MG FF HEAVEN IN HELL, THREAD 3, EPILOGUE, PG 100, AUG 15 - Page 43

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Posted: 10 years ago
So sorry dear for not giving any comment since I was aways due to some personal issue, I missed ur ff and read the part which I missed I must I loved all it was soo intense and romantic... update soon
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SORY FRIENDS FOR TE DELAY...THANKU FOR BEARING ME.. FIRST MY EXAMS THEN MY PC WENT TO COMA...SO LATE POST...
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THANKU FRIENDS FOR UR LOVELY COMMENTS AND LIKES...LOVE U ALL
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(THANKU SHRUTHE DIDI FOR TIS LOVELY BANNER..LOVE U)







H2 - 55


Geet was cribbing te whole drive..Maan didt care..he stop te car in front of te hospital..he open te door for Geet..but she didt cum out..Maan just carried her asking his bg to park te car

Geet wriggling : Maan leave me all are seeing..she felt embrassed as everyone giggling seeing them..Maan was yelling for dr..Nurses came

Nurse: sir wat happen

Maan: were is dr aunty..she is not well

Nurse: but were is te patient

Maan : she ,showing his arms were Geet is sitting and smiling

Nurse got confuse seeing her:she


Geet giggled..Maan glared at her and then nurse..Nurse gulp her saliva and rush to call dr to save her from Msk ki wrath..Maan took her inside..

Dr came drying her hands: wat happen Maan

Maan: aunty i was calling u

Dr: i was inside operation threatre..why wat happen Geet

Maan: she is not well..take all te test..even sonography

Geet: no aunty i was fine..im just tired but he is not listening to me

Dr: why suddenly..

Maan stammer: oh last night i went over board.. at once he utter those words Geet eyes widen in shock...Geet want to stangle his neck..she glared at him,for making her to get embrasse in front of dr

Dr smile:ok let me check..i will arrange for sonography

Maan: ok dr

Geet: no im fine



Maan: no u r not fine

Geet: tis is my health i know more abt myself

Maan: no u dont take care of urself..last night i said no but u didt listen to me

Geet look at him and closed his mouth and glared at him

Geet: do u have any sense..just shut up

Dr smile at them fixing te loops..They were arguing ,suddenly stops wen they heard some peep sound dr is explaining how to watch it.

Dr: hmm tis is babies's movement..u can hear their heart beats



Maaneet look each other and look at te screen..suddenly Maan realize dr's words

Maan: babies

DR smiles: twins

Maaneet was shocked,surprised, overwhelmed..they look at each other and watch te screen..dr left to give them some space..Maan's hand was on Geet's tummy..she hold his hand..





Maan was staring at te screen..he was feeling te most happiest person in te world..He felt he won te whole world..he got everything and now going to became father of two kids,wat does he want now..He want to scream to te whole world to share his happiness..For first time,He was feeling something beautiful inside him..but he dont its his fatherhood..his throat was chocking with so much emotions..tears were flowing his eyes..


Geet was watching te screen and felt happy..she was feeling her motherhood..she turn and saw Maan who was lost in te screen..she was more surprised to see tears in his cheeks..for first time she was seeing him like tis..her eyes
welled up to see his happiness ..she didt want to break tis beautiful moment but without her sense her hands went to wipe his tears bringing him back to his feel


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Maan caressed her bare tuumy feeling his babies and hold her hand and kiss it : thanku Geet for giving tis beautiful moment


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Geet: i love u Maan.

Maan pecked her lips..rest his forehead on her &both feeling they precious moment..

Dr cleared her throat,seeing them.. Maaneet pulled away..Geet blushed and Maan turn himself...

Dr: Geet everything is normal nothing to worry..but ur legs are swollen

Maan got worried and look at her legs: aunty why his legs are swollen,any problem..is baby is fine

Dr: Maan stop stop

Maan pout

Dr: u didt change Maan.. Geet wenever he cum with his mom wen she is concived with Anni..he will ask me so many questions..im seeing my old Maan..dr felt emotions

Maan : aunty

Geet look at Maan and smile

Dr: ok Geet try to walk for some time and take lots of liquid

Geet: hmm..but tell him aunty..he is not letting me to walk

Dr: Maan its bad

Maan rolled his eyes..Geet chuckled


Dr: Maan arrange some yoga practise for her, it will help during delivery

Maan: ok aunty

Then dr gave some instruction..they bid and came out

Maan: Geet u sit here..i will collect te reports

Geet: hmm

Geet was sitting,she felt and thought to watch te baby photes on te wall..suddenly she hear some one agruing..she went and saw..two ladies,one younger she is pregnant.and another elder look like her mother

Elder: be careful i said to take healthy food see now dr is saying te same thing.only mothers know wat they daughters need during they pregnancy..tat why they sending girls to they mika for they delivery..

