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Posted: 11 years ago
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HEYY thanks fr the pm and it was greaatt cs,would defntely like to read further,do add me in ur pm list!!!!!😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice concept
Pls continue soon nd pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
Amazing story...👏
Continue soon n thanx for the message 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
thank u so much for all ur comments...

@akanksha.. yuss sneha here😊
Edited by krazyarsha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
thank u so much for all ur comments.. hope i can reach upto ur expectations to some level atleast... 😊

It's just a week left for the interschool competition to kick start. Rey and Kria were both selected participating from their respective schools. Around 30 schools all over Mumbai were participating and it was a tough competition. The winner will be awarded the title "Student Of The Year" and will be rewarded with a trophy, cash prize of 1 lakh and 2 tickets to their favorite place.😉

Kria was trying hard to open her eyes with a cup of coffee in one hand and book in the other hand sitting and preparing late nights. She wants to win this at any cost. Rey is fully relaxed with earphones playing his favorite music from his iPod and preparing for the competition. He knows that he's the winner and no one can beat him as competitions aren't new to him. With just a few days left preparations are in full swing.😃

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Next day was Sunday and Kria was waiting in the bus stop to go to Vishaka's house as the gals had planned to go out. It had rained and was wet outside with small polls of water on the road (Imagine roads in India.. not highways). Though she had her own vehicle she preferred travelling in bus. A black audi passed swiftly through the road and the mud water splashed on kria who was standing in the bus stand.😆

rey's audi car❤️


"Oyeee Duffer..." kria shouted looking at the audi with her mouth open. She looked at herself.. her white top had turned brown and touched her face.. it was all dirty.. she was soo angry that she would kill that person if he was there right in front of her.. she cancelled all her plans and started heading back home.. As she was walking she found the audi parked in front of some shop.. she decided to stop there.. screw that audi driver then go home.. she waited there leaning over the audi.. she got a phone call and was busy speaking in her cell.. her half of the body relaxed on audi and standing with her legs crossed..😲

kria's dress 😊


Rey made his way to the car and noticed someone leaning.. he thought someone was just resting on it.. As he came closer he started noticing her from top to bottom,, her legs crossed and relaxed.. shes had perfect figure.. her dress was dirty.. he looked at her face.. mud water which was dried by now.. he looked into her dark black eyes.. they were so intense.. few strands of hair playing with her eyes and she was trying to put them back to their place.. her juicy pips.. he wanted to touch her cheek.. "she's beautiful.." he whispered.. his heart beat increased.. his breathing wasn't normal.. he was lost admiring her..😳

15 mins later...😵

Kria ended the call and looked up to see his staring at her with a cutee smile on his face..without even asking if it was his car she pounced on him..😡

kria: You.. Duffer.. Stupid.. Idiot..!!!!🤓

(Rey back to his senses..)

Rey: Excuse Me...???

Kria: What the hell do you think of Yourself? Just because of You my whole day got spoiled..

Rey: what the hell did I do? I was just watching You.. how beautiful..

Kria: Shut up.!! You duffer the speed in which u wer driving Your car that water splashed on me.. and she looked at her dress.. he too looked at her dress at the same time with a teasing smile on his face..

(she was still speaking.. he wasn't bothered to listen)

Rey:(Giving her a look from head to toe) bursted out laughing..

Kria's temper was at extreme now.. She knew he doesn't care for shoutings.. she looked around and picked up a stone.. rey saw this.

Rey: Helloo.. wait.. wait.. Miss. Hyper.. relax...😎

Kria: I will not spare your car today.. How dare you laugh at me..??!!

She lifted her hand. before she could throw that stone.. Rey held her hand and stopped her.. Both felt their body tremble at the touch.. a quick shiver passed through their spine... First time her dark black eyes met his chocolate brown eyes..

(KR music playing in BG)

This was new for both of them. Rey was a flirt but till now he didn't feel this way when he touched any girl.. Kria immediately withdrew her hands..

Kria: you..!!?? (Pointing her index finger to him)

Rey: Arey.. Miss Hyper.. You are free to damage the car as it isn't mine.. Go ahead.. I was just walking and happened to stop here..Guess the owner of this audi is inside.. wait till he comes..( he winked at her..)

Kria: Ohhh... Shit..!!!!!

She didn't stay there even for a second.. She left the place frustrated.. His eyes were on her until she disappeared..😊😊

ur comments.. and feedbacks are important.. reviews plzz😊

Edited by krazyarsha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
Firstly thnx snehu for reserving for me 😃

N update was AHMAZING.. !!
I mean i really like dis competition stuff.. n starting is really good...
n den as i said.. car n bike will play a role... 😳
aww.. my poor kiru ki dress to gayi.. n kriyaansh first meeting superb.. loved it.. the way got memerised with kriya's beauty.. 😆

n den dere fight.. awsum.. ;-)

totally loved it.. beautifully penned down.. n looking forward for update soon 😉

Muhhhaaa.. love you :-*
Edited by jyoti_arsha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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👏 Snehaaa 👏 hayeee 👏 wht an amezing update yrrr


love u 😳 this was to to to beautifull hehehehehehe i just love it re 😳

I can imegine them
in this Situation 😆 they will
look super duper adorable nd Cute

Baatcutter kriya nd Lincutter Rey
hayeee d3 k phele dino me
chali gayi thi me 😉

Boh Jab rey Kria ko hit karne bala tha d3 me ek dam beysa lag raha tha
I just love it thank thank u so much
Sneha for this beautifull
update
Thanx a lot for the link
love u next part jaldiii
i cant wait 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wonderful start...
first meeting me maza aa gaya...
nd rey to flat hi ho gaya phle hi...
kriya's outfit was nice...
nd chalu rey jhut bol kr kriya ko bhaga dia...🤣
nyc update...continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
awesum part...
Loved it...
Rey tou first meet pe he flat ho gaya...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
Awesome update
Unres.

Poor kriya. Her dress and the line cutter, baatcutter's conversation was Mindblowing.
Loved kriyansh ' s first meet.

Update soon.
And don't forget to pm me.

Nikki.
Edited by lohananivedita - 11 years ago

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