Sahil FF The Dark Sided Man (Part 2 updated)

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Hey everyone this is my first FF ever written in my life actually first time i actually wrote anything and uploaded it. And the first part will be uploaded really soon but i just thought id give a heads up because im really nervous to be doing this cause im not really familiar with anyone on this forum so if u guys want me to upload the FF please do let me know😊
This is the main story line so basically ahil is a gang leader i know far fetched😳and sanam is the simple dhaba owner she started of with anyways. And the story progresses with this story line in mind with a lot of cute scenes to read about so yea please let me know if you guys would wanna read anything like this cause im really nervous to upload it.





The characters and their life will slowly become more clear to you eventually I didn't wanna give it all out cause then what's the fun and mystery too. So this is my first try and it can possible suck really bad. But anyways enjoy :)
A definition you might need to know is of the word: parabati:Parabatai are a pair of Nephilim warriors who fight together and are closer than siblings, regardless of their gender. They are partners who would lay down their life for the other.

The definition is not used with exact terms meaning the nephiliam part so don't confuse urselves. The main thing to concentrate on is from where it says warriors who fight together. Thanks :)
Part 1
Absolutely not! What were you even thinking? Ahil yelled into the phone while trying to steer the car. It wasn't suppose to rain he thought and for the 100th time he cursed his choice of travel. As time went on it was getting harder to drive and see where he was headed. But bhai I didn't know they would follow us here rehaan yelled on the other side of the phone. It doesn't matter what you thought in the end they did right? and now because of you she's involved in all this mess too. They are after her cause now they know what they can use as a weak spot for the gang and I can't afford that. Ahils mind was getting blocked with all of the thoughts that went through his mind. The gang was like a brick wall and if one person falls then it's like creating a huge hole for the enemies to attack at. Ahil continued to rehan,"I told u so many times to stay away from her from this love and now look what happened. I don't wanna hear anything, just meet me now." Rehaan finally exhausted after the constant fighting between the two agrees to meet ahil in the outskirts of punjab. Rehaan loved his brother even though he wasn't blood related to ahil and he couldn't afford aggravating him more, even if it meant risking the security of his fianc Asma. Rehaan walked away from the window in Asmas room and moved towards the bed where asma peacefully slept. He replayed all of the scenes of the night. It had been Asmas 25th birthday and rehaan had thought of taking her to watch a movie but what he didn't know was that the opposing gang had been following him since he had left the house. He recalled the events of the night.They had entered the movie theatre. It looked like it always had with the blue seats pulled up as if someone is cradling themselves in sorrow. This thought always disturbed rehan actually all of his thoughts constantly disturbed him they weren't always to positive. He walked with asma right at his heels to the top of the theatre. The constant bickering of the people watching under him gave him a odd reassurance to him. He felt safe. Rehan had always been softer than ahil so he did tend to get nervous but not for himself but for Asma his fianc. Asma with her medium brown hair always seemed lost whenever she used to walk into her college. Ahil and rehaan at that time were there for their weakly trade of weapons. Rehan slowly found himself making excuses and would succeed and find himself out side of Asmas college for a so called "weapon deal". From once a weak to almost everyday rehan found himself drawn toward this innocent beauty. Neither of them had realized when they had fallen in love but they had. But asma did not know of rehaans dark side and thought he was a simple sales man who worked hard to make ends meet, it was this fact ofcourse that made asma love him even more but little did she know. Rehan stepped away from her bed not wanting recall the rest of the events that took place at the theatre. He was guilty of what state asma was in. it was his job, his so called occupation that had landed asma in this position he knew he would never forgive himself and he reminded himself of that constantly. He kissed Asmas forehead and took a step back taking in her posture and steady breathing once more before he went to meet with Ahils anger.