Younger: maa i dont want to disturb u tats why

Elder: tis is not disturb..its blissful for every mothers to look after their daughters wen they pregnant..every mothers love it..more than they motherhood,they will love to feel they grandkids..

Younger:ok maa sory from mext time wat ever u give i will have it

Elder: tats my child

Younger lady: i love u maa


They left...Geet watching they bonding and a yearn form in her heart..she thought abt her mother..If she was here now..she too will be worried for her..she will take care her and pamper her..Geet imagine her and her mother in they place..even though she didt have memories with her parents..but she have seen them in phote..so she imaginging herself..she heard Maan calling her..Geet wipe her tears before he notice..she smile at him

Maan: Geet wat happen..



Geet: nothing Maan..i want to go home..feeling hungry.

Maan look at Geet...Geet drag him to car..Maan start te car...she try to pretend to be normal...she turned her gaze to window watching lost in her thought..without knowing Maan dont need her words to say her pain..

Maan have seen her watching tat two ladies and know wat she is feeling..she is missing her parents so much..but he cant do anything..she give him te world's best happiness, but he cant give wat she wish...he hate himself for his helpless..he can bring te whole world under her feet, but tis one..he thought for some time and decide ,atleast he can give little bit happiness..



He stop at nearby restaurant..Geet look at Maan

Maan: u said u r hungry,lets have something

Geet: pls Maan we will go to home..im not feeling like eating

Maan: no Geet my babies want to eat so u better cum

Geet know he wont listen to her and she was not in mood to agrue..so went with him.

Maan order all her favs..Geet ate for name sake..Maan was watching her,she was very quiet and eating..

Maan: Geet

She didt reply

Maan hold her hand: Geet

Geet: ahan Maan

Maan: wat happen Geet ,u r looking dull

Geet: nothing Maan im fine..little bit tired

Maan: tired but u look very dull..any pain..u want to go to dr again


Geet got annoy and snap his hand: Pls Maan im fine

Maan got shock and hurt with her behaviour..Geet felt sad and saw him..he turn his face and having his lunch..Geet hold his hand..Maan saw her and got worried seeing her tears..Maan cupped her face,wiping her tears

Maan: im sory Geet if i hurt u

Geet kiss his palm and hugs him,crying like a baby: im sory Maan ..i didt mean.i was tired ..u will get worried tats why..

Maan smiled and kissed her hair: i know Geet..wat naa nowadays i used to ur moodswings..will help me in ur further pregnancy

Geet open her mouth and smack his chest: Maan aap bhi naa

Maan kissed her forehead: pls Geet dont cry..ur tears really hurts me

Geet wipe her tears and nodes yes..Maan smiles..They started..te car stop in front of airport..Geet got confused

Geet : Maan why we are in airport,some one is cuming

Maan: no

Geet: then

Maan: we are going some were

Geet got shock &confuse: wat we going some where..but we didt inform dadi..we didt get our dresses..were we are going..why we are going..any thing imp

Maan kept his finger on her lips: chup bikul chup..stop ur enquiry commission and cum with me

Geet pouted ..she know its useless to ask him,so she just followed him..They broaded in they private jet..

Maan: Geet u sleep till we reach..i will wake u..

Geet : hmmm

They reached they destination..As soon they got down..Geet know were they are..she look at Maan who pretend to look he dont know anything..Geet at once hugged him without bothering they were standing in mumbai airport..Maan stumble but know wat she is feeling..

Maan pat her: Geet we are in airport..u can shower ur love after we reach home



Geet hugs him tightly noding no: im hugging my husband..

Maan smiles..Geet broke te hug and state at him..Maan pushed her hair behind her ear

Geet : im sory Maan..she felt for hiding it from him

Maan: why Geet

Geet: pls Maan,i didt want to hide it..i thought u will feel sad seeing my tears..u doing everything for me..u didt make me to feel im orphan

Maan got angry: Geet

Geet: sory..if u cum to know tat im yearning for maa,u will feel sad,tats why i didt say anything

Maan: but u dont know ur Maan know u in & out..

Geet nodes and snuggle more into him..Maan hugged her,caressing her hair

Maan : Geet if u want to stay like tis..im ready



Geet then realize and pulled herself and blushed..They came out..they car was waiting for them..they get into it..Geet was leaning on him...



