FF: revenge after 20 yrs

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hi guys i jus wanted to sahre u ppl with my ff which i use to write on kaa forum

frist i was "if there was a 20 yrs leap"but i changed the title n named it "revenge after 20 yrs"

soo hope u all enjoy reading it there r many charecters in it see u all like it n tell me so that i can update more

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/karam-apnaa-apnaa/591533/ff-revenge-after-20-years-part-8-pg-16 links to kaa forum

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there is 20 years leap in kaa and gauri is dead because she got to know abt shiv and ipshitas love and then shiv is married to ipshita and they had a doughter name VOILA(i got this name from izzy) 😆voila is very arogant and wear mini skirts she thinks she is the best and both the twins omnath and piomnath they changed there there names omnath kept his name OMMI and piomnath kept PM they hate voila and call her make upbox.Shanti is renamed as gauri because daddi wanted gauri to be alive and 2nd reason she looked exactly same as her mother.and iqbal is back in kaa as shiv

daddi-gauri today ppl r coming to see u

gauri- 😳😳 ajj

daddi- ha ajj

gauri- ok

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ipshita:shiv 2day ppl r coming to see gauri

shiv:oh who r they what buissness they have

ipshita:his name is also shiv(IQ) he is in the same buisness and is from a gud family u might have heard about mr.singhania he was in london and now in india with his wifeand young son shiv(iq) for buisness mettings.

shiv:oh they r really gud ppl anupama told me that

ip:anupama?well im worried abt gauri

shiv:ya i know ur mother

and shiv goes out as he turns he found gauri

gauri:papa will u be there tonight

shiv:no beta its to difficult i cant leave the mettings

gauri is quite sad on the words of her dad.

gauri:its allright

shiv:ok take care beta and he leaves

gauri walks and she saw ommi and pm talking

gauri:hey bhai

ommi:hey sis

gauri walks near to them

gauri:r u there tonight

pm:why some thing special

ommi:oh u dont know some was is coming to see our little sistre

gauri;😳😳

pm:dont worry sis i will be there but dont tell me that makeup box will be also there she after seeing her i forget about all the haral movies ghost

ommi:he is 100% right

gauri:oh stop it

pm:oh god its terible

gauri:wat?and turns it was voila

voila:wat gauri ppl r coming 2 seeu

gauri:yes

voila thinks if gauri is married then she will be an alone to get love from every one.

voila:gauri dont worry i will be there

ommi and pm togather:better we go

they both walk out and voila goes busy on her mobile

to be cont...........................................

tell me if u like it i'll post rest of the parts over here😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey... i dont really read any other ff than ak or ka... but this one is quite funny... and i think i will wanna read this... i used to watch kaa but after iqbal left... it was stupid...lol... soo i stopped...anywayss... continue soon...will eb waiting ...!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: MUNNIBABA2006

hey... i dont really read any other ff than ak or ka... but this one is quite funny... and i think i will wanna read this... i used to watch kaa but after iqbal left... it was stupid...lol... soo i stopped...anywayss... continue soon...will eb waiting ...!!

thanka for reading its on iqbal n pallavi😃hope u like it i'll update the next part very soon as i get replies

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