Ahil cursed himself once again for his habit of making such wise desisions. But the weather was the least of his worries. Rehan he thought that idiot just can't take care of himself. Ahil couldn't risk rehaans or Asmas security. He wasn't all to fond of love but asma had created a spot in his heart as a sister and when he had gotten the news of the shoot out in the theatre he was infuriated. He knew that the bullets were all meant to take down rehaan his brotherly pillar of emotional support. But in all this it had been asma who had been hurt. Ahil couldn't afford to loose his nominal sister. She had recovered outside of a hospital because taking her anywhere that public would be a huge risk he couldn't afford to take. Ahil pulled up into a empty field. He waited for rehaan and while he waited he worked to block out the horrible dhol music that was coming from a dhaba close by. Ahils wait was slowly ended as rehaan pulled up next to his car. Ahil opened his mouth to speak but was quickly cut of by rehaan who quickly started apologizing and protesting " bhai please meri baat samjiae mujhe nahi pata tha ke voh log mere peechay thay" I'm sorry bhai" tears slowly rolled out of rehaans eyes as he continued " bhai I love asma and I know that I should have been more careful but I couldn't help it I was so lost in her and her smile and everything about her I didn't even notice to check around or make sure we were safe. But bhai what can I do whenever I'm with Asma I never feel like anythings wrong" Ahil watched as rehaan spoke with pleading eyes. He knew none of this was rehaans fault but he has never wanted any girl getting involved with the gang because he knew of all the dangers that's came with and he himself didn't belive in love. If he did belive in love he only believed in loving your parents and siblings no one else. Ahil finally spoke " Rehaan main Chahta hoon ke tum asma ko le Kar kahi door chale jao. Rehaan absorbed in Ahils words but still couldn't take away the shock evident in his voice " bhai ye app kya Bhol rahe ho. How can I leave you and the gang we have been in this together and we are like parabati I can't leave you. Ahil felt a sting of pain in his heart. Him and rehaan had grown up together and lifted a gun with each other. They had saved each other's lives countless times. But some where ahil always knew that rehaan wasn't meant for this life. He had someone to love someone who he could love but ahil only had rehaan and his ami, and after years also asma. He couldn't afford to loose any of them not because of his gang. He had left his ami in Mumbai when they had been attacked by a gang. Ahil had been 8 at that time and loved his ami. He had finally found the love of a ami when he was 6 years old. But within those 2 years he had grown to love his mother immensely. After the gang attacked there was nothing left his ami was blinded in the attack and his 2 sisters killed. The gang had left a gun on the ground of their small flat. Ahil looked at his ami as she was being taken to a helpless shelter and he knew he would be next. He would be sent to foster care. Ahil glanced at the gun that lay idly on the ground and then around the familiar red walls of the flat. His eyes slowly stroked the hole in the wall where he had first seen into rehaans apartment. Rehaan at that time had no one. He used to live with his very mean foster parents he would often talk about running away and leaving them. Ahil didn't think twice he picked up the gun and ran after his ami. He reached her and hugged her like his life depended on it. His ami had whispered to him in a very fierce tone " beta ab tum jioge sirf badla lene ke liye" ahil had slowly pulled away from his ami and had given her a reassuring smile. That night he ran up the stairs and grabbed rehaan and they had together run away from Mumbai. And since then ahil and rehaan had been parabati in a gang they had formed together. Rehaan had been reluctant at first but ahil had been thirsty for revenge he knew he wouldn't rest until he didn't get revenge for his sisters lives. Ahil came back into reality when he heard rehaans sobbing. Ahil finally spoke" rehaan meri baat suno I'm not saying I'm kicking you out I'm asking you to willingly leave. I'm not mad but your the only family I have now I haven't even heard about ami in 8 years the last time I talked to her I was 22 your all I really have and now I can't afford to loose you. I'm not saying never show me your face but until it isn't safe for you to come back here to punjab I want you to leave with asma. And leave the gang for good I want you to start a good life with asma become something she thinks you are. Start afresh. But I promise il always be a part of your life. I can't loose you" ahil paused and let the anguish cross over his heart. He then continued" rehaan I don't belive in love not when it has involvement in a gang. This love will make our gang weaker and me weaker I can't afford that" Ahils voice stiffened a bit rehaan your leaving the gang and that's my order and your also your leaving punjab until it's not safe to come back. Am I clear? Rehaan looked up and smiled at his parabati he always looked up to Ahil and even now he wouldn't reject his order. Rehaan stared back into Ahils eyes and gave him a huge hug. Ahil hugged him back but felt the discomfort in his right hand where he had been shot in a gang fight years ago but it never seemed to heal. They pulled away. Ahil gave rehaans head a brotherly rub and they both parted ways.