They reached Handa Haveli.. bg open the door..Maan took Geet inside..she was shocked and surprised to see Dadi standing with arti thali and Anni...Dadi took te arti and blessed them..Ramu kaka came with sweets

Anni jumped in excitment,hugging Geet: wow Geet i became bua for two babies

Then Geet realized Maan have informed them...she blushed..Geet look at Maan and mouthed thanku..he nodes and smiles at her..Dadi made her sit on te couch and ask Ramu kaka to bring hot water with salt..she ask Geet to dip her legs in water..Anni was sitting next to her and both looking Geet's childhood photes..Maan was sitting and talking with dadi...they had they dinner and retired to they rooms..

Geet want to stay in her parents room to feel them..so Maan arranged to stay there..Maan gave her medicines and tuck with duvet and went to washroom to change..

Geet was standing in front of her parents phote and one hand on her tummy: maa papa im going to became maa of two kids..yes maa..she caress their face..i miss u,

Her tears flowed, before it reach her cheeks , Maan wipe it and side hug her..Geet lean on him kissing his chest staring at her parents phote



Maan : Geet cum lets sleep

Geet : hmm

Maan made Geet lye properly and lied beside her resting on te bed post..Geet saw him and got up & lye on his chest..Maan hold her



Geet kissed his heart: thanku so much Maan..for bringing me here

Maan: im sory Geet

Geet look at him : sory

Maan: u gave a biggest happiness today..but i cant fulfill ur wish

Geet kiss his nose: Maan u dont know wat u given me..now im feeling my mother..now i got they blessings..thanku so much

Maan peck her lips: i should only say thanks to u Geet for giving me tis wonderful feel..do u know wat i felt wen we see our babies..i felt im te happiest person in te world..at tat moment i felt something inside me..a very beautiful feel

Geet smile and kiss his chest: its ur fathethood



Maan: fatherhood

Geet: tats ur fatherhood Maan..how i feeling our babies inside me like tat u r feeling them..

Maan look at her: Geet will i be best father

Geet :no doubt Maan u will be best father in te world

Maan: i will do anything for they happiness..i wont let them crave for anything.te whole world will be under they feet...i wont allow any harm to touch them..they will be dada ki angels

Suddenly Geet felt something: ouch..holding her stomach

Maan got worried: wat happen Geet..he screamed Dadi..did u feel pain..i will call dr

Geet closed his mouth and took his hand& placed it on her baby bump

Maan got confuse : wat Geet

Geet shhh..baby kicks



Maan got surprised and caress her stomach and felt te kick..he grined and got excited

Maan: Geet babies kicks..my babies ..he started to kiss her tummy expressing his happines, dada loves u baby..

Babies again kicks



Maan got happy: my babies kicks again ..they can feel they dada..wow

Geet too got excited and want to share with everyone..she ask to call dadi and anni..but before he calls,both knock the room door hearing Maan's scream..Maan open te door, both got worried and rush inside to see Geet

Dadi: Geet wat happen did u feel any pain

Geet smiled and took both they hands and kept on her tummy

Dadi and Anni felt babies's kicks..Anni got excited and kissed her tummy..Dadi smile and kissed her forehead..they stayed for some time and left to they room..Maan then lyed beside holding her tummy

Maan: sleep Geet..whole day u didt take rest

Geet node no and snuggle on his chest

Maan : Geet dont tempt me..last night itself u were tired..now sleep


Geet blushed and hug him more..Maan was caressing his babies to feel they movment..they both slept after some time..They all stayed there for one week and return to delhi









PRECAP: BABIES...LAST PART

NEXT PART: 56 , PG - 91




Edited by Desigirls12 - 10 years ago
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Awesome part maaneet saw their babied and geet is longing for her mother and maan understood her unsaid words and took her to mumbai and that is the magic of love
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb uodtr...loved it...geet going to hv twins n maan do happy...geet missing her parents...loved hoe maan bought her to Mumbai n Dadi n Annie altedy present as a surprise...babies kicked.. loved it..
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Geet missing her parents and Maan trying to fill the void...
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maneet twing maan cheering geet
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nice part
maan made the hospital upside down
all nurses thought really some patient is there
dr.aunty took the scan n gave them the happy news of twins arrival
maan in tears seeing the tiny dots in screen
geet is happy seeing him happy
geet saw a mother n daughter
n thinks about her mayks n feels sad
maan took her to mumbai surprising her
geet was overwhelmed with his love
ani n dadi too there n happy for them
maneet feeling babies kicks n enjoying their moments

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