MG FF HEAVEN IN HELL, THREAD 3, EPILOGUE, PG 100, AUG 15 - Page 46

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Lovely update!!!Awww they are having twins...Loved the way Maan take care of Geet is so beauriful...Geet is missing her parents...Maan take Geet to her parents house in Mumba...Dadi and Annie also there...they are pamparing her so much...Maaneet felt their babies first kick...Loved it so much...waiting for the next update
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Superbbb update dear⭐️
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THANKU FRIENDS FOR UR LOVELY COMMENTS AND LIKES..LOVE U ALL
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(THANKU SHRUTHE DIDI FOR TIS LOVELY BANNER..LOVE U)







H2 - 56


Maan was taking care of Geet..she was strictly prohibited to get out of the bed, as Maan was very careful after knowing she is carrying twins...Dadi and Anni too took extra care of her. even though she get annoyed sometimes due to her moodswings but she loved to be pampered by all...

Maan arranged an yoga teacher for Geet, as per dr's instruction..he too joined her in her sessions..one day she was practising yoga sitting on her knees,breathing in and out..Maan chuckled seeing her antic..she have put on weight and looked cute with her baby bump and her breathing style..he want to capture her lips and kiss her hard..


Geet saw him chuckling: here im struggling n u r laughing..u too cum and do

Maan : me no way

Geet pouted



Maan sighed and joined her..he wanted to tease her, he sat like her n breathed like she did just mimicking her ..she got angry and pushed him..Maan started to laugh holding his stomach..

Maan:oh geet..u look cute while doing those ufff..in n out..huff huff..ha haha ha....he laughed out loud making her angry..

Geet glared and started to hit him with the pillow..

Maan:geet geet..geet pls Geet stop it yaar

Geet pouted and turned her face..Maan hugged her behind and kissed her cheeks..Geet too hold him with cute pout



Maan: do u know how u look..i want to eat u raw..

Geet blushed and hugs him..nowadays she became very sensitive with his touch..

Geet : no i know i have became like elephant naa,,she said with a baby face

Maan parted and turned her towards him..he looks at her , n said.: hmm, no but look more sexy ..he winked..

Geet blushed and hugs him, they parted hearing dadi's voice

Maan: dadi

he smiled sheepishly at her.

Dadi smiles and sat beside them: Maan we have to arrange Geet ki godhbarai



Geet blushed and Maan look at her..

Maan : hmm dadi..when

Dadi: i asked pandit..he said..this sunday is good day..but in short time how to call everyone n arrange everything..

Maan: dont worru dadi..when MSK is there why to worry.. i will arrange it..u just give me instructions i will do everything..afterall its my wife's godhbarai..

he told with attitude.

Geet:ji dadi..MSK THE GREAT CAN DO ALL FOR HIS WIFE N FAMILY..



she too imitated like Maan n all laughed..


Godbarai day

Maan have invited everyone..even father ,kids as they are her family..he invited ramu kaka ( handa haveli ki care taker)..all vips present there..he was happy to be father, so did everything in his style..he dont want to miss anything..for a man like MSK nothing is impossible to arrange in short spam..



Geet was getting ready..she was struggling with her knots.. she cant tie her knots with her hands, coz of her bump ..Maan came from washroom only in his pants..and saw her struggle and smiled..he went near her and tie the knots..Geet looked at him thru the mirror and blushed seeing him..his cologn making her dizzy..she turned and hugged him..licking the water drops making him shudder



Maan : pls misty stop yar, nowadays u r not stopping once u start

Geet stop and pouted : so u didt like my touch..

Maan pulled her face and kissed her lips like pecking her..but geet pulled him n kissed him hard making him to delve into her sweetness...both kissing each other like there is no 2mor...Geet was moaning..Maan left wen he felt she was struggling to breath

Maan : do u really think i dont like ur touch, i love to see my sherni.. but how long i will control

Geet : then dont control



Maan knee down , kissing her tummy : once they cums out, then i will take all my revenge..wont leave u from bed for months..

Geet blushed and hugs him :love u

Maan:geet sit down..

Geet:why..



Maan:geet today i want to dress u with my own hands..i want my babies to feel how much his papa loves adoring his mishty..

Geet blushed n sat before the dresser..

Maan started to wear her earings and necklace..he kissed her forehead tenderly and placed sindoor..then placed the mang tika..he weared her the waistchain..she was shivering with his slow torture..he sat down n took her legs placing on his knees.he put the anklets kissing her legs..he then put her bangles..



Maan:u look like an angel geet..

Geet too lost in his care n love..

Geet:its becoz u dressed me..she said proudly..Maan kissed her forehead

Geet:now its my turn to make babies papa dressed..

she went to the wardrobe n took his dress.. Maan got dressed in his sherwani n she stood there gapping at him all the while...Geet pulled him n did his buttons..

