FF:Qurbani- pg 24prt 33 - Page 2

Thx 4 all da comments...u guyz r really nice.Well....I will post da next part very soon.By dat time, keep guessing who did the phone call...& who is comin 2 Bani's house at night. 😆

Lil Asian Gal

that was really good.
just loved it.
continue soon

that was soo good
wonder who called
pls cont soon!!!!

hey priya!


I juz luv da start,.... plz continue!im new here ,...
n i read all of every1'z fanficz,... there awsum!

gr8 start of wit da new Fanfic....! try ur best! im really into this one! 👏
luv, diva_princess

Hey dere priyanka...
I really love your fanfic ....keep it up!!! 👏

hi priya..it ws a gr8 start..plz cont soon...
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PART TWO

Recap: Introduction 2 every1 in Deshmuk's house. Anjali,Bani,Rano and Piya was making dinner 4 a party at their house. After all da ladies finished cookin….there was a phone call.

Bani: Hello?Aap kaun bol rahi he?

Zooming in on da person's lip,eyes and smile.

Unknown: Are..jab tum janti ho ke main hi hoon….to phir ye poochne ka natak kya hai,huh?

Bani: Pushkar…aisa bhi to ho sakta tha ke yeh kisi aur ka phone call hota…Bani thought for a name…..jaisi ki Papa!She bursted out wid laughter.

Pushkar: Are humarein iss baat par tumhara Papa kya kar rahi hai? Waisa kya aaj kuch khaas hai kya…jo tum mujhe bula raheho?

Bani: Haan. Hum Jiju ko bula rahein hai…aur saat saath tum hein bhi aana padega. Tum ao gena?

Pushkar: Thik hai…main ajaongi.Bye..Luv ya!Pushkar said smiling.

Bani: She blushed. 😳Bye!

Bani placed da phone down..& Piya was right behind her.

Piya: Bani di…aap kise baat karehi thi?

Bani: Oh who..woh Pushkar tha.

Piya: Kya kehraha tha?....kya woh ayega? She blushed as she said dat.

Bani: Haan Piya…woh ayega.

Piya: Thik hai..main chalti hoon tayaar hone ke liye. Piya was quite excited 2 hear dat Pushy was cumin 2 her house.

WALIA RESIDENCE

It was 7 PM & every1 was getting ready. Adi who was having a lil argument wid Jigs abt wat 2 wear and wat not 2 wear 4 today's lil invite.
Ranveer, Tarun, Sahil and Nachiket was ready as usual unlike the girls like…Anu and Jigs.

A man came in da house by da front door,he's back was only shown 2 da audience. He was a man in black. He rushed upstairs 2 his room 2 get fresh and 2 get changed. He took a shower, where he's hair was still damp: yet his hair looked sizzling hot. He went to take out a silk white shirt from his cabinet, a bage pant wid a matching suit of color bage & black party wear shoes. He wore da pant…and shirt where da camera was zooming on da buttons he was buttoning. He wore da suit by turning aroung himself…& then da camera focused from bottom to top. It was none other tan JAI WALIA. He was ravishing.(Hope da description gave u an image dat I c in my mind). For a perfect finishing touch, he applied his favourite perfume swiss army. Everybody got dressed and was down stairs waiting for Pushkar. Pushkar came after a while…& everybody left 2 go 2 Bani's house.

DESHMUK'S RESIDENCE
Night

Nishikant already returned home, he got ready and was ready 2 welcome da guests. Anjali,Bani,Piya,Rano and Dadi ma was ready…but they felt dat they were missing sumthing or sum1……Roshni was missing! Everybody in da family was quite pist abt Roshni..as she is never careful or aware of her duties 2 call her family 2 inform dat she will be late. Bani was upstairs wid Piya and Rano trying 2 call Roshni….yet no respond. By dat time….Walia family arrived. Everybody was at da door. Nishikant, Anjali and Dadi ma were greeting them at da door. Walia family entered da house and were now sitting on the sofas.

Masi: Humarein achi achi betiyaan kahan par hai? Mujhe dekhna hai.

Anjali : Ji woh abhi aati hi hogi.(She looks at the staitrs 2 c her daughters cum).

Dadi: Yeh lo, yeh log aagaye.

