of loosing him . And after spending two months like crazy person she took out the dolls.
Those were the only gift he left her since the day they start going out.
And she started counting the days they were in love.
"ONE...TWO...THREE..." that was how she started counting the dolls.
"Four hundred and eighty four...four hundred and forty five"
it ended with 445 dolls.
She then started to cry again, with doll in her arms. she hugged the doll tightly in her arms and then suddenly
~"I LOVE YOU. I LOVE YOU."~ she dropped the doll shocked.
"I...LO...VE ...Y...OU...?" she picked the doll and pressed it stomach...
"I love you i love you" it can't be! she picked every doll and pressed their stomach.
~I LOVE YOU~
~I LOVE YOU~
~I LOVE YOU~
those words came out non stop. why didn't she realize that his heart was always by her side. protecting her. ?
Why didn't she realized that he loved her this much ?
she took out the doll that was kept under her bed. And pressed it stomach. It was the last doll he gave her. The one that fell on the road. It had his blood strain on it.
THE VOICE COME OUT. THE ONE SHE WAS MISSING SO BADLY.
"huh...do you know what today is? we've been loving each other for 456 days. you know what 456 is? i couldn't say i love you. since i was too shy. if you forgive me and take this doll i will say I LOVE YOU. Every day...till i die...Vaibhavi ...i love you."
The tears come out of her eyes non-stop. why ? why ? she asked god.
why did she got to know all this NOW ? now, when he can't be at her side ? but he loved her till his last minute.
For him and for that reason for her...it became a courage to live a beautiful life

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THE END

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SO GUYS LIKED MY FIRST OS IN THIS FORUM ? 😳😳
YES ? THEN PRESS THAT TINY LIKE BUTTON AND DON'T FORGET TO COMMENT...πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜‰
WHAT ? NO? THEN ALSO PRESS THAT LIKE BUTTON πŸ˜†πŸ˜† AND GIVE ME YOUR CRITICISM...SUGGESTION ANYTHING! πŸ˜ƒ

will be back with some other OS soon...πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜‰
till then SAYIONARA...!! πŸ˜†
BU-BYE ALL πŸ˜ƒ
LOVE YA LOADS 😳
ANU ⭐️⭐️

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Bugheadlove thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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So sad os 😭 😭 yet so gracely written πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
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Posted: 11 years ago
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yup grt carry on !!! we need FF writers to continue here..interestng start
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Vauryalover...

So sad os 😭 😭 yet so gracely written πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘



Thanks...πŸ˜ƒ
glad u liked it 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: RheaSingh

yup grt carry on !!! we need FF writers to continue here..interestng start



yeah!
i'll soon write more...πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Plz write ss frequently..this one is so nice :)
Edited by Saranghae - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It's so sad...
I love it!!!
And congrats, you're the first one to write a story in this forum!
But have you written an OS like this before, because it seems really familiar.
Edited by diyadawda13 - 11 years ago

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