The Vow (RagNa FF) Chapter 13 page 34 (LAST CHAPTER) - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Rachana is kalpi and asha ids suhana I liked it.khash serial me bhi aisa hi hota..chalo acha hai plz continue its nice.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 1

Kalpi Sits On the Hospital Bed Eating soup,Jai,Mira and Ajay watches her,The doctor comes in.
Doctor Sharma-We have good news
Jai smiles
Jai-How is she?
Doctor Sharma-Well we tested her scans and she's doing well,She might not remember a few things.
Mira-Will she Remember Us?
Doctor Sharma-What her brain and heart allows her to then Yes.
Ajay-Great can we carry her home?
Doctor Sharma-No, i think she needs to stay here for the next 2 days,Her memory is comming back and she will be getting flashes of the Incident that took place 2 months ago.
Jai-I will stay here with her,It's a matter of two days and holi is comming around.
Doctor Sharma-No Problem Mr Raichand
The Doctor left.
Mira-I glad to hear that she's alright.
Jai-Bhai,Bhabi you guys go i'll take care of her plus you need to take care of Khushi.
Ajay-Are you sure?
Jai-Yes,Now go
Mira and Ajay left,Jai watches Kalpi.
At the Kapoor's Manson Paakhi layed on her bed watching Raghav and Kamla's Photo's"I miss you both so much,I am noting without you too" she cried.
Singhaina's Mansion
Gauri Knocked on Raghav door,he watched her
Gauri-Holi is next week.
Raghav watched her
Gauri-Kamla is having holi at the chawl.
Raghav closed his eyes and remembering Covering kalpi's Face with red colour.
Gauri-Suhana will be there
Raghav opened his eyes.
Raghav closed his laptop
Raghav-She isn't kalpi
Gauri-She is like kalpi,her kind behavior everything.
Raghav got up and watched Gauri
Raghav-She isn't my kalpi.
Gauri-You can't hide the fact that you like suhana.
Raghav looked away,Gauri walked up to Raghav
Gauri-Suhana is amazing and she is just like kalpi,And kalpi isn't here anymore she's gone beta,You need to move on.
Gauri kissed Raghav and left,Raghav sat on the bed thoughtful.
In Pune at the Hospital
Jai sat down next to kalpi
Jai-Kalpi are you okay?
Kalpi watched him
Kalpi-Why am i here?Why did you bring me here?
Jai-You were in a coma for 2 months
Kalpi was shocked
Kalpi-Coma?
Jai-Yes,You were in a coma and you have memory loss
Kalpi-And you saved me?
Jai-Yes I took care of you.
Kalpi-I remember you helped me in that Hospital and a lady and a man too
Jai smiled
Jai-Thats my Bhabi and Bhai
Kalpi-Thank you for saving me
Jai-Do you remember what happen to you?
Kalpi watches him
Kalpi-No.
Jai-Do you remember anyone?Like your Parents
Kalpi-No,can i rest now?
Jai-Okay i'll go but i'll be back
Kalpi smiled
Kalpi-Okay
Jai left,Kalpi layed back on the Hospital bed and Remembered Kamla and Vithal she got angry.



Precap

At the Raichand's Home Kalpi went into the house and Watched around she smiled
Kalpi-Mira ji your home is beautiful
Mira smiled
Mira-Thank you Kalpi
Khushi ran and hugged kapi,Kalpi smiled
Jai and Ajay watched on happily
Jai-Bhai did you find out anything?
Ajay-No Kalpana has no family.
Ajay watched Jai
Ajay-You like her?
Jai watches kalpi and smiles
Jai-Alot
Jai watches Kalpi


Singhaina's Mansion
Kamla and Suhana arrived.
Kamla went by Gauri
Kamla-How is Raghav Baba?
Garui-He's Alright
Suhana went by Raghav
Suhana-Hi Raghav
Raghav Turned and watched her and thought"Why does everyone see kalpi in her?"


Kapoors Mansion
Paakhi sat down at the dining table
Neetu-Pookie Next week is holi and we have decided that we'll celebrate with kamla
Paakhi smiled.










Edited by -AriaRai- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
Very nice update to the start of the story😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
Interesting start dear, nice concept
Do continue the ff
Can't to see how Kalpi will find her family, their reaction and specially Raghav's 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: prishna_fan

Interesting start dear, nice concept

Do continue the ff
Can't to see how Kalpi will find her family, their reaction and specially Raghav's 😉


do u think i should make raghav clueless cause we all know he is 😆😆😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ariarai


do u think i should make raghav clueless cause we all know he is 😆😆😆


Lol i think so ... It Will be in his character after all the scene would so real 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: prishna_fan


Lol i think so ... It Will be in his character after all the scene would so real 😛


IKR 😆 WILL DO 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome. Rachna will always remain our Kalpi and Suhana is like her but another character. Wow! If something like this happened we would still be watching the show. But we know CVs are brainless. So no hopes. At least Raghav knows Suhana is not Kalpi. He's not dumb in your ff as he is in ema. Eager to see his reaction when Kalpi comes to the chawl. How can we forget the last holi they celebrated together. It was one of the most romantic episodes.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
nice update😊...Rachana is Kalpi..our nly kalpi ...thats it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I like that Raghav knows that Suhana is not like his Kalpi
And he can tell the difference
Aww Kalpi can't remember anything
Lovely update

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