Right away Pushy, Jai and Sahil got up. They were staring at them. Jai was waiting specificly 4 sum1…but she wasn't there.His eyes instead caught Bani…he was mesmerized da way she was looking in a pink saree wid embroidery on it.Piya was wearing a saree dat was black wid gold sparkles on it…and lastly Rano was wearing a salwar kameez dat had navy blue color on it wid silver flowers on it. As soon as da 3 daughter came down, da boys sat down.

Dadi ma: Are bhai…tum teenon ko kuch khabar pata chala ke Roshni kahan par hain?

Bani: Ji woh….woh phone utha nehi raha hai.

Rano: Haan, hum jabhi phone karte hai….koi respond nehi araha hai.

Jai's heart was broken after hearing dat…after all he came here 2 c Roshni, his fianc.
Right then, there was a knock at da door. Raghu kaka went 2 open da door….it was none other than Roshni. Jai's eyes were gleaming as he flashed her a brilliant grin.

Hope u guys like it!I'll try posting da next part...by dat time...plz comment if its gud or bad(LOL).

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PART THREE

Recap: Introduction to Pushkar & Walia family's introduction. Walia family arrives at Deshmuk's house & every1 was waiting 4 Roshni 2 cum. There was a knock at da door and it was Roshni.

Roshni: Hey Jai!!!!!!She came running 2 hug him. O my darling…I missed u sooo much. When did u come back from ur trip from Dubai?!(Like she cares)

Jai was abt 2 answer her question but Jigs planned 2 answer it.

Jigs: Oh Roshni!….he came back 5 days ago. Jai ghar pe phone kiya tha tumehein batane keliye..kyun tumhein kya koi message nehi diya?Jigs looked at Pia, Bani , and Rano to make Roshni get upset wid them abt this. Kya tum logon ne bataya nehin?

Rano was getting pist at hearing wat Jigs said…everybody knew how Jigs was.

Rano: Jigyasa aunty!…..Humne di ko kaha tha!

Jigs: Oh u did?

Roshni: Shayad mein bhul gayi thi.

Jai was quite surprised 2 c dat Roshni has sumhow ignoring him….he found it really rude.

Jai: Lekin Roshni…mein anaise pehle tumhein phone karke bataya tha ki mein araha hoon.

Bani tried 2 change da situation & topic. She felt dat da situation waz getting a bit 2 tensed.

Bani: Aap log yeh sab baatein baad mein karenge…ab hum khana khane keliye jaye?

Nishikant: Haan haan…zaroor beti. Chaliye.

Everybody was going towards da dining space. Pushy was trying 2 catch up pace wid Bani & Sahil was tryin 2 catch up wid Rano.

Pushy: Kya bhai?....tumne mujhe Hi nehi ki.

Bani: Main aise kaise karti….samne sab baithe huye the.

Pushy: Oh I c.

Bani hits him on da head lightly.

Bani: Budhoo kahin ke. She laughs as she said dat.

And over da other side Sahil is tryin 2 talk wid Rano.

Sahil: Hello Rano! How do u do?

Rano mumbled 2 herself: O god!...not HIM!

Sahil: Kya ….kya tumne kuch kaha?

Rano: Nahi…nahi to. Kuch bhi to nahi!

Sahil: Thik hai…to kya hum khana khane jaye?

Rano: Hum to wahi karne jarahe the.

Sahil: Oh..oh ya.He mumbled 2 himself: Stupid! Idiot! Budhoo kahin ke…ladkiyon se thik tarha baat bhi nahi kar sakte!

Rano: Kya tumne kuch kaha?

Sahil: Nahin nahin..chalein?

Rano: Haan…she laughed to herself cuz she heard wat he mumbled.

Everybody was at da table…Bani, Piya & Rano was serving food 2 ppl.

Anjali: Roshni …tum bethi huye kyun ho? Kya tum apne baaki behenon ke saath serve karneme help nahin karoge?

Roshni: Ma! Aap jante hai na ki main bohat thak chuki hoon…waisi bhi..Bani, Piya aur Rano kar rahi hai na.

Dadi ma: Chodo usse….woh to koi kaam bhi nahi karte..lekin thak gayi hai.

Roshni: DADI MA! How dare u say dat?!