The rain had started getting worse and there was a unknown emptiness in Ahils heart. He knew that this was the pain of parting from a loved one. It wasn't knew to him but still he felt a odd unfamiliar nervousness. He increased his speed dangerously. His eyes found there way to the gas meter. " shit" ahil cursed his luck. He only had a few meters before the cars gas would run out. The leaves rustled under the tired of his lambo. There were always perks of being in a gang and one was money was never a problem. Atleast for the gang leader (which ahil was). His car came to a sudden halt and shivers crawled up his spine. It wasn't cause of the cold actually to think of it there wasn't any cold at all. Not in august atleast. He slowly placed a foot out of his car onto the rough cement. He thought about all the cars that had driven over it. It made him feel unimportant like his existence didn't matter. If tonight he died in this path between jungles nobody would care. A thousand cars had passed over the pavement and many more would wether he lived or not. Ahil shaked away the thought he had gotten the habit of over analyzing things from his parabati rehaan. Rehaan always looked at even the simplest things from a deeper perspective. Ahil felt a surge of pain cross over his heart. It was at the thought of rehaan. Ahil shook of the thought and stepped out into the rain. In a matter of seconds he was drenched and fully intoxicated with the smell of rain and the earths scent. He was familiar with the smell he had been out in the rain many times. But this time there was a odd smell that bothered him. A smell of suffering and pain, possibly blood he thought. Just then a loud scream blew ahil out of all his thoughts.
"Aaah"
Ahils hair rose up all over his body.
He took a step towards where the scream had come from. Ahil was never afraid not even for his life but the scream made him fear, he feared the unknown but whatever he feared it was tearing him down to his bones. He walked slowly into the jungle. He went deeper and and deeper slowly as the twigs made bone cracking sounds under him. He had only taken a another step when he froze. And all the life felt like it was being sucked out of him.

That's all for now I will update very soon maybe even today! But tell me if I even should I know there's a lot of detail on rehaan but I'm making this FF more like a novel so there's gonna be a lot of detail to add to te mood and feel to the FF. Anyways I hope you guys enjoyed

Precap: ahil and Sanand first meeting
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Liked the idea.
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Part 2 will be updated today too :)
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Very detailed intro... loved it... waiting fr the meeting
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Part 2

