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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kg15

Part 23- Waah Beta! Kya transformation Tha!!!! Dabang se seedha Bachcha bana Diya Hero ko!!! 😆 Itna kyo rula usse???

Firstly, thanks for dedication Barbie doll!!! Mmmuuaahhh...
I loved this part!! Hands down to your imagination yaar!!! That pebble scene was so cute and so was the friend milaap... 😉
Now waiting for the next part... What your hero wants now???😆

hahah ya maja aa gaya na
ab pata chalega kyu rulaya
awww you welcome didu
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: vmpy

a v nice update akku 🤗thanx fr pm

thanxx for reading aquib
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kg15

Part 24- Ohooo... So Barbie doll badi ho gayi!!! 😆 Akku you have made your hero a complete love sick man yaar... Itna pyaar... Achaanak!! Kya ho Gaya hai usse!!! 😆 And what was that... You stopped at the point where the romance was going to start in actual!!! Height of sadism re...😆

heheh thank you thank you
aww no claps pls😆
pata nai ab aggey agey dekho hota hai kya😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kg15

Part5- Akku!! You really wrote this???😲 Humari to class bhi start nahi hui Thi aur Tu to expert ban gayi re... You are so talented!!! 😆 It was so sensual yaar... Loved it!!! Hmm... So your heroine ran away with your hero!!! Akku, how will you make both of them FANAAH...😆?

bas kuch or min sab pata chal jaega
kkkwait n watch didu😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
sorry but i cant stop myself🤣
village track chahiye tha🤣🤣
dau jee ka reaction chahiye tha🤣🤣

lo le lo🤣🤣

no chappals pls🤣🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago

PART 26

Next day will bring new sun to me...

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mmm..someone please shut window..i want to sleep more...this bright sunlight na...arrey yaar..close window pls..wait..where am I ..this is not my room..arrey haan I came with R.K...bus..i drunk water we slept and...

this place..is this R.K.'s viallge..why he haven't awakened me yaar ..is this his room..pakka the way it is disturbed pakka its his room..but why he haven't wakened me...dam..my head is paining too..i turned every side..there is kind of pile up everywhere..

"R.K." I called.."R.K."..."koi hai" I said as I cant see anyone here...

I turned and a dangerous man came in front of me all sudden..smiling..wait I have seen him somewhere..arrey haan the one who captured all girl over there ya ya...OMG..OMG.. if I m kidnapped...my heart start beating ...he coming near to me..damm hell god!!! Run madhu..run!! I started doing the same but there was no place of exit except the one from where he was coming..ya ya the window I can jump from there..I Ran and ran and finally reached there..as I tried to get out from there I see the face relaxing me ever my R.K.

"R.K." I shouted...my hope my all aspiration there..n someone killing me here

He looked at me..he was smiling but looking at me got worried "madhu" he schokingly said and ran toward door...

He came and ..i ran and hugged him.."R.K." he is the same who kidnapped those girls...he is.." I was to say something but he interrupted

"how you came here and how dare you to scare my BIWI" he angrily looked toward that guy

"maaf kar dena r.k. bhaiyaa" he said in joking tone and starts laughing and R.K. started laughing too..

How can he laugh this is enough to schok me...

"R.K.ay "I shockingly said.."you r laughing!!1 he is the same who tried to kidnapped girls there..you..you saved us remember"

"really" he said in azeeb see tone "breaking news I never known this" said he and both brust into laughter giving high five to each other...

'Bhai aa rae hai" a sound came from backward

And both R.K. nad that cheap kidnapper quitened

A man long broad...full kurta and a typical terrorist type came there

"rajkumari wakens from the fairy Dream" he taunted

"jee" said that kidnapper

All were looking down sooking head

"Bahut umda kaam kiya hai sultan ne" said that so called bhai looking toward R.K. and R.k. smiles

"k...k...ko..kon..kon sultan" my voice breaks "he is R.K. my R.K."

He smiles and said "I never make things difficult so better you understand in few words..you are betrayed by your love R.K. whio is actually sultan..and now you are kidnapped presidents daughter.."

"kid..kidnapped...bet..betrayed..whats all...R..R.K..." he was standing all quite next to me "rk ye kya bolo ra hai...whats all" he is quite..i cant handle this I shouted "what all this speak pls..." my hand reached his face then collar "say R.K. this all is wrong na...say something for shake of goodness dammit"

"when I speak ..no one even open mouth" that gangster look - a - like said..i was confused what to say what to not..who is he why I am here...what he is saying ...if they are trying to fool me..huh...

"Sultan" he said looking toward R.K. "behter hoga kee ye sab samajh jaaye" saying this he laft and all other too leaving me with R.K.