Every1 was shocked 2 c and hear wat Roshni was doin. Roshni left from there angrily…..& Jai went after her. Bani saw this & she also went 2 help out before anything goes out of hands. They were running towards Roshni's room.

Jai: Roshni!….Roshni! Tum meri baat to suno.

Roshni: Nahi Jai! Main janti hoon ke tum mujhe samjhane aye ho ke Dadi ma ne ya sab jaan buchkar nehin kya.

Bani stood at Roshni's door 2 listen.

Jai: Haan, main to such kehe rahahoon. Dekho Roshni, tumharein iss bartaf ke peeche koi baat hogi. I think ur hidin sumthin from me….and ur family. Is it true?

Roshni looks at Jai and answers: Actually yes. U c I came late b/c of sumthin. I went for shooting in da morning & after I waz done shooting…..I got an offer, from a director 2 do a film.

Jai: Okay….go on.

Roshni: I have 2 give my decision very soon or else da director will go 2 another model 2 do his film.

Jai: G o ahead…I want u 2 do it. But it has 2 be done before our marriage..u understand?

Roshni gave a faint smile and answered: Hehe hehe…there is a problem.

Jai: Kya hai problem?

Roshni: Jis din ye film ki first day shooting hai na?......woh humarein shaadi ki din mein hogi.

Bani heard this wid patience.

Jai: Wat? Nahi…nahi aisa nehin ho sakta. Tum jante ho ke humari iss shaadi ki tarik paaki karne ke liye kitne mehnon guzaar gaye. Aura bb jake humari shaadi ki arik paaki hui. No Roshni, u can't do it……& I also decide 2 not allow u 2 do modeling after our marriage.

Roshni looked up at Jai and began 2 raise her voice: Wat?....tum aise kuch nehi kar sakte. Tumne pehle kabhi muhe yeh nahi kaha…to phir abb yeh sab kehne ka matlab kya hai tumhara?

Jai: Tum bohut achi tarha se janti ho ki main aisa kyun kaha. Now don't make me change my mind, now let's go downstairs 2 eat and behave properly in front of every1. Don't even think of telling this 2 any1 in ur family.

Roshni: NAHI! Main nehi jaonga!!!

Bani was there at the door and Jai saw dat when he was cumin out. Bani gave a look 2 not worry.He nodded his head and left from there angrily wid Bani 2 go eat.

Bye guyz! Hope u like it! Plz reply...thx.

Lil Asian Gal

great ff.
liked it.
plz cont. soon.

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PART FOUR

Recap: Roshni cums & sumhow Jai felt as if she was ignoring him. Every1 went 2 da dining place 2 eat. Bani, Piya and Rano was serving food except Roshni. Dadi ma got pissed abt this and said dat she didn't like wat Roshni does. Roshni went 2 her room…Jai and Bani went after her. Jai was persuading her 2 forget abt this & 2 join him 2 eat. She then said da reason behind this behaviour…it was abt an offer dat she got from a director 4 a film. The day da shooting starts, is da day Roshni and Jai get married. Jai said no and decided not 2 allow her 2 model after their marriage. She didn't accept it. Jai and Bani went downstairs 2 eat.

Bani and Jai were cumin down da stairs. Every1 at da dining table were lookin at them cumin. When Masi saw them cumin down….she got a vision of sumthin…..her vision waz Jai & Bani as a couple, she suddenly got distracted by Dadi who pushed at the elbow asking in gestures of wat's goin on in ur mind. Masi laughed 2 herself abt this, no….this can't happen now….its 2 late she said 2 herself. Basically nobody liked Roshni from Jai's family except Jigs…and from Roshni's side was her Dadi ma. They came downstairs & went 2 their seats.

Nishikant: I'm so srry beta I'm really srry abt dat.

Jai: Nahi Papa…its okay. Kuch bhi nahi huwa.

Everybody felt tensed at da table and were hesitating 2 eat. Bani noticed dat, so she began 2 talk on how much effort her mom, sisters and she put work 2 do da food them.