Maaneet stood in front of the mirror and watching each other...



Geet:my babies papa is looking hot today..

Maan:not so sexy than their mama..

Both complementing each other..Maan caress her tummy,Geet placed her hand on his, feeling their baby.

Maan:lets go down geet..guests must be waiting for us...



They both descended down..all was awed to see them..Maan was holding her carefully..Maan made her to sit on te couch and he sat next to her..Dadi put duppatta on her head and did arti and placed sindoor on her forehead..She blessed Maaneet..then one by one started to bless them,giving gifts and whispering something in her ear..Geet was blushing..Geet face was glowing and her red hue adding more beauty to her skin..



Father and kids gave her so many gifts..Rk too gave her gifts and blessed her..all were showering their blessings ..the whole km was happy to welcum the new members.. godbarai ends,Maan carried his Geet to room as she was very tired..her legs swollen n her back was aching as she was sitting in one place.maan gave her a gentle massage relaxing her..along with their romance.

It was her 8th month

Maan was working in his laptop..Geet was stitching sweater..she finished it and was looking it

Maan saw her: Geet atlast u finish for ur babies



Geet smile: hmmm

Maan : but u forgot me

Geet: why Maan

Maan: then wat u r spending more time with babies before they cum itself tis state after tat,u will completely forget me,pouting his lips

Geet smiled and pulled his pouting lips with her fingers

Maan: ouch Geet

Geet: jealous with ur own babies ahan

Maan: no

Geet pulled his cheeks: how cute u look naa

Maan: cute or msk no way



Geet: ohhh baby got gussa

Maan glared at her: Geet dont call me baby..im not baby

Geet: ollya my baby got angry..i will buy a big ice cream for u

Maan: Geet stop it yar

Geet kiss his cheek,placed te sweater on him : tis is for my baby but for my grown up baby i have something

Maan: matlab



Geet : matlab for my Maan baby..she opened the cupboard n came with a sweater..she kept over his body n was checking the size whether it fits him

Maan became happy : really tis is for me

Geet: hmm.wear naa

Maan wore te sweater,it prefectly matched him: Geet prefect..its very nice

Geet bow saying : thanku thank u

Maan smile at her

Geet: but i want fees for it

Maan smirk : im ready and hover on her eyeing her ljps..



Geet pushed : not tis , something different

Maan smiled: ok cum with me

Geet: where

Maan took her to next room ,open it..he closed her eyes and took her inside.

Geet : Maan wat u r doing

Maan : shhh..he open her eyes and got shock and surprise to see te room was fully decorated for their babies

Geet open her mouth in excitement: when u did


Maan: two days before

Geet pouted: u didt say me

Maan hugged her from behind: its papa's surprise gift for babies and their mumma

Geet smiles

Maan kiss her cheeks: how is it

Geet turn to face him,putting her hands around his shoulders : hmm not bad mr.khurana

Maan raised his eyebrows, both smiled..he showed the bed



Maan : here u will sleep with the babies , but im saying Geet its only when im in office..other times u and babies should be in our room

Geet : then why u arranged tis room, when we are going to stay in our room

Maan kissed her lips : for my babies, u like it

Geet smiles and hugs: i love it..kissing his cheeks..babies too will love it

Maan : this is the punching bag, babies will become strong like they papa, showing his biceps

Geet was hearing his each wish, Suddenly she felt pain,but she snap thinking she sat for hours in one place weaving the sweater...Maan hugged her and saying abt te colours ,dresses.. Geet was biting her lips to control her pains..but atlast she cant as the contractions grew more n more



Geet screamed: Ahhh

Maan got worried: Geet wat happen

Geet holding her tummy ,started to scream : ahh Maan i think labour pain

Maan: but Geet its more three week is there ,but hearing her scream..he carried her screaming for dadi

Dadi & Anni rush and saw Maan was carrying her

Dadi: wat happen

Maan : labour pain

Maan ask te driver to start te car..Maan sat with Geet behind and dadi front..Anni in another car

Maan placed her head on his lap & caressing her hair backward..Geet is crying and screaming in pain..Maan was scared to see his Geet in pain..At once te car stops,Maan rush inside carrying his Geet,shouting for dr...she was taken to ot..Dr assured him and went inside



Maan was hearing her scream and his each min was hell for him..he was pacing and sweating.Anni was not less than him..she was crying , hugging her..Dadi smiled seeing his grandson biting his nails..who will say the great Msk is scared seeing his wife in labour..but she can see his unconditional love for Geet..



Dadi touch Maan's shoulder..he turn and hugged her.