Ahil stood in the middle of a jungle with his eyes wide open. There was a pair of big round curious eyes looking back at him. He examined the young women standing Infront of him. Not even a hair was touched on her flawless body. Ahil mentally cursed himself for mostly wasting his time but also for thinking of any girl in a non professional way let alone flawless. He walked forward and grabbed the girl by her arms she looks back with confused eyes. Ahil was waiting for the pain to come to his injury on his right hand but surprisingly he felt nothing. Usually when he even wrote his hand throbbed like it had a heart beat of it's own but it wasn't now. It felt as though he had never even been hurt. Ahil snapped out of his thoughts and suddenly burst out yelling. The girl who was surprised with the sudden outburst stared like a lost puppy in the snow." Tum pagal ho kya?" Ahil asked in disbelief. " why are you yelling when there isn't even anything here. The girl looked at him furiously and squirmed out of his grasp. The momment Ahils hand went empty of her body a sharp pain went up Ahils right hand. It felt as though he had been shot again. He ignored the pain and realized he should ask why she even screamed he realized they were in the middle of a jungle and anything could have been wrong. He calmed himself down and looked back at the girl and spoke with a fierce but calm tone. Why were you yelling? The girl looked back at him with a scared look in her eyes" voh chipkali" the girl couldn't even finish her sentence because ahil had shut her up with his fierce murderous look. Ahil tried to control his Heating anger. He had met many girls been and spent nights with many girls but none had been so crazy like this one. He sucked in a breath but his anger wasn't hidden from the girl and she slowly took a step back. As she stepped back she heard something's crack under her feet almost like a bone. It made her jump In surprise making ahil more agitated then before. He had only met this girl 40 seconds ago and he already was starting to hate her. Ahil took in a ragged breath and asked her" tum itni raat ko Akeli jungle mein kya Kar Rahi ho?" Ahil spoke as if talking to a 4 years old child. The girls eyes sudddenly brightened up with a new kind of Chamak to them. And she spoke with the same excited tone" yeh jungle mere dhabe ke peeche hai. Sanam da dhaba naam to app ne suna he hoga. World famous in punjab! She spoke in the most excited tone ahil had ever heard and that to just to tell him about her stupid dhaba. Ahil spoke" that doesn't explain why your in a jungle. Sanam spoke" aap ne to meri baat poori hi ni Suni. Iss jungle mein pudheenay ki chutni ke liye bohut ache patay...sanam was cut of by ahil who had already started walking away. She thought to her self kitne batameez hai. Jallad Jin.
Rehaan opened the door to Asmas apartment slowly enlighten not to wake asma up. She was having a quick recovery he thought. He lightly stepped into her house only to find her waiting for him. Rehaan felt his heart leap. He had only felt this adrenaline once when he had made the desision to accompany ahil from Mumbai to punjab. He tried slowing down the pace of his rapidly beating heart as if he had any control on it. He knew that he would answer a lot of Asmas questions and possible even loose her when she woke up but he didn't expect it to be this quick. He took a step towards asma but like one would do when they touch something burning hot just like that asma took a step back. Rehaan felt his heart scream in pain. He helplessly looked at asma and turned towards the door. He was just about to open the lock when he felt the usually hot damp hands of asma on his shoulder. Asmas hands only got sweaty when she was either really sad or mad. And none of the emotions made rehaan feel any bit of joy. He turned to face asma with guilt evident in his eyes. He hadn't even fully turned to face her when she had wrapped him a warm embrace. Rehaan felt the air being sucked out of him. He felt as though he had hugged her for the first time. When they broke out of the embrace rehaan started explaining himself and about the gang. When he had finished asma hugged him once again and finally spoke the first word in what had been 4 days but seemed like years to rehaan." You could have been killed" she let out a huge sob causing rehaans grip on her to tighten." They didn't want me they wanted you. And they always will you'll always be in danger won't you?" Rehaan felt his heart yell in despair this was the momment he would dread for the rest of his life asma was going to dump him. Rehaan spoke in uncertainty" I never wanted to hurt you that's why I had to lie to you. Being involved in a gang is to dangerous. I know I shouldn't have even gotten engaged to you but it was to late I had fallen to deep already."Rehaan pleaded" please don't leave me" and let out a sob that he had been trying to swallow down for minutes. Asma looked at him with a questioning look" is ahil involved in this too?" Rehaan nervously clenched his fists causing his own palms to sweat a trait he had picked up from ahil. He spoke in a low and regretful voice."Asma H h he's the leader of the gang" he spoke the words half choking on his voice and stammering. Asma fell back onto the sofa and looked at rehaan who looked as though he was going to pass out. She finally spoke" I'm not going to leave you." Rehaan breathed a sigh of relief " but it's also true I don't wanna die rehaan and more than that I don't even wanna live without you" rehaans heart sank on those words he had gotten asma stuck in suck a forbidden love Ahil bhai had always been right he thought a gang and love can never go together. Rehaan sat beside asma. They sat there in silence for a while when asma finally spoke" well now what?" Rehaan surprised at her words took time to regain his words and replied" ahil bhai wants me to leave the gang and go somewhere far with you". He didn't explain anything else and felt that these few words were a sufficient enough reply based on the question. Asma turned and smiled at him" when do we leave ima have to tell sanam you know.
Sanam and asma had been friends since childhood but where sanam had been burdened with work at a young age asma had continued her studies upto college. Throughout the years sanam and asma had become closer to each other than siblings could be so not telling her wouldn't be something Allah would forgive her for. She called sanam up right away and explained the whole situation from the gang to rehaan and her having to leave. Sanam was more than shocked she almost fell over on her head literally. They both hung up.
Sanam was in pain immense pain she never expected asma having to leave her let alone the whole of punjab. And it wasn't just that, that bothered her it was also the fact that Asmas life was now in danger no matter how far they ran there would always be a risk of getting killed. A shiver crawled up Sanand spine. As she was getting up to close up the dhaba sanam suddenly halted. The name asma had mentioned in the phone conversation Asmas nominal bother the gang leader Ahil raza Ibrahim something about that name had a familiarity to sanam she for sure hadn't heard it before but she felt like she knew this man. She stopped her thoughts midway as she realized she still had to lock up the dhaba. She finished locking the dabba when she heard the rustling of footsteps behind her sanam froze in shock no one absolutely no one came to the dhaba especially this late. It wasn't the safest place to be at night and she was well aware. Sanam breathed in and out having to remind her self to exhale she felt something so wrong about this person she stood frozen in her steps.

Rehaan spoke quietly trying not to wake asma" ji bhai we are leaving in 30 min I'm letting asma rest up a bit. Ahil spoke with pain strongly evident in his voice he knew it wouldn't be easy letting and watching rehaan go. It was like watching someone die but actually be there. Ahil spoke equally low just to give comfort to himself that he isn't causing asma any pain and is lettin her atleast sleep peacefully even if his gang might not let her live peacefully" yea rehaan I'm coming to see you guys of I'm leavening right away. Ahil hung up without even a bye. He thought that just like the end of this incomplete phone call if something happens to rehaan it will happen Without a word and a goodbye and he is certain of that. He shut out his mind and concentrated on the road. He was back on the road where his car had lost gas yesterday. Only Allah knows how he got back. Ahil opened his window to let in fresh air when he smelt the same smell of pain an suffering and the familiar scream.


That's all for today I know the meeting wasn't so awesome sorry :) hehe but it will be good now in the next chapter I pinky promise :) lol thanks everyone for the support it's awesome sorry about the long details the next update will be ahil sanam packed and longer
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