I ran to him."what is this r.k...ye kya hai..this is a prank na..say yes this is prank na" my ears were dying to listen no..i m ready that he start laughing with others saying this is a prank..hope he say so..he smiles..thak god..thank god..but its turning to something else

He smricks..a devil smile..pls no..pls no..i cant loose like this..he I mine only mine

"R.K...R.K. bolo pls..say something dammet" I shouted

"who R.K. " he said looking toward me "M sultan" HE SAID HIS ALL WORDS KILLING ME

"this all was aplan a full proof plan..my entrance..ignorance...acceptance...and that night too...a full proof plan" he said

"nai..R.K. this not ture" I was begging.."we love each other..we.."

He laughed and started walking all around me "LOVE" he laughed again "waise I have to accept I loved a lot" a feeling of relax in me "I loved a lot betraying you" all gone again

"really Madhubala..when you hug..when we kissed and that night remember..ahh you are so soft...I loved all that aha..i loved betraying you" he said

He turned to me and hold my chin with his finger..its hurting me but the hurt in my heart is more than this

"how you thought I will love you" he said "not let me tell you whole story Madhubala jee"

"we have to kidnap RESIDENTS DAUGHTER THE ONLY DAUGHTER OF PRESIDENT ...coz we want our masterming who is in Indian jail back...and we came to know that she is here somewhere so in each and every collage here few of our men spread..this was my good luck that I found you..now whole team would be happy of me..and you" he looked at me and smricked again "hahah you are pur key of success"

A sudden change in him where is my R.K.

"SULTAN..ek din duniya ka sultan banega..or uski seerhi tum hogi..president daughter"

Saying this he left me alone in this room who is ready to eat me..its paining a lot..i cant handle this..its better to die..i cant hadle this

WHYYY!!!!!!!! Why this happened to me..

WHY THIS HAPPENED TO ME

God!!! What I mistaken why...

There's a possibility,
There's a possibility,
All that I had, was all I'm gonn' get.

mmm...

There's a possibility,
There's a possibility,
All I'm gonn' get is gone with your stare.
All I'm gonn' get is gone with your stare.

This time he even tried to seprate but his strength weakens..and he couldn't..."just please accept this..my ears are dying to listen"

"I love you Madhu..you are my life" he was chanting

"I love you too R.K." ...'I Love you too" unknowingly this was coming from my mouth

He cares my face and wipes out tears...i could feel watmth of his hand ...

So tell me when you hear my heart stop
You're the only one who knows.
Tell me when you hear my silence.
There's a possibility I wouldn't know

mmm...
mmm...

Know that when you leave,
Know that when you leave,
by blood and by me, you walk like a thief,
by blood and by me, I fall when you leave.

Finally after wait of 10 min..which were longest 10 min of my life he opened my eyes

Omg omg its beautifull..its full of candels all over on floor..but let me gyess what is this hmm

"what is this" I asked from him

"hmmm our swet small and simple home " he said loking smilingly deep;y into my eyes




So tell me when you hear my heart stop.
You're the only one who knows.
Tell me when you hear my silence,
There's a possibility I wouldn't know.

So tell me when my sorrows over
You're the reason why I'm closed
Tell me when you hear me falling.
There's a possibility it wouldn't show.

mmm...
mmm...

I found little place...emarssed me I tried to go away from there but he cluthed my hand ..came near to me he put his hand flat on my belly ..he was behing me..he openes my cluture his nose was on my head..i can feel him..butterflies in me were raising ..i closed my eyes with his touch..i was shivering my legs were falling...he pulled me more close...by his palm flat on my belly...I turned back..

I cant hold myself anymore I hold his shoulder...I was looking down..he made me look to his eyes by holding my chin..i looked into his eyes...

"I love you r.k." I said..

His manly hand grabbed me little more he closed me more..and more.."I love you too" he said in my ears

This sensation..i cant explain ..this shivering..ahh..its like someone poured ice on my body..




By blood and by me, I'll fall when you leave.
By blood and by me, I'll follow your lead.

mmm...
mmm...
mmm...
mmm...

Some hustle of voices came from outside which waked me..omg is I was sleeping..suddenly my door opens and seen the familiar face SHIVI!!! She was worried her face was tensed

I jumped and hugged her!!..

"madhu..dont worry I came" she said hugging me tightly


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Posted: 11 years ago
Akku ise kehte hain master stoke...this is too good and way beyond my expectations...tu toh storys likhne mein master bangayi hain sahi mein...jst in the last update only i was wondering how its going to be linked to the prologue...you have cleared it all..loving this to bits...fatafat se next update dede this is really very entertaining...
Raja...Sullu..RK..abh yeh koi naya vala bhai..aur Shivi...wooh...this is great...

Edit:- OMG...!!!! first time tere update pe main first ayi hoon...woohooo!!!
Edited by tanuja.siri - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
nyc but confused...plz update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
what a shocking update😲
poor madhu...

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