Dadi: dont worry everything will be fine

Maan: im so scared dadi

Dadi pat his back: wen u hold ur babies naa, u will forget everything

Maan: hmm



Maan again started to pace..his heart is beating fast thinking wat his Geet going thru..they heard babies cry..Maan heart jumped in joy hearing his babies first cry..Dadi and Anni felt happy and hugged Maan..After some time dr came out ..Maan rush to her

Dr: congratz Maan..two boys

Maan: Geet

Dr: Geet and babies are fine

Maan hug dr and thanked her

Dr: its ok Maan



Maan: i want to see them

Dr: after some time

Dadi thanked dr and gave a thanking prayer to god..Anni was jumping in joy..Adi and Rk too came..Maan gave a bundle of notes to adi and ask to distribute sweets to whole hospital..Adi nodes...After some time Nurse inform to see them..Maan want see them first, so dadi ask him to go first



Maan walked inside in excitement and longing to see his angels..Geet was lying on te bed ..she was tired like her full energy washed out..but her face covered with a beautiful glow..Maan sat beside her and caress her hair,holding her hand in another hand..he kiss her hands..Geet open her eyes and look at him who was very scared..she know wat he was going thru..she smiles at him

Maan: its paining

Geet: no,she try to sit..Maan stopped her and adjusted the bed in recline position..



Maan pecks her lips and hugs her..they heard a wimp sound..Maan broke te hug and look at te crib..his heart started to beat fast seeing his angels lying on te crib..Maan look at Geet ..she smiles with tears..




Maan went near te crib and saw his boys,his blood...he was numb, his eyes moistured , he just stood watching te beautiful sight in front of him..



his hands were shaking..he look at Geet..she nodes to take te babies..tears were flowing from his eyes..he was hesitating to hold his babies

Geet: hold them Maan

Maan: wat if i hurt them

Geet: u can never hurt them

Maan took one baby and kissed him, baby smile at him..he gave te baby to Geet and took another one..sat beside Geet..He cant believe he is holding his blood in his arms..



Maan:Geet it is real

Geet : yes Maan..

Maan kissed her forehead: love u love u for giving tis bundle of happiness

Geet: love u too

Dadi came inside..and everyone came..all started to hold te babies showering they love..all were happy to see te cute babies..Anni was so excited to see her angels..she kissed them..all were holding te babies,making Maan to frown..

Geet chuckled pulling his nose: possessive dada..Maan pouted his lips

Nurse came : mam u have to feed

All left to gave her some space..Maan sat beside..Geet look at him

Maan: wat

Geet: Maan i have to feed go out

Maan: no

Geet eyes pop: wat

Maan whispered: u getting shock like im seeing u for first time.. this is te results of how i saw u..he caressing te babies head

Geet blushed : Maan pls

Maan: no Geet i want to be with u

Nurse help her to hold te baby and instruct how to feed and burp..then she left them to give them privacy..Geet opened her gown and placed her nipples inside baby's mouth..At once baby suck her nipples, Geet had tears and closed her eyes feeling her baby's lips on her buds..while Maan was just watching te most blissful moment of his life..Maan wipe her tears..



Maan:Geet u r crying..is it paining..is he hurting u..

Geet: its happiness Maan..n he is so small..n he has no teeth ..u know buddhu singh khurana..u dont know the basic of babies too..

maan frowned n she laughed.

Maan was staring at his angel who was having his first fed.. he saw Geet who look like born newly..then Geet place te baby on te bed and took te second one to feed..Maan took te first baby and burp him as per nurses instruction..both slept..

It was night..Maan asked everyone to go home saying he will look after them..Geet was watching her babies..Maan came out of washroom and sat beside Geet burying his face in her crook of her neck..Geet know he is restless

Geet caress his hair: Maan wat happen



Maan: u scared me ,it was hell for me to wait outside wen u r screaming inside te room,

he nuzzled her skin, feeling her

Geet kissed his cheeks: ok next time i will ask dr aunty to let u in..

Maan look at her..Geet bite lips realizing wat she said..