Bani: Are…..yeh lo! Koi kya kuch bhi nehi khayega? Mummy ne, mere behenon ne aur maine bhi kitne mehenat se khana pakaya…kitne shandar dish banwayi hai…aur. Lekin aap log khayenge bhi nahi? Yeh to koi baat nehi hui. Chaliye...aap log apna plate dedijiye....aap logon ko khana bhi nehi khana padega.She waited...but nobody gave her da plate. Are...kamal hai!

Sahil: Bani Di....lagta hai hum sabh logon ko bohut zor ki bhuk lagi hai!Sahil gave a smile 2 Bani and so did Bani 2 Sahil.

Masi: Are haan bhai! Chaliye…sab log apna apna khana lelo.

Every1 gave a smile 2 each other…sumhow Jai was specifically giving da smile 2 Bani.(Oy oy!!) J Jai was quite impressed abt how Bani can handle situations…he thought for a moment dat I juss wish Roshni cud be exactly like Bani. I mean who wouldn't want 2 have a wife like Bani. He thought 2 himself.

Walia family's and Deshmuk family's elders were at da living room while da youngsters were at backyard tryin 2 chill. Sahil was tryin 2 talk wid Rano, Ranveer was wid Anu…Ranveer being her big bro was tryin 2 explain 2 Anu wat is gud 2 do and wat is not gud 2 do(da lame talk wid siblings(LOL)), Piya was trying 2 compliment Pushy abt how gud he looks and how long he made Piya wait for him & lastly Bani was talking 2 Jai abt Roshni.

Bani: Dekhiye Jiju….main unhe apse behetaar janti hoon, aur mera dil kehta hai ki woh apka dil dukhane ki galti nahi karegi. Jai looked up at her wid a smile.

Jai: Tum kya Roshni se badi ho ya choti ho...hmm? He lauhed as he questioned her dat.

Bani smiles and answers: Kyun…yeh sawal kyun?

Jai: Kyun ki tum bilkul badi logon ki tarha batein karte ho, isliye. He laughs. Kash Roshni tumhari tarha hoti….atleast usme koi sense hoti. Jai makes a naughty smile and says:Actually Roshni is lucky dat she's not hideous like U. He laughs out loud.

Bani was shocked 2 hear dat, got pissed and answered: Wat!?...wat did u say 2 me?! She was choking Jai's collar of his white silk shirt. Jai was making faces 2 Bani showing dat she was really choking hard…but she wasn't choking hard at all. Jai acted 2 cough.

Jai: Are are…mujhe koi bachao!! Yeh koi orat hai yeh janwar?!(LOL) Mujhe choro…mujhe choro. Bani let go of him and turned away from him. Are yaar…main 2 sirf joke kar raha tha! Jai bends down wid his 2 hands on his ears for forgiveness. I'm srry.

Bani laughed at da way Jai was asking 4 forgiveness. He looked like a monkey she thought(Why?...I really don't know!) : Its okay. Iss bar main tumhe chod raha hoon..lekin agle baar aisa karogi to mafi nahi milega…samjhe?

Jai got up and was standing wid a smile: Ji haan memsahib. I was juss jokin…aise mokein kaha paoonga…akhir tum mere adhi gharwali to ho!😉

Bani made a fake shocking face 2 believe wat he said and answered: Acha…to aisi baat hai!😃😳

Jai laughed: Haan..baat kuch aisi hi hai. Jai took her under her shoulders. Bani jo tumhe payaegi na....woh sabse khush nasib hoga. Kash tum meri mangeetar hoti. He looked down 2 c Bani b/c she is a bit short compared 2 Jai.(lol)He wanted 2 c Bani's expression 2 wat he said.

Bani heard dat and hit him on his chest: Kya?...tumhari mangeetar hote huwe bhi mujhe apna maangeetar banana chahti ho? Maine to ek bohut badmash Jiju payi hoon, she said dat looking up at da sky as if God was there(She was meaning 2 say it to God). Masi was cumin out 2 call the youngsters 2 go home…but then she saw Jai wid Bani and saw da same vision she saw at da dining place. 😳Masi then hoped dat she gets a bohu like Bani in da house wid her Munna….& at da same time Bani hoped dat I don't get a husband like Jai when a shooting star passed by.

Guess whose wish will be fulfilled. (LOL)I had lots of fun writing this episode…and hope u guys like it like me. Plz do comment..thx!😃

Lil Asian Gal