Maan pulled her lips with his teeth: i said dont ..tis is mine and next time i wont leave u alone Geet

Geet pulled him holding his hair,as she lyed on te bed..Maan too lyed on her without putting weight on her still chewing her lips..both were drown in they passionate kiss..both were tasting eachother.. his hands slide to her tummy caressing it

Geet smile: i love u Maan

Maan: love u Geet

Both slept holding each other

After a week Geet got discharged..As she enter km she was surprised to see whole km was decorated..all stood on te entrance to welcum them..even father and kids came to wish her..Dadi took arti to Maaneet who was holding they babies...as they enter inside all surrounds them and took te babies..te whole km gream with happiness welcuming te new members

It was 10th day..Name cermonying

Dadi arranged a function..Pandit was chanting mantras.. Maaneet descend down with they babies..it was bliss to see te scene..Maaneet sat for pooja..Pandit ask to say te names..Maaneet look each other and smiles

Geet : dadi and father will say te names

Dadi and father was shock and smile



Dadi hold first baby: Yash singh khurana

Father hold te next baby: Gurmeet singh khurana



All clapped to express they happiness..Anni hug te babies and kiss them..Maaneet look each other and smiled..All were so happy showering te babies with they loves

At Night

Maan was sitting in te bed,resting his head on te bed post..Geet came after changing and lied next to him..Maan pulled her and kissed her lips..Geet was stumble with his sudden pull but started to respond him..she felt some thing wetting her cheeks..she broke te kiss and look at Maan who was shedding tears



Geet got shock: Maan

Maan holding her hands: thanku Geet for giving tis precious symbols.

Geet: Maan



Maan: i dont know wat is love till u enter in my life..i cant believe till now ,i will get this happiness in my life.u gave me everything..i dont want anything more in tis life..im so happy,tat i cant bear it..thanku for making tis HELL INTO HEAVEN..

Geet closed his mouth with hers: i should only say thanks to u Maan..for give me identity..for giving me a family..only mine..i got all te happiness in tis birth..im happy to be born as a girl..pointing her finger to him, dare u say u r hell..u r My HEAVEN IN HELL.



Maan smile and bite her finger..

Geet: ouch

Maan: ok then i want my gift for giving u two babies

Geet:oh hello im also equally involved

Maan: so we both need gift naa..

Geet look at him,but next sec her lips was inside his mouth..Maan taking his gift and giving her his gift...both drown in their kiss..te room was echoing with their moans..



It was Love which made them together..n they found their HEAVEN ..LOVE can change any hell to heaven n Geet turned Maan and his surrounding from hell to heaven..













(THANKU CHERISH FOR TE LOVELY BEAUTIFUL EDITING OF MY MAANEET WITH TWINS)


PRECAP : EPILOGUE

NEXT PART :EPILOGUE - PG 100




Edited by Desigirls12 - 10 years ago
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TODAY I WAS SO EMOTIONAL TO END MY FIRST FF..I MYSELF WILL ,MISS MY MAANEET IN TIS JOURNEY..I CANT BELIEVE TIS FF IS GOING TO CELEBRATE ITS 2ND ANNIVERSARY ON 15 AUGUST..SO I WILL POST EPILOGUE 2MOR..
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THANKU U SO SO MUCH FRIENDS FOR TRAVELLEING WITH ME THRU OUT TIS JOURNEY AND MADE ME TOO AS WRITTER..I STILL CANT BELEIVE IM WRITING A STORY ON MY MAANEET AND MORE OVER U ALL LIKE IT..TIS IS MY FAMILY WHO GIVE ME EVERYTHING..I LOVE U ALL..AND LOT OF HUGS AND MUAH



VALLI DID I LOVE..U TE ONE WHO MADE ME A WRITER AND HELPED ME IN MY JOURNEY..LOVE U DIDI OPPS GURU..WITHOUT U I CANT ACHIVED TIS..OMG NOW IM THINKING HOW MUCH I HAVE TORTURED U FOR EACH AND EVERYTHING..BUT U TAUGHT ME EVERYTHING WITH SO MUCH PATIENCE..LOVE U SO MUCH..MUAH


VANI..MY SWEETEST FRIEND WHO IS BEHIND NALINI..DESIGIRLS IS SOUL OF VANI AND NALINI.. SHE IS TE ONE WHO TAUGHT ME EVERYTHING..I LOVE U VANI..AS I STARTED TIS FF ON HER B'DAY 2012 AUG 15..SO DECIDE TO END IT ON HER B'DAY AS HER GIFT...LOVE U DEAR FOR MAKING ME DESIGIRLS12...LOVE U SO MUCH


MY MAANEET MY LIFE..MY DAY START WITH THEM AND END WITH THEM..WITHOUT MY MAANEET AND MAANEETIAN NALINI IS INCOMPLETE..THANKU MAANEET FOR GIVING MEANING TO MY LIFE..LOVE U



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AND
FOR GIVING US A WONDERFUL JOURNEY WITH MANEET


Edited by vrinda22 - 10 years ago
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dont use big words nalini..
i just taught u things
then its ur full effort
ur ideas n ur story line
all loved it
so its all your hardwork..
you succeeded in completing your first journey.
party time...

nee guruvukku minjiya sishyai..

the main aspect in ur updates is the pictures
that brings maneet before us lively
so many buppies n chuppies to u too
Edited by vrinda22 - 10 